| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.447 | | leniency | 0.894 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1919 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 86.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1919 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "crystal" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "methodical" | | 3 | "framework" | | 4 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 18 | | totalWords | 1940 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Camden Tube hatch, Northern Line ghost station, don't let them move anything before I get there" | | 1 | "cardiac event" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1596 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | High | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Tube | 2 | | Terence | 1 | | Okafor | 6 | | Quinn | 17 | | Eva | 9 | | Kowalski | 2 | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | One | 1 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Terence" | | 1 | "Okafor" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Kowalski" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "High" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 0.967 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed possible from the street above, arched ceilings thick with the mineral smell of old stone and something else underneath it, something she couldn't name" | | 1 | "looked like candle wax in colours she'd n" | | 2 | "not quite categorise" | | 3 | "pattern that seemed to repeat and then deviate, repeat and then deviate, like a language she almost recognised as a language" | | 4 | "seemed guileless if not for the careful way her eyes were moving across the scene — cataloguing, assessing, the way Quinn's own eyes moved" | | 5 | "looked like it happened" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.515 | | wordCount | 1940 | | matches | | 0 | "not the brittle over-confidence of someone performing authority, but the quiet ease of someone who had simply learned" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 30.79 | | std | 30.5 | | cv | 0.991 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 93 | | 4 | 106 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 87 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 77 | | 14 | 64 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 81 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 108 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 81 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 69 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 86 | | 44 | 69 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 57 | | 49 | 65 |
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| 99.16% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 9 | | totalVerbs | 262 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "was lying" | | 2 | "was not pointing" | | 3 | "was standing" | | 4 | "was pointing" | | 5 | "was still holding" | | 6 | "were moving" | | 7 | "was happening" | | 8 | "was already unclipping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.121 | | matches | | 0 | "She had known, technically, that disused Tube stations existed beneath the city like forgotten rooms in an old house — she had even worked a case tangentially involving one, years ago — but knowing and standing inside were different things entirely." | | 1 | "Market stalls, or the remnants of them, lined the far wall — bare wooden trestle tables, iron brackets still bolted to the tile, a collapsed awning of dark fabric pooled on the floor like a shed skin." | | 2 | "Scattered across the platform: broken glass, ceramic shards, the residue of what looked like candle wax in colours she'd never seen in a church — deep arterial purple, black-veined amber, a blue so pale it was almost white." | | 3 | "The victim was a man in his late forties, well-built, dressed in ordinary clothes — a waxed jacket, dark jeans, decent boots." | | 4 | "\"Hearts stop in healthy-looking men. Happens every day.\" He said it without dismissiveness; it was simply, to him, the logical terminus of what the evidence offered." | | 5 | "She didn't touch anything; she never did until SOCO had finished, and she could hear them working behind her, the soft language of cameras and evidence bags." | | 6 | "She looked at his hands — calloused across the palms, clean fingernails, a faded scar along the right thumb." | | 7 | "The markings were too deliberate, too dense — covering the brass in a tight pattern that seemed to repeat and then deviate, repeat and then deviate, like a language she almost recognised as a language." | | 8 | "The compass face itself was partly visible through the cracked crystal lid — and the needle was not pointing north." | | 9 | "The woman standing at the edge of the forensic perimeter was short — several inches shorter than Quinn — with a cloud of curly red hair that the tunnel's damp air had frizzed into something almost architectural." | | 10 | "She had a freckled face that might have seemed guileless if not for the careful way her eyes were moving across the scene — cataloguing, assessing, the way Quinn's own eyes moved." | | 11 | "\"Twenty minutes ago.