Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8V1ZEWE2KB7T0JG05TTV6S

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Duration:
46.7s
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$0.038391
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Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory dragged her thumbnail along the edge of it, feeling the familiar bite of metal, and shoved her shoulder into the door the way Eva had shown her. It gave with a groan, and she stepped inside, shrugging out of her jacket and dropping her bag on the nearest stack of books — which was to say, the floor — and freezing. Ptolemy sat in the centre of the room looking smug in the way that only tabby cats managed, his tail wrapped neatly around his paws. He was staring at the couch. Lucien Moreau was sitting on it. He had his cane propped against the armrest, the ivory handle catching the lamplight, and he was reading one of Eva's scrolls with the casual ease of a man in a library he owned. His platinum hair was slicked back as immaculately as ever. His charcoal suit had not a wrinkle in it. When she came in, he looked up, and she caught the flash of it — one amber eye, one eye like a hole punched in the night — before he composed his expression into something politely neutral. "Carter," he said. "How did you get in here?" Her voice was steadier than she felt. "Eva lent me her key." "Eva is in Edinburgh." "Yes, I know." He rolled the scroll closed with practiced care and set it on the cushion beside him. "She asked me to check on some of her research materials. I wasn't aware you'd be here." "It's her flat, Lucien." "It is." He didn't move. "You could leave." "So could you." Neither of them moved. Ptolemy yawned, an operatic, pink-tongued yawn, and jumped onto the windowsill to ignore both of them with pointed dignity. Rory set her jacket on the hook behind the door — the only free hook, Eva had six of them loaded with scarves and coats and things that appeared to be ritual sashes — and walked to the kitchen because she needed something to do with her hands. The galley kitchen was barely large enough for one person. She filled the kettle at the tap and set it going and stood with her back to the doorway. She heard him get up. The soft sound of the cane on the floorboards. "You don't have to pretend I'm not here," he said, from somewhere just behind her. "I'm making tea." "You're hiding." "I'm making tea," she said again, and she heard the breath of what might have been a laugh, though with Lucien it was always difficult to tell. She pulled two mugs from the cabinet. It was involuntary; she'd done it before she'd thought about it, the bone-deep habit of him, and she stood there looking at the two mugs and felt the back of her neck flush. "You don't have to—" he started. "I've already got it out." She kept her eyes on the counter. "Milk, no sugar." Silence. Then: "You remembered." "It's not a complicated order." When the kettle finished she poured and added milk to his and carried both mugs past him into the main room, settling herself on the floor with her back against the bookshelf because the couch was where he'd been and she wasn't ready for that yet. He came to stand in the doorway of the kitchen watching her, his mug held in one long-fingered hand. "You've been avoiding me," he said. "That implies you've been trying to reach me." "Three messages." "My phone's been complicated." "Your phone," he said, "works perfectly well. I know because you sent Eva a voice note two days ago criticising her filing system." The corner of his mouth moved. "She played it for me." Rory looked down at her mug. The tea was too hot to drink and she drank it anyway, burning the roof of her mouth. "What do you want, Lucien?" He came to sit in the armchair across from her, lowering himself into it with that particular economy of movement he had, and set the cane across his knees. He didn't drink. He looked at her instead, the way he always looked at her — too long, too level, like he was reading something written in small print. "You walked out," he said. "In the middle of a sentence." "You were talking about Cairo." "I was explaining Cairo." "You were justifying it." She looked up. "There's a difference." Something crossed his face that she couldn't name, which was unusual — she was good at faces, good at reading people, it was the thing that had kept her useful and alive in the year since London had cracked open and shown her what lived in its underside. But Lucien had always been the exception to that rule. His face did what he permitted it to do and no more. "I made a choice," he said carefully, "that you didn't like. I don't apologise for the choice. But I—" He stopped. His thumb moved along the ivory handle of the cane in a slow arc. "I should have told you. Before." "Yes," she said. "You should have." "I'm not accustomed to explaining myself." "I know." "And you are not—" He paused again, and she watched him search for the word with something like surprise; Lucien, who spoke four languages, who rarely faltered. "You are not someone I thought would care." "Right." "I mean that as a compliment." "It doesn't land as one." She set her mug down on a stack of Eva's research notes — something about ley line degradation in the Thames basin, she didn't look at it — and pulled her knees up, wrapping her arms around them. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light. She was aware of him noticing it, the way he always noticed small things. "I care," she said, because apparently they were doing this now. "That's the problem. You keep acting like that should be irrelevant, like I should just be—" She gestured with one hand, a loose, helpless motion. "Grateful for the information and indifferent to the source. And I'm not. I'm not indifferent to you." The room went quiet. Ptolemy stalked back in from the windowsill, sniffed Lucien's ankle, and departed again toward the bedroom with the air of someone who had seen enough. Lucien looked down at his hands. Both of them, the one holding the mug and the one resting on the cane, very still in the lamp-warm air. "No," he said. "I know." "Then stop acting like I am." He looked up at that. The amber eye caught the light; the dark one absorbed it. "What do you want me to do with this, Rory?" It was the first time he'd used her name, really used it, and she felt it the same way she always did — a small, embarrassing jolt, like a step she hadn't seen coming. He knew her as Carter. That was the professional courtesy, the arm's length version. Rory was what slipped out when he was less careful. She uncurled herself from the floor and crossed to the couch and sat down. Not beside him. He was in the armchair. But closer, with nothing between them except the low table stacked with Eva's books and a cold cup of someone's abandoned herbal tea. "I want you to stop pretending you're not bothered," she said. "When you are." The corner of his mouth moved again, and this time she saw it for what it was — rueful, genuine, slightly pained. "That would require a significant recalibration of habits built over three decades." "I know. I'm asking anyway." He set his mug down on the table with a soft click and leaned forward, elbows on his knees, bringing himself to her level. This close, she could see the faint asymmetry in his face that his composure usually ironed out — the way his brow pulled slightly, the set of his jaw. He was doing it. The recalibration. She could see the effort of it, which was something she suspected very few people had ever seen. "I don't know how to do this," he said quietly. "Whatever this is." "Neither do I." "That's meant to be reassuring?" "Yes," she said. "Actually." He was quiet for a moment, studying her face. She let him. Outside, Brick Lane went about its evening — voices, a motorbike, the warm-spice smell of the curry house drifting up through the floorboards the way it always did this time of night. "I didn't tell you about Cairo," he said, "because I didn't want to watch you decide that I wasn't worth the trouble." She held his gaze. "And if you had told me?" "You might have." "Or I might not have." He considered that. Lucien Moreau, who operated in certainties and contingencies and carefully managed odds, sat in Eva's cramped armchair and considered the open-ended thing she had just offered him. "Yes," he said at last. "Or you might not have." She reached over and picked up his mug and handed it to him. He took it, their fingers not quite touching, and then just barely touching, and she didn't move her hand away. "Drink your tea," she said. "It's going cold." He didn't drink it. But he didn't look away either, and after a moment, very deliberately, he turned his hand under hers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said again [again]"
1"he said carefully [carefully]"
2"He paused again [again]"
3"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.118
67.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1548
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count3
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count2
5
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"carefully"
2"very"
3"really"
4"slightly"
5"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1548
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"room fell silent"
count1
highlights
0"The room went quiet"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1562
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1198
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Moreau2
Lucien7
Silence1
Rory4
London1
Thames1
Carter1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Carter"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Thames"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like surprise; Lucien, who spoke f"
1"said, because apparently they were doing thi"
2"not quite touching, and then just barely touching, and she didn't move her hand away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1562
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean21.4
std22.1
cv1.033
sampleLengths
05
162
231
36
490
53
613
75
84
936
104
118
123
1323
1477
1514
1615
173
182
1927
2040
216
2215
234
245
2565
266
278
282
294
3034
3129
3258
3311
345
354
3610
3770
3841
396
406
412
4235
431
446
455
4662
4753
4829
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"was slicked"
13.08% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs214
matches
0"was staring"
1"was sitting"
2"was reading"
3"was reading"
4"were doing"
5"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences132
ratio0.098
matches
0"It gave with a groan, and she stepped inside, shrugging out of her jacket and dropping her bag on the nearest stack of books — which was to say, the floor — and freezing."
1"When she came in, he looked up, and she caught the flash of it — one amber eye, one eye like a hole punched in the night — before he composed his expression into something politely neutral."
2"Rory set her jacket on the hook behind the door — the only free hook, Eva had six of them loaded with scarves and coats and things that appeared to be ritual sashes — and walked to the kitchen because she needed something to do with her hands."
3"It was involuntary; she'd done it before she'd thought about it, the bone-deep habit of him, and she stood there looking at the two mugs and felt the back of her neck flush."
4"He looked at her instead, the way he always looked at her — too long, too level, like he was reading something written in small print."
5"Something crossed his face that she couldn't name, which was unusual — she was good at faces, good at reading people, it was the thing that had kept her useful and alive in the year since London had cracked open and shown her what lived in its underside."
6"\"And you are not—\" He paused again, and she watched him search for the word with something like surprise; Lucien, who spoke four languages, who rarely faltered."
7"She set her mug down on a stack of Eva's research notes — something about ley line degradation in the Thames basin, she didn't look at it — and pulled her knees up, wrapping her arms around them."
8"The amber eye caught the light; the dark one absorbed it."
9"It was the first time he'd used her name, really used it, and she felt it the same way she always did — a small, embarrassing jolt, like a step she hadn't seen coming."
10"The corner of his mouth moved again, and this time she saw it for what it was — rueful, genuine, slightly pained."
11"This close, she could see the faint asymmetry in his face that his composure usually ironed out — the way his brow pulled slightly, the set of his jaw."
12"Outside, Brick Lane went about its evening — voices, a motorbike, the warm-spice smell of the curry house drifting up through the floorboards the way it always did this time of night."
92.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1190
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"operatic, pink-tongued yawn,"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.041176470588235294
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.014285714285714285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean11.83
std10.83
cv0.915
sampleLengths
05
128
234
325
46
56
634
710
89
937
103
1113
125
134
1419
1517
164
175
183
193
204
2119
2248
2310
2419
255
269
2715
283
292
3027
317
3233
336
3412
353
361
373
385
3946
4019
416
428
432
444
4529
465
476
4818
495
46.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3106060606060606
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences76
matches
0"It gave with a groan,"
1"He was staring at the"
2"He had his cane propped"
3"His platinum hair was slicked"
4"His charcoal suit had not"
5"Her voice was steadier than"
6"He rolled the scroll closed"
7"He didn't move"
8"She filled the kettle at"
9"She heard him get up."
10"he said, from somewhere just"
11"she said again, and she"
12"She pulled two mugs from"
13"It was involuntary; she'd done"
14"She kept her eyes on"
15"He came to stand in"
16"he said, The corner of"
17"He came to sit in"
18"He didn't drink."
19"He looked at her instead,"
ratio0.605
6.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences76
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory dragged her thumbnail along"
2"It gave with a groan,"
3"Ptolemy sat in the centre"
4"He was staring at the"
5"Lucien Moreau was sitting on"
6"He had his cane propped"
7"His platinum hair was slicked"
8"His charcoal suit had not"
9"Her voice was steadier than"
10"He rolled the scroll closed"
11"He didn't move"
12"Neither of them moved."
13"Ptolemy yawned, an operatic, pink-tongued"
14"Rory set her jacket on"
15"The galley kitchen was barely"
16"She filled the kettle at"
17"She heard him get up."
18"The soft sound of the"
19"he said, from somewhere just"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It gave with a groan, and she stepped inside, shrugging out of her jacket and dropping her bag on the nearest stack of books — which was to say, the floor — and…"
1"Something crossed his face that she couldn't name, which was unusual — she was good at faces, good at reading people, it was the thing that had kept her useful …"
2"Lucien Moreau, who operated in certainties and contingencies and carefully managed odds, sat in Eva's cramped armchair and considered the open-ended thing she h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.6166%