| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 92.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1994 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1994 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "resolve" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "lurch" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "resolved" | | 10 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 158 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 159 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2020 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 2018 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Sheen | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Rory | 7 | | November | 2 | | Connemara | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Gate" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Sheen" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Connemara" | | 6 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared all at once, not gradually the way terrain should reveal itself" | | 1 | "as if reaching toward a sun that wasn't there" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2020 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "saw that the" | | 1 | "deserve that kind" | | 2 | "see that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 38.11 | | std | 33.2 | | cv | 0.871 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 109 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 67 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 80 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 125 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 71 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 85 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 124 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 62 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 49 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 79 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 92 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 65 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 62 | | 45 | 61 | | 46 | 54 | | 47 | 65 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 68 |
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| 98.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was oriented" | | 2 | "being taken" |
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| 96.80% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 323 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was facing" | | 2 | "was creeping" | | 3 | "was saying" | | 4 | "was running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 159 | | ratio | 0.126 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon was fat enough to see by, and she'd memorized the route from the satellite images she'd stitched together on her laptop — past the stand of hornbeams, down through the bracken slope, skirting the edge of the pond where the water caught the sky like a dropped coin." | | 1 | "Pressed her thumbnail into the crescent scar on her left wrist — an old habit, grounding — and listened." | | 2 | "Not silence — silence had texture, a kind of soft static created by the absence of louder things." | | 3 | "Not body-heat warm — the kind of warm that had its own pulse, a slow and deliberate throb like a second heartbeat pressed against her chest." | | 4 | "The bark was black and slick and her fingers came away smelling of something vegetal and wrong — sweet in the way that rot was sweet, the last sugar of a thing breaking down." | | 5 | "She was walking through scrub oak and then she was among them — ancient columns of petrified wood that her research had called oak standing stones, though up close they looked less like oak and more like bone." | | 6 | "More like pressure — a low, subsonic hum that she felt in her jaw and the backs of her eyes." | | 7 | "It was dark, in the way that deep water was dark — a dimensionless non-colour that seemed to pull the light in rather than reflect it." | | 8 | "The bell-shaped blossoms hung at an angle that pointed at her like fingers, and as she watched — frozen, one hand still pressed against the pendant — the primrose beside it rotated on its stem." | | 9 | "Some deep and wordless architecture in her brain — older than language, older than reason — told her not to." | | 10 | "She could see it in her periphery — pale, columnar, its grain patterns shifting in a way that petrified wood should not have been capable of." | | 11 | "She gripped the pendant through her jacket and felt the crimson gemstone — thumbnail-small, impossibly dense — vibrating at a frequency that made her fingers numb." | | 12 | "As if it had taken a step, though she hadn't seen motion, only the result of motion — the same way you might see a clock's minute hand in a new position without ever watching it move." | | 13 | "She ripped her hand away and something clung — fine threads, gossamer-thin, stretching between her palm and the stone's surface before they broke." | | 14 | "And at its center — roughly where a face would be on something shaped like a person — there was a point of stillness so absolute it made the rest of the night seem frantic by comparison." | | 15 | "It rotated to follow her — or rather, its orientation changed without visible movement, the same awful lurch of something being in one state and then another with no transition between." | | 16 | "The cold it radiated was not temperature — it was the memory of warmth being taken away, the afterimage of heat." | | 17 | "An impression, like a death mask pressed into wet clay and then removed — the hollows of eyes, the ridge of a brow, the suggestion of a mouth frozen mid-word." | | 18 | "One step and the pressure collapsed, sound rushed back in — foxes, wind, the distant hiss of traffic on the A307 — and the cold November air hit her sweat-damp skin and she was running, crashing through bracken, not counting steps, not following the memorized path." | | 19 | "The instruction held — old, wordless, absolute." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2003 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "was wet, fibrous, like" |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.023464802795806292 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008986520219670495 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 159 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 159 | | mean | 12.7 | | std | 11.56 | | cv | 0.91 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 54.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.33962264150943394 | | totalSentences | 159 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 24.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "More like pressure — a" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 72.17% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "She waited another five minutes" | | 1 | "It soaked through her trainers" | | 2 | "She kept her own torch" | | 3 | "She counted her steps." | | 4 | "She'd studied this." | | 5 | "She'd read about it, prepared" | | 6 | "She started walking again." | | 7 | "She pushed through." | | 8 | "It was warm." | | 9 | "It had never done that" | | 10 | "She took it, ducking beneath" | | 11 | "She wiped her hand on" | | 12 | "She hadn't seen them from" | | 13 | "She was walking through scrub" | | 14 | "They stood in an uneven" | | 15 | "Their petals were open as" | | 16 | "It didn't become sound exactly." | | 17 | "She flinched, pressed her hand" | | 18 | "She was here to look." | | 19 | "She'd told herself she would" |
| | ratio | 0.37 | |
| 68.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "The last dog walker had" | | 1 | "Rory watched the distant pinprick" | | 2 | "She waited another five minutes" | | 3 | "The grass was wet." | | 4 | "It soaked through her trainers" | | 5 | "She kept her own torch" | | 6 | "The moon was fat enough" | | 7 | "She counted her steps." | | 8 | "Something about the walk felt" | | 9 | "She'd studied this." | | 10 | "The moon sat in the" | | 11 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 12 | "The rustle of deer bedding" | | 13 | "She'd read about it, prepared" | | 14 | "This was a void." | | 15 | "She started walking again." | | 16 | "The bracken appeared all at" | | 17 | "She pushed through." | | 18 | "The pendant shifted against her" | | 19 | "It was warm." |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "As if someone had reached" | | 1 | "Now it was facing her." | | 2 | "Because the act of seeing" | | 3 | "As if it had taken" | | 4 | "Because it was moving." |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 46.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The bark was black and slick and her fingers came away smelling of something vegetal and wrong — sweet in the way that rot was sweet, the last sugar of a thing …" | | 1 | "Pale bone, grey-white under the moon, with whorls and grain patterns that might have been growth rings or might have been something else entirely." | | 2 | "Isolde had described the grove in terms that were half poetry and half cartography, and Rory needed to see whether the description held, whether this place was …" | | 3 | "The bell-shaped blossoms hung at an angle that pointed at her like fingers, and as she watched — frozen, one hand still pressed against the pendant — the primro…" | | 4 | "She could see it in her periphery — pale, columnar, its grain patterns shifting in a way that petrified wood should not have been capable of." | | 5 | "The oaks beyond the standing stones were dense and black and unmoving, and between two of them she saw a gap that was darker than it should have been." | | 6 | "It had become a continuous heat against her chest, a low burn that was creeping toward pain." | | 7 | "She gripped the pendant through her jacket and felt the crimson gemstone — thumbnail-small, impossibly dense — vibrating at a frequency that made her fingers nu…" | | 8 | "The vibration in the gemstone spiked into a frequency that bypassed her ears and landed directly in the center of her skull, a white-hot wire of sensation that …" | | 9 | "She could smell leaf mould and copper and something acrid beneath both of those, something that reminded her of singed hair." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |