Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VG69EWD40PZ795BA9NAA6

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Duration:
58.0s
Cost:
$0.061625
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came sideways off Shaftesbury Avenue, needling Quinn's face as she cut through the theatre crowd at a dead sprint. Ahead of her, maybe forty yards, Tomás Herrera dodged a black cab and vaulted the railing of the central median, his dark jacket flaring behind him like a wing. He was fast. Faster than she'd expected from someone who spent his nights stitching people up in back rooms. Quinn's boots hammered the wet pavement. She keyed her radio without slowing. "Suspect heading north on Charing Cross Road. IC1 male, five-ten, dark curly hair, olive jacket. Moving toward Cambridge Circus." Static hissed back. The rain was doing something to the signal, or maybe it was the neighborhood. Soho had dead spots that didn't show up on any coverage map. She'd been watching him for eleven days. Eleven days of cold coffee in unmarked cars, of cross-referencing CCTV footage until her eyes burned, of sifting through the debris of a life that didn't quite add up. Tomás Herrera, twenty-nine, born in Seville, former NHS paramedic. License revoked fourteen months ago for administering unauthorized treatments—the details of which had been sealed with a thoroughness that made her teeth itch. He'd surfaced on her radar because his name kept appearing in the margins of cases she couldn't close. Not as a suspect, never directly. As a ghost. A name whispered by informants who then stopped returning her calls. Tonight she'd spotted him leaving the Raven's Nest, that dingy Soho bar with its sickly green neon sign, and something about the way he'd clocked her—one sharp glance, immediate recognition, the kind of look that said he knew exactly who she was—had triggered the chase before she'd consciously decided to pursue. He cut left onto a side street. Quinn followed, nearly losing her footing on the slick cobblestones. The lane was narrow, barely wide enough for a delivery van, hemmed in by the windowless backs of buildings. Her hand went to the Glock at her hip, a reflex she didn't act on. He hadn't shown a weapon. But she'd read the file on that scar along his left forearm—knife attack, the details murky—and anyone who ran that hard from a police detective had reasons they didn't want examined. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" The words ripped from her throat and scattered uselessly against the brick walls. Herrera didn't even flinch. He hit the end of the lane and turned right, and for a sickening moment she lost sight of him entirely. Quinn rounded the corner and found herself on Camden High Street, the storefronts dark, the market stalls shuttered under their tarpaulins. The rain had cleared the pavements of all but the most determined pedestrians. She scanned the street, breathing hard, the taste of diesel and wet stone in her mouth. There—a flash of movement near the old Underground entrance, the one that had been closed since the early nineties. The hoarding around it was rusted and graffitied, but a section of fence had been pulled back, and as she watched, Herrera slipped through the gap like water through a crack in a dam. She pulled up short at the fence. Rain slid down her face and pooled in the hollow of her collarbone. Through the gap she could see concrete steps descending into blackness, and from somewhere far below, a faint amber glow that had no business being there. Quinn checked her radio again. Dead air. She thumbed her phone—no signal, not even a single bar. The worn leather of her watch strap was soaked through, and when she glanced at the face, the second hand had stopped. She knew this feeling. This exact hollow sensation beneath her sternum, like standing at the edge of something that dropped away further than you could see. She'd felt it three years ago, the night Morris died. DS Richard Morris, her partner for six years, who'd followed a suspect into a Docklands warehouse and come out in a body bag with injuries the pathologist had described as "inconsistent with any known mechanism." The case had been sealed. The counselor they'd assigned her had used the phrase "traumatic ambiguity" with a soothing, practiced cadence that made Quinn want to put her fist through the wall. She'd spent three years trying to unseal that case. Three years of pulling threads that led nowhere, or worse, that led to locked doors and polite refusals and the quiet suggestion from her DCI that maybe it was time to let it go. She hadn't let it go. She'd let nearly everything else go instead—the flat in Putney, the Sunday dinners with her sister's family, the possibility of sleep that didn't involve two fingers of whiskey first—but not the case. Never the case. And now here she was, standing in the rain outside an abandoned Tube station, watching the darkness swallow a man whose file intersected with Morris's case in ways she couldn't yet prove but could feel in her gut like a bruise. She pulled the fence back further. The metal was cold and bit into her fingers. The steps were cracked, weeds pushing through the concrete, but the wear patterns told a different story—smooth channels where feet had passed, recently, in numbers. This wasn't an abandoned entrance. It was a door that wanted to look abandoned. Quinn drew her weapon. The Glock felt solid in her hand, an honest weight. She started down. The stairwell smelled of damp earth and something else, something sweet and faintly chemical that she couldn't place. The amber glow strengthened as she descended, resolving into the flicker of what looked like lantern light. The walls were tiled in the old Underground style, cream and burgundy, but someone had scratched symbols into the glaze—patterns that repeated and interlocked in ways that made her eyes slide off them if she looked too long. At the bottom of the stairs, a corridor stretched ahead. The floor was dry down here, the rain a distant memory. She could hear sounds now: the murmur of voices, the clink of glass or metal, a low thrumming that might have been music or might have been something else entirely. A figure materialized from a doorway to her left. A woman, heavyset, with tattooed hands and eyes that reflected the lantern light with a flat, animal quality. She held out her palm without speaking. Quinn stared at her. "Metropolitan Police. I'm in pursuit of a—" "Token," the woman said. Her voice was like gravel shifting. "No bone, no entry." "I don't know what that means. I'm a police officer and I'm pursuing a suspect into these premises. Stand aside." The woman didn't move. Her expression didn't change. She simply stood there with her palm extended, immovable as geography, and Quinn understood with a cold certainty that her warrant card and her Glock and her eighteen years of decorated service meant exactly nothing down here. A bone token. She filed it away, the way she'd filed away a hundred impossible details over the past three years, fragments that didn't fit any framework she'd been trained to work within. She tried to push past. The woman's hand closed on her shoulder, and the grip was wrong—too strong, the fingers too rigid, as if the bones beneath the skin were made of something denser than calcium. Quinn twisted free and stepped back, her weapon raised, and for a long moment the two of them stood in the flickering corridor and regarded each other. "He came through here," Quinn said. "Dark hair, olive skin, scar on his left arm. You saw him." The woman's lips didn't move, but the faintest shift in her gaze—a quick, involuntary flick toward the corridor beyond—told Quinn everything. "I'll be back," Quinn said. She holstered the Glock. "And when I come back, I'll have whatever I need to get through that door." She turned and climbed the stairs, each step deliberate, refusing to rush. The rain hit her face when she emerged, and her watch started ticking again, and her phone buzzed to life with three missed calls from the station. She stood in the gap in the fence and let the rain soak her while she committed every detail to memory. The location. The symbols on the tiles. The amber light and the sounds from below and the woman with the wrong grip and the words no bone, no entry. Three years ago, Morris had followed someone underground and hadn't come back. Quinn was not Morris. She didn't walk blindly into spaces she didn't understand. She mapped them first. She learned their rules. And then she came back with leverage. She pulled out her phone and opened the notes app, and with rainwater streaming over the screen, she began to type. Everything she'd seen. Everything she'd heard. The way the air had tasted at the bottom of those stairs, sweet and chemical and ancient. The way her watch had stopped. Somewhere beneath her feet, in the hidden market that had no name she knew yet, Tomás Herrera was putting distance between himself and the surface world. Let him. Let him think she'd been turned away at the door because she lacked some trinket of bone. Quinn pocketed her phone and walked north through the rain, her stride measured, her jaw set, the city lights smearing across the wet pavement like spilled paint. She would find out what the Veil Market was. She would find out what Herrera was doing there, and who he was doing it for, and how it connected to a dead partner in a Docklands warehouse three years cold. She would find a bone token. And she would go back down those stairs.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1626
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1626
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"determined"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"resolving"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"framework"
count1
7
word"streaming"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"determined"
1"scanned"
2"could feel"
3"weight"
4"resolving"
5"flicker"
6"framework"
7"streaming"
8"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
62.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1612
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1517
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Quinn15
Tomás3
Herrera6
Seville1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Glock4
Camden1
High1
Street1
Underground2
Morris5
Richard1
Docklands2
Putney1
Sunday1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Raven"
4"Morris"
5"Richard"
places
0"Shaftesbury"
1"Avenue"
2"Seville"
3"Soho"
4"Camden"
5"High"
6"Street"
7"Docklands"
8"Putney"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite add up"
1"looked like lantern light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1612
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"unseal that case"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean47.41
std28.03
cv0.591
sampleLengths
069
131
229
3106
451
587
641
7103
846
939
10103
1183
1241
1354
1417
1573
1651
1734
1811
1914
2020
2145
2233
2363
2418
2521
2624
2789
2840
2950
3045
3167
326
338
79.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences107
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been closed"
2"was rusted"
3"been pulled"
4"been sealed"
5"were tiled"
6"been trained"
7"were made"
8"been turned"
89.81% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs242
matches
0"was doing"
1"was, standing"
2"was putting"
3"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences113
ratio0.088
matches
0"License revoked fourteen months ago for administering unauthorized treatments—the details of which had been sealed with a thoroughness that made her teeth itch."
