Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8V9MBWX10P86MMM2ZA29TQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.076950
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The platform still had its original tiles. That was the first thing Quinn noticed — white ceramic rectangles edging toward cream with age, stamped with the old Underground roundel and a station name that had been scraped away decades ago. Someone had gone at the lettering with a chisel or a flathead screwdriver, leaving gouges in the glaze. The fluorescent strips that her forensics team had rigged along the ceiling threw the damage into sharp relief, every crack and chip casting its own little shadow. Quinn ducked under the cordon tape that DC Avery had strung between two rusted stanchions and stepped onto the platform proper. The air was heavy and mineral, the particular staleness of a place that hadn't drawn a natural breath in half a century. Beneath that, something else — sweet and acrid at once, like burned rosemary. "Victim is over here, ma'am." Avery led her along the platform edge. The old track bed below was dry, which surprised her. She'd expected standing water, the usual London Underground seepage. Instead the gravel between the rails looked almost swept, and someone had laid down wooden pallets at regular intervals all the way into the tunnel mouth. She filed that away. The body was at the far end of the platform, past a row of market stalls. That was the second thing that didn't belong. Not stalls in the conventional sense — no Perspex sneeze guards, no handwritten price tags — but proper structures built from salvaged wood and draped in dark fabric. She counted eleven of them in two uneven rows, creating a narrow aisle. Whatever had been on their shelves was gone. The shelves themselves remained, along with hooks screwed into crossbeams, leather loops meant to display hanging merchandise, and — in one stall near the middle — a glass case that someone had locked and apparently forgotten about, or abandoned in haste. Inside the case, arranged on black velvet, sat a row of small bottles filled with liquid that shifted color when Quinn passed her torch over them. Blue to violet to something that didn't have a name she could reach for. She kept walking. The victim lay face-up beside the last stall, arms at his sides, legs together. He might have been sleeping except for the expression frozen on his face — not pain, exactly, but bewilderment. Mid-fifties, heavyset, wearing a waxed canvas jacket and work boots. No visible wounds. No blood. The forensic pathologist, Dr. Sato, was crouched beside the body with her bag open, and she looked up when Quinn's shadow fell across the dead man's chest. "Preliminary?" "No obvious cause of death," Sato said. "No trauma, no ligature marks, no sign of asphyxiation. Petechial hemorrhaging in both eyes, but nothing to explain what caused it. Liver temp puts time of death between midnight and two a.m." "Who found him?" "Anonymous tip," Avery said from behind her. "Called into the Camden nick at half four this morning. Caller gave the location of the access tunnel." Quinn turned that over. An abandoned Tube station, clearly in use for purposes she hadn't yet identified, and someone had rung the police and drawn them straight to it. Either the caller wanted the body found or they wanted the market found, and those were very different motivations. She crouched beside the body and studied the man's hands. Workman's hands, thick-fingered, callused. Under the nails of his right hand, a greenish residue. Not biological — too uniform, too metallic. She leaned closer. Verdigris. The particular blue-green patina of oxidized brass. "Bag his hands separately," she told Sato. "I want that residue analyzed." She stood and surveyed the area immediately around the body. The platform floor was dusty — decades of accumulated grime — and the forensic team had already flagged a confusion of footprints with yellow markers. Dozens of prints, overlapping, different sizes and treads. This place had seen heavy traffic, and recently. But within a two-foot radius of the body, the dust was undisturbed except for the dead man's own outline. No drag marks. No scuff of a struggle. It was as though everyone who'd walked this platform had given this particular spot a wide berth, or as though the man had materialized exactly where he lay. "Detective Quinn?" The voice came from behind the cordon line. Quinn straightened and turned. A young woman stood at the edge of the platform, leather satchel strap cutting a diagonal across her chest, her curly red hair bright as a struck match under the forensic lighting. Round glasses. Freckled face. She had her left hand raised in an uncertain half-wave, and even as Quinn watched, she reached up and tucked a loose curl behind her left ear. "Eva Kowalski," Avery said, appearing at Quinn's elbow. "The consultant DCI Fraser authorized. British Museum, restricted archives." Quinn's jaw tightened. Fraser had mentioned bringing in outside expertise on what he'd called the "unusual elements" of recent cases, and she'd told him exactly what she thought of that idea. Apparently he'd gone ahead anyway. "Ms. Kowalski." Quinn walked back along the platform, stopping a full arm's length from the cordon. "You have credentials?" "I do." Eva fumbled with her satchel — the thing was stuffed to bursting with books, their spines cracked and pages flagged with colored tape — and produced a laminated ID badge. Quinn took it, examined it with more care than was strictly necessary, and handed it back. The authorization was Fraser's signature, clear enough. "Don't touch anything. Stay beside me. If I tell you to stop, you stop." Eva nodded quickly and ducked under the tape. She was small — Quinn had six inches on her easily — and she moved with the particular caution of someone accustomed to navigating rooms full of irreplaceable objects. Her eyes, green behind those round lenses, were already working over the stalls, and Quinn watched her watching. "You know what this place is," Quinn said. It wasn't a question. Eva's hesitation lasted two seconds too long. "I've read about locations like this. In the archives, there are references to — markets. Unlicensed, unregistered. They move on a lunar cycle. Every full moon, new location." She tucked a curl behind her ear again. "They call them veil markets." "And the merchandise?" "Things you can't buy anywhere else. Or shouldn't be able to." Eva stopped beside the glass case Quinn had noticed earlier. She leaned close but kept her hands laced together behind her back. "These bottles — do you see how the liquid changes? That's not a trick of the light. That's alchemical. Banned substances, most likely. There's a whole taxonomy of —" "I need facts, Ms. Kowalski. Not taxonomy." Eva straightened, chastened but not cowed. There was a steadiness beneath the nervous habits that Quinn recognized — the stubbornness of the deeply academic, the refusal to be hurried past a point that mattered. "The fact," Eva said carefully, "is that this market shouldn't exist. The fact is that someone set up eleven stalls in an abandoned Tube station and sold materials drawn from a tradition that most people would call fictional. And the fact is that your victim is lying there with no cause of death and no sign of a struggle, and I think I might know why." Quinn held her gaze for a long moment, then gestured for her to continue. Eva moved toward the body, skirting the footprint markers. She stopped at the edge of the undisturbed dust — that strange, clean circle — and pushed her glasses up her nose. "The floor," she said. "Around him. You see it?" "Clean zone. No other footprints within two feet. Already noted." "It's not just clean. Look at the dust at the boundary." Eva pointed without touching. "See how the particles are oriented? They're not just undisturbed — they're pushed outward. Radiating from the body. Something displaced the air around him. An outward force, concentric. Like a shockwave, but on a very small scale." Quinn crouched again. She hadn't seen it before, but now that Eva had pointed it out, the pattern was there — the fine grey dust at the edge of the clean zone wasn't simply settled. It was heaped, minutely, like sand swept to the edges of a circle. "An explosion would leave residue," Quinn said. "Accelerant. Chemical signature." "Not that kind of force." Quinn looked up. "Then what kind?" Eva pulled open her satchel and retrieved a book — not one of the modern ones, but a slim volume bound in cloth that had gone dark with handling. She opened it to a page marked with green tape and held it out. The text was in Latin, but the illustration needed no translation: a human figure lying supine, surrounded by concentric rings of displaced matter, with lines radiating outward from the chest like diagrammatic lightning. "The historical sources call it a rift discharge," Eva said, her voice dropping. "It's what happens when a portal — a doorway between layers of reality — opens inside a person instead of beside them. The energy has to go somewhere. It radiates outward. The person at the center..." She trailed off. Quinn stood slowly. "You're telling me this man was killed by a portal opening inside his body." "I'm telling you that's what the evidence pattern matches. I'm telling you that the petechial hemorrhaging in his eyes is consistent with a massive, instantaneous internal pressure event. And I'm telling you that the residue under his fingernails — that green oxidation — I think I know what left it." Quinn waited. "There's an object. A compass. Brass casing, etched with protective sigils, needle that points toward supernatural rifts. They're made here, in markets like this one. The casing develops a specific verdigris over time — it's distinctive because the brass is alloyed with something that doesn't appear on the periodic table. If your victim was holding one of those compasses when the rift opened —" "Then he knew what was coming," Quinn said. "He was tracking it. Or trying to track it." "Or trying to get away from it." They stood in silence. The forensic lights hummed. Somewhere deep in the tunnel, water dripped — a sound that shouldn't have carried but did, the acoustics of the empty station bending the noise toward them like a whispered confidence. Quinn looked at the body again. The bewilderment on his face. Not the expression of a man attacked. The expression of a man who'd realized, in the last half-second of his life, that the thing he'd been looking for had found him first. She turned to Avery. "I want a full inventory of every stall on this platform. Photograph everything. Get specialists for those bottles — full hazmat protocol until we know what we're dealing with." She paused, then looked at Eva Kowalski, who was already tucking hair behind her ear again, her green eyes bright with the particular anxiety of someone who has just said too much and knows it. "And Ms. Kowalski stays. We're not done." Quinn pulled back her sleeve and checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Six-fourteen a.m. Three years ago, almost to the week, she'd stood over another body that didn't make sense — DS Morris, her partner, lying in a Docklands warehouse with the same bewildered expression and no cause of death the pathologist could name. She'd written the case into a box and the box into a shelf in the back of her mind, where it sat and gathered its own kind of dust. She looked at the concentric rings on the floor. The displaced dust. The pattern she'd missed then because she hadn't known to look. She knew now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
63.64% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Quinn walked back [back]"
1"Eva said carefully [carefully]"
2"She paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.136
87.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1924
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"quickly"
2"carefully"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1924
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"analyzed"
count1
2
word"navigating"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"analyzed"
2"navigating"
3"etched"
4"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1954
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1380
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn25
Underground2
Avery5
London1
Perspex1
Dr1
Tube1
Sato3
Eva12
Fraser2
Latin1
Kowalski1
Morris1
Docklands1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Avery"
2"Dr"
3"Sato"
4"Eva"
5"Fraser"
6"Kowalski"
7"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Latin"
2"Docklands"
globalScore0.594
windowScore0.333
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"had locked and apparently forgotten about, or"
1"It was as though everyone who'd walked this platform had given this particular spot a wide berth, or as though the man had materialized exactly where he lay"
97.65% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.024
wordCount1954
matches
0"not pain, exactly, but bewilderment"
1"not one of the modern ones, but a slim volume bound in cloth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean36.87
std31.7
cv0.86
sampleLengths
085
156
25
356
4154
53
675
71
839
93
1025
1148
1242
1312
14106
152
1675
1717
1836
1919
2055
2114
2255
2312
2448
253
2662
277
2834
2966
3014
3131
329
3310
3452
3548
3610
375
386
3976
4052
4117
4250
432
4464
4517
467
4739
4843
4975
89.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences110
matches
0"been scraped"
1"was gone"
2"was crouched"
3"was stuffed"
4"was heaped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs234
matches
0"were already working"
1"was already tucking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences136
ratio0.11
matches
0"That was the first thing Quinn noticed — white ceramic rectangles edging toward cream with age, stamped with the old Underground roundel and a station name that had been scraped away decades ago."
1"Beneath that, something else — sweet and acrid at once, like burned rosemary."
2"Not stalls in the conventional sense — no Perspex sneeze guards, no handwritten price tags — but proper structures built from salvaged wood and draped in dark fabric."
3"The shelves themselves remained, along with hooks screwed into crossbeams, leather loops meant to display hanging merchandise, and — in one stall near the middle — a glass case that someone had locked and apparently forgotten about, or abandoned in haste."
4"He might have been sleeping except for the expression frozen on his face — not pain, exactly, but bewilderment."
5"Not biological — too uniform, too metallic."
6"The platform floor was dusty — decades of accumulated grime — and the forensic team had already flagged a confusion of footprints with yellow markers."
7"\"I do.\" Eva fumbled with her satchel — the thing was stuffed to bursting with books, their spines cracked and pages flagged with colored tape — and produced a laminated ID badge."
8"She was small — Quinn had six inches on her easily — and she moved with the particular caution of someone accustomed to navigating rooms full of irreplaceable objects."
9"There was a steadiness beneath the nervous habits that Quinn recognized — the stubbornness of the deeply academic, the refusal to be hurried past a point that mattered."
10"She stopped at the edge of the undisturbed dust — that strange, clean circle — and pushed her glasses up her nose."
11"She hadn't seen it before, but now that Eva had pointed it out, the pattern was there — the fine grey dust at the edge of the clean zone wasn't simply settled."
12"Eva pulled open her satchel and retrieved a book — not one of the modern ones, but a slim volume bound in cloth that had gone dark with handling."
13"Somewhere deep in the tunnel, water dripped — a sound that shouldn't have carried but did, the acoustics of the empty station bending the noise toward them like a whispered confidence."
14"Three years ago, almost to the week, she'd stood over another body that didn't make sense — DS Morris, her partner, lying in a Docklands warehouse with the same bewildered expression and no cause of death the pathologist could name."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1426
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"particular blue-green patina"
1"massive, instantaneous internal pressure"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.030855539971949508
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008415147265077139
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean14.37
std13.14
cv0.915
sampleLengths
07
133
218
327
421
522
613
75
87
910
109
1126
124
1316
148
1528
1613
178
1841
1926
2014
213
2214
2319
2410
253
262
274
2823
291
307
3132
323
337
3418
354
3625
3719
3810
394
4010
417
423
431
447
457
465
4710
4825
498
65.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.41911764705882354
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"Instead the gravel between the"
1"Apparently he'd gone ahead anyway."
2"Somewhere deep in the tunnel,"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences99
matches
0"She'd expected standing water, the"
1"She filed that away."
2"She counted eleven of them"
3"She kept walking."
4"He might have been sleeping"
5"She crouched beside the body"
6"She leaned closer."
7"she told Sato"
8"She stood and surveyed the"
9"It was as though everyone"
10"She had her left hand"
11"She was small — Quinn"
12"Her eyes, green behind those"
13"It wasn't a question."
14"She tucked a curl behind"
15"She leaned close but kept"
16"She stopped at the edge"
17"She hadn't seen it before,"
18"It was heaped, minutely, like"
19"She opened it to a"
ratio0.273
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences99
matches
0"The platform still had its"
1"That was the first thing"
2"Someone had gone at the"
3"The fluorescent strips that her"
4"Quinn ducked under the cordon"
5"The air was heavy and"
6"Avery led her along the"
7"The old track bed below"
8"She'd expected standing water, the"
9"She filed that away."
10"The body was at the"
11"That was the second thing"
12"She counted eleven of them"
13"Whatever had been on their"
14"The shelves themselves remained, along"
15"She kept walking."
16"The victim lay face-up beside"
17"He might have been sleeping"
18"The forensic pathologist, Dr."
19"Sato, was crouched beside the"
ratio0.818
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Either the caller wanted the"
ratio0.01
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"That was the first thing Quinn noticed — white ceramic rectangles edging toward cream with age, stamped with the old Underground roundel and a station name that…"
1"The air was heavy and mineral, the particular staleness of a place that hadn't drawn a natural breath in half a century."
2"It was as though everyone who'd walked this platform had given this particular spot a wide berth, or as though the man had materialized exactly where he lay."
3"There was a steadiness beneath the nervous habits that Quinn recognized — the stubbornness of the deeply academic, the refusal to be hurried past a point that m…"
4"Somewhere deep in the tunnel, water dripped — a sound that shouldn't have carried but did, the acoustics of the empty station bending the noise toward them like…"
5"The expression of a man who'd realized, in the last half-second of his life, that the thing he'd been looking for had found him first."
6"Three years ago, almost to the week, she'd stood over another body that didn't make sense — DS Morris, her partner, lying in a Docklands warehouse with the same…"
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva said, her voice dropping"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Fraser had (have)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.045
84.1253%