"Not the gentle pulse she'd grown accustomed to — the faint metronome tick of warmth whenever they passed a rift point in London."
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"She'd braced for darkness — for fire and brimstone, for the stench of sulfur, for screaming."
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"She pulled air into her lungs and tasted something on it — ripe fruit and woodsmoke and something sweeter underneath, like honey left too long in the sun."
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"The grapes — if they were grapes — were the deep purple-black of bruises, each one the size of a plum, their skins so taut they looked ready to split."
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"Her pale lavender eyes swept the landscape with an expression Rory couldn't read — not quite fear, not quite recognition."
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"In the mortal world, the Shade could pass for a trick of the light — a shadow that lingered a beat too long, a dark smudge in the corner of a room."
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"Their silhouette had sharpened, the edges of their form crisp and defined, and for the first time Rory could see fine details in the living shadow — the suggestion of cheekbones, the hollow where eyes should be, lit from within by that faint violet glow."
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"\"We are closer to the spaces between here. The air is thinner between planes.\" Their voice carried the same quality it always did — a whisper on wind that shouldn't exist — but it came clearer now, without the effort she sometimes sensed behind it in London."
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"The moonsilver hilt bit cold against her palm — always cold, winter-stream cold, regardless of the ambient warmth pressing against her skin."
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"Each swollen grape radiated warmth she could feel on her face when she leaned close, and inside the taut skin she could see something shifting — a faint luminescence, like a candle flame glimpsed through dark glass."
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"She left no footprints in the dark soil — she never did — but the vines seemed to notice her passage."
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"They were enormous — each trunk as wide as a London taxi, the bark a deep burgundy that spiraled upward in grooves she could have fit her fist into."
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"Some glowed with their own soft light — pale gold, rose pink, a deep arterial red."
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"Ripe mango and vanilla and caramelized sugar and underneath it all, turning slowly like an undercurrent, something savory and rich — roasted meat, maybe, or the smell of a kitchen after someone has spent all day cooking a feast."
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"A single wildflower had bloomed in the dark soil at her feet — small and white and entirely out of place."
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"Low and rhythmic — the clatter of metal on stone, the hiss of something hitting a hot surface."
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"Under her boots, the soil softened to something loamy and warm — and it was warm, she realized, as though the ground itself was heated from below."
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"It was the size of a peach, its skin a deep translucent gold, and through it she could see the flesh within — honeycombed and glistening, pulsing with that faint internal light."
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"Past the last row of trees, the orchard opened onto a clearing, and she saw it — the feasting grounds of Dymas, spread out before her in a spectacle of controlled chaos."
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"Massive stone kitchens stood open to the amber air, fire pits blazing, great iron spits turning slowly over beds of coals that burned in colors she'd never seen — deep blue, vivid green, a pure and sourceless white."
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"This was a flare, sudden and insistent, as though the crimson gemstone had swallowed a coal."
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"She pressed her palm flat against it through her jacket and felt it throbbing beneath the fabric, alive with a heat that bordered on pain before settling into s…"
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"What she got instead was an amber glow so rich and warm it felt like stepping into the last hour of a summer afternoon, the kind that turned the Severn estuary …"
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"Between the vineyards, orchards rose in terraced groves, their branches laden with things that caught the amber light and threw it back in facets."
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"They twisted around trellises made of a pale bone-colored wood that was too smooth, too uniform."
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"The branches spread wide and interlocking overhead, creating a canopy that filtered the amber sky into something more intimate, dappled and warm."
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"A sudden, savage hunger that drove saliva into her mouth and tightened her jaw."
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"The Shade had gone still, their edges fraying slightly, shadow tendrils reaching outward like antennae testing the air."
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"Under her boots, the soil softened to something loamy and warm — and it was warm, she realized, as though the ground itself was heated from below."
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"A banquet without beginning or end, loaded with dishes that steamed and glistened and shifted color as the firelight played across them."