1"Tonight she'd spotted him leaving the Raven's Nest, that dingy Soho bar with its sickly green neon sign, and something about the way he'd clocked her—one sharp glance, immediate recognition, the kind of look that said he knew exactly who she was—had triggered the chase before she'd consciously decided to pursue."
2"But she'd read the file on that scar along his left forearm—knife attack, the details murky—and anyone who ran that hard from a police detective had reasons they didn't want examined."
3"There—a flash of movement near the old Underground entrance, the one that had been closed since the early nineties."
4"She thumbed her phone—no signal, not even a single bar."
5"She'd let nearly everything else go instead—the flat in Putney, the Sunday dinners with her sister's family, the possibility of sleep that didn't involve two fingers of whiskey first—but not the case."
6"The steps were cracked, weeds pushing through the concrete, but the wear patterns told a different story—smooth channels where feet had passed, recently, in numbers."
7"The walls were tiled in the old Underground style, cream and burgundy, but someone had scratched symbols into the glaze—patterns that repeated and interlocked in ways that made her eyes slide off them if she looked too long."
8"The woman's hand closed on her shoulder, and the grip was wrong—too strong, the fingers too rigid, as if the bones beneath the skin were made of something denser than calcium."
9"The woman's lips didn't move, but the faintest shift in her gaze—a quick, involuntary flick toward the corridor beyond—told Quinn everything."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1533
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.030006523157208087
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.011089367253750815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean14.27
std10.72
cv0.751
sampleLengths
021
129
23
316
46
56
619
73
814
912
107
1129
129
1323
1418
156
163
1711
1851
197
2010
2119
2215
235
2431
2516
264
2721
2821
2913
3016
3119
3234
337
3413
3526
365
372
3810
3922
404
4122
4210
4340
4427
459
4634
475
4832
493
44.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.34513274336283184
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners39
32.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"Somewhere beneath her feet, in"
ratio0.01
78.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences102
matches
0"He was fast."
1"She keyed her radio without"
2"She'd been watching him for"
3"He'd surfaced on her radar"
4"He cut left onto a"
5"Her hand went to the"
6"He hadn't shown a weapon."
7"He hit the end of"
8"She scanned the street, breathing"
9"She pulled up short at"
10"She thumbed her phone—no signal,"
11"She knew this feeling."
12"She'd felt it three years"
13"She'd spent three years trying"
14"She hadn't let it go."
15"She'd let nearly everything else"
16"She pulled the fence back"
17"It was a door that"
18"She started down."
19"She could hear sounds now:"
ratio0.353
38.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences102
matches
0"The rain came sideways off"
1"He was fast."
2"Quinn's boots hammered the wet"
3"She keyed her radio without"
4"Static hissed back."
5"The rain was doing something"
6"Soho had dead spots that"
7"She'd been watching him for"
8"Tomás Herrera, twenty-nine, born in"
9"License revoked fourteen months ago"
10"He'd surfaced on her radar"
11"A name whispered by informants"
12"Tonight she'd spotted him leaving"
13"He cut left onto a"
14"Quinn followed, nearly losing her"
15"The lane was narrow, barely"
16"Her hand went to the"
17"He hadn't shown a weapon."
18"The words ripped from her"
19"Herrera didn't even flinch."
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Faster than she'd expected from someone who spent his nights stitching people up in back rooms."
1"Eleven days of cold coffee in unmarked cars, of cross-referencing CCTV footage until her eyes burned, of sifting through the debris of a life that didn't quite …"
2"License revoked fourteen months ago for administering unauthorized treatments—the details of which had been sealed with a thoroughness that made her teeth itch."
3"Tonight she'd spotted him leaving the Raven's Nest, that dingy Soho bar with its sickly green neon sign, and something about the way he'd clocked her—one sharp …"
4"Through the gap she could see concrete steps descending into blackness, and from somewhere far below, a faint amber glow that had no business being there."
5"Three years of pulling threads that led nowhere, or worse, that led to locked doors and polite refusals and the quiet suggestion from her DCI that maybe it was …"
6"She'd let nearly everything else go instead—the flat in Putney, the Sunday dinners with her sister's family, the possibility of sleep that didn't involve two fi…"
7"The walls were tiled in the old Underground style, cream and burgundy, but someone had scratched symbols into the glaze—patterns that repeated and interlocked i…"
8"She could hear sounds now: the murmur of voices, the clink of glass or metal, a low thrumming that might have been music or might have been something else entir…"
9"The woman's hand closed on her shoulder, and the grip was wrong—too strong, the fingers too rigid, as if the bones beneath the skin were made of something dense…"
10"Somewhere beneath her feet, in the hidden market that had no name she knew yet, Tomás Herrera was putting distance between himself and the surface world."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.3275%