| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 71.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1047 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1047 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "comfortable" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "firmly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1061 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 1052 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it might have been a feature" | | 1 | "not quite like breathing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.943 | | wordCount | 1061 | | matches | | 0 | "not the comfortable urban quiet of a city holding its breath, but something older" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 29.47 | | std | 24.97 | | cv | 0.847 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 90 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 94 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.117 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park after midnight was its own kind of silence — not the comfortable urban quiet of a city holding its breath, but something older and more deliberate." | | 1 | "Ancient oaks, really — she understood that now — their trunks grown so close together over centuries that they'd fused at the roots, forming a rough ring that the park's groundskeepers somehow never noticed, never marked on any map." | | 2 | "That was the only word for it — changed." | | 3 | "A rough circle of grass, the flowers at its edge, a mossy stone in the centre that looked like it might have been a feature once — a marker, or an altar, or just a big rock — and nothing else." | | 4 | "She pressed her palm flat and felt — nothing." | | 5 | "The flowers moved again — that same slow nodding, rhythmic, unhurried." | | 6 | "Not the dry snap of dead wood — a green crack, weight-driven, the sound of something that had stepped badly and corrected itself." | | 7 | "One moment moving, the next — oriented." | | 8 | "Low, rhythmic, almost — not quite — like breathing." | | 9 | "The Heartstone burned against her chest — not warm now, not the gentle pulse from before." | | 10 | "Not moved — shifted." |
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| 98.02% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1041 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.04226705091258405 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011527377521613832 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 11.29 | | std | 9.12 | | cv | 0.808 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 60.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.425531914893617 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Just cold granite and lichen." | | 1 | "Even the high branches had" | | 2 | "More like the sound a" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 55.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd known what it meant." | | 1 | "She'd been waiting for a" | | 2 | "It sat against her sternum" | | 3 | "She stopped just outside them" | | 4 | "Her own breathing." | | 5 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 6 | "She swept it across the" | | 7 | "Her voice landed flat, absorbed" | | 8 | "She crossed to the stone" | | 9 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 10 | "She straightened and checked her" | | 11 | "She'd give it ten minutes." | | 12 | "She stood with her back" | | 13 | "She turned her head and" | | 14 | "She didn't move." | | 15 | "She turned her torch toward" | | 16 | "she said, keeping her voice" | | 17 | "She'd grown up in Cardiff," | | 18 | "She turned slowly, a full" | | 19 | "She looked down at them." |
| | ratio | 0.412 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park after midnight was" | | 1 | "The kind of silence that" | | 2 | "Rory moved along the treeline" | | 3 | "The text had come at" | | 4 | "She'd known what it meant." | | 5 | "She'd been waiting for a" | | 6 | "It sat against her sternum" | | 7 | "The standing stones emerged from" | | 8 | "She stopped just outside them" | | 9 | "Her own breathing." | | 10 | "A fox somewhere distant, its" | | 11 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 12 | "The air changed." | | 13 | "That was the only word" | | 14 | "The temperature dropped by several" | | 15 | "Wildflowers pressed against her ankles" | | 16 | "The canopy sealed overhead, dense" | | 17 | "She swept it across the" | | 18 | "A rough circle of grass," | | 19 | "Her voice landed flat, absorbed" |
| | ratio | 0.718 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had told her to" | | 1 | "As though it had been" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The movement tracked from left to right along the border of the clearing, a subtle wave, as though something walked the perimeter just inside the trees." | | 1 | "Not the dry snap of dead wood — a green crack, weight-driven, the sound of something that had stepped badly and corrected itself." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |