Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8TXYQ70SS4BW7A88PMX7K9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.069800
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt gave with a thick clunk. Then the second. Then the third. Rory pulled the door open with one hand still wrapped around the cricket bat she'd grabbed from behind Eva's coat rack, and the speech she'd prepared — something about it being half eleven on a Tuesday and if this was another one of Eva's university friends looking for a couch — died somewhere between her lungs and her teeth. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, rain-soaked and listing slightly to the left. His cane rested against the wall beside him as though he'd set it there to free both hands for the railing. The charcoal suit jacket hung open, the shirt beneath it dark with water. Platinum blond hair, usually slicked back with the kind of precision that bordered on compulsive, fell in wet strands across his forehead. One amber eye and one black eye fixed on her face, and neither one blinked. "No," Rory said. "Bonsoir to you as well." "Absolutely not." She moved to close the door. His hand came up — not to stop it, just palm raised, fingers slightly spread. A gesture that said wait, not a demand. The difference mattered. It always had with him. That was part of the problem. She held the door where it was, six inches from the frame. The curry house below pumped warm turmeric-scented air up through the floorboards, mixing with the wet-pavement smell rolling off him. "How did you even know I was here? Eva's in Prague." "I know where Eva is. I know where most people are. Professional hazard." He lowered his hand. A muscle in his jaw tightened, the only crack in that infuriating composure. "I came because you weren't at the flat above the bar." "So you checked the second address on file. Thorough." "Rory." The way he said her name — that half-swallowed R, the vowel drawn out just enough by the Marseille still sitting in his accent — made something twist below her ribs. She tightened her grip on the bat. "You look like hell." "Flattered." "I'm not letting you in." He glanced past her into the flat, at the fortress of books stacked on every surface, the research notes pinned to the walls with colored thumbtacks, the tabby cat watching him from the arm of the sofa with unblinking judgment. Then his gaze came back to her. "I would not ask if it were not necessary." "You wouldn't ask at all. That's the thing about you, Lucien. You just show up." Something shifted behind his expression. Not hurt exactly. Recognition. She'd landed somewhere true and they both knew it. He reached for the cane, fingers closing around the ivory handle, and for one breath she thought he was going to turn around and descend the narrow staircase and disappear back into whatever shadow had produced him. Instead his knee buckled. It was fast — a slight sideways sway, the cane catching his weight a half-second late, one hand shooting to the door frame. Rory stepped forward before she could think about it, her free hand catching his elbow. Beneath the wet wool of his jacket, his arm was rigid. Burning hot. "Christ, you're fevered." "A minor complication." "You can barely stand." "I am standing. Distinction matters." But his weight pressed into her grip, and when she pulled him across the threshold he didn't resist. He moved through the door with the careful economy of someone measuring each step against a finite reserve of energy, and the smell of him came with it — rain and cedar and something faintly metallic that she'd learned months ago was the demon half of his blood running warmer than it should. She kicked the door shut. Threw one deadbolt, then the second, then the third out of habit. When she turned back he'd made it to the edge of Eva's desk and was leaning against it, one hand flat on a stack of Sumerian translation notes, the cane hooked over the desk's edge. Ptolemy had not moved from the sofa arm but his ears were pinned back, amber eyes locked on the new arrival. "The cat hates me," Lucien observed. "The cat has good instincts." Rory set the bat down against the wall and crossed her arms. "What happened to you?" "A negotiation went poorly." "A negotiation." "In Bermondsey. Three hours ago." He unbuttoned his jacket with steady fingers — always steady, even now, because God forbid Lucien Moreau let his hands shake — and pulled the left side open. The shirt beneath was not just wet. It was wet and dark and clinging to a gash that ran from his lower ribs to his hip, the edges of the wound puckered and black. Everything in the room seemed to narrow. Rory's vision tunneled to that line of ruined cloth and what lay beneath it. "Iron blade," he said, as if narrating someone else's injury. "Whoever supplied it knew what they were doing. It's interfering with the healing." "You need a hospital." "I need a hospital the way a fish needs a dissertation. What