Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VQ41TN8WVPT7BD10SZF9S

Run Details

Duration:
59.8s
Cost:
$0.038025
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest bled across the wet pavement like something wounded, and Quinn was already moving when the man bolted. She'd clocked him the moment she stepped out of the unmarked car on Brewer Street — olive skin, short curly hair dark with rain, a Saint Christopher medallion catching the light as he turned his collar up — and something in the way he catalogued her, the precise flicker of assessment before the decision to run, told her everything she needed to know. Guilty men didn't hesitate. They just moved. So did Quinn. "Herrera!" She hit the pavement hard, her boots sending up shallow sprays of water. "Metropolitan Police — stop!" He didn't stop. He never stopped. In her eighteen years she'd only ever seen three people actually stop when she shouted that, and two of them had been drunk. Tomás Herrera was not drunk. He took the corner onto Wardour Street without breaking stride, his long legs eating up the distance with the practiced efficiency of someone who'd spent years running toward emergencies rather than away from them. A former paramedic. She'd read his file three times. He knew how bodies worked, how far they could be pushed, where the margins were. She suspected he was calculating her pace even now, measuring the gap between them with clinical precision. Quinn kept her jaw set and pumped her arms, ignoring the burn beginning to build in her thighs. The rain had intensified in the last hour, turning from drizzle to something with genuine intent, and Oxford Street was a chaos of umbrellas and late buses and tourists huddled under awnings who parted around them like water around two thrown stones. She was faster than she looked. People always underestimated that. The gap closed by half a metre before the lights changed and a black cab lurched forward between them, horn blaring. Quinn slapped the bonnet with her palm without slowing, vaulted the white line, and caught a glimpse of Herrera's face as he looked back — not panicked, not quite, but recalculating. His warm brown eyes found her through the rain-broken dark and something shifted in his expression. Surprise, maybe. He'd expected to lose her by now. She watched him make a decision. He turned north. Toward Camden. The realisation sat strangely in her chest as she followed, matching him turn for turn through the narrowing backstreets, past shuttered restaurants and the sour perfume of overflowing bins, past a group of students who pressed themselves flat against a wall and filmed them both on their phones. Herrera wasn't running blind. He had a destination. She'd been a detective long enough to know the difference between panic and navigation, and what she was watching was navigation — quick, confident, purposeful. He was leading her somewhere specific, or leading her away from somewhere she wasn't meant to find. She pulled her phone with one hand and thumbed a message to DC Asante: NB Camden, need backup, following Herrera on foot. She didn't wait for the read receipt. She shoved the phone back into her jacket and leaned into the run. Euston Road was a wall of headlights and diesel and spray. Herrera barely paused at the kerb, timing the gap between a lorry and a night bus with the kind of split-second calculation that made Quinn's stomach tighten. She followed anyway. The lorry's horn ripped across the dark and the driver's window came down briefly with a stream of abuse she didn't have the breath to respond to. On the other side, Herrera was already pulling away. The terraced streets north of the interchange were quieter, the rain heavier, the orange of the sodium lights turning every puddle into hammered copper. Her leather watch chafed against her wrist as she ran, an old friction she'd learned to ignore. Her breathing was controlled, rhythmic, the product of early mornings she'd never quite managed to stop keeping after Morris died, as though discipline was the one thing she could still offer up to the universe in exchange for a shape of order that made sense. DS Morris. Three years now, and the case file still sat in her bottom drawer, re-read so many times the paper had softened at the folds. She shook the thought loose. There was only Herrera and the rain and the widening gap between them. She'd almost lost him entirely when she saw the medallion catch the light — Saint Christopher spinning as he ducked down a staircase she hadn't registered from street level, the kind of entrance that blended seamlessly into the derelict shopfront above it, boards over the windows, a padlock that was clearly decorative. The steps led down beneath the pavement, below the road, below the drainage pipes and the substrata of a city built on itself over centuries. Quinn stopped at the top of the stairs. The rain hammered her shoulders, her closely cropped hair plastered flat within moments of her slowing. She pressed her back against the brick and peered down. Twelve concrete steps, angled steeply, disappearing into amber half-light below. What had once been emergency lighting, maybe, reduced now to a sickly glow that was just about sufficient to confirm the steps existed. At the bottom: the sound of movement, voices, and beneath that something else she couldn't categorise. A low, resonant hum, not mechanical, that she felt in the back of her molars. Her hand moved to the radio at her hip. She thought of Asante, who was maybe fifteen minutes out. She thought of protocol, of reasonable grounds, of the seventy-page report she'd have to write if she drew her weapon without justification. She thought of Herrera's files: the revoked medical licence, the patient records that didn't correspond to any NHS admission in the system, the names in his phone that intersected, again and again, with the clique she'd been building a case on for eight months. She thought of Morris. She looked back up at the street — empty, slick, indifferent, the rain falling straight and relentless as accusation. No backup yet. No witness. Just her and the decision and the hum vibrating somewhere behind her teeth. She'd been a detective for eighteen years. She'd learned, in those years, that there were places the job took you that the handbook hadn't mapped, and that the only thing more dangerous than following was not following, because at least if you went in with your eyes open you had some chance of seeing what was there. She descended. The steps were damp underfoot and the air changed immediately — warmer than it had any right to be, carrying the smell of tallow and something medicinal and sweet, beneath it the older, mineral smell of deep underground. The hum grew as she moved, resolving slowly into something closer to sound than vibration, a layering of voices and movement that the narrow stairwell magnified and distorted. At the bottom, another door. This one solid iron, set into the tile of what had clearly once been a Tube station — she could see the curve of the original architecture beneath the modifications, the familiar terracotta of an older station long since closed. A man sat beside the door on a wooden stool. He was compact and entirely still, the way people only managed when stillness was deliberate and trained, and he held one hand loosely open on his knee, in the palm of which rested a small pale object she couldn't identify from this distance. He looked at Quinn's hands. At her jacket. At her face. She looked back at him with the expression she'd spent years calibrating: level, certain, utterly un-intimidated. "Name," he said. Not a question. "Detective Harlow Quinn. Metropolitan Police." She kept her voice measured, quiet, the way she'd learned to be quiet in rooms where noise would cost more than it bought. "I'm in pursuit of a suspect who came through this door. I need to go through." The man turned the pale object over in his palm once, twice. He said nothing for a long moment. "No token," he said finally. "No entry." She held his gaze. Through the iron door came the unmistakable layered sound of a crowd — dozens of people at least, maybe more, the acoustics of a large underground space shaping their voices into something collective and strange. Herrera was in there. The evidence she'd spent eight months building towards was in there. Eight months, and before that three years of Morris's absence sitting in her chest like scar tissue around a splinter. She reached into her jacket pocket for her warrant card instead, held it up flat, let the amber light catch the crest. "I don't think you understand what I said," she told him, and her voice was quiet and entirely serious, the way it got when she meant every syllable. "I'm going through that door."
created_at"2026-02-24T22:18:34.435Z" 2/24/2026, 10:18:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
89.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1475
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"loosely"
2"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1475
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
2
word"lurched"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"mechanical"
count1
6
word"resolving"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"calculating"
2"lurched"
3"stomach"
4"rhythmic"
5"mechanical"
6"resolving"
7"familiar"
8"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1485
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1441
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Quinn7
Brewer1
Street3
Saint2
Christopher2
Herrera9
Wardour1
Oxford1
Camden2
Asante2
Road1
Morris4
Tube1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Quinn"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Herrera"
6"Morris"
places
0"Brewer"
1"Street"
2"Wardour"
3"Oxford"
4"Road"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite but recalculating"
65.32% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.347
wordCount1485
matches
0"not panicked, not quite, but recalculating"
1"not quite, but recalculating"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean39.08
std31.99
cv0.819
sampleLengths
024
170
23
318
429
580
660
710
877
96
103
112
1298
1342
1468
159
1686
1726
1818
1977
208
2190
2285
234
2437
2557
262
2766
2898
2911
3016
316
3244
3319
347
3574
3622
3733
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs232
matches
0"was already moving"
1"was calculating"
2"wasn't running"
3"was watching"
4"was leading"
5"was already pulling"
6"was not following"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences95
ratio0.084
matches
0"She'd clocked him the moment she stepped out of the unmarked car on Brewer Street — olive skin, short curly hair dark with rain, a Saint Christopher medallion catching the light as he turned his collar up — and something in the way he catalogued her, the precise flicker of assessment before the decision to run, told her everything she needed to know."
1"Quinn slapped the bonnet with her palm without slowing, vaulted the white line, and caught a glimpse of Herrera's face as he looked back — not panicked, not quite, but recalculating."
2"She'd been a detective long enough to know the difference between panic and navigation, and what she was watching was navigation — quick, confident, purposeful."
3"She'd almost lost him entirely when she saw the medallion catch the light — Saint Christopher spinning as he ducked down a staircase she hadn't registered from street level, the kind of entrance that blended seamlessly into the derelict shopfront above it, boards over the windows, a padlock that was clearly decorative."
4"She looked back up at the street — empty, slick, indifferent, the rain falling straight and relentless as accusation."
5"The steps were damp underfoot and the air changed immediately — warmer than it had any right to be, carrying the smell of tallow and something medicinal and sweet, beneath it the older, mineral smell of deep underground."
6"This one solid iron, set into the tile of what had clearly once been a Tube station — she could see the curve of the original architecture beneath the modifications, the familiar terracotta of an older station long since closed."
7"Through the iron door came the unmistakable layered sound of a crowd — dozens of people at least, maybe more, the acoustics of a large underground space shaping their voices into something collective and strange."
91.74% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1436
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount71
adverbRatio0.04944289693593315
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.016713091922005572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean15.63
std13.79
cv0.882
sampleLengths
024
163
24
33
43
514
64
73
83
923
105
1134
123
136
1415
1517
1618
1742
186
194
2021
2131
2216
232
247
256
263
272
2848
294
304
3125
3217
3322
347
3513
3611
3727
383
3927
409
4124
4217
4345
442
4524
465
4713
4852
4925
42.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.35789473684210527
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners34
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Just her and the decision"
ratio0.012
17.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences85
matches
0"She'd clocked him the moment"
1"They just moved."
2"She hit the pavement hard,"
3"He didn't stop."
4"He never stopped."
5"He took the corner onto"
6"She'd read his file three"
7"He knew how bodies worked,"
8"She suspected he was calculating"
9"She was faster than she"
10"His warm brown eyes found"
11"He'd expected to lose her"
12"She watched him make a"
13"He turned north."
14"He had a destination."
15"She'd been a detective long"
16"He was leading her somewhere"
17"She pulled her phone with"
18"She didn't wait for the"
19"She shoved the phone back"
ratio0.506
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences85
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"She'd clocked him the moment"
2"They just moved."
3"She hit the pavement hard,"
4"He didn't stop."
5"He never stopped."
6"Tomás Herrera was not drunk."
7"He took the corner onto"
8"A former paramedic."
9"She'd read his file three"
10"He knew how bodies worked,"
11"She suspected he was calculating"
12"Quinn kept her jaw set"
13"The rain had intensified in"
14"She was faster than she"
15"People always underestimated that."
16"The gap closed by half"
17"Quinn slapped the bonnet with"
18"His warm brown eyes found"
19"He'd expected to lose her"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"He took the corner onto Wardour Street without breaking stride, his long legs eating up the distance with the practiced efficiency of someone who'd spent years …"
1"The rain had intensified in the last hour, turning from drizzle to something with genuine intent, and Oxford Street was a chaos of umbrellas and late buses and …"
2"The realisation sat strangely in her chest as she followed, matching him turn for turn through the narrowing backstreets, past shuttered restaurants and the sou…"
3"Herrera barely paused at the kerb, timing the gap between a lorry and a night bus with the kind of split-second calculation that made Quinn's stomach tighten."
4"Her breathing was controlled, rhythmic, the product of early mornings she'd never quite managed to stop keeping after Morris died, as though discipline was the …"
5"She'd almost lost him entirely when she saw the medallion catch the light — Saint Christopher spinning as he ducked down a staircase she hadn't registered from …"
6"What had once been emergency lighting, maybe, reduced now to a sickly glow that was just about sufficient to confirm the steps existed."
7"She thought of Herrera's files: the revoked medical licence, the patient records that didn't correspond to any NHS admission in the system, the names in his pho…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She hit, her boots sending up shallow sprays of water"
1"she told, and her voice was quiet and entirely serious, the way it got when she meant every syllable"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.0763%