Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VS74RDRVK93TM6H8AP3VP

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Duration:
45.3s
Cost:
$0.033159
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, hammering the Camden pavements into a slick black mirror that threw the streetlights back at everything. Quinn ran. Her boots hit standing water and sent it spraying against the legs of her trousers, soaked through already, but she kept her eyes locked on the figure thirty metres ahead of her. He was fast. Younger than she'd expected when she'd first clocked him outside the Raven's Nest — early twenties, hooded, carrying a satchel strapped tight across his chest as though whatever was inside it mattered more than his own ribs. She'd been watching the bar for six days. Six days of cold takeaway coffee and a notebook that was getting fat with observations that didn't quite fit together, and then tonight he'd come out through the side door — not the main entrance, the side door, the one she hadn't put on her original sketch of the building — and moved north with his head down and his pace deliberate, and every instinct she had told her to follow. "Police! Stop!" He didn't stop. Of course he didn't stop. He cut left down a narrow passage between two shuttered shops, and Quinn went after him, her shoulder catching the brick as she cornered. The alley stank of wet cardboard and something else beneath it, something she couldn't name, faintly chemical and sweet. Her torch beam slashed across the walls. He was already at the far end, vaulting a low bollard with the kind of ease that suggested he'd run this route before. She gained on him crossing the main road. A taxi blared its horn as he ran straight through a gap in traffic and she followed half a second later, close enough to read the heel of his trainer as it disappeared around another corner. Her radio crackled against her hip. "Control, this is Quinn, I'm in foot pursuit, suspect heading north from the junction of—" She glanced up at a street sign, chest heaving. "Hartland Road and Camden Road. Request backup." Static. Then: "Copy, DI Quinn. Units en route. ETA eight minutes." Eight minutes. He'd be long gone. She ran harder. He ducked down a staircase she almost missed entirely — it sat behind a chain-link fence that had been pulled back just enough for a body to squeeze through, the metal glistening under the rain and folded aside with the familiarity of regular use. She registered it in her peripheral vision and wrenched herself to a stop, backtracking three steps. The fence. The staircase beyond it, descending steeply, swallowed by dark. A sign on the gate was half-eaten by rust, but she could make out the words: ENGINEERING ACCESS — LONDON UNDERGROUND — AUTHORISED PERSONNEL ONLY. Her torch swept the steps. No movement. The sound of his footsteps had vanished. Quinn stood at the threshold, rain running off the hood she hadn't bothered to put up, coursing along the channel of her collarbone and soaking into her shirt. She listened. From somewhere below came a sound that wasn't quite silence — a low murmur, the suggestion of voices, something that might have been music or might have been something else entirely, resonating through the concrete and iron like a pulse. She pulled out her phone. No signal. She tried the radio again — just hiss. The fence swayed in the wind. The staircase yawned. She'd been down rabbit holes before. Literally and figuratively — during the Ashworth case, during the mess in Bermondsey two years back that had cost her three weeks of sleep and a formal complaint from her superintendent. She knew the shape of situations that were bigger than they looked on the outside. DS Morris had known it too, for all the good it had done him. She pushed the thought away. The suspect had the satchel. The satchel had come out of the Raven's Nest through a door that didn't officially exist in any floor plan she could source. That was enough. That had to be enough. Quinn unclipped the strap on her holster, left it unclipped, and went through the fence. The steps were steep and unevenly worn, each one lower on the left side than the right, and she kept one hand on the wall as she descended. The sound grew. It separated itself out as she went deeper — voices, real ones, dozens of them layered over each other, and beneath them a persistent low hum she felt more in her sternum than her ears. The air changed too, warmer against her wet skin but threaded through with something dense and odd, like incense mixed with engine oil, like burnt sugar and iron. A glow appeared below. Not electric light — or not entirely. Something yellower, that moved in ways fluorescent strips didn't. She stopped on the final step. The abandoned station opened up before her, and it was not empty. The platforms had been transformed. Stalls ran the length of them on both sides, crammed against the curved tiled walls, overflowing with objects she couldn't immediately categorise — bottles and jars in colours that had no business being that saturated, rolls of something that looked like fabric but moved when no one touched it, cages that she initially thought were empty until she looked more carefully. A crowd moved between the stalls, perhaps eighty or a hundred people, though people felt like the wrong word for some of them once you started paying attention to the details. Lanterns hung from the old signage brackets along the vault of the ceiling. Voices haggled in languages she recognised and several she didn't. Her suspect stood fifteen metres away on the platform, handing the satchel to a man behind a trestle table. He hadn't looked back. Then someone else moved at the edge of her vision and she tracked it automatically, the way eighteen years had trained her, and she saw a face she recognised. Tomás Herrera. The former paramedic. He stood at a stall halfway down the platform, examining something small in his palm, the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat catching the lantern light. He looked up — not at her, at the stall holder — and said something she couldn't hear from this distance. Quinn didn't move. Her back was against the tiled wall of the stairwell entrance, one step below the platform level, still half in shadow. The weight of her badge in her breast pocket felt both very present and very useless. Eight minutes for backup. No signal. One exit that she knew of, and eighty-odd people — at least — between her and whatever her suspect had just handed over in that satchel. She looked at Herrera. She looked at the crowd. She looked at the exit behind her, the rectangle of dark stairwell at her back, the rain visible as a faint suggestion somewhere far above.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"footsteps"
2"silence"
3"pulse"
4"electric"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1147
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1114
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Raven2
Nest2
Quinn5
Static1
Eight2
Ashworth1
Bermondsey1
Morris1
Herrera2
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places
0"Bermondsey"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite fit together, and then tonight he'd come out through the side door — not the main entrance, the side door, the one she hadn't put on her original sketch of the building — and moved north with his head down and his pace deliberate, and every instinct she had told her to follow"
1"quite silence — a low murmur, the suggestion of voices, something that might have been music or might have been something else entirely, resonating through the concrete and iron like a pulse"
2"looked like fabric but moved when no one"
3"felt like the wrong word for some of th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1147
matches(empty)
83.33% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"cages that she"
1"exit that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean38.23
std33.99
cv0.889
sampleLengths
056
1119
22
38
473
550
631
711
86
93
1096
1114
1270
1315
149
1566
165
1736
1815
1994
2020
216
2212
23120
2423
2529
2652
2740
2832
2934
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"been pulled"
1"been transformed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was getting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences80
ratio0.15
matches
0"Younger than she'd expected when she'd first clocked him outside the Raven's Nest — early twenties, hooded, carrying a satchel strapped tight across his chest as though whatever was inside it mattered more than his own ribs."
1"Six days of cold takeaway coffee and a notebook that was getting fat with observations that didn't quite fit together, and then tonight he'd come out through the side door — not the main entrance, the side door, the one she hadn't put on her original sketch of the building — and moved north with his head down and his pace deliberate, and every instinct she had told her to follow."
2"He ducked down a staircase she almost missed entirely — it sat behind a chain-link fence that had been pulled back just enough for a body to squeeze through, the metal glistening under the rain and folded aside with the familiarity of regular use."
3"A sign on the gate was half-eaten by rust, but she could make out the words: ENGINEERING ACCESS — LONDON UNDERGROUND — AUTHORISED PERSONNEL ONLY."
4"From somewhere below came a sound that wasn't quite silence — a low murmur, the suggestion of voices, something that might have been music or might have been something else entirely, resonating through the concrete and iron like a pulse."
5"She tried the radio again — just hiss."
6"Literally and figuratively — during the Ashworth case, during the mess in Bermondsey two years back that had cost her three weeks of sleep and a formal complaint from her superintendent."
7"It separated itself out as she went deeper — voices, real ones, dozens of them layered over each other, and beneath them a persistent low hum she felt more in her sternum than her ears."
8"Not electric light — or not entirely."
9"Stalls ran the length of them on both sides, crammed against the curved tiled walls, overflowing with objects she couldn't immediately categorise — bottles and jars in colours that had no business being that saturated, rolls of something that looked like fabric but moved when no one touched it, cages that she initially thought were empty until she looked more carefully."
10"He looked up — not at her, at the stall holder — and said something she couldn't hear from this distance."
11"One exit that she knew of, and eighty-odd people — at least — between her and whatever her suspect had just handed over in that satchel."
95.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1101
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.045413260672116255
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013623978201634877
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean14.34
std13.94
cv0.972
sampleLengths
022
12
232
33
437
58
671
72
83
95
1024
1119
127
1323
148
1536
166
1724
187
191
2010
212
224
233
2444
2516
262
279
2825
295
302
317
3228
332
3440
355
362
378
386
393
406
4131
4215
4314
445
455
4623
473
485
4915
47.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.35
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Of course he didn't stop."
1"Literally and figuratively — during"
2"Then someone else moved at"
ratio0.044
43.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her boots hit standing water"
1"He was fast."
2"She'd been watching the bar"
3"He didn't stop."
4"He cut left down a"
5"Her torch beam slashed across"
6"He was already at the"
7"She gained on him crossing"
8"Her radio crackled against her"
9"She glanced up at a"
10"He'd be long gone."
11"She ran harder."
12"He ducked down a staircase"
13"She registered it in her"
14"Her torch swept the steps."
15"She pulled out her phone."
16"She tried the radio again"
17"She'd been down rabbit holes"
18"She knew the shape of"
19"She pushed the thought away."
ratio0.441
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Her boots hit standing water"
2"He was fast."
3"She'd been watching the bar"
4"He didn't stop."
5"He cut left down a"
6"The alley stank of wet"
7"Her torch beam slashed across"
8"He was already at the"
9"She gained on him crossing"
10"A taxi blared its horn"
11"Her radio crackled against her"
12"She glanced up at a"
13"He'd be long gone."
14"She ran harder."
15"He ducked down a staircase"
16"She registered it in her"
17"The staircase beyond it, descending"
18"A sign on the gate"
19"Her torch swept the steps."
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The rain came down in sheets, hammering the Camden pavements into a slick black mirror that threw the streetlights back at everything."
1"Younger than she'd expected when she'd first clocked him outside the Raven's Nest — early twenties, hooded, carrying a satchel strapped tight across his chest a…"
2"Six days of cold takeaway coffee and a notebook that was getting fat with observations that didn't quite fit together, and then tonight he'd come out through th…"
3"He was already at the far end, vaulting a low bollard with the kind of ease that suggested he'd run this route before."
4"He ducked down a staircase she almost missed entirely — it sat behind a chain-link fence that had been pulled back just enough for a body to squeeze through, th…"
5"From somewhere below came a sound that wasn't quite silence — a low murmur, the suggestion of voices, something that might have been music or might have been so…"
6"Stalls ran the length of them on both sides, crammed against the curved tiled walls, overflowing with objects she couldn't immediately categorise — bottles and …"
7"He stood at a stall halfway down the platform, examining something small in his palm, the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat catching the lantern light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She glanced, chest heaving"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.0621%