| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1397 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "loosely" | | 5 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1397 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "profound" | | 8 | "absolutely" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1394 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1154 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | November | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking on a sponge" | | 1 | "work that seemed to move if she looked at them from the corner of her eye" | | 2 | "felt like her own idea" |
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| 56.53% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.435 | | wordCount | 1394 | | matches | | 0 | "not as a sound but as a suggestion, a whisper" | | 1 | "Not like it was taken, but as if it had never been" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 37.68 | | std | 23.4 | | cv | 0.621 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 73 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 62 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 58 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 63 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 65 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 65 |
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| 90.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "were carved" | | 1 | "was taken" | | 2 | "was replaced" | | 3 | "were poised" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | |
| 39.90% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "It became sweet, thick with the scent of blooming jasmine and ripe blackberries—a fragrance that had no place in November." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—velvet pansies in deep purples, star-shaped blossoms of frost-white, and clusters of tiny blue bells that chimed with a faint, glassy tinkle as a breeze she couldn’t feel stirred them." | | 2 | "Instead, the surface showed a flickering montage—a glimpse of her own hand holding a steaming cup of tea in her flat above Silas’ bar, a flash of Cardiff University’s law library, the snarling face of Evan, blurred and distorted." | | 3 | "The scent of flowers was replaced by the smell of old parchment, damp stone, and something metallic—like ozone after a lightning strike." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 628 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange, source-less golden light." |
| | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.01751592356687898 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006369426751592357 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 12.56 | | std | 8.38 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 52.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.36036036036036034 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "More oak stones formed a" | | 1 | "Instead, the surface showed a" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 93.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "It became sweet, thick with" | | 1 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 2 | "She took a breath and" | | 3 | "They had solidified beside her," | | 4 | "They were cool and slightly" | | 5 | "She straightened and looked back." | | 6 | "They moved forward." | | 7 | "She jerked back." | | 8 | "Their shadowy form cast no" | | 9 | "It was like being inside" | | 10 | "She unslung her bag and" | | 11 | "They followed the silent stream" | | 12 | "She snatched her hand back." | | 13 | "It was old, the wood" | | 14 | "It felt like her own" | | 15 | "She took a step forward." | | 16 | "She thought of Eva, waiting" | | 17 | "She looked from the cup" | | 18 | "she said, her voice firm" | | 19 | "Its edge caught the faint" |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 3.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It became sweet, thick with" | | 2 | "Nyx’s voice arrived not as" | | 3 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 4 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay against" | | 6 | "This wasn’t a tear to" | | 7 | "This was something else." | | 8 | "She took a breath and" | | 9 | "The world shimmered." | | 10 | "The noise of distant traffic" | | 11 | "The grey November light softened," | | 12 | "Underfoot, the muddy path gave" | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—velvet" | | 14 | "Rory said, her own voice" | | 15 | "They had solidified beside her," | | 16 | "Rory crouched, touching the petals" | | 17 | "They were cool and slightly" | | 18 | "A fat, golden bee drifted" | | 19 | "She straightened and looked back." |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 17.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "It became sweet, thick with the scent of blooming jasmine and ripe blackberries—a fragrance that had no place in November." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—velvet pansies in deep purples, star-shaped blossoms of frost-white, and clusters of tiny blue bells that chimed wit…" | | 2 | "More oak stones formed a loose circle ahead, but these were carved with spirals and knot-work that seemed to move if she looked at them from the corner of her e…" | | 3 | "Trees with bark that shimmered like mother-of-pearl bore fruit that glowed with a soft internal light, pulsing gently like slow heartbeats." | | 4 | "A patch of mushrooms emitted a soft, bioluminescent azure glow, and their caps, when Rory leaned close, seemed to be covered in a fine, silver dust that swirled…" | | 5 | "A path of flat, grey stones appeared at the edge of the water, leading into a denser part of the wood where the trees grew so close their branches wove a canopy…" | | 6 | "She had silver hair that cascaded over her shoulders and down her back, merging with the colour of her simple grey dress." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her own voice startlingly loud in the profound quiet" | | 1 | "Nyx advised, their whisper carrying a note of urgency" | | 2 | "she said, her voice firm" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx advised (advise)" | | 3 | "Rory guessed (guess)" | | 4 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.379 | | leniency | 0.759 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.345 | |