Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VRQYXEQ9XDRNRH4RGK9JX

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Duration:
1m 17s
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$0.071765
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement in sheets, turning Soho into a blur of reflected neon and black water. Quinn's boots struck the slick cobblestones in a rhythm she hadn't felt since her army days—measured, controlled, every footfall placed with purpose despite the burning in her lungs. Ahead, the figure in the dark jacket cut left down Bateman Street, his silhouette strobing through the wash of headlights from a passing taxi. She keyed her radio. Nothing but static. Third dead zone in as many blocks. The green neon of the Raven's Nest smeared across a puddle as she sprinted past the bar's entrance. She knew that place. Had sat outside it for eleven hours last Tuesday in an unmarked Vauxhall, cataloguing faces. The connection wasn't lost on her—her suspect had been circling back toward familiar ground before she'd flushed him from the alley behind Greek Street. Tomás Herrera. Twenty-nine. Former paramedic, license revoked eighteen months ago. The file on her desk said fraud and unauthorized medical procedures. The file didn't explain why three of his former patients had no NHS numbers, no national insurance records, no birth certificates on file with any registry in the United Kingdom. He vaulted a low railing and dropped into the gap between two buildings. Quinn followed without breaking stride, her shoulder clipping brick as she squeezed through. The gap opened onto Wardour Street and she caught a flash of him—olive skin slicked with rain, that Saint Christopher medallion catching light as it bounced against his chest—before he disappeared into a crowd spilling out of a late-night dim sum place. She pushed through bodies. Elbows and complaints. Someone's umbrella caught her across the cheek and she batted it aside. Herrera was already across the street, running north now, away from Soho proper. Heading for Tottenham Court Road. No—past it. He crossed against traffic and a delivery van locked its brakes, horn blaring, the sound swallowed almost instantly by the downpour. Quinn dodged the same van and gained three metres. She could see his breathing now, the way his shoulders heaved. He wasn't trained for this. She was. "Herrera! Stop!" He glanced back. Warm brown eyes wide with something that wasn't quite fear. More like desperation. He ducked into Camden High Street and the crowd thickened again—late Thursday revellers, tourists who didn't know enough to get out of the rain, rough sleepers huddled in doorways. She lost him at the intersection near the canal. Quinn stopped. Chest heaving. Rain running in channels down the sharp line of her jaw, soaking through her collar. She turned a slow circle, scanning. The street bled colour—red from a kebab shop, sickly yellow from a betting parlour, the blue pulse of a phone screen held by a kid in a doorway. She wiped water from her eyes and looked again. There. A maintenance door set into the facade of a boarded-up building. It was closing. The hydraulic arm caught it for one second, two, and in that gap she saw the flutter of a dark jacket descending stairs. Quinn checked her radio again. Dead air. She pulled out her phone—one bar of signal that flickered to zero as she watched. She glanced at her worn leather watch. Eleven forty-seven. Nobody knew she was here. She'd been off shift when she spotted Herrera coming out of the Raven's Nest, and she'd made the decision to follow on foot instead of calling it in because calling it in meant explaining to DCI Havers why she was running unauthorized surveillance on a man connected to a case that had been officially deprioritized. The door had almost closed. In three seconds the opportunity would be gone. She caught it with her fingertips and pulled. The stairwell beyond smelled of rust and stagnant water and something else—something sweet and chemical that she couldn't place. Institutional tile on the walls, cracked and yellowed. Emergency lighting that hadn't been emergency for decades, rewired now with a low amber glow that came from no bulb she recognized. The fixtures looked hand-blown, the glass thick and uneven, and the light inside them moved like something living. Quinn drew her expandable baton from her belt. She didn't carry a firearm—Met regs, and she'd never had cause to push for authorization. She was second-guessing that now as the stairwell wound down and the sound of the rain above faded to nothing. Twenty steps. Thirty. The architecture shifted. The institutional tile gave way to older brick, then to stone that looked Victorian, then to something rougher still—hand-hewn blocks of Portland limestone stained with what might have been centuries of soot. She was below street level now. Below the sewers, maybe. Below the Tube. She rounded a corner and stopped. The platform stretched out before her in an impossible cavern of light and sound. It was a Tube station—she could see the bones of it, the curved walls, the platform edge, the dark mouths of tunnels at either end—but it had been transformed into something that looked like a cross between a Marrakech souk and a fever dream. Stalls crowded together in dense, winding rows, draped with fabrics that shimmered in colours she didn't have names for. Lanterns hung from the arched ceiling on chains of black iron, casting pools of light that seemed to have weight, to fall like liquid onto the merchandise below. And the people. Dozens of them, maybe a hundred, moving through the stalls with the purposeful drift of experienced shoppers. Some looked ordinary enough. Others didn't. Quinn's eyes caught details and her brain tried to file them and jam after jam built up: a woman whose fingers were too long by at least two knuckles; a man whose shadow moved independently of him; a child, maybe eight or nine, whose eyes reflected light like a cat's when he turned his head. The Veil Market. She'd heard rumours. Every detective who'd worked the strange-adjacent cases had heard rumours. A black market for things that weren't supposed to exist, operating somewhere underground, moving locations to avoid detection. Every full moon, one informant had said. Matches the pattern of the disturbances, Quinn had written in her own unsanctioned notes. Havers had crossed it out. She pressed her back against the cold stone of the entrance arch and scanned for Herrera. The rain on her clothes was already drying in the strange warmth of the place, steam rising from her jacket in thin curls. The air tasted of copper and anise and something that made the fillings in her back teeth ache. There. Herrera had stopped at a stall near the centre of the platform, his hands braced on a table covered with small glass bottles filled with liquids of various murky hues. He was talking to the vendor—an old woman who sat on a high stool and watched him with an expression of wary familiarity. He pulled something from his pocket. A bone token, small and pale, carved with markings Quinn couldn't read from this distance. He placed it on the table and the old woman picked it up, turned it over, nodded. Unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients. The words from his file took on a new dimension. The banned alchemical substances on that table weren't recreational. They were medical. Herrera wasn't dealing—he was restocking. Quinn's grip tightened on her baton. Eighteen years of service. Decorated twice. She'd tracked killers through council estates and financiers through shell companies and she'd been afraid, properly afraid, exactly four times. This was the fifth. Not because of the strangeness—though that alone should have been enough—but because of what admitting this place existed would mean. For her case. For the questions she'd been asking about DS Morris for three years now, the ones that had earned her a mandatory psych evaluation and a quiet demotion from Major Crimes. Morris had died in a tunnel. Underground. The report said structural collapse. The report was a lie—she'd known that the day she read it. His injuries weren't consistent with falling debris. They were consistent with nothing she'd ever seen. Herrera finished his transaction and tucked three small bottles into his jacket. He turned from the stall and his gaze swept the market, passing over her position without stopping. He hadn't seen her. The crowd between them provided enough cover, and she'd instinctively pressed into the shadow of the arch. He moved toward the far tunnel. The one on the left, darker than the right, the one where fewer people seemed to go. Quinn looked back up the stairwell behind her. The amber light still pulsed gently in those strange hand-blown fixtures, marking the path back to the street, to the rain, to a world that operated on rules she understood. She could walk out. File a report on Monday that mentioned nothing about this place. Continue the surveillance from the outside, build the case through traditional channels, pretend she hadn't seen the woman with too many joints in her fingers or the child with reflective eyes. She could do all of that. It would be the rational choice. Her hand went to her watch, a reflex. She ran her thumb across the cracked leather of the strap. Morris had been wearing one just like it the last time she'd seen him alive. Standard Met issue, back when they still gave those out. He'd been three weeks from retirement. He'd been her friend. Herrera reached the tunnel mouth and paused. He looked back over his shoulder—not at her, but at the market behind him, like a man checking that he wasn't followed. Then he stepped into the dark. Quinn released the stairwell wall and moved forward into the market. She kept her baton low against her thigh, half-concealed beneath the hem of her jacket. The crowd parted around her with an indifference that felt deliberate. A vendor at the nearest stall—a thin man with intricate tattoos that seemed to shift and rearrange across his forearms—tracked her with flat, assessing eyes as she passed. "You're not from here," he said. Not a question. She didn't answer. Didn't slow. The tunnel entrance loomed ahead, an arch of soot-blackened brick leading into a passage where the lantern light didn't reach. The thin man's voice followed her. "No one goes down there without a reason. Bad ones included." Quinn reached the threshold. The air beyond was cooler and carried a sound she almost recognized—a low, rhythmic thrum, not mechanical, not natural, something in between that resonated in the bones of her inner ear. She held her baton at her side and stared into the black. Herrera's footsteps had already faded. She stepped through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"facade"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"standard"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count1
14
word"loomed"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"mechanical"
count1
17
word"resonated"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"footfall"
2"familiar"
3"scanning"
4"pulse"
5"facade"
6"flickered"
7"shimmered"
8"weight"
9"scanned"
10"warmth"
11"pulsed"
12"standard"
13"intricate"
14"loomed"
15"rhythmic"
16"mechanical"
17"resonated"
18"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences150
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences150
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1769
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1752
uniqueNames33
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Street"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Bateman1
Street4
Raven2
Nest2
Tuesday1
Vauxhall1
Greek1
Herrera9
United1
Kingdom1
Wardour1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Camden1
High1
Thursday1
Havers2
Met2
Victorian1
Portland1
Tube2
Marrakech1
Veil1
Market1
Quinn13
Morris3
Major1
Crimes1
Monday1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Havers"
6"Quinn"
7"Morris"
8"Major"
places
0"Soho"
1"Bateman"
2"Street"
3"Vauxhall"
4"Greek"
5"United"
6"Kingdom"
7"Wardour"
8"Tottenham"
9"Court"
10"Road"
11"Camden"
12"High"
13"Portland"
14"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore1
46.91% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite fear"
1"looked like a cross between a Marrakech s"
2"light that seemed to have weight, to fall like liquid onto the merchandise below"
3"tattoos that seemed to shift and rearrange across his forearms—tracked her with flat, assessing eyes as she passed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.565
wordCount1769
matches
0"not at her, but at the market behind him, like a man checking"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences152
matches
0"knew that place"
1"known that the"
2"checking that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean43.15
std28.18
cv0.653
sampleLengths
069
114
261
351
468
560
627
72
845
99
1062
1138
1291
1313
148
1567
1643
1751
186
19105
2081
2134
2226
2357
2492
2532
2689
2739
2850
2923
3084
3112
3254
3335
3465
359
3625
376
3811
3952
403
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"been transformed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs282
matches
0"was running"
1"was already drying"
2"was talking"
3"wasn't dealing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences152
ratio0.125
matches
0"Quinn's boots struck the slick cobblestones in a rhythm she hadn't felt since her army days—measured, controlled, every footfall placed with purpose despite the burning in her lungs."
1"The connection wasn't lost on her—her suspect had been circling back toward familiar ground before she'd flushed him from the alley behind Greek Street."
2"The gap opened onto Wardour Street and she caught a flash of him—olive skin slicked with rain, that Saint Christopher medallion catching light as it bounced against his chest—before he disappeared into a crowd spilling out of a late-night dim sum place."
3"No—past it."
4"He ducked into Camden High Street and the crowd thickened again—late Thursday revellers, tourists who didn't know enough to get out of the rain, rough sleepers huddled in doorways."
5"The street bled colour—red from a kebab shop, sickly yellow from a betting parlour, the blue pulse of a phone screen held by a kid in a doorway."
6"She pulled out her phone—one bar of signal that flickered to zero as she watched."
7"The stairwell beyond smelled of rust and stagnant water and something else—something sweet and chemical that she couldn't place."
8"She didn't carry a firearm—Met regs, and she'd never had cause to push for authorization."
9"The institutional tile gave way to older brick, then to stone that looked Victorian, then to something rougher still—hand-hewn blocks of Portland limestone stained with what might have been centuries of soot."
10"It was a Tube station—she could see the bones of it, the curved walls, the platform edge, the dark mouths of tunnels at either end—but it had been transformed into something that looked like a cross between a Marrakech souk and a fever dream."
11"Quinn's eyes caught details and her brain tried to file them and jam after jam built up: a woman whose fingers were too long by at least two knuckles; a man whose shadow moved independently of him; a child, maybe eight or nine, whose eyes reflected light like a cat's when he turned his head."
12"He was talking to the vendor—an old woman who sat on a high stool and watched him with an expression of wary familiarity."
