| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1154 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1154 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "resolved" | | 16 | "pulsed" | | 17 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 1150 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "Midnight. The Grove. He knows." | | 1 | "Get a grip, Carter. You’re spooking yourself." | | 2 | "The rules are different here." | | 3 | "Thump… step… step… thump…" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1130 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.27 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Carter | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed taller at night, their rough surfaces absorbing the weak starlight" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.478 | | wordCount | 1150 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the absence of sound, but the wrong kind of silence" | | 1 | "not with the portal-heat, but with a living, rhythmic warmth" | | 2 | "Not a shape this time, but a suggestion of one" | | 3 | "Not from one direction, but from all around, from the stones themselves, from the earth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 28.75 | | std | 20.19 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 52 | | 32 | 52 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 53 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "was not imagining" | | 1 | "was looking" |
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| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the clearing held a different weight—thicker, cooler, tasting of damp earth and something sweet she couldn’t name." | | 1 | "Not a warning of a Hel portal—she’d felt that before, a persistent, radiating heat." | | 2 | "Something brushed against the back of her neck—a sensation like a strand of spiderweb." | | 3 | "Not a shape this time, but a suggestion of one—a distortion in the air, like heat haze on a summer road, but it was cold here." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 641 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.0358814352574103 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0093603744149766 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 9.58 | | std | 7.3 | | cv | 0.762 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 41.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.31666666666666665 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the low, steady thrum" | | 1 | "Then, at the extreme periphery" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 56.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come because the" | | 1 | "He knows.* And because the" | | 2 | "It was too quiet." | | 3 | "She walked toward the center" | | 4 | "She counted them." | | 5 | "She was sure she’d counted" | | 6 | "She stopped turning." | | 7 | "Her head jerked toward the" | | 8 | "Her own voice was a" | | 9 | "It didn’t travel." | | 10 | "She slapped at it, whirling" | | 11 | "You’re spooking yourself.*" | | 12 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 13 | "It wasn’t a word she" | | 14 | "It was the sound of" | | 15 | "She went still, every muscle" | | 16 | "Her bright blue eyes, wide" | | 17 | "She turned her head to" | | 18 | "she was certain it had" | | 19 | "She caught a syllable that" |
| | ratio | 0.41 | |
| 50.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped through the" | | 2 | "The air in the clearing" | | 3 | "Year-round wildflowers dotted the gloom," | | 4 | "She had come because the" | | 5 | "He knows.* And because the" | | 6 | "Rory shoved her hands into" | | 7 | "The cool-headed logic she prided" | | 8 | "It was too quiet." | | 9 | "The distant hum of London" | | 10 | "The wildflowers didn’t stir." | | 11 | "She walked toward the center" | | 12 | "The stones seemed taller at" | | 13 | "She counted them." | | 14 | "She was sure she’d counted" | | 15 | "A cold trickle, unrelated to" | | 16 | "She stopped turning." | | 17 | "The sweet scent was stronger" | | 18 | "A snap, to her left." | | 19 | "Her head jerked toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Because the note, slipped under" | | 1 | "Now, standing in the center," |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "But the intelligence that had gotten her out of Cardiff, away from Evan, that solved logistical puzzles for Yu-Fei’s deliveries with ruthless efficiency, was no…" | | 1 | "It was warm, not with the portal-heat, but with a living, rhythmic warmth that matched the pace of the circling footsteps." | | 2 | "A circle of decay spread out from where she stood, a creeping blight that turned the vibrant grass to ash-grey powder." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |