Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8TZPQP598M3Z5ZFGR0WN3C

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.072065
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement in sheets, turning Chalk Farm Road into a river of reflected brake lights and smeared neon. Quinn's boots struck the asphalt in a rhythm she hadn't used since her days running infantry drills—heel, ball, push, repeat—each stride eating up the distance between her and the figure in the dark hooded jacket thirty meters ahead. He'd bolted the second she'd stepped into The Raven's Nest. Hadn't even let her get the words out. She'd pushed through the door under that green neon sign, clocked him sitting at the far end of the bar beneath a yellowed map of the Thames estuary, and he'd looked up at her with those warm brown eyes wide as communion wafers. Then his hand had gone to the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat—a reflex, like touching a talisman—and he'd vaulted the bar rail and crashed through the back exit before the bartender could do more than swear. Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. Current person of interest in at least three cases she couldn't get anyone at the Met to take seriously. Quinn wiped rain from her eyes and cut left across the road, nearly clipping a night bus that blared its horn at her back. Herrera was fast, younger by twelve years, but he kept glancing over his shoulder and that cost him. She watched him stumble on the kerb outside the Camden Lock entrance, one knee hitting wet stone before he scrambled up and disappeared around a shuttered food stall. She followed. Her worn leather watch strap had soaked through, the band heavy and cold against her wrist. The stalls of Camden Market rose around her like the walls of a maze—corrugated metal shutters padlocked for the night, canvas awnings dumping pockets of collected rainwater onto the walkways below. The air stank of day-old frying oil and wet cardboard. No footsteps ahead. She stopped. Listened. Rain on tin roofing. A distant siren winding through Kentish Town. The drip and gurgle of overloaded gutters. Then—a scrape. Metal on metal, coming from below the pedestrian bridge near the canal. Quinn pressed herself against a shuttered storefront and peered around the corner. Herrera crouched beside what looked like a maintenance hatch in the pavement. Not a standard council access point. The cover was heavier, older, with markings along the rim that she couldn't read in the dark. He gripped the edge with both hands and hauled it aside, the sound grinding through the empty market like a coffin lid. He dropped through without hesitation. Quinn crossed the distance in six strides and stood over the open hatch. A narrow iron ladder descended into amber light. Warm air rose from the hole, carrying a smell she couldn't place—something between burnt cinnamon and ozone, with an undercurrent of old stone and earth. Sound drifted up too. Voices. Many of them. The murmur of a crowd. She knew what was down there. Not the specifics, not the layout, but the shape of it. Three years of pulling at loose threads since Morris had died in that warehouse in Bermondsey—three years of case files that didn't add up, witness statements that contradicted physics, evidence logs with items that vanished between booking and trial—had led her to the edges of something she didn't have a name for. An economy that operated below the surface of the city. Underground, in more ways than one. Her radio wouldn't work down there. She pulled it from her belt anyway and thumbed the channel. "Control, this is DI Quinn, badge four-four-one-six. I'm at Camden Market, north side near the canal bridge. In pursuit of suspect on foot. Going underground." Static. She repeated the call. More static, broken by a sound like someone dragging a nail across glass. She clipped the radio back to her belt. No backup. No comms. No authority that meant anything below that hatch. Quinn looked at the ladder. The rungs were damp with condensation and something that caught the amber light with an iridescent sheen, like motor oil but thinner. She could hear Herrera's footsteps below, rapid and fading. Every second she stood here, he put another ten meters between them. She thought about Morris. The way they'd found him in that Bermondsey warehouse, sitting upright against a support column with his eyes open and no marks on his body. The pathologist had written "cardiac event" on the death certificate, and Quinn had signed the paperwork because what else could she do. She hadn't believed it then. She didn't believe it now. Herrera had been a paramedic. Had treated people the NHS didn't know existed. Had lost his medical license for administering treatments that weren't in any pharmacopoeia she could find. If anyone knew what had really happened to Morris, it was someone like him. Someone connected to this hidden underworld. Quinn put her foot on the first rung and started down. The ladder dropped about four meters into what had once been a Tube station platform. She recognized the architecture immediately—the curved tiled walls, the arched ceiling—but every surface had been transformed. Where London Underground signage should have hung, there were banners of dark fabric stitched with symbols in silver thread. The original platform lighting had been replaced, or augmented, by hundreds of glass lanterns suspended from the ceiling on chains of varying lengths, each one casting that same amber glow she'd seen from above. The effect was like descending into a jar of honey. The platform opened into the old track bed, and here the crowd thickened. Dozens of stalls lined both sides of what would have been the railway tunnel, built from salvaged wood, draped cloth, and materials she couldn't identify at a glance. Vendors called out in languages she recognized—English, Arabic, Mandarin—and languages she didn't. The customers moved between stalls in no apparent hurry, browsing wares displayed on velvet-covered tables and in locked glass cases. The Veil Market. Quinn had heard the name whispered exactly once, by a confidential informant who'd turned up dead a week later in circumstances that remained, officially, unexplained. She'd found a carved disc of bone among his possessions—smooth, white, about the size of a fifty-pence piece. She'd kept it. It sat in her coat pocket now, and her fingers closed around it instinctively. A bone token. She stepped off the ladder's last rung onto the platform. Nobody stopped her. A few heads turned—a woman with skin the colour of polished obsidian and pupils shaped like keyholes gave her a long look, then turned back to the vials of luminous blue liquid she was arranging on her stall. A massive man with tusks protruding from his lower jaw glanced at Quinn's belt, where the outline of her radio and warrant card holder were visible, and let out a low grunt that might have been amusement. Quinn's hand moved to her hip. She carried no firearm—Met protocol for plain-clothes detectives didn't extend to that without special authorization. She had a collapsible baton in her right coat pocket and thirty years of institutional credibility that meant absolutely nothing in this tunnel. She spotted Herrera. He'd slowed to a walk fifty meters down the tunnel, weaving between stalls on the left side. The hood of his jacket had fallen back, revealing his short curly hair plastered to his skull with rain. His olive skin glowed amber in the lantern light. He moved like someone who knew this place, nodding to a vendor here, sidestepping a knot of customers there, angling toward the far end of the tunnel where the market thinned and the darkness deepened. Quinn followed. She kept three stalls between them and tried to move the way the other shoppers moved—unhurried, browsing. Her eyes swept the wares on display as she passed. One stall sold jars of something that writhed. Another offered stacks of paper covered in handwritten text, each page sealed with wax that pulsed with a faint internal light. A third stall, tended by an old man with milky white eyes, displayed nothing but a single black feather on a velvet cushion, yet a queue of customers stood waiting. She didn't look too long at any of it. Couldn't afford to process what she was seeing. Not yet. A hand caught her elbow. Quinn spun, weight dropping into her back foot. The woman who'd grabbed her was short, barely five feet, wrapped in layers of green silk that seemed to move independent of any breeze. Her face was young but her eyes were ancient, the irises a shade of gold that didn't exist in nature. "You're police." Not a question. Quinn didn't answer. "Your token got you in. It won't get you out if you cause trouble." The woman's grip tightened. Her fingers were stronger than they had any right to be. "Whatever you're chasing, consider whether it's worth catching." "Let go of my arm." The woman held on for one more second, then released her. She melted back into the crowd without another word. Quinn turned back toward where she'd last seen Herrera. Gone. She pushed forward, past a stall selling clockwork insects that crawled and clicked in a glass terrarium, past a vendor arguing in rapid French with a customer over a jar of what appeared to be teeth. The tunnel curved ahead, following the old track layout, and the crowd thinned. The lanterns grew sparser. Shadows pooled between them like standing water. At the curve's apex, a narrow archway had been cut into the tunnel wall—rough-edged, recent. Not part of the original station architecture. Beyond it, a corridor of bare brick stretched into darkness, lit at irregular intervals by candles set into niches in the wall. Wet footprints marked the floor, running into the corridor. Fresh. The treads matched a pair of trainers—Herrera's size, Herrera's gait pattern, the left foot striking slightly heavier than the right, a detail she'd noted when reviewing CCTV footage from the Bermondsey case. Quinn stood at the archway's threshold. Behind her, the amber hum of the market. Ahead, candlelight and silence and an answer that might be worth any cost. The scar on Tomás Herrera's forearm came from a knife attack. She'd read the medical report. Someone had tried to kill him for what he knew, and he'd survived. Whatever he was running from, it wasn't just her. Whatever he was running toward, down this dark brick corridor in a market that shouldn't exist beneath the streets of Camden—it was something that frightened him more than a detective with eighteen years of service and a dead partner she couldn't let go. Quinn checked her baton. Solid weight in her hand. She adjusted her grip, felt the rain-damp leather of her watch press against the heel of her palm. She stepped through the archway.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1812
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1812
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count2
3
word"absolutely"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"standard"
2"velvet"
3"absolutely"
4"pulsed"
5"weight"
6"silk"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
58.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences136
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"tend to"
2"tried to"
3"seemed to"
4"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1791
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1735
uniqueNames27
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
Raven1
Nest1
Thames1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera10
Met2
Camden3
Lock1
Market2
Kentish1
Town1
Morris3
Bermondsey3
Quinn16
Tube1
London1
Underground2
English1
Arabic1
Mandarin1
Veil1
French1
Tomás2
persons
0"Saint"
1"Christopher"
2"Herrera"
3"Market"
4"Morris"
5"Quinn"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Chalk"
1"Farm"
2"Road"
3"Raven"
4"Thames"
5"Met"
6"Camden"
7"Kentish"
8"Town"
9"Bermondsey"
10"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a maintenance hatch in the pa"
1"something between burnt cinnamon and ozone, wit"
2"silk that seemed to move independent of any breeze"
88.33% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.117
wordCount1791
matches
0"Not the specifics, not the layout, but the shape of it"
1"not the layout, but the shape of it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean39.8
std30.46
cv0.765
sampleLengths
058
198
223
370
459
524
626
757
85
959
1085
1117
1225
1326
1412
1548
1661
1749
1811
1994
2073
213
2260
233
2488
2544
263
2780
2888
2919
305
3152
325
333
3437
355
3620
379
381
3960
4086
4127
4281
4327
445
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"been transformed"
1"been replaced"
81.38% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs281
matches
0"was like descending"
1"was arranging"
2"was seeing"
3"was running"
4"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences139
ratio0.108
matches
0"Quinn's boots struck the asphalt in a rhythm she hadn't used since her days running infantry drills—heel, ball, push, repeat—each stride eating up the distance between her and the figure in the dark hooded jacket thirty meters ahead."
1"Then his hand had gone to the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat—a reflex, like touching a talisman—and he'd vaulted the bar rail and crashed through the back exit before the bartender could do more than swear."
2"The stalls of Camden Market rose around her like the walls of a maze—corrugated metal shutters padlocked for the night, canvas awnings dumping pockets of collected rainwater onto the walkways below."
3"Then—a scrape."
4"Warm air rose from the hole, carrying a smell she couldn't place—something between burnt cinnamon and ozone, with an undercurrent of old stone and earth."
5"Three years of pulling at loose threads since Morris had died in that warehouse in Bermondsey—three years of case files that didn't add up, witness statements that contradicted physics, evidence logs with items that vanished between booking and trial—had led her to the edges of something she didn't have a name for."
6"She recognized the architecture immediately—the curved tiled walls, the arched ceiling—but every surface had been transformed."
7"Vendors called out in languages she recognized—English, Arabic, Mandarin—and languages she didn't."
8"She'd found a carved disc of bone among his possessions—smooth, white, about the size of a fifty-pence piece."
9"A few heads turned—a woman with skin the colour of polished obsidian and pupils shaped like keyholes gave her a long look, then turned back to the vials of luminous blue liquid she was arranging on her stall."
10"She carried no firearm—Met protocol for plain-clothes detectives didn't extend to that without special authorization."