I need is somewhere to sit that isn't a gutter, and—" He paused. Drew a careful breath. "And someone whose judgment I trust. You are the only person in this city who qualifies at the moment." The words landed in the cramped flat and sat there between them, heavy as the books lining every surface. Rory stared at him, arms still folded, jaw working. "You don't get to do this." "Do what?" "Disappear for six weeks. Six weeks, Lucien. No call, no message, nothing. After what happened in Whitechapel, after you — after we—" She stopped. Pressed her tongue against the back of her teeth. "You vanished. And now you show up bleeding on my doorstep and say I'm the only person you trust. That's not fair." "No." His voice was quiet. "It isn't." "So why did you come?" The flat was too small for the silence that followed. Rain hit the window glass in erratic bursts. Somewhere below, a muffled laugh from the curry house. Ptolemy licked one paw and resumed his surveillance. Lucien looked at her — really looked, both mismatched eyes open and unguarded in a way she'd only seen once before, in the dark outside the Whitechapel warehouse with his hand on her jaw and his breath an inch from hers. "Because I did not trust myself to stay away any longer, and the wound gave me an excuse to stop trying." Rory's arms dropped to her sides. She crossed the room in four steps. Not to him — past him, to the kitchen nook behind the desk, where she pulled a clean tea towel from the drawer and ran it under warm water. She wrung it out, came back, and stood in front of him close enough that she could feel the heat radiating off his skin through the damp suit. "Sit down on the sofa. Move the cat." "The cat will murder me." "Then die with dignity. Sit." He pushed off from the desk and limped to the sofa. Ptolemy fled with a hiss and vanished behind a stack of Akkadian reference grammars. Lucien lowered himself onto the cushions with the contained exhale of someone refusing to make any sound louder than breathing, his cane propped against the armrest, and looked up at her with an expression caught between gratitude and wariness. Rory sat on the coffee table across from him, knees nearly touching his. She held up the towel. "I'm going to clean it. And while I do, you're going to tell me everything. Bermondsey, the iron blade, who sent them, and why you really left after Whitechapel." She held his gaze. "Everything. Because I swear on my mother's lesson plans, if you feed me one more half-truth wrapped in French charm, I will throw you down those stairs myself." The ghost of a smile. Just the corner of his mouth, a barely-there shift. She hadn't seen it in six weeks and it hit her like a fist. "Where would you like me to begin?" "The truth. Start there." He leaned back against the sofa cushions and let his eyes close for a moment. When they opened, the armor was gone — the polish, the deflection, the four-language wit he wore like chainmail. What was left looked exhausted and afraid and entirely fixed on her face. "I left because I wanted to stay. And that—" He paused. Swallowed. "In my experience, wanting to stay with someone is the most dangerous thing I can do to them. My father's blood does not make for safe attachments, Rory." She pressed the warm towel against the edge of the wound. He flinched, a sharp intake of breath through his nose, but didn't pull away. "That wasn't your decision to make for me." "I know." "I grew up with a mother who let everyone else decide what was dangerous for her. Then I dated a man who decided what I could and couldn't handle. I left Cardiff so I'd never have to live like that again." She dabbed at the blackened skin around the gash, careful, methodical, her hands steadier than her pulse. "You don't get to protect me from yourself without asking if I want protection." "You're right." "I know I'm right. I'm furious with you." "You are also very gently cleaning my wound." "The two aren't mutually exclusive." His hand moved. It settled on her wrist — not gripping, just resting, his fingertips finding the small crescent-shaped scar she'd carried since childhood. He'd asked about it once, months ago, in the back booth of Yu-Fei's restaurant over cold noodles at one in the morning. She'd told him the truth. He'd traced the scar with his thumb and said nothing, and that silence had meant more than any words she could name. He traced it again now. "I am sorry," he said. No embroidery. No qualifier. Three words in English when he had three other languages to hide behind, and he chose the most naked version available. Rory looked at his hand on her wrist. At the wound still seeping beneath the towel. At those impossible eyes, one warm and one dark, watching her with the kind of terrified patience she'd never seen him give to anyone else. "Six weeks is a long time, Lucien." "I know." "You can't do it again." "I won't." She turned her wrist so her thumb pressed against his palm, holding on. "Then stay."
