| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1364 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1364 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "shattered" | | 4 | "glistening" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "intricate" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "beacon" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "calibrated" | | 13 | "quivered" | | 14 | "sense of" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1359 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "It’s not a room, Harlow. It’s a throat. And it’s swallowing the light." | | 1 | "through" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 970 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 21 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Kowalski | 2 | | Eva | 17 | | Morris | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.418 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 5.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a lie against her sternum ben" | | 1 | "looked like carved finger bones" | | 2 | "something like them before, in the photocopi" | | 3 | "as if straining against an invisible leash" |
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| 52.83% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.472 | | wordCount | 1359 | | matches | | 0 | "not by force, but along its grain, as if pulled apart by immense, precise pres" | | 1 | "not spray paint, but seared as if by a brand" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 37.75 | | std | 29.09 | | cv | 0.771 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 104 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 77 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 89 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 79 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 91 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 66 | | 35 | 32 |
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| 90.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "was tuned" | | 1 | "was shattered" | | 2 | "were scorched" | | 3 | "was etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was just beginning" |
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| 19.70% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station was a physical presence, thick with the smell of damp brick, stale ozone, and something else—burnt sage and cold iron." | | 1 | "Shattered glass vials gleamed in her light, their contents—glistening fluids, iridescent powders—soaking into the cracked concrete." | | 2 | "“Is it?” Eva’s nervous habit betrayed her; her hand rose to tuck a curl behind her left ear." | | 3 | "Strange symbols were scorched into the floorboards—not spray paint, but seared as if by a brand." | | 4 | "The violence was theatrical—shattered glass, overturned carts." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 980 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.0163265306122449 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00816326530612245 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 11.72 | | std | 7.74 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 52.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.35344827586206895 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 36.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Just an overwhelming sense of" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d taken it from an" | | 1 | "It was a ghost of" | | 2 | "She clicked off her torch," | | 3 | "She moved forward, her worn" | | 4 | "She recognized the voice, had" | | 5 | "Her round glasses reflected the" | | 6 | "She kept her distance from" | | 7 | "They were intricate, interlocking circles" | | 8 | "They made her skin prickle." | | 9 | "She’d seen something like them" | | 10 | "She picked it up." | | 11 | "It spun in a slow," | | 12 | "Her eyes traced the path" | | 13 | "It didn’t radiate from a" | | 14 | "It converged on this stall." | | 15 | "It quivered, as if straining" | | 16 | "She remembered Morris’s last call," | | 17 | "It’s a throat." | | 18 | "She stopped before the wall." | | 19 | "It was freezing." |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 9.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s footsteps echoed" | | 2 | "The bone token, a yellowed" | | 3 | "She’d taken it from an" | | 4 | "The Veil Market sprawled before" | | 5 | "It was a ghost of" | | 6 | "Stalls fashioned from repurposed shipping" | | 7 | "A ledger book lay splayed" | | 8 | "The market had been hit," | | 9 | "Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened." | | 10 | "She clicked off her torch," | | 11 | "She moved forward, her worn" | | 12 | "Every sense was tuned, every" | | 13 | "A overturned cart spilled what" | | 14 | "A glass case was shattered," | | 15 | "The scene screamed burglary, a" | | 16 | "The voice came from the" | | 17 | "Quinn’s hand went to her" | | 18 | "She recognized the voice, had" | | 19 | "Eva Kowalski stepped into the" |
| | ratio | 0.901 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Shattered glass vials gleamed in her light, their contents—glistening fluids, iridescent powders—soaking into the cracked concrete." | | 1 | "She clicked off her torch, allowing her eyes to adjust to the faint, sourceless phosphorescence that clung to the arched ceiling like diseased moss." | | 2 | "The researcher was standing near a stall that seemed less ransacked than…" | | 3 | "Quinn looked at the brick wall, then back at Eva Kowalski, this nervous, knowledgeable girl who moved in circles Quinn was just beginning to perceive." | | 4 | "The market held its breath around them, a crime scene that was finally, terrifyingly, beginning to make sense." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice flat" | | 1 | "Quinn muttered, more to herself than to Eva" | | 2 | "Eva said, a note of surprise in her voice" | | 3 | "Quinn walked, the compass leading her like a dowsing rod" | | 4 | "she said, her voice low" | | 5 | "Quinn said, the words leaving a raw, honest ache in her chest" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Quinn muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |