Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8V1EJ21D611BCFR5VP72DY

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Duration:
47.0s
Cost:
$0.036954
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Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant burned. Not painfully — not yet — but with a persistent, insistent heat that pressed through the fabric of Rory's jacket and into her sternum, like someone had pressed a warm coin against her skin and held it there. She pulled the chain out from under her collar and the crimson stone sat against her palm, pulsing with that faint inner light, slow and rhythmic as a second heartbeat. "It hasn't stopped since we came through," she said. Nyx drifted to her left, their silhouette shifting against a light source that didn't behave like light ought to. The sky above Dymas wasn't black or blue or any colour that belonged to a sky — it was amber, thick and saturated as the inside of a lantern, casting everything below it in shades of honey and gold. No sun hung in it. No clouds. Just that unbroken, glowing warmth pressing down from horizon to horizon. "It recognises home," Nyx said. Their voice came as it always did, a whisper finding purchase in the air rather than originating from any single point. "The stone was made here. It knows." Isolde stood several paces ahead of them, silver hair catching the amber light until it looked almost copper. She had passed through the rift first and had not moved since, her pale lavender eyes scanning the landscape with an expression caught between reverence and wariness. "The Seer's been through worse than this," Rory muttered, tucking the pendant back under her collar. Isolde turned her head. "What the eye reads as beauty, the blood reads as danger. They are not mutually exclusive." Rory didn't argue. She looked. The landscape unfolded before them in waves. Vineyards stretched impossibly far to the east, their vines heavy with fruit too large and too dark to be ordinary grapes — each cluster the size of a fist, nearly black, trembling under their own weight. Between the rows of vines moved shapes that were almost human, bent low, filling baskets that never seemed to reach capacity. No one looked up. To the west, orchards. Trees with bark the colour of dark rum and canopies so dense the amber light barely reached their roots. From somewhere inside them drifted something sweet and rotting, not unpleasant, but excessive — the smell of fermentation, of abundance left to turn. The ground underfoot was soft. Not mud. Something that gave slightly beneath each step, like grass grown over a mattress, springy and yielding. It was uniformly green and immaculate. No weeds. No bare patches. The kind of perfection that suggested maintenance by something that didn't sleep. "Keep moving," Nyx said. They had extended one arm to their full height, the shadow-substance of their form thinning slightly at the edges, as though they were testing the air like a fingertip testing water temperature. "We are not invisible here. Being stationary is worse than being seen." Rory fell into step. "Worse how?" "Things that feed on stillness know this place well." She chose not to ask what things. They moved along a path that appeared between the orchards and the vineyards, wide enough for a cart, paved with flat stones the colour of old bone. On either side, the sounds began to build. At first she'd assumed Dymas was quiet — the hush of it had struck her the moment they'd come through the rift, that sudden absence of city noise, of traffic, of the low mechanical drone London never fully surrendered. But it wasn't quiet. It was layered. Sounds she hadn't been able to separate at first were clarifying as her ears adjusted. Music. Somewhere ahead, string music, slow and elaborate, the kind played at a dinner where no one was in any hurry to leave. Laughter. Rich and continuous, ebbing and swelling, never fully subsiding. And eating. The sound of it, amplified and everywhere, knives and plates and chewing and swallowing — not grotesque in isolation, but in aggregate, in constant unbroken drone, deeply wrong. "Grand feasts," Isolde said, more to herself than to them. She hadn't broken stride. "He sets his table every hour of every day. The guests are never the same but the table is never cleared." Rory looked at a fork in the path where a figure sat on a low stone wall, cross-legged, wearing what had probably been fine clothing a long time ago. The figure held something in both hands — a piece of fruit from one of the nearby trees, overripe, its juice running down their wrists. They weren't eating it. They were simply holding it, staring at it, their expression beyond hunger and beyond satisfaction, lodged in something that had no name she recognised. She looked away. The path curved and the orchards thinned and the first building appeared. Rory stopped walking. It was enormous — not the enormity of a skyscraper or a stadium, which existed in scales her mind had already catalogued and filed away. This was enormous in a way that felt architectural in nature, as though the building understood its own size and used it deliberately. Columns of dark stone. Arched windows three storeys tall, lit from within. Banners hanging from those arches in deep burgundy and gold, embroidered with a crest she didn't recognise — a crowned figure seated at a table, mouth open. From inside: the music, louder now. The laughter, louder. Heat bloomed outward from the open doors in waves, carrying with it the assault of a hundred dishes cooked simultaneously, not unpleasant individually but overlapping into something overwhelming. The pendant pulsed hard against her chest. Once. Twice. "That's the hall," Nyx said. "I know it's the hall." Rory stared up at the banners. "We're not going in through the front." Isolde had already turned, moving along the building's exterior wall without being asked, fingers trailing the stone but not quite touching it, an inch of air between her skin and the surface. She paused at the corner. "What passes for shadow here does not behave as shadow does elsewhere." She glanced back at Nyx. "You will feel it." Nyx tilted their head. Their violet eyes, faint as embers, moved across the building's facade. "I already do." Rory pressed her back against the stone beside Isolde and peered around the corner. A narrower path ran along the building's side — service access, loading, whatever the equivalent was in a realm built on excess. Figures moved there too, carrying crates, hauling things covered in cloth, none of them looking at each other, all of them moving with the focused, joyless efficiency of people who had stopped asking questions about where they were and why. Her stomach tightened. "Those people," she said, low. "Are they—" "Contracted," Isolde said. "Bound by choice or by trick. The difference matters to them. It does not matter to Dymas." Rory looked at the crescent scar on her left wrist, a reflex she'd never broken. She pulled her sleeve down. "Then we don't touch anything, we don't eat anything, and we don't agree to anything."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.091
87.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"mechanical"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"facade"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"warmth"
2"whisper"
3"scanning"
4"weight"
5"mechanical"
6"pulsed"
7"facade"
8"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1013
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Nyx6
Dymas2
Isolde6
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching it, an inch of air between her skin and the surface"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.56
wordCount1172
matches
0"not unpleasant, but excessive"
1"not grotesque in isolation, but in aggregate, in constant unbroken drone, deeply wrong"
2"not unpleasant individually but overlapping into something overwhelming"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean30.05
std26.61
cv0.885
sampleLengths
03
168
29
376
433
545
616
720
85
968
1046
1146
1248
136
149
157
1696
1723
1810
1930
2035
2182
223
2312
243
2587
2637
279
285
2918
3037
3121
3218
3376
343
357
3620
3720
3815
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"was layered"
1"being asked"
34.37% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs161
matches
0"were testing"
1"were clarifying"
2"weren't eating"
3"were simply holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences94
ratio0.106
matches
0"Not painfully — not yet — but with a persistent, insistent heat that pressed through the fabric of Rory's jacket and into her sternum, like someone had pressed a warm coin against her skin and held it there."
1"The sky above Dymas wasn't black or blue or any colour that belonged to a sky — it was amber, thick and saturated as the inside of a lantern, casting everything below it in shades of honey and gold."
2"Vineyards stretched impossibly far to the east, their vines heavy with fruit too large and too dark to be ordinary grapes — each cluster the size of a fist, nearly black, trembling under their own weight."
3"From somewhere inside them drifted something sweet and rotting, not unpleasant, but excessive — the smell of fermentation, of abundance left to turn."
4"At first she'd assumed Dymas was quiet — the hush of it had struck her the moment they'd come through the rift, that sudden absence of city noise, of traffic, of the low mechanical drone London never fully surrendered."
5"The sound of it, amplified and everywhere, knives and plates and chewing and swallowing — not grotesque in isolation, but in aggregate, in constant unbroken drone, deeply wrong."
6"The figure held something in both hands — a piece of fruit from one of the nearby trees, overripe, its juice running down their wrists."
7"It was enormous — not the enormity of a skyscraper or a stadium, which existed in scales her mind had already catalogued and filed away."
8"Banners hanging from those arches in deep burgundy and gold, embroidered with a crest she didn't recognise — a crowned figure seated at a table, mouth open."
9"A narrower path ran along the building's side — service access, loading, whatever the equivalent was in a realm built on excess."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1004
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"black, trembling under their"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03884462151394422
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.014940239043824702
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.47
std10.72
cv0.86
sampleLengths
03
138
230
39
419
539
65
72
811
95
1021
117
1218
1327
1416
154
1616
173
182
197
2036
2121
224
234
2419
2523
265
272
2816
296
302
313
3212
334
3432
3512
364
372
389
397
4027
418
4239
434
443
4515
461
4722
481
499
87.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5425531914893617
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners51
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"Just that unbroken, glowing warmth"
1"Somewhere ahead, string music, slow"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences68
matches
0"She pulled the chain out"
1"Their voice came as it"
2"She had passed through the"
3"It was uniformly green and"
4"They had extended one arm"
5"She chose not to ask"
6"They moved along a path"
7"It was layered."
8"She hadn't broken stride."
9"They weren't eating it."
10"They were simply holding it,"
11"She looked away."
12"It was enormous — not"
13"She paused at the corner."
14"She glanced back at Nyx"
15"Their violet eyes, faint as"
16"Her stomach tightened."
17"she said, low"
18"She pulled her sleeve down."
ratio0.279
62.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences68
matches
0"The pendant burned."
1"She pulled the chain out"
2"Nyx drifted to her left,"
3"The sky above Dymas wasn't"
4"Their voice came as it"
5"Isolde stood several paces ahead"
6"She had passed through the"
7"Rory muttered, tucking the pendant"
8"Isolde turned her head."
9"Rory didn't argue."
10"The landscape unfolded before them"
11"Vineyards stretched impossibly far to"
12"Trees with bark the colour"
13"The ground underfoot was soft."
14"Something that gave slightly beneath"
15"It was uniformly green and"
16"The kind of perfection that"
17"They had extended one arm"
18"Rory fell into step."
19"She chose not to ask"
ratio0.794
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"To the west, orchards."
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Nyx drifted to her left, their silhouette shifting against a light source that didn't behave like light ought to."
1"The sky above Dymas wasn't black or blue or any colour that belonged to a sky — it was amber, thick and saturated as the inside of a lantern, casting everything…"
2"Something that gave slightly beneath each step, like grass grown over a mattress, springy and yielding."
3"The kind of perfection that suggested maintenance by something that didn't sleep."
4"They had extended one arm to their full height, the shadow-substance of their form thinning slightly at the edges, as though they were testing the air like a fi…"
5"They moved along a path that appeared between the orchards and the vineyards, wide enough for a cart, paved with flat stones the colour of old bone."
6"They were simply holding it, staring at it, their expression beyond hunger and beyond satisfaction, lodged in something that had no name she recognised."
7"This was enormous in a way that felt architectural in nature, as though the building understood its own size and used it deliberately."
8"Figures moved there too, carrying crates, hauling things covered in cloth, none of them looking at each other, all of them moving with the focused, joyless effi…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde said, more to herself than to them"
1"she said, low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.091
80.4861%