\" This was a slight revision of the truth; Eva Kowalski had in fact sent a text message at eleven-forty-three, which Quinn had read in her car on the way over, and which had contained the words *Camden Tube hatch, Northern Line ghost station, don't let them move anything before I get there* with no further context." | | 12 | "Eva Kowalski stepped under the tape with the confidence of someone who had done it before — not the brittle over-confidence of someone performing authority, but the quiet ease of someone who had simply learned that tapes were obstacles for people who hesitated." | | 13 | "The expression on the dead man's face — not fear, not pain — something closer to surprise that had had no time to complete itself." | | 14 | "She looked at the ceiling of the station — the thick stone arch, the old tiles streaked with damp, the empty black mouths of the ventilation shafts." | | 15 | "Something in the question had surprised her, pleasantly — the shape of it, maybe, the fact that it had been asked at all." | | 16 | "He was a good detective, Quinn had always thought — methodical, thorough, reliable in the ways that mattered on most days." |
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| 85.58% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1590 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "deep arterial purple, black-veined amber," | | 1 | "thick, cloth-bound volume" |
| | adverbCount | 68 | | adverbRatio | 0.042767295597484274 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015723270440251572 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 13.86 | | std | 12.34 | | cv | 0.89 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 58.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.40714285714285714 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 99.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Then his torch moved and" | | 1 | "More followed, always, when you" | | 2 | "Somewhere deep in the dark," |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 77.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She arrived before the scene" | | 1 | "It took a moment for" | | 2 | "She had known, technically, that" | | 3 | "Her torch swept the space." | | 4 | "He raised his chin in" | | 5 | "he said, which was what" | | 6 | "She let it pass." | | 7 | "He was lying on his" | | 8 | "His face held an expression" | | 9 | "He said it without dismissiveness;" | | 10 | "She didn't touch anything; she" | | 11 | "She looked at the man's" | | 12 | "She looked at his hands" | | 13 | "She looked at the floor" | | 14 | "He had simply stopped, right" | | 15 | "She signalled to the nearest" | | 16 | "She was standing east of" | | 17 | "She kept looking at it" | | 18 | "She was still holding it" | | 19 | "She had a freckled face" |
| | ratio | 0.356 | |
| 88.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The call had come in" | | 1 | "Quinn had been in bed," | | 2 | "She arrived before the scene" | | 3 | "The abandoned station swallowed her." | | 4 | "It took a moment for" | | 5 | "She had known, technically, that" | | 6 | "The platform stretched away in" | | 7 | "Her torch swept the space." | | 8 | "The platform was not, as" | | 9 | "He raised his chin in" | | 10 | "he said, which was what" | | 11 | "She let it pass." | | 12 | "The victim was a man" | | 13 | "He was lying on his" | | 14 | "His face held an expression" | | 15 | "Something closer to surprise caught" | | 16 | "Okafor made a note of" | | 17 | "He said it without dismissiveness;" | | 18 | "Quinn crouched beside the body." | | 19 | "She didn't touch anything; she" |
| | ratio | 0.743 | |
| 49.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had been here had" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn had been in bed, not sleeping, staring at the ceiling with the particular restlessness that preceded every case worth having." | | 1 | "Blue lights strobed across the pavement outside the hatch, throwing strange colours over the faces of the street officers managing the perimeter, and she ducked…" | | 2 | "In the centre of all of it, DS Terence Okafor stood with a clipboard and the expression of a man who had already decided what he was looking at." | | 3 | "He was lying on his back three metres from the nearest trestle table, one arm flung out, the other folded beneath him at an angle that would have been uncomfort…" | | 4 | "The casing was worn to the soft gold-green of old coins, verdigris collecting in the engraved lines that covered the surface." | | 5 | "The markings were too deliberate, too dense — covering the brass in a tight pattern that seemed to repeat and then deviate, repeat and then deviate, like a lang…" | | 6 | "She had a freckled face that might have seemed guileless if not for the careful way her eyes were moving across the scene — cataloguing, assessing, the way Quin…" | | 7 | "Eva Kowalski stepped under the tape with the confidence of someone who had done it before — not the brittle over-confidence of someone performing authority, but…" | | 8 | "She looked at the floor, at the arrangement of candle wax residue, which she now saw was not scattered randomly but arranged in a rough circle, the kind of circ…" | | 9 | "He was a good detective, Quinn had always thought — methodical, thorough, reliable in the ways that mattered on most days." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, as though this were a reflex rather than a decision, which with Eva it generally was" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.234 | | leniency | 0.468 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |