| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1569 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1569 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "searing" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "footfall" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "fractured" | | 7 | "mechanical" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "structure" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1586 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1285 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 23 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Dymas | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Christmas | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Hel-born | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Dymas" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.605 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 39.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like warm honey" | | 1 | "seemed designed to make time irrelevant" | | 2 | "sounded like a lullaby Rory hadn't heard s" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1586 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 30.5 | | std | 29.17 | | cv | 0.956 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 96 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 70 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 62 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 75 | | 24 | 80 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 59 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 99 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 72 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 75 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 86 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 60 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a searing pain — more like pressing a mug of fresh tea to bare skin." | | 1 | "Between the rows, orchards sprawled — trees Rory couldn't name, heavy with fruit that glowed faintly from within, soft amber and rose-gold, as though each one held a trapped ember." | | 2 | "The moonsilver caught no light here — stayed dull as tarnished pewter under Dymas's amber sky." | | 3 | "The notes repeated — consistent, deliberate." | | 4 | "Up close, the vines were thick as her forearm and twisted into shapes that suggested intention — spirals, knots, what might have been letters in a language she didn't speak." | | 5 | "The golden threads inside pulsed — faintly, arrhythmically, like a heartbeat winding down." | | 6 | "The trees bore fruit Rory's brain refused to categorize — shapes that were almost pears but with skin like polished opal, things that resembled peaches but wept a slow golden sap from their stems, clusters of small round berries that chimed against each other when the unfelt breeze stirred them." | | 7 | "Beneath it, voices — or the ghosts of voices — murmured in overlapping waves, too distant to parse into words but close enough to feel." | | 8 | "Between the trunks, light spilled from low structures built into the hillside — stone and iron buildings with wide chimney stacks that emitted plumes of fragrant smoke." | | 9 | "Through a gap in the foliage, Rory caught a glimpse of the interior of the nearest one — a cavernous space lit by hanging braziers, long iron counters, and figures in stained aprons moving with mechanical precision." | | 10 | "One chef — a woman with cropped hair and hollow eyes — looked up." | | 11 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed hot — hotter than before, a rhythm that matched her pulse." | | 12 | "She scanned the groves ahead — more fruit-laden trees, more winding paths of musical stone, and in the far distance, something that broke the skyline." | | 13 | "Above them, the amber sky darkened by a single shade — the only indication of time passing in a place that seemed designed to make time irrelevant." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1277 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cold settled behind Rory's" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.0274079874706343 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007830853563038372 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 12.11 | | std | 9.87 | | cv | 0.815 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 84.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5267175572519084 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 69 | |
| 73.26% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Just light, sourceless and even," | | 1 | "Then light again, amber and" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched it through her" | | 1 | "She breathed through her mouth." | | 2 | "Her lavender eyes were half-closed," | | 3 | "She noted that." | | 4 | "Their shadow-form drifted ahead, not" | | 5 | "Her hand trembled." | | 6 | "Her nostrils flared" | | 7 | "She looked at the nearest" | | 8 | "They pressed deeper." | | 9 | "They skirted the kitchen structures," | | 10 | "Their hands worked cleavers and" | | 11 | "Her gaze passed through the" | | 12 | "Her mouth opened." | | 13 | "She stopped and tilted her" | | 14 | "She looked at Rory with" | | 15 | "Its cold radiated up her" | | 16 | "She scanned the groves ahead" | | 17 | "She shut that down." | | 18 | "She could almost feel the" | | 19 | "She lifted her foot." |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 47.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory's" | | 1 | "She clutched it through her" | | 2 | "The Veil had parted like" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 4 | "Violet eyes swept across the" | | 5 | "She breathed through her mouth." | | 6 | "The air tasted like warm" | | 7 | "Nyx said, and the name" | | 8 | "Vineyards cascaded down terraced slopes," | | 9 | "The sky above was the" | | 10 | "The words left Rory before" | | 11 | "Isolde stood to her left," | | 12 | "The Seer's bare feet had" | | 13 | "Her lavender eyes were half-closed," | | 14 | "Isolde's mouth curved." | | 15 | "Rory pulled the Fae blade" | | 16 | "The moonsilver caught no light" | | 17 | "She noted that." | | 18 | "The path was paved in" | | 19 | "Each footfall produced a faint" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched it through her jacket and blinked against light that had no business existing underground." | | 1 | "The Veil had parted like wet tissue paper, and the tunnel of cold displacement that followed had lasted three heartbeats, maybe four, before depositing them on …" | | 2 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their form flickering between solid shadow and a shape that was almost human." | | 3 | "Between the rows, orchards sprawled — trees Rory couldn't name, heavy with fruit that glowed faintly from within, soft amber and rose-gold, as though each one h…" | | 4 | "Just light, sourceless and even, pouring from an amber vault that stretched to every horizon." | | 5 | "The trees bore fruit Rory's brain refused to categorize — shapes that were almost pears but with skin like polished opal, things that resembled peaches but wept…" | | 6 | "Their hands worked cleavers and whisks and implements Rory couldn't name against ingredients that shifted color on the cutting board." | | 7 | "The crimson gemstone pulsed hot — hotter than before, a rhythm that matched her pulse." | | 8 | "She scanned the groves ahead — more fruit-laden trees, more winding paths of musical stone, and in the far distance, something that broke the skyline." | | 9 | "The warm air filled her lungs with cinnamon and char and the ghost of something that reminded her, painfully, of her mother's Christmas pudding." | | 10 | "She could almost feel the soil beneath her feet reaching for her recollections, hungry, patient, extracting what it could from the pressure of her weight." | | 11 | "Above them, the amber sky darkened by a single shade — the only indication of time passing in a place that seemed designed to make time irrelevant." | | 12 | "She set her jaw, pressed the cold blade against the hot pendant, and let the dissonance between Fae-forged steel and Hel-born stone anchor her to the only thing…" |
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| 50.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, and the name left them like a confession" | | 1 | "Nyx's form rippled, a distortion that Rory had learned to read as discomfort" | | 2 | "Nyx drew, shadow coalescing into something sharper, more defined" |
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| 75.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx confirmed (confirm)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.15 | | leniency | 0.3 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |