Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VJ93NH1RVKC6NFMF0DZSZ

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Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.045195
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stairs down to the abandoned platform smelled of damp concrete and something older — something that reminded Quinn of the inside of a church, incense and extinguished candles and the faint copper note that she'd learned, eighteen years ago, to associate with blood. She ducked under the blue-and-white tape without breaking stride. "Mind your step," said Constable Yates from somewhere behind her, though she was already three metres ahead of him, her torch cutting a clean wedge through the dark. Camden's disused Tube station had been sealed since the seventies, and someone at the council had done a thorough job of it — the entrance bolted, the street-level ventilation grilles welded shut. The Metropolitan Police forensics van was double-parked on the service road above, which meant Ellard was already down here, which meant Quinn was going to have to be patient about the body. She wasn't particularly good at patient. The platform opened up ahead of her. Portable work lights had been positioned in a loose triangle around the scene, casting everything in that particular bluish-white glare that made living faces look cadaverous and everything else look theatrical. The walls were covered in old tile — cream and green, the Camden roundel still legible beneath decades of grime — and someone had strung what looked like lengths of black cord between the support pillars, looping them in patterns that weren't decorative. Weren't graffiti, either. Quinn stopped walking and looked at them carefully. "Detective Inspector." DS Callum Marsh approached from the far end of the platform, stepping around a scatter of overturned wooden crates. He was thirty-four and conventionally handsome in a way that had never worked on Quinn, and he held his tablet like a shield. "Glad you're here. Got a strange one." "Tell me." "Male, mid-forties, no ID. Cause of death looks cardiac from the prelim — Ellard thinks it was sudden. No signs of struggle." Marsh glanced down at his tablet. "Found by a trespasser at approximately twenty-two hundred hours. She'd come down through a maintenance hatch on Kentish Town Road. Apparently she's done it before." "The trespasser." "Still here." He nodded toward the far end of the platform, past a stack of pallets draped in heavy canvas. "Bit of a character." Quinn moved toward the body first. Ellard was crouched beside it, working with the methodical patience of a man who had long ago made his peace with the dead. The victim lay on his back near the platform edge, one arm extended as though reaching for the tracks below. He was wearing a good coat — wool, charcoal grey, with a lining that had been partly torn away at the hem. His face was slack and grey and surprisingly undisturbed. "Cardiac?" Quinn said. Ellard looked up at her over his glasses. "Provisionally. No trauma to the body, no signs of asphyxiation, toxicology pending. Heart attack's the working assumption." "Working assumption," Quinn repeated. "It's what the evidence suggests." She crouched beside him. The man's right hand was closed in a loose fist. She leaned closer, close enough to see the faint marks on the knuckles — not bruising, but a kind of stippling, symmetrical, like a burn pattern but without the tissue damage. She did not touch it. "What are those?" Ellard looked where she was looking. "Mineral transfer, most likely. There's a lot of particulate matter down here." Quinn did not say what she thought of that. She stood and turned back to the platform, scanning the full geometry of the scene. The wooden crates. The black cord strung between the pillars — she could see now that the pattern was deliberate, each knot placed at precise intervals. The overturned pallets. The walls, which were not only grimy but marked, in several places, with small careful symbols that had not been painted but scratched into the tile with something sharp. She moved to one of the pillars and examined the cord more closely. It wasn't cord. It was waxed silk thread, and the knots were not decorative but functional — they held small paper packets in place, folded into tight triangles, each one seamed shut with something dark. "Market," Quinn said, half to herself. "Sorry?" Marsh had followed her. "I've seen something like this before." She hadn't, exactly. But she'd read about it, in the files she wasn't supposed to have kept after Morris died, in the notes she told herself were just a coping mechanism. "This whole setup. It's not squatter's camp." "Forensics found a token of some kind near the body," Marsh said. He scrolled on his tablet. "Small, made of bone. Possibly ivory. We've logged it as personal effects." Quinn straightened. "Where is it now?" "The evidence kit. Along with some other personal effects — wallet, no cash, and a compass of some kind." A compass. She walked to the forensics table, a folding affair set up at the north end of the platform, and found the tray of bagged items. The bone token was unremarkable — small, disc-shaped, carved with a series of radial lines that she couldn't quite resolve into a symbol. The compass was next to it. She picked up the bag. It was brass, small enough to fit in a palm. The casing was green with age, a deep verdigris that had settled into the seams like moss into stone, and the face was covered in fine-line etchings — geometric, dense, layered over and under each other in a way that made her eyes slide sideways if she tried to focus on any one element. The needle inside was dark, almost black, and it wasn't pointing north. It wasn't pointing anywhere magnetic at all. It was pointing, as far as Quinn could tell, directly toward the body. "Where's the trespasser?" she said. Marsh led her around the pallets to a section of platform where someone had set out a canvas folding chair. The woman sitting in it was young — mid-twenties, Quinn estimated — with a mass of red curls that had come mostly loose from a ponytail, round glasses pushed up into her hair, and the expression of someone who was working very hard at looking less frightened than she was. A worn leather satchel sat across her knees and she was gripping the strap with both hands. Freckled. Green-eyed. Watchful. Quinn pulled up a crate and sat across from her. She didn't introduce herself. She let the silence work. The young woman broke it first. "I've already told the other officer everything." "Tell me." A pause. The woman pushed her glasses back down onto her nose. "I found him when I came down. He was already dead. I didn't touch him. I called it in immediately." "Your name." "Eva Kowalski." "You come down here often, Ms. Kowalski." It wasn't a question. Eva's grip tightened on the satchel strap. "A few times. I'm a researcher. The station has some surviving Victorian-era infrastructure I've been documenting." "At ten o'clock at night." "I work odd hours." Quinn looked at her. Looked at the satchel — overfull, the buckle straining, the corner of something hardback pressing against the leather. Looked at the mud on her boots, which was not the sandy grit of the platform but darker, organic, the kind of mud you got from the street above. "You came down through the maintenance hatch," Quinn said. "Yes." "Which has a welded lock on it that someone has recently cut and replaced with a padlock." Quinn watched Eva's face. "So either you've been down here more than a few times, or someone gave you a key to that padlock. Which is it?" The girl tucked a curl behind her left ear. It was a precise, habitual gesture, the kind you made when you were deciding something. "I come down here to research," she said, carefully. "That's all." "The man who died," Quinn said. "Did you know him?" "No." "Have you ever seen him before?" A fraction of a pause. "No." Quinn stood and walked back to the forensics table. She stood in front of the bagged compass for a long moment while Marsh hovered somewhere behind her. "She's just a researcher who found a body," he said, with the mild reasonableness he used when he thought she was chasing something unproductive. "Probably a trespasser. The victim most likely had a cardiac event, fell, the compass was his personal property and I doubt it points anywhere particularly interesting — " "Come here." He came, and she held the bag up so the light caught it. The needle moved. Not much, barely a tremor, but it moved, pivoting within the sealed evidence bag to track the small adjustment as she shifted her position by a foot. Marsh stared at it. "Faulty," he said. "Or there's something magnetic." "There's nothing magnetic." "Quinn — " "Look at the marks on the walls." She set the compass down and turned, gesturing across the full length of the platform. "Look at the cord. Look at the pattern of the crates — they're not stacked for storage, they're arranged. Someone was using this station as a venue." She thought about the word venue and discarded it. "As a market. A regular one, from the dust patterns on the floor — you can see where it's been cleared and re-cleared. An ongoing operation, not a one-off. And that man died here tonight, on what looks like the night it was in session." She could feel the shape of it, just at the edge of where thinking became knowing. It had the same quality as the Morris case had had, before she understood what she was looking at — that sense of a logic running beneath the visible evidence like an underground river, present but invisible, making the ground above it subtly wrong in ways that were difficult to name. She looked back at Eva Kowalski, who was watching her from the folding chair with an expression that had shifted slightly. The fear was still there. But there was something else in it now — something that looked, Quinn thought, almost like recognition. "The bone token," Quinn said, not to Marsh, not to anyone in particular. "What does it open?" Nobody answered. But Eva Kowalski's hand moved to the strap of her satchel again, and her knuckles went white. Quinn picked up her torch.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"said Constable Yates from somewhere behind her [somewhere]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.339
leniency0.679
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.036
88.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1702
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1702
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"methodical"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"resolve"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count3
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"methodical"
1"scanning"
2"silk"
3"resolve"
4"magnetic"
5"silence"
6"could feel"
7"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1725
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1281
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn21
Constable1
Yates1
Camden2
Tube1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Ellard4
Callum1
Marsh8
Morris2
Eva4
Kowalski2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Camden"
2"Ellard"
3"Marsh"
4"Morris"
5"Eva"
6"Kowalski"
places
0"Callum"
globalScore0.68
windowScore0.667
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like lengths of black cord between"
1"as though reaching for the tracks below"
2"quite resolve into a symbol"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords2.899
wordCount1725
matches
0"not bruising, but a kind of stippling, symmetrical, like a burn pattern but wi"
1"not only grimy but marked, in several places, with small careful symbols"
2"not decorative but functional"
3"not the sandy grit of the platform but darker, organic, the kind of mud you got from the street abo"
4"Not much, barely a tremor, but it moved, pivoting within the sealed evidence bag to track t"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean25.75
std29.6
cv1.15
sampleLengths
044
19
292
36
492
52
649
72
853
92
1024
1180
123
1325
144
155
1650
173
1818
19130
206
215
2244
2329
246
2519
262
2759
2876
297
3013
315
3287
333
3419
3513
362
3732
382
392
407
4127
425
434
4451
459
461
4744
4824
4911
76.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences98
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been positioned"
2"were covered"
3"was crouched"
4"was closed"
5"been painted"
6"was waxed"
7"was covered"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount11
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was wearing"
1"was looking"
2"wasn't pointing"
3"wasn't pointing"
4"was pointing"
5"was working"
6"was gripping"
7"were deciding"
8"was chasing"
9"was looking"
10"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences135
ratio0.096
matches
0"The stairs down to the abandoned platform smelled of damp concrete and something older — something that reminded Quinn of the inside of a church, incense and extinguished candles and the faint copper note that she'd learned, eighteen years ago, to associate with blood."
