| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1840 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1840 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "cascading" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "complex" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "resolved" | | 14 | "flawless" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 154 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1855 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1562 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Southbank | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 4 | | Dymas | 1 | | Left | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Southbank" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Dymas" | | 8 | "Left" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.828 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.539 | | wordCount | 1855 | | matches | | 0 | "not instruments exactly, but a rhythmic clanging" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 34.35 | | std | 25.74 | | cv | 0.749 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 86 | | 23 | 73 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 62 | | 28 | 71 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 72 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 53 | | 36 | 73 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 106 | | 40 | 50 | | 41 | 43 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 89 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 255 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 154 | | ratio | 0.097 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the pleasant warmth she'd grown accustomed to — this was urgent, a coal pressed to skin through the thin cotton of her shirt." | | 1 | "No — not water." | | 2 | "Her lungs expanded with it and a flush crept across her cheeks — the involuntary, physical pleasure of a first bite of something extraordinary." | | 3 | "One moment the space beside Rory was empty; the next, the Seer stood there, wildflowers sprouting from the cracks in the reddish earth around her feet." | | 4 | "Row after impossible row cascading down hillsides that shouldn't have existed in any geometry Rory understood — slopes that curved upward at the edges, folding back toward themselves like the inner surface of a bowl." | | 5 | "The grapes — if that's what they were — hung in clusters the size of her head, and they moved." | | 6 | "Their branches drooped under the weight of fruit she didn't recognize — oblong things with skin like burnished metal, round globes that wept clear juice from their stems, small clustered berries that gave off a faint chiming sound when the sourceless wind stirred them." | | 7 | "Somewhere ahead, Rory heard music — not instruments exactly, but a rhythmic clanging and hissing punctuated by voices raised in what might have been song or might have been argument." | | 8 | "The smell that rose from it made her mouth flood with saliva — roasted meat and caramel and the sharp bite of alcohol all at once." | | 9 | "Right climbed toward a ridge where stone structures crouched — low, heavy buildings with smoke curling from square chimneys." | | 10 | "The smoke from the chimneys carried scents Rory couldn't separate — dozens of them layered together in a complex, shifting architecture of aroma." | | 11 | "What Rory had taken for crude huts resolved into something far more elaborate — a compound of interconnected kitchens, each one open on at least one side, each one blazing with fire and motion." | | 12 | "Some decidedly not — taller, with too many joints in their fingers, skin that shifted between colors like the orchard leaves." | | 13 | "His technique was flawless — precise, economical, the motion of someone who had performed it ten thousand times." | | 14 | "The pendant pulsed against her chest — faster now, insistent." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1062 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.038606403013182675 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007532956685499058 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 154 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 154 | | mean | 12.05 | | std | 9.22 | | cv | 0.766 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 72.29% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.461038961038961 | | totalSentences | 154 | | uniqueOpeners | 71 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Just that deep, golden glow" | | 1 | "Just a single syllable, soft" | | 2 | "Somewhere ahead, Rory heard music" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the silver chain" | | 1 | "Her bare feet made no" | | 2 | "She tilted her head, lavender" | | 3 | "She still half-expected to wake" | | 4 | "she said, and stepped forward" | | 5 | "She hadn't realized she'd been" | | 6 | "Her lungs expanded with it" | | 7 | "She pressed the back of" | | 8 | "They bloomed and died in" | | 9 | "Their branches drooped under the" | | 10 | "They started down a path" | | 11 | "She chose not to look" | | 12 | "Her stomach clenched with a" | | 13 | "She'd *wanted* it." | | 14 | "Her body responded before her" | | 15 | "She gripped the Fae blade's" | | 16 | "Her head cleared." | | 17 | "He didn't look up." | | 18 | "They carried platters piled with" | | 19 | "Her expression had gone distant," |
| | ratio | 0.222 | |
| 58.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory's" | | 1 | "She pulled the silver chain" | | 2 | "A heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 3 | "Nyx's voice drifted from somewhere" | | 4 | "The rift point hung between" | | 5 | "Isolde stood at the edge," | | 6 | "Her bare feet made no" | | 7 | "She tilted her head, lavender" | | 8 | "Rory closed her fist around" | | 9 | "The heat spread through her" | | 10 | "Nyx rippled back into solidity," | | 11 | "Rory touched the Fae dagger" | | 12 | "She still half-expected to wake" | | 13 | "she said, and stepped forward" | | 14 | "The rift swallowed her like" | | 15 | "Water was cold, indifferent." | | 16 | "This was warm and it" | | 17 | "The membrane of the Veil" | | 18 | "That was the first thing." | | 19 | "A sky the color of" |
| | ratio | 0.803 | |
| 85.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "As though this place gave" | | 1 | "Before them, the landscape of" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 17.54% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the silver chain free and the Heartstone swung loose, its crimson facets throwing light that had no source." | | 1 | "Row after impossible row cascading down hillsides that shouldn't have existed in any geometry Rory understood — slopes that curved upward at the edges, folding …" | | 2 | "The vines were thick as a person's arm, gnarled and black-barked, heavy with fruit that ranged from deep purple to a luminous, fleshy gold." | | 3 | "Their branches drooped under the weight of fruit she didn't recognize — oblong things with skin like burnished metal, round globes that wept clear juice from th…" | | 4 | "A city, or something that served as one, sprawling across a valley floor that shimmered with heat." | | 5 | "The soil was the color of rust and soft under Rory's boots, yielding slightly with each step as though it was packed organic matter rather than mineral." | | 6 | "Her body responded before her mind could intervene: skin flushing, pupils dilating, a tightness in her chest that had nothing to do with fear and everything to …" | | 7 | "Through the nearest opening she saw a figure hunched over a cutting block the size of a dining table, working a cleaver through something that wept purple." | | 8 | "His technique was flawless — precise, economical, the motion of someone who had performed it ten thousand times." | | 9 | "A smaller figure scurried past him carrying a bowl of something that writhed, and the man's hand shot out and snatched a piece of it without breaking his rhythm…" |
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| 31.25% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's voice drifted, though their body had already thinned to a ribbon of dark against the shimmering tear in the air" | | 1 | "Nyx materialized, their shadow-body denser here, more defined" | | 2 | "Nyx moved, their form sliding across the reddish soil" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She pressed (press)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |