Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8V5RRY13PRDT1TN35V7QEP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.040704
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The patrol car's blue lights painted Camden's wet pavement in stuttering pulses. Quinn ducked under the cordon tape, badge already in hand, and followed the officer down the alley beside the shuttered pub until the alley became stairs and the stairs became darkness. "Mind your step, Detective." The constable's torch swept the descent. "Third tread's rotten through." She counted two, skipped the third, and felt the temperature drop with each step down. The city noise above — traffic, a distant siren, some drunk's laughter — sealed itself off as though a lid had been pressed over the world. By the time her feet found the lower platform, the only sound was the tick of cooling floodlights and the low murmur of her colleague already crouched over the body twenty metres ahead. DS Leonard Marsh. Seventeen years on the job, twelve of them in Serious Crimes, and he'd cultivated the particular brand of certainty that made him very good at closing cases and occasionally catastrophic at opening them correctly. "Quinn." He didn't stand up. "Thought you were off the rotation this week." "I was." She pulled on a pair of gloves and surveyed the platform. "Control flagged it for me specifically." The station was dead, not merely disused. The old tiling — cream and deep green — had survived decades of damp better than anyone deserved, though graffiti had colonised the lower half of every visible wall. Except it wasn't graffiti. She registered that discrepancy immediately and filed it away, moving first toward the body. Male, early forties, dressed in a heavy wax coat that had been expensive once. He lay on his back near the far wall, arms loose at his sides, eyes open and fixed on a ceiling crosshatched with old pipework. His face held no expression of alarm or pain, which was the first thing wrong. The second thing wrong was the smell: not decomposition, not blood, but something closer to struck flint and rain on hot stone. "Cause?" Quinn crouched opposite Marsh. "Unofficially? Cardiac event." He tilted his head toward two evidence bags already laid out on the platform. "Likely stress-induced. We found those on him." The first bag held a small quantity of a grayish powder in a glass vial, sealed with wax. The second held the compass. Quinn's eyes settled on it. Brass casing, no larger than a pocket watch, with the particular blue-green oxidation of something old rather than decorative. She leaned closer without touching it. The face was etched with markings — she'd been ready to classify them as engravings, maker's marks, something explicable — but they weren't. They ran in concentric rings around the fixed points, tight and deliberate, and they matched nothing in any convention she'd studied during her compulsory seminar eight years ago on counterfeit luxury goods. "Drug paraphernalia," Marsh said. "Compass might be stolen property, hard to say. Either way, my read is he came down here to make a deal, something went sideways, possibly the powder interacted badly with a pre-existing—" "Where are the other footprints?" Marsh stopped. Quinn stood and walked the platform slowly, tracking the dust patterns under the flood lighting. The victim's approach was clear — a single trail from the stairs, a slight scuff where he'd stopped, then the body. No converging path. No retreat. No evidence that anyone else had stood anywhere near him in recent hours. "The dust pattern's undisturbed everywhere except his approach line." She turned back. "If someone frightened him to death, where did they come from?" "Service tunnel, maybe. We haven't swept the full—" "What about the walls?" She crossed to the nearest section. Up close, what she'd clocked on entry resolved into something far more deliberate than spray paint. The symbols ran in repeating sequences along the lower tiles, some of them carved rather than painted, others applied in a dark substance that had dried shiny. She didn't recognise the language — if it was a language — but she recognised the intention behind it. This wasn't territorial marking. This was demarcation. Boundary work. Someone had drawn borders. "Ritualistic. Gang initiation stuff, probably." Marsh had followed her and stood with his thumbs hooked in his jacket pockets. "Occult imagery's popular with certain crews." "Certain crews don't have consistent iconography across three hundred metres of platform wall." She photographed a section with her phone. "This is systematic. This took time." A sound from the far end of the platform — not a footstep, more like something being set down — made both of them turn. One of the uniformed officers was escorting a woman toward them, the woman's hands wrapped around herself as though she was cold, a battered leather satchel clutched tight against her ribs. Red curls. Round glasses that caught the floodlights and threw them back doubled. A freckled face that had been crying recently and was currently doing its level best to appear composed. Quinn held the photograph out toward her. "You can identify these?" The woman's green eyes moved to the image, then to Quinn's face, then back to the symbols. Her fingers found a loose curl and tucked it behind her left ear. "Where did you—" She stopped herself. Started again. "Who gave you authorisation to photograph those?" "Detective Quinn, Metropolitan Police. And I'm asking the questions." Quinn let a beat pass. "Your name." "Eva Kowalski. I'm a research assistant. The British Museum." Marsh made a small sound — dismissive, or possibly amused. "Come to do a bit of late-night fieldwork, have we, Miss Kowalski?" Eva didn't look at him. Her gaze had dropped to the evidence bags on the platform. The compass, specifically. Whatever colour had remained in her face drained away in the space of two seconds. Quinn watched that happen and noted it precisely. "You've seen it before." "I want to speak to a solicitor." "You're not under arrest." Quinn took a slow step toward her, not crowding, just closing the angle so the woman's peripheral vision couldn't include the stairs. "The man who died here tonight — did you know him?" Eva's jaw tightened. Her hand found the curl again. "His name," Quinn said, and kept her voice level, "and why he was carrying that compass. Those are the only two questions I need answered tonight." Down the far end of the platform, one of the forensic officers called something to Marsh and he moved off to answer it, leaving just the two women and the yellow glare of the floods and the body in its expensive coat and the compass sitting in its evidence bag pointing at nothing, except it wasn't pointing at nothing. Quinn could see the needle now that she was close enough. It pressed against the bag's plastic, straining toward the far wall, toward the largest cluster of symbols, steady and insistent, as though it had somewhere urgent to be.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:09:05.831Z" 2/24/2026, 10:09:05 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.406
leniency0.813
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.063
86.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"resolved"
count1
2
word"systematic"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"resolved"
2"systematic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1144
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount916
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Leonard1
Marsh7
Serious1
Crimes1
Quinn11
Started1
Eva2
persons
0"Camden"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
places
0"Leonard"
1"Marsh"
2"Serious"
globalScore0.9
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
25.17% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.748
wordCount1144
matches
0"not decomposition, not blood, but something closer to struck flint"
1"not blood, but something closer to struck flint"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"registered that discrepancy"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean30.11
std26.82
cv0.891
sampleLengths
043
114
274
337
413
519
654
776
85
924
1023
1185
1236
135
142
1554
1623
178
184
1981
2025
2126
2287
237
244
2530
2615
2716
289
2922
3034
318
324
337
3437
359
3626
3798
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"been pressed"
1"was etched"
62.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was escorting"
1"was currently doing"
2"wasn't pointing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences88
ratio0.08
matches
0"The city noise above — traffic, a distant siren, some drunk's laughter — sealed itself off as though a lid had been pressed over the world."
1"The old tiling — cream and deep green — had survived decades of damp better than anyone deserved, though graffiti had colonised the lower half of every visible wall."
2"The face was etched with markings — she'd been ready to classify them as engravings, maker's marks, something explicable — but they weren't."
3"The victim's approach was clear — a single trail from the stairs, a slight scuff where he'd stopped, then the body."
4"She didn't recognise the language — if it was a language — but she recognised the intention behind it."
5"A sound from the far end of the platform — not a footstep, more like something being set down — made both of them turn."
6"Marsh made a small sound — dismissive, or possibly amused."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount905
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"particular blue-green oxidation"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03867403314917127
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013259668508287293
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean13
std10.24
cv0.788
sampleLengths
012
131
210
34
415
526
633
73
834
95
108
1113
126
137
1429
154
1614
1714
1825
1915
2022
215
2217
237
2418
255
265
2719
286
2923
3032
314
3232
335
342
3515
3621
373
382
3913
4012
4111
428
434
446
4516
4627
4719
484
493
89.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5681818181818182
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences63
matches
0"She counted two, skipped the"
1"He didn't stand up"
2"She pulled on a pair"
3"She registered that discrepancy immediately"
4"He lay on his back"
5"His face held no expression"
6"He tilted his head toward"
7"She leaned closer without touching"
8"They ran in concentric rings"
9"She turned back"
10"She crossed to the nearest"
11"She didn't recognise the language"
12"She photographed a section with"
13"Her fingers found a loose"
14"She stopped herself"
15"Her gaze had dropped to"
16"Her hand found the curl"
17"It pressed against the bag's"
ratio0.286
39.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences63
matches
0"The patrol car's blue lights"
1"Quinn ducked under the cordon"
2"The constable's torch swept the"
3"She counted two, skipped the"
4"The city noise above —"
5"DS Leonard Marsh."
6"He didn't stand up"
7"She pulled on a pair"
8"The station was dead, not"
9"The old tiling — cream"
10"She registered that discrepancy immediately"
11"He lay on his back"
12"His face held no expression"
13"The second thing wrong was"
14"Quinn crouched opposite Marsh"
15"He tilted his head toward"
16"The first bag held a"
17"The second held the compass."
18"Quinn's eyes settled on it."
19"Brass casing, no larger than"
ratio0.841
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"By the time her feet"
ratio0.016
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Seventeen years on the job, twelve of them in Serious Crimes, and he'd cultivated the particular brand of certainty that made him very good at closing cases and…"
1"Male, early forties, dressed in a heavy wax coat that had been expensive once."
2"The symbols ran in repeating sequences along the lower tiles, some of them carved rather than painted, others applied in a dark substance that had dried shiny."
3"One of the uniformed officers was escorting a woman toward them, the woman's hands wrapped around herself as though she was cold, a battered leather satchel clu…"
4"A freckled face that had been crying recently and was currently doing its level best to appear composed."
5"It pressed against the bag's plastic, straining toward the far wall, toward the largest cluster of symbols, steady and insistent, as though it had somewhere urg…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.6848%