1"Camden's disused Tube station had been sealed since the seventies, and someone at the council had done a thorough job of it — the entrance bolted, the street-level ventilation grilles welded shut."
2"The walls were covered in old tile — cream and green, the Camden roundel still legible beneath decades of grime — and someone had strung what looked like lengths of black cord between the support pillars, looping them in patterns that weren't decorative."
3"He was wearing a good coat — wool, charcoal grey, with a lining that had been partly torn away at the hem."
4"She leaned closer, close enough to see the faint marks on the knuckles — not bruising, but a kind of stippling, symmetrical, like a burn pattern but without the tissue damage."
5"The black cord strung between the pillars — she could see now that the pattern was deliberate, each knot placed at precise intervals."
6"It was waxed silk thread, and the knots were not decorative but functional — they held small paper packets in place, folded into tight triangles, each one seamed shut with something dark."
7"The bone token was unremarkable — small, disc-shaped, carved with a series of radial lines that she couldn't quite resolve into a symbol."
8"The casing was green with age, a deep verdigris that had settled into the seams like moss into stone, and the face was covered in fine-line etchings — geometric, dense, layered over and under each other in a way that made her eyes slide sideways if she tried to focus on any one element."
9"The woman sitting in it was young — mid-twenties, Quinn estimated — with a mass of red curls that had come mostly loose from a ponytail, round glasses pushed up into her hair, and the expression of someone who was working very hard at looking less frightened than she was."
10"Looked at the satchel — overfull, the buckle straining, the corner of something hardback pressing against the leather."
11"It had the same quality as the Morris case had had, before she understood what she was looking at — that sense of a logic running beneath the visible evidence like an underground river, present but invisible, making the ground above it subtly wrong in ways that were difficult to name."
12"But there was something else in it now — something that looked, Quinn thought, almost like recognition."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1276
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"particular bluish-white glare"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.028996865203761754
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.0109717868338558
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean12.78
std11.77
cv0.921
sampleLengths
044
19
228
332
432
56
67
731
843
93
108
112
1219
1323
147
152
1628
1725
182
1920
204
216
2223
2320
2422
259
263
278
2817
294
305
314
3210
3331
345
353
366
3712
389
3915
403
4123
423
4329
4413
453
4632
476
485
499
62.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.42962962962962964
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners58
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
62.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences84
matches
0"She ducked under the blue-and-white"
1"She wasn't particularly good at"
2"He was thirty-four and conventionally"
3"He nodded toward the far"
4"He was wearing a good"
5"His face was slack and"
6"She crouched beside him."
7"She leaned closer, close enough"
8"She did not touch it."
9"She stood and turned back"
10"She moved to one of"
11"It wasn't cord."
12"It was waxed silk thread,"
13"She hadn't, exactly"
14"He scrolled on his tablet."
15"She walked to the forensics"
16"She picked up the bag."
17"It was brass, small enough"
18"It wasn't pointing anywhere magnetic"
19"It was pointing, as far"
ratio0.393
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences84
matches
0"The stairs down to the"
1"She ducked under the blue-and-white"
2"Camden's disused Tube station had"
3"The Metropolitan Police forensics van"
4"She wasn't particularly good at"
5"The platform opened up ahead"
6"The walls were covered in"
7"Quinn stopped walking and looked"
8"DS Callum Marsh approached from"
9"He was thirty-four and conventionally"
10"Marsh glanced down at his"
11"He nodded toward the far"
12"Quinn moved toward the body"
13"Ellard was crouched beside it,"
14"The victim lay on his"
15"He was wearing a good"
16"His face was slack and"
17"Ellard looked up at her"
18"She crouched beside him."
19"The man's right hand was"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The stairs down to the abandoned platform smelled of damp concrete and something older — something that reminded Quinn of the inside of a church, incense and ex…"
1"The Metropolitan Police forensics van was double-parked on the service road above, which meant Ellard was already down here, which meant Quinn was going to have…"
2"Portable work lights had been positioned in a loose triangle around the scene, casting everything in that particular bluish-white glare that made living faces l…"
3"The walls were covered in old tile — cream and green, the Camden roundel still legible beneath decades of grime — and someone had strung what looked like length…"
4"He was thirty-four and conventionally handsome in a way that had never worked on Quinn, and he held his tablet like a shield."
5"Ellard was crouched beside it, working with the methodical patience of a man who had long ago made his peace with the dead."
6"The walls, which were not only grimy but marked, in several places, with small careful symbols that had not been painted but scratched into the tile with someth…"
7"The casing was green with age, a deep verdigris that had settled into the seams like moss into stone, and the face was covered in fine-line etchings — geometric…"
8"The woman sitting in it was young — mid-twenties, Quinn estimated — with a mass of red curls that had come mostly loose from a ponytail, round glasses pushed up…"
9"It had the same quality as the Morris case had had, before she understood what she was looking at — that sense of a logic running beneath the visible evidence l…"
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn said, half to herself"
1"She hadn't, exactly"
2"she said, carefully"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.036
67.0129%