Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8V0W36R0KJ7Q6429N5AJ9M

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
58.4s
Cost:
$0.004526
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones of the Fae Grove cut black silhouettes against the bruised purple of the twilight sky. Aurora Carter stepped through the gap between two of them, the grass under her boots silent and springy. The air in the clearing held a different weight—thicker, cooler, tasting of damp earth and something sweet she couldn’t name. Year-round wildflowers dotted the gloom, their colors muted to shades of grey and blue in the failing light. She had come because the map, drawn in spidery ink on the back of a Golden Empress takeout menu, indicated this spot. Because the note, slipped under her door this morning, had read only: *Midnight. The Grove. He knows.* And because the Heartstone pendant, nestled now against her sternum under her jacket, had given a single, distinct pulse as she’d entered Richmond Park. Rory shoved her hands into the pockets of her leather jacket, her fingers finding the familiar crescent ridge of the scar on her left wrist. A habit. A anchor. The cool-headed logic she prided herself on felt thin here, stretched like mist over the clearing. It was too quiet. Not the absence of sound, but the wrong kind of silence. The distant hum of London was gone, swallowed completely. No rustle of nocturnal animals, no sigh of wind through the park’s trees beyond the stone circle. Only the low, steady thrum of her own heartbeat in her ears. The wildflowers didn’t stir. She walked toward the center of the clearing, her eyes scanning the dark spaces between the monolithic oaks. The stones seemed taller at night, their rough surfaces absorbing the weak starlight. She counted them. Twelve. She was sure she’d counted twelve from the outside. Now, standing in the center, turning a slow circle, she saw thirteen. A cold trickle, unrelated to the temperature, traced a path down her spine. She stopped turning. Breathed in. The sweet scent was stronger now, cloying, like rotting honey. A snap, to her left. Her head jerked toward the sound. Nothing but the deeper shadow between two stones. A fallen branch, maybe. The ground here was clear. The Heartstone gave another pulse, a warm bloom against her skin that faded too quickly. Not a warning of a Hel portal—she’d felt that before, a persistent, radiating heat. This was different. A flicker. A signal. “Hello?” Her own voice was a foreign intrusion, swallowed by the grove’s dense silence. No echo. It didn’t travel. Something brushed against the back of her neck—a sensation like a strand of spiderweb. She slapped at it, whirling around. Empty air. *Get a grip, Carter. You’re spooking yourself.* But the intelligence that had gotten her out of Cardiff, away from Evan, that solved logistical puzzles for Yu-Fei’s deliveries with ruthless efficiency, was now screaming a single, coherent thought: *The rules are different here.* A whisper. It came from everywhere and nowhere, a sibilant exhale that skirted the edge of language. It wasn’t a word she knew. It was the sound of dry leaves skittering over stone, given intent. She went still, every muscle locked. Her bright blue eyes, wide now, darted from shadow to shadow. Nothing moved. Then, at the extreme periphery of her left vision, a shape detached itself from the base of one of the oaks. Tall, slender, a column of deeper darkness that flowed rather than stepped. She turned her head to look directly at it. There was only the stone. But the stone… she was certain it had been five paces to the west a moment ago. The geometry of the clearing had shifted. The gap she’d entered through was no longer where she’d left it. The whisper came again, this time from her right. Two voices, maybe three, overlapping in a fluid, breathy chatter. She caught a syllable that might have been “Lai…”—a fragment of ‘Laila’, the alias she’d used for three terrified months in Bristol. A name nothing in London should know. “Who’s there?” Her voice was harder now, a blade she forged from fear. “Show yourself.” The whispering stopped. In the absolute quiet that followed, she heard the footsteps. Soft, measured, a crunch on unseen gravel. They circled her. One set. Then two. A third, lighter, almost a patter. They didn’t sync up. They moved in a lazy, predatory orbit just beyond the ring of stones. Rory’s hand went to the pendant, pulling it out from under her jacket. The deep crimson gemstone held a faint inner glow, just enough to cast a bloody highlight on her fingers. It was warm, not with the portal-heat, but with a living, rhythmic warmth that matched the pace of the circling footsteps. *Thump… step… step… thump…* She was not imagining this. The cool-headed part of her mind began cataloguing exits, weapons, possibilities. Her keys were in her pocket. A small can of anti-harassment spray Eva had insisted she carry. Useless against things that weren’t there. A flicker of movement, straight ahead. Not a shape this time, but a suggestion of one—a distortion in the air, like heat haze on a summer road, but it was cold here. It resolved for a fraction of a second into something with too many long, jointed limbs, before dissolving again. The footsteps paused. The silence that fell was worse. It was a listening silence. A waiting silence. She felt the weight of eyes on her. Not from one direction, but from all around, from the stones themselves, from the earth under her feet, from the empty, star-pricked sky above the clearing. Something was looking at her from a place she couldn’t see, studying her with a cold, impersonal curiosity. The wildflowers at her feet began to wilt. She watched it happen. The petals of a bluebell curled inward, blackening, crumbling to dust in the span of a single held breath. A circle of decay spread out from where she stood, a creeping blight that turned the vibrant grass to ash-grey powder. The Heartstone flared, a sudden, painful heat against her palm. It pulsed in time with the frantic hammer of her heart. A breath, not her own, stirred the hair by her ear. It carried the scent of old books and cold, deep soil. “Aurora.” The voice was right behind her. It was a voice of polished stone and root-sap, genderless and ancient. It knew her real name. She didn’t scream. She didn’t turn. Every instinct told her that turning, meeting the source of that voice, would be an end. She stood frozen in the center of the dying grove, the pendant burning in her fist, the presence at her back so close she could feel the displacement of the air. The footsteps began again, slow and deliberate, moving from the circle of stones inward, converging on her position. They were no longer hiding. She was not alone. She had never been alone from the moment she’d stepped between the stones.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1154
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1154
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"silence"
count5
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"footsteps"
count4
12
word"measured"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"resolved"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"gloom"
2"pulse"
3"familiar"
4"silence"
5"scanning"
6"traced"
7"down her spine"
8"flicker"
9"echo"
10"whisper"
11"footsteps"
12"measured"
13"rhythmic"
14"warmth"
15"resolved"
16"pulsed"
17"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords21
totalWords1150
ratio0.018
matches
0"Midnight. The Grove. He knows."
