"His mouth held that particular shape it always held — not quite a smile, not quite anything — as though amusement and something sadder lived in the same expression and had learned to share the space."
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"He didn't brace against it, didn't put his hand out — he simply stood there, and the door stopped an inch from the frame as if the air between him and it had thickened to glass."
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"He had that particular talent — patience like a held breath, never quite natural, always deliberate."
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"Not metaphorically — actually gone, as though the city had swallowed him, no word, no message, nothing but a sealed envelope left with Silas containing a name she'd needed for a job and absolutely zero explanation for the rest of it."
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"For the way he'd said her name — her real name, Aurora, the one nobody used — like it meant something in a language she didn't speak."
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"Eva's flat received him the way it received everything — grudgingly, and with barely enough room to breathe."
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"In the flat's warmer light — the single floor lamp Eva hadn't buried under monographs — his features lost some of their sharp elegance and gained something more human."
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"She moved toward the kitchen, not because she wanted tea but because she needed to put distance between them before the proximity did what it always did — before the specific wavelength of his presence started interfering with her ability to think."
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"He was standing in the middle of Eva's cluttered living room, a man in a bespoke suit surrounded by secondhand paperbacks and cat hair, and he looked — for the first time since she'd known him — as if the composure he wore like armor had developed a crack he couldn't smooth over."
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"Inside, something was rearranging itself — anger shifting to make room for a different emotion she wasn't ready to name."
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"Lucien's grip on the cane tightened, and for a heartbeat the shadows in the corners of the flat seemed to deepen, to lean inward — a flicker of something not quite human in the air around him, quickly suppressed."
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"Not this — this raw, simple concession."
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"Her name — the short version, the nickname, the one her friends used — sounded different in his accent."
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"The crescent scar on her wrist throbbed the way it did when she was feeling too much — an old signal, a body remembering what the mind tried to forget."
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"The flat settled around them — the distant bass of Brick Lane on a weeknight, Ptolemy's purring, the hiss of the pilot light on the stove."
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"The truth was that she'd spent those three months not just angry but afraid — afraid that he was dead in some demon-realm gutter, afraid that the one person in the supernatural world who'd looked at her like she belonged in it had been scraped out of existence."
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"She stopped two feet from him, close enough to see the thin scar along his collar that his shirt didn't quite hide — that was new — and the faint violet shadows under his eyes that his composure couldn't mask."
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"Her fingers rested against the charcoal fabric, and she felt his breathing change underneath it — a small catch, like something coming undone."
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"She felt the calluses on his palm — the sword-cane grip she'd never thought about before."
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"But she didn't pull her hand away, and he didn't release it, and in the cluttered warmth of Eva's flat on Brick Lane — surrounded by books and wards and the quiet judgment of a tabby cat named Ptolemy — something that had been broken three months ago began the slow, cautious work of mending."
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"What she got was Lucien Moreau, standing on Eva's landing in a charcoal suit that had no business looking that sharp at eleven o'clock on a Tuesday night, his i…"
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"His mouth held that particular shape it always held — not quite a smile, not quite anything — as though amusement and something sadder lived in the same express…"
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"He didn't brace against it, didn't put his hand out — he simply stood there, and the door stopped an inch from the frame as if the air between him and it had th…"
3
"Not metaphorically — actually gone, as though the city had swallowed him, no word, no message, nothing but a sealed envelope left with Silas containing a name s…"
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"He was standing in the middle of Eva's cluttered living room, a man in a bespoke suit surrounded by secondhand paperbacks and cat hair, and he looked — for the …"
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"She'd had enough of men who made choices for her."
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"The truth was that she'd spent those three months not just angry but afraid — afraid that he was dead in some demon-realm gutter, afraid that the one person in …"
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"Ptolemy had stopped purring, watching from the windowsill with the alert stillness of a cat who sensed weather changing."
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"But she didn't pull her hand away, and he didn't release it, and in the cluttered warmth of Eva's flat on Brick Lane — surrounded by books and wards and the qui…"
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"He released her hand, shrugged off his jacket, and reached for the kettle with the careful precision of a man who understood that this small domestic act was, i…"