Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VG5PDQX5RJBC0060HVNWY

Run Details

Duration:
53.1s
Cost:
$0.035949
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The uniforms had strung blue-and-white tape across the mouth of the service tunnel before Quinn even reached the bottom of the access stairs, which told her two things: the junior officers had got there first, and someone had already decided what they were looking at. She ducked under the tape. The abandoned station swallowed sound the way old churches did — not silence exactly, but a thickness in the air that made every footstep feel deliberate. Quinn swept her torch across the platform and let the beam settle. The tiles were the original Victorian ceramic, cream with a terracotta border, though decades of damp had turned most of them the colour of old teeth. Graffiti ran in layers along the far wall like geological strata, the newest tags luminous orange and purple over the faded ghosts of older ones. Three portable halogen lamps had been set up along the platform edge, and in their flat white light the scene looked surgical. DS Fielding stood beside the body with his arms crossed and the specific expression of a man who had already written his report in his head. "Quinn." He lifted his chin by way of greeting. "Bit late to the party." "I was in Deptford." She crouched beside the body without looking at Fielding. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a waxed canvas jacket and heavy work boots. No wallet, no phone, no keys. His face was turned toward the tracks, one cheek pressed against the platform stone, and whatever expression he'd worn at the end had gone slack. "Who found him?" "Maintenance crew doing a scheduled inspection of the tunnels. They called it in at half-six this morning." Fielding unfolded his arms and dug his hands into his coat pockets. "We're thinking it's a handover gone wrong. There's been chatter about the Camden network being used for distribution — we had intelligence on it last quarter." Quinn said nothing to that. She leaned closer to the body, tilting her torch. There were no visible wounds on the visible surfaces of the jacket, no tears in the fabric, no blood pooling beneath him or staining the platform stones. The forensics team had already photographed the scene, and she could see the numbered yellow markers scattered across the platform — eight of them. Most clustered near the body. Two sat further along the platform, at the base of the far wall. She straightened and walked toward the far markers. "Cause of death?" she called back. "Waiting on the pathologist. But the position, the location — it reads like a confrontation. He ran, he fell." Quinn looked at the markers. One flagged a scattering of what looked like fine grey powder across the tiles. The other flagged a small object near the wall, bagged already in clear evidence plastic. She picked it up, held it under her torch. A compass. Brass, palm-sized, with a casing the colour of an old copper pipe — green-brown, eaten through with verdigris in the decorative grooves. She turned it over. The face was visible through the bag. The markings around the dial were not compass headings. She brought it closer. Symbols, fine and deliberate, etched into the brass around the edge of the face — not a manufacturer's mark, not a serial number. Something older-looking. The needle sat still beneath the glass. "Where's the closest CCTV?" she asked. "Surface level on Buck Street. Nothing down here obviously." She set the bagged compass down precisely where she'd found it and walked back to the body. Crouched again. This time she looked at the hands. His fingers were curled toward his palm, which was natural for a body that had cooled. But the fingernails on his right hand were broken back — not torn, broken, the way nails broke when someone braced themselves against a hard surface with force and desperation. The platform stones around his right hand were scored in short, parallel lines. She counted them. Four. Spaced like fingers. "He wasn't running when he fell," she said. Fielding uncrossed and re-crossed his arms. "He could've tripped on the tracks—" "He's thirty feet from the tracks. And he's facing them." She stood and turned a slow circle, looking at the platform geometry. The access stairs at the north end. The sealed tunnel mouth to the south, boarded with plywood that had been screwed into the original iron frame. One of the boards was fractionally misaligned — the screws on the left side flush, but the right side bowed slightly outward, a gap of perhaps a centimetre between the board edge and the frame. She walked toward it. "Who checked the tunnel?" "Sealed. We confirmed it before you arrived." She put two fingers into the gap and pulled. The board moved on the right side with almost no resistance. The screws on that side were cosmetic — they sat in the holes but had nothing to bite into. Old holes, larger than the screw shanks. Someone had set it to look sealed. Behind the board, the tunnel mouth breathed cold air, and in the swept concrete just inside the threshold, she saw footprints in the grey dust. Dozens of them. Coming and going, layered over each other, but distinct enough that she could see the variety — different soles, different sizes. Whatever this station had been used for, it had not been a handover between two people. She let the board rest back into place and turned around. A commotion at the top of the access stairs, then the sound of someone being talked down firmly by a uniform. A voice — female, carrying — insisting something about the archives and having clearance. Then a second uniform's voice, less patient. Quinn climbed the stairs. The woman at the top was short, red-haired, wearing a canvas satchel so overfilled that the flap sat at an angle. Round glasses. A freckled face that was currently arranged in the expression of someone fighting between urgency and composure and losing on both fronts. She was tucking a curl behind her left ear with the repetitive energy of a nervous tic, then stopping herself, then doing it again. "You can't be down here," said the uniform. "I know what this station is," the woman said. Not to the uniform. To Quinn. She'd fixed on Quinn the moment Quinn appeared at the top of the stairs, with the particular focus of someone who had rehearsed an argument and needed the right person to deliver it to. "You won't find what you're looking for in the pathology report." Quinn studied her. The museum lanyard tucked half-inside the open collar of her coat. The ink stain on her right index finger. The books visible through the gap in the satchel — spines she couldn't read at this distance, but the bindings were old. "And what is it I'm looking for?" Quinn asked. The woman's jaw set. "Something your evidence markers aren't going to cover." Quinn looked at the uniform, then back at the woman. Behind the round glasses, her green eyes carried the particular weight of someone who had spent a long time knowing a thing that no one around them believed. "Let her through," Quinn said.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:14:46.74Z" 2/24/2026, 10:14:46 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"firmly"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"etched"