1"Get a grip, Carter. You’re spooking yourself."
2"The rules are different here."
3"Thump… step… step… thump…"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1130
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.27
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove2
Carter2
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone3
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Hel1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Yu-Fei1
Eva1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Evan"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed taller at night, their rough surfaces absorbing the weak starlight"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.478
wordCount1150
matches
0"Not the absence of sound, but the wrong kind of silence"
1"not with the portal-heat, but with a living, rhythmic warmth"
2"Not a shape this time, but a suggestion of one"
3"Not from one direction, but from all around, from the stones themselves, from the earth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean28.75
std20.19
cv0.702
sampleLengths
076
163
245
34
453
556
628
75
823
936
101
1118
1222
137
1435
152
1633
1719
1842
195
2036
2148
2215
233
2447
2553
264
2739
2851
293
3014
3152
3252
3321
3422
351
3623
3753
3823
3917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was not imagining"
1"was looking"
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences120
ratio0.033
matches
0"The air in the clearing held a different weight—thicker, cooler, tasting of damp earth and something sweet she couldn’t name."
1"Not a warning of a Hel portal—she’d felt that before, a persistent, radiating heat."
2"Something brushed against the back of her neck—a sensation like a strand of spiderweb."
3"Not a shape this time, but a suggestion of one—a distortion in the air, like heat haze on a summer road, but it was cold here."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount641
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.0358814352574103
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0093603744149766
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean9.58
std7.3
cv0.762
sampleLengths
020
118
220
318
422
513
62
726
825
92
102
1116
124
1311
149
1517
1612
174
1818
1913
203
211
229
2312
2413
253
262
2710
285
296
308
314
325
3315
3414
353
362
372
381
3913
402
413
4214
436
442
454
463
4735
482
4915
41.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.31666666666666665
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners38
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Only the low, steady thrum"
1"Then, at the extreme periphery"
ratio0.02
56.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences100
matches
0"She had come because the"
1"He knows.* And because the"
2"It was too quiet."
3"She walked toward the center"
4"She counted them."
5"She was sure she’d counted"
6"She stopped turning."
7"Her head jerked toward the"
8"Her own voice was a"
9"It didn’t travel."
10"She slapped at it, whirling"
11"You’re spooking yourself.*"
12"It came from everywhere and"
13"It wasn’t a word she"
14"It was the sound of"
15"She went still, every muscle"
16"Her bright blue eyes, wide"
17"She turned her head to"
18"she was certain it had"
19"She caught a syllable that"
ratio0.41
50.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences100
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter stepped through the"
2"The air in the clearing"
3"Year-round wildflowers dotted the gloom,"
4"She had come because the"
5"He knows.* And because the"
6"Rory shoved her hands into"
7"The cool-headed logic she prided"
8"It was too quiet."
9"The distant hum of London"
10"The wildflowers didn’t stir."
11"She walked toward the center"
12"The stones seemed taller at"
13"She counted them."
14"She was sure she’d counted"
15"A cold trickle, unrelated to"
16"She stopped turning."
17"The sweet scent was stronger"
18"A snap, to her left."
19"Her head jerked toward the"
ratio0.82
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Because the note, slipped under"
1"Now, standing in the center,"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"But the intelligence that had gotten her out of Cardiff, away from Evan, that solved logistical puzzles for Yu-Fei’s deliveries with ruthless efficiency, was no…"
1"It was warm, not with the portal-heat, but with a living, rhythmic warmth that matched the pace of the circling footsteps."
2"A circle of decay spread out from where she stood, a creeping blight that turned the vibrant grass to ash-grey powder."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.1188%