13"Herrera wasn't dealing—he was restocking."
14"Not because of the strangeness—though that alone should have been enough—but because of what admitting this place existed would mean."
15"The report was a lie—she'd known that the day she read it."
16"He looked back over his shoulder—not at her, but at the market behind him, like a man checking that he wasn't followed."
17"A vendor at the nearest stall—a thin man with intricate tattoos that seemed to shift and rearrange across his forearms—tracked her with flat, assessing eyes as she passed."
18"The air beyond was cooler and carried a sound she almost recognized—a low, rhythmic thrum, not mechanical, not natural, something in between that resonated in the bones of her inner ear."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1785
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"strange hand-blown fixtures,"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.0257703081232493
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.004481792717086834
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean11.64
std10.26
cv0.882
sampleLengths
017
128
224
34
43
57
618
74
815
924
102
111
127
1311
1430
1513
1613
1742
184
193
2012
2113
225
232
2421
259
2611
275
282
292
303
3110
323
3329
349
352
362
3715
386
3928
409
411
4211
433
4423
455
462
4715
487
492
53.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners57
50.13% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"More like desperation."
1"Then he stepped into the"
ratio0.015
81.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences133
matches
0"She keyed her radio."
1"She knew that place."
2"He vaulted a low railing"
3"She pushed through bodies."
4"He crossed against traffic and"
5"She could see his breathing"
6"He wasn't trained for this."
7"He glanced back."
8"He ducked into Camden High"
9"She lost him at the"
10"She turned a slow circle,"
11"She wiped water from her"
12"It was closing."
13"She pulled out her phone—one"
14"She glanced at her worn"
15"She'd been off shift when"
16"She caught it with her"
17"She didn't carry a firearm—Met"
18"She was second-guessing that now"
19"She was below street level"
ratio0.346
50.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences133
matches
0"Quinn's boots struck the slick"
1"She keyed her radio."
2"Nothing but static."
3"The green neon of the"
4"She knew that place."
5"The connection wasn't lost on"
6"The file on her desk"
7"The file didn't explain why"
8"He vaulted a low railing"
9"Quinn followed without breaking stride,"
10"The gap opened onto Wardour"
11"She pushed through bodies."
12"Elbows and complaints."
13"Someone's umbrella caught her across"
14"Herrera was already across the"
15"He crossed against traffic and"
16"Quinn dodged the same van"
17"She could see his breathing"
18"He wasn't trained for this."
19"He glanced back."
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"He ducked into Camden High Street and the crowd thickened again—late Thursday revellers, tourists who didn't know enough to get out of the rain, rough sleepers …"
1"Rain running in channels down the sharp line of her jaw, soaking through her collar."
2"She'd been off shift when she spotted Herrera coming out of the Raven's Nest, and she'd made the decision to follow on foot instead of calling it in because cal…"
3"Emergency lighting that hadn't been emergency for decades, rewired now with a low amber glow that came from no bulb she recognized."
4"The institutional tile gave way to older brick, then to stone that looked Victorian, then to something rougher still—hand-hewn blocks of Portland limestone stai…"
5"It was a Tube station—she could see the bones of it, the curved walls, the platform edge, the dark mouths of tunnels at either end—but it had been transformed i…"
6"Lanterns hung from the arched ceiling on chains of black iron, casting pools of light that seemed to have weight, to fall like liquid onto the merchandise below…"
7"Every detective who'd worked the strange-adjacent cases had heard rumours."
8"A black market for things that weren't supposed to exist, operating somewhere underground, moving locations to avoid detection."
9"The air tasted of copper and anise and something that made the fillings in her back teeth ache."
10"He was talking to the vendor—an old woman who sat on a high stool and watched him with an expression of wary familiarity."
11"For the questions she'd been asking about DS Morris for three years now, the ones that had earned her a mandatory psych evaluation and a quiet demotion from Maj…"
12"The amber light still pulsed gently in those strange hand-blown fixtures, marking the path back to the street, to the rain, to a world that operated on rules sh…"
13"A vendor at the nearest stall—a thin man with intricate tattoos that seemed to shift and rearrange across his forearms—tracked her with flat, assessing eyes as …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.2257%