2"firmly"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1199
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1035
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn12
Victorian1
Fielding4
Male1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Fielding"
places(empty)
globalScore0.92
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like fine grey powder across the t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.834
wordCount1199
matches
0"not silence exactly, but a thickness in the air"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"overfilled that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean34.26
std28.79
cv0.841
sampleLengths
045
15
2111
326
414
559
655
714
869
98
106
1119
1243
1380
146
159
1626
1766
188
1912
2091
217
2253
2365
2411
2542
264
2769
288
2960
3044
319
3212
3338
345
80.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences84
matches
0"were curled"
1"were broken"
2"were scored"
3"been screwed"
4"been used"
5"being talked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"were looking"
1"was tucking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences94
ratio0.106
matches
0"The abandoned station swallowed sound the way old churches did — not silence exactly, but a thickness in the air that made every footstep feel deliberate."
1"The forensics team had already photographed the scene, and she could see the numbered yellow markers scattered across the platform — eight of them."
2"Brass, palm-sized, with a casing the colour of an old copper pipe — green-brown, eaten through with verdigris in the decorative grooves."
3"Symbols, fine and deliberate, etched into the brass around the edge of the face — not a manufacturer's mark, not a serial number."
4"But the fingernails on his right hand were broken back — not torn, broken, the way nails broke when someone braced themselves against a hard surface with force and desperation."
5"One of the boards was fractionally misaligned — the screws on the left side flush, but the right side bowed slightly outward, a gap of perhaps a centimetre between the board edge and the frame."
6"The screws on that side were cosmetic — they sat in the holes but had nothing to bite into."
7"Coming and going, layered over each other, but distinct enough that she could see the variety — different soles, different sizes."
8"A voice — female, carrying — insisting something about the archives and having clearance."
9"The books visible through the gap in the satchel — spines she couldn't read at this distance, but the bindings were old."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1032
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.031007751937984496
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005813953488372093
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.76
std9.29
cv0.729
sampleLengths
045
15
226
312
426
525
622
726
89
95
1013
1112
126
1325
143
1529
1626
175
189
1927
2024
215
2213
238
246
2519
265
2714
2815
299
302
3122
324
337
349
354
3623
372
387
396
409
4117
422
437
4416
4530
4613
473
481
493
75.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners47
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then a second uniform's voice,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences74
matches
0"She ducked under the tape."
1"He lifted his chin by"
2"She crouched beside the body"
3"His face was turned toward"
4"She leaned closer to the"
5"She straightened and walked toward"
6"she called back"
7"She picked it up, held"
8"She turned it over."
9"She brought it closer."
10"She set the bagged compass"
11"His fingers were curled toward"
12"She counted them."
13"She stood and turned a"
14"She walked toward it."
15"She put two fingers into"
16"She let the board rest"
17"She was tucking a curl"
18"She'd fixed on Quinn the"
ratio0.257
88.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences74
matches
0"The uniforms had strung blue-and-white"
1"She ducked under the tape."
2"The abandoned station swallowed sound"
3"Quinn swept her torch across"
4"The tiles were the original"
5"Graffiti ran in layers along"
6"DS Fielding stood beside the"
7"He lifted his chin by"
8"She crouched beside the body"
9"His face was turned toward"
10"Quinn said nothing to that."
11"She leaned closer to the"
12"The forensics team had already"
13"She straightened and walked toward"
14"she called back"
15"Quinn looked at the markers."
16"The other flagged a small"
17"She picked it up, held"
18"Brass, palm-sized, with a casing"
19"She turned it over."
ratio0.743
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The uniforms had strung blue-and-white tape across the mouth of the service tunnel before Quinn even reached the bottom of the access stairs, which told her two…"
1"The abandoned station swallowed sound the way old churches did — not silence exactly, but a thickness in the air that made every footstep feel deliberate."
2"DS Fielding stood beside the body with his arms crossed and the specific expression of a man who had already written his report in his head."
3"A freckled face that was currently arranged in the expression of someone fighting between urgency and composure and losing on both fronts."
4"She'd fixed on Quinn the moment Quinn appeared at the top of the stairs, with the particular focus of someone who had rehearsed an argument and needed the right…"
5"Behind the round glasses, her green eyes carried the particular weight of someone who had spent a long time knowing a thing that no one around them believed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.8097%