created_at"2026-02-24T22:04:49.778Z" 2/24/2026, 10:04:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.475
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1741
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1741
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"absolutely"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"methodical"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"traced"
count2
highlights
0"absolutely"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"could feel"
4"charm"
5"methodical"
6"pulse"
7"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1755
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1255
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Tuesday1
Moreau2
Marseille1
Sumerian1
Rory9
God1
Lucien5
Drew1
Pressed1
Whitechapel1
Akkadian1
Swallowed1
Yu-Fei1
English1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"God"
4"Lucien"
5"Drew"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Whitechapel"
2"English"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if narrating someone else's injury"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1755
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean23.72
std24.2
cv1.02
sampleLengths
073
184
23
35
445
532
611
741
89
91
1038
114
121
135
1447
159
1615
1755
184
1951
203
213
224
2376
2473
256
2621
274
282
2967
3021
3123
324
3348
3428
356
362
3755
387
395
4035
4141
4221
436
4464
458
465
475
4864
4918
97.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"were pinned"
1"was gone "
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs199
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences139
ratio0.072
matches
0"Rory pulled the door open with one hand still wrapped around the cricket bat she'd grabbed from behind Eva's coat rack, and the speech she'd prepared — something about it being half eleven on a Tuesday and if this was another one of Eva's university friends looking for a couch — died somewhere between her lungs and her teeth."
1"His hand came up — not to stop it, just palm raised, fingers slightly spread."
2"The way he said her name — that half-swallowed R, the vowel drawn out just enough by the Marseille still sitting in his accent — made something twist below her ribs."
3"It was fast — a slight sideways sway, the cane catching his weight a half-second late, one hand shooting to the door frame."
4"He moved through the door with the careful economy of someone measuring each step against a finite reserve of energy, and the smell of him came with it — rain and cedar and something faintly metallic that she'd learned months ago was the demon half of his blood running warmer than it should."
5"\"In Bermondsey. Three hours ago.\" He unbuttoned his jacket with steady fingers — always steady, even now, because God forbid Lucien Moreau let his hands shake — and pulled the left side open."
6"Lucien looked at her — really looked, both mismatched eyes open and unguarded in a way she'd only seen once before, in the dark outside the Whitechapel warehouse with his hand on her jaw and his breath an inch from hers."
7"Not to him — past him, to the kitchen nook behind the desk, where she pulled a clean tea towel from the drawer and ran it under warm water."
8"When they opened, the armor was gone — the polish, the deflection, the four-language wit he wore like chainmail."
9"It settled on her wrist — not gripping, just resting, his fingertips finding the small crescent-shaped scar she'd carried since childhood."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1251
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.03996802557953637
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008792965627498001
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean12.63
std11.36
cv0.9
sampleLengths
08
13
23
359
413
521
613
722
815
93
105
118
1215
138
143
155
166
1712
1820
1911
2017
2113
2211
239
241
2531
267
274
281
295
3040
317
329
3315
345
353
361
379
3837
394
4023
4115
4211
432
443
453
464
4723
4853
495
54.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3597122302158273
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Then the third."
2"Then his gaze came back"
3"Instead his knee buckled."
4"Somewhere below, a muffled laugh"
5"Just the corner of his"
ratio0.071
58.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences84
matches
0"His cane rested against the"
1"She moved to close the"
2"His hand came up —"
3"It always had with him."
4"She held the door where"
5"He lowered his hand"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"He glanced past her into"
8"She'd landed somewhere true and"
9"He reached for the cane,"
10"It was fast — a"
11"He moved through the door"
12"She kicked the door shut."
13"He unbuttoned his jacket with"
14"It was wet and dark"
15"he said, as if narrating"
16"His voice was quiet"
17"She crossed the room in"
18"She wrung it out, came"
19"He pushed off from the"
ratio0.405
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences84
matches
0"The first deadbolt gave with"
1"Rory pulled the door open"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"His cane rested against the"
4"The charcoal suit jacket hung"
5"Platinum blond hair, usually slicked"
6"She moved to close the"
7"His hand came up —"
8"A gesture that said wait,"
9"The difference mattered."
10"It always had with him."
11"That was part of the"
12"She held the door where"
13"The curry house below pumped"
14"He lowered his hand"
15"A muscle in his jaw"
16"The way he said her"
17"She tightened her grip on"
18"He glanced past her into"
19"Something shifted behind his expression."
ratio0.75
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Platinum blond hair, usually slicked back with the kind of precision that bordered on compulsive, fell in wet strands across his forehead."
1"It was wet and dark and clinging to a gash that ran from his lower ribs to his hip, the edges of the wound puckered and black."
2"It settled on her wrist — not gripping, just resting, his fingertips finding the small crescent-shaped scar she'd carried since childhood."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, as if narrating someone else's injury"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"his weight pressed (press)"
1"Lucien observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.169
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.068
87.4596%