11"She kept three stalls between them and tried to move the way the other shoppers moved—unhurried, browsing."
12"At the curve's apex, a narrow archway had been cut into the tunnel wall—rough-edged, recent."
13"The treads matched a pair of trainers—Herrera's size, Herrera's gait pattern, the left foot striking slightly heavier than the right, a detail she'd noted when reviewing CCTV footage from the Bermondsey case."
14"Whatever he was running toward, down this dark brick corridor in a market that shouldn't exist beneath the streets of Camden—it was something that frightened him more than a detective with eighteen years of service and a dead partner she couldn't let go."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1761
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.022146507666098807
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.006246450880181715
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean12.88
std10.44
cv0.81
sampleLengths
020
138
210
38
443
537
62
72
819
924
1018
1128
122
1316
1431
1510
163
172
181
194
207
217
222
2312
2412
2512
266
2717
2822
295
3013
318
3225
334
341
353
365
376
3811
3952
4010
416
426
4311
4425
451
464
4713
488
492
50.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.381294964028777
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners53
27.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"Then his hand had gone"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences122
matches
0"He'd bolted the second she'd"
1"She'd pushed through the door"
2"She watched him stumble on"
3"Her worn leather watch strap"
4"He gripped the edge with"
5"He dropped through without hesitation."
6"She knew what was down"
7"Her radio wouldn't work down"
8"She pulled it from her"
9"She repeated the call."
10"She clipped the radio back"
11"She could hear Herrera's footsteps"
12"She thought about Morris."
13"She hadn't believed it then."
14"She didn't believe it now."
15"She recognized the architecture immediately—the"
16"She'd found a carved disc"
17"She'd kept it."
18"It sat in her coat"
19"She stepped off the ladder's"
ratio0.295
78.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences122
matches
0"Quinn's boots struck the asphalt"
1"He'd bolted the second she'd"
2"She'd pushed through the door"
3"Quinn wiped rain from her"
4"Herrera was fast, younger by"
5"She watched him stumble on"
6"Her worn leather watch strap"
7"The stalls of Camden Market"
8"The air stank of day-old"
9"A distant siren winding through"
10"The drip and gurgle of"
11"Metal on metal, coming from"
12"Quinn pressed herself against a"
13"Herrera crouched beside what looked"
14"The cover was heavier, older,"
15"He gripped the edge with"
16"He dropped through without hesitation."
17"Quinn crossed the distance in"
18"A narrow iron ladder descended"
19"Sound drifted up too."
ratio0.762
40.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"If anyone knew what had"
ratio0.008
27.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Quinn wiped rain from her eyes and cut left across the road, nearly clipping a night bus that blared its horn at her back."
1"Three years of pulling at loose threads since Morris had died in that warehouse in Bermondsey—three years of case files that didn't add up, witness statements t…"
2"The rungs were damp with condensation and something that caught the amber light with an iridescent sheen, like motor oil but thinner."
3"Had lost his medical license for administering treatments that weren't in any pharmacopoeia she could find."
4"Quinn had heard the name whispered exactly once, by a confidential informant who'd turned up dead a week later in circumstances that remained, officially, unexp…"
5"A massive man with tusks protruding from his lower jaw glanced at Quinn's belt, where the outline of her radio and warrant card holder were visible, and let out…"
6"She had a collapsible baton in her right coat pocket and thirty years of institutional credibility that meant absolutely nothing in this tunnel."
7"He moved like someone who knew this place, nodding to a vendor here, sidestepping a knot of customers there, angling toward the far end of the tunnel where the …"
8"The woman who'd grabbed her was short, barely five feet, wrapped in layers of green silk that seemed to move independent of any breeze."
9"She pushed forward, past a stall selling clockwork insects that crawled and clicked in a glass terrarium, past a vendor arguing in rapid French with a customer …"
10"Whatever he was running toward, down this dark brick corridor in a market that shouldn't exist beneath the streets of Camden—it was something that frightened hi…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.9867%