Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VKD4JDNH8703RFESS63SH

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Duration:
37.9s
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$0.029730
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave the most resistance, always had, and Rory had to lean her weight into the door before it swung open. She'd been expecting Eva back from the corner shop. Crisps, maybe a bottle of wine, the familiar smell of curry drifting up from the restaurant below. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway instead. He wore the charcoal suit — of course he did, he always wore the charcoal suit — though the collar of his shirt was open at the throat tonight, which was new. His ivory-handled cane rested against his right hand more out of habit than necessity. His amber eye caught the light from the flat. The black one gave nothing away, same as always. "Bonsoir." The word landed easy, unhurried, like he'd run into her in a lift rather than appearing unannounced on the doorstep of a flat he had no business knowing the address of. Rory's hand stayed on the doorframe. "How did you find this place?" "Eva listed it in a registry I have access to. Supernatural properties. She filed the wards with the Meridian Council in February." He tilted his head slightly. "May I come in?" "No." Ptolemy squeezed past her ankles and sniffed at Lucien's polished Oxford shoes. "Your cat disagrees." "Ptolemy has terrible judgement." She didn't move. "Whatever you need, Lucien, you can say it from there." Something shifted in his expressionnot quite a smile, not quite hurt, something that lived in the narrow space between. He reached into his jacket and produced an envelope, thick cream paper, sealed with red wax. "It concerns you directly. I was asked to deliver it in person." "You could have posted it." "I could have." He held it out. "I chose not to." The admission sat between them. Rory pulled in a slow breath through her nose, caught the faint trace of cedar and something warmer underneath, and hated that she still recognised it. She took the envelope. Their fingers didn't touch. She stepped back from the door. Not quite an invitation, but he crossed the threshold anyway. Eva's flat closed around them both, books stacked on every surface, a half-unrolled scroll pinned flat under a mug on the kitchen table, strings of dried herbs hanging from the curtain rail. The single lamp in the corner threw everything amber. Ptolemy jumped onto the back of the sofa and watched Lucien with the focused, unblinking attention of a creature completely unbothered by the supernatural. Rory turned the envelope over. The seal bore a crest she didn't recognise. "Who sent this?" "The Avaric Consulate." He moved further into the room, pausing to scan the spines on the nearest bookshelf, though she doubted he was actually reading them. "There's a hearing. Three weeks from Thursday. Your name came up in connection with the Aldgate incident." "I wasn't involved in the Aldgate incident." "You were adjacent to it." "I delivered food to a man who happened to be involved in it. That's not the same thing." "They don't distinguish." He turned from the shelf. "Which is why you need to read the letter, Rory." The name — her name, not a formal address, not Ms Carter — came out without ceremony, like he'd forgotten for a second to be careful with it. The muscle in his jaw moved after he said it, barely perceptible. She broke the seal and read. It was worse than adjacent. The Consulate had her listed as a person of interest in an ongoing inquiry, tied not just to Aldgate but to two other incidents she'd been nowhere near. Someone had done deliberate work to put her in the frame. "This is fabricated." "Substantially, yes." She looked up. "You knew before you came here." "I suspected." He crossed to the kitchen table and moved the scroll aside to sit on the edge of it, setting his cane down. It was a strangely casual gesture from a man who rarely let his guard drop below architectural. "I have contacts at the Consulate. When your name surfaced I made enquiries." "Why?" The question came out shorter than she'd meant it to. More raw. Lucien looked at her for a moment. The lamp caught the planes of his face, the slight tension around the amber eye. "Because the last time I didn't act quickly enough, you disappeared for four months." The flat went very quiet. Outside, a motorbike passed on Brick Lane, and the bass from the restaurant below shifted through the floorboards. "That wasn't your fault." She folded the letter along its original creases. "I left. That was my decision." "I know." He picked a loose thread from his jacket cuff. "I'm not assigning blame. I'm explaining why I came in person rather than posting an envelope." Rory set the letter on the table beside him and crossed her arms, not defensively but because she needed something to do with her hands. She stood close enough that she could see the faint, almost imperceptible lines at the corners of his eyes that hadn't been there nine months ago. "You look tired," she said. "You look well." "That's not what I said." The corner of his mouth moved. "No. It isn't." Ptolemy dropped off the sofa and wound between their legs with complete indifference to the atmosphere. Rory watched the cat, because it was easier than watching Lucien. "There are things we didn't finish saying," he said, quietly. "I'm aware this isn't the moment for them. But I wanted you to know I'm aware." "Lucien —" "The letter takes precedence. I have a contact who can challenge the documentation, but they'll need a statement from you within the week." He picked the cane back up. All the businesslike certainty returned to his posture, a coat he'd slipped briefly off and now had back on. "I can arrange a meeting tomorrow evening, if you're willing." Rory watched him reconstruct himself and felt something she couldn't name settle in her chest — not quite grief, not quite relief. "Fine," she said. "Tomorrow evening." He nodded once. He was already moving toward the door when she spoke again. "I didn't disappear because of you." She kept her eyes on Ptolemy. "I want you to know that too. Since we're being honest about what we're aware of." He stopped. For several seconds neither of them moved. "Thank you," he said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He moved further [further]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.044
81.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1057
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
2"quickly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1057
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1063
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount754
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Eva2
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Lucien5
Oxford1
Ms1
Carter1
Consulate1
Aldgate1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Ms"
6"Carter"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Aldgate"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite a smile, not quite hurt, something that lived in the narrow space between"
1"not quite hurt, something that lived in the narrow space between"
2"Not quite an invitation, but he crossed the threshold anyway"
3"not quite grief, not quite relief"
4"not quite relief"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.822
wordCount1063
matches
0"Not quite an invitation, but he crossed the threshold anyway"
1"not just to Aldgate but to two other incidents she'd been nowhere near"
2"not defensively but because she needed something to do with her hands"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean19.33
std17.57
cv0.909
sampleLengths
049
17
264
332
46
56
631
71
812
93
1017
1137
1212
135
1411
1539
1616
1765
1813
193
2043
217
225
2318
2418
2540
266
2744
283
292
309
3154
321
3312
3422
3514
3623
3718
3827
3951
405
413
425
439
4427
4526
462
4758
4822
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs120
matches
0"was actually reading"
1"was already moving"
19.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences93
ratio0.043
matches
0"He wore the charcoal suit — of course he did, he always wore the charcoal suit — though the collar of his shirt was open at the throat tonight, which was new."
1"Something shifted in his expression — not quite a smile, not quite hurt, something that lived in the narrow space between."
2"The name — her name, not a formal address, not Ms Carter — came out without ceremony, like he'd forgotten for a second to be careful with it."
3"Rory watched him reconstruct himself and felt something she couldn't name settle in her chest — not quite grief, not quite relief."
89.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount718
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.05153203342618384
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011142061281337047
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean11.43
std8.32
cv0.728
sampleLengths
023
19
217
37
432
514
69
79
832
96
106
1127
124
131
1412
153
167
1710
1821
1916
2012
215
227
234
245
2526
264
274
286
2910
3032
319
3224
335
348
353
3626
3717
387
395
4018
418
4210
4328
4412
456
465
4728
4811
493
59.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.40860215053763443
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences58
matches
0"She'd been expecting Eva back"
1"He wore the charcoal suit"
2"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
3"His amber eye caught the"
4"He tilted his head slightly"
5"She didn't move"
6"He reached into his jacket"
7"He held it out"
8"She took the envelope."
9"Their fingers didn't touch."
10"She stepped back from the"
11"He moved further into the"
12"He turned from the shelf"
13"She broke the seal and"
14"It was worse than adjacent."
15"She looked up."
16"He crossed to the kitchen"
17"It was a strangely casual"
18"She folded the letter along"
19"He picked a loose thread"
ratio0.448
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences58
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave the"
1"She'd been expecting Eva back"
2"Crisps, maybe a bottle of"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"He wore the charcoal suit"
5"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
6"His amber eye caught the"
7"The black one gave nothing"
8"The word landed easy, unhurried,"
9"Rory's hand stayed on the"
10"He tilted his head slightly"
11"Ptolemy squeezed past her ankles"
12"She didn't move"
13"Something shifted in his expression"
14"He reached into his jacket"
15"He held it out"
16"The admission sat between them."
17"Rory pulled in a slow"
18"She took the envelope."
19"Their fingers didn't touch."
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Something shifted in his expression — not quite a smile, not quite hurt, something that lived in the narrow space between."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, quietly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.089
leniency0.178
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.2503%