Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VVPPFQ86R6W2FGW5FWAF9

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.005504
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave a solid, reluctant clunk. Rory stood in the dim hallway, one hand still on the cold brass, the other holding a half-eaten slice of cold pizza. Ptolemy the tabby wove between her ankles, his purr a rusty engine of expectation. The man on the other side of the threshold was a study in charcoal and platinum. Lucien Moreau. The sight of him was a physical punch, low in her gut, stealing her breath. He filled the space, his presence somehow making the narrow hallway of Eva’s Brick Lane flat feel both claustrophobic and vast. He leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber like aged whiskey, one black as a starless void—taking her in with an unnerving, practiced slowness. He looked exactly the same. Impeccable. A tailored charcoal suit that probably cost more than her entire wardrobe, the platinum blond hair slicked back from a sharp, handsome face. He smelled of cold night air, expensive sandalwood, and something faintly metallic, like ozone after a storm. “Rory,” he said. His voice was a low baritone, smooth as poured velvet, with that faint, untraceable accent that was neither fully French nor entirely of this world. She didn’t move. The pizza crust was going limp in her hand. “You’re supposed to be in Marseille.” The words came out flat, a statement, not a question. She’d made it her business to know. After everything, she’d needed to know where he was, so she could be anywhere else. “Plans change.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips, not quite reaching his eyes. “Aren’t you going to invite me in? It’s drafty out here, and I believe your feline overlord wishes to make an escape.” He glanced down at Ptolemy, who was now sniffing the polished toe of his Oxford shoe with intense suspicion. Rory’s mind raced, cool-headedness warring with a surge of old, hot feeling. Attraction, yes, a humiliating, instant pull she thought she’d buried. Hurt, sharper and more familiar, a clean, surgical slice. And anger, simmering beneath it all. He had no right. He’d forfeited any right to stand in her doorway, looking at her like that, nine months ago. “Eva’s not here,” she said, instead of answering. She made no move to widen the door. “I’m aware. I’m not here for Eva.” His amber eye seemed to catch the weak hall light, glinting. The black one remained depthless, absorbing it. “I’m here for you.” The simplicity of it, the arrogance, made her jaw tighten. She thought of the three deadbolts behind her, of Evan, of the careful, quiet life she’d been stitching together in London. Delivery shifts for Yu-Fei, the quiet flat above Silas’s bar, the blessed, supernatural-free normalcy she’d craved. Lucien was a walking, talking breach of that peace. He was the embodiment of the world she’d asked him to help her leave behind. “We said everything that needed saying,” she said, her voice tighter now. “On the phone. From a safe, continent-wide distance.” “Did we?” He shifted his weight onto the cane, a minute gesture, but she caught it. The old injury, a souvenir from a demon’s talon in Prague, still bothered him in the damp. The observation was an unwelcome intimacy, a piece of knowledge she’d retained against her will. “I recall a great deal of shouting. Mostly from you. And then a dial tone. That is not saying everything, *ma chère*. That is saying nothing, very loudly.” A flush crept up her neck. She remembered the shouting. The cold, detached calm on his face as she’d laid out her reasons, her fear, her need for a clean break from the shadows. He’d offered her a job. A partnership. She’d called him monstrous. The word had hung between them, toxic and final. “What do you want, Lucien?” The question was a surrender. She couldn’t stand here in the doorway forever, holding pizza, with Ptolemy now attempting to climb his tailored trouser leg. “To talk. Inside. Five minutes.” He held up a hand, gloveless, long-fingered. “You have my word, no business, no underworld intrigues. Just… talk.” His word. Once, that had been a currency she trusted implicitly. Now it felt like a counterfeit note. But the alternative—slamming the door in his face—felt childish, and Rory Carter was not childish. She was cool-headed. Intelligent. She could handle five minutes with a ghost. With a sigh that felt dredged from her bones, she stepped back, pulling the door wide. “Five minutes. And if Ptolemy ruins your suit, that’s your problem.” He stepped over the threshold, and the flat seemed to shrink. He brought with him the scent of the outside, the aura of power and otherness that clung to him like a second skin. He closed the door behind him with a soft, definitive click, engaging the deadbolts with practiced ease. The sound was unnervingly final. Rory retreated into the main room, a chaotic nest of books and paper. She dumped her pizza on a crowded side table, next to a precarious stack of Eva’s medieval bestiaries. She didn’t offer him a seat; every surface was occupied. She crossed her arms over her chest, a defensive gesture she immediately regretted. Lucien took in the room, his gaze lingering on the scrolls, the coded notes, the map of London dotted with Eva’s pins. “She’s researching the Thames ley-line confluence,” he observed. “You didn’t come here to discuss Eva’s thesis.” “No.” He turned that dual-colored gaze back to her. It was deeply unsettling, being seen by two such different eyes. One human, warm, assessing. The other ancient, hungry, knowing. “I came because I heard about Evan.” The air left the room. All the careful composure she’d built, the cool-headed facade, cracked. Her left wrist, where the small crescent scar lay, gave a phantom throb. “How?” The word was a whisper. “I make it my business to know things about people who matter.” He said it quietly, no trace of smugness. “I know he was released from prison three weeks ago. I know he’s been asking questions in Cardiff. I know he has friends in London with poor taste and flexible morals.” The flat, which had felt like a sanctuary, now felt like a paper fortress. The three deadbolts seemed laughable. She’d known Evan was out. Her father, the barrister, had sent a terse, worried email. But she’d told herself London was big, she was anonymous, she was safe. Hearing the facts laid out in Lucien’s calm, precise tone made it all terrifyingly real. “So what?” she challenged, anger flaring to cover the fear. “You’re here to… what? Protect me? Offer your services as a supernatural bodyguard? I left that world, Lucien. I left *you*. I don’t want your kind of help.” “What is my kind of help, Rory?” he asked, taking a single step closer. The space between them crackled. “Efficient? Permanent?” “Illegal. Brutal. Demon-adjacent.” She threw the words at him like stones. He flinched, just a tiny tightening at the corner of his mouth. The cane tapped once on the floorboards. “I see the word still comes easily to you.” “You called me a coward,” she shot back, the old wound raw. “For wanting out. For being scared.” “I called you pragmatic,” he corrected, his voice dropping. “I was angry. You were leaving. I said things to push you away, to make it easier for you to go. It was… poorly done.” The admission stunned her into silence. Lucien Moreau did not apologize. He negotiated, he manipulated, he orchestrated outcomes. He did not admit to being ‘poorly done’. “Why are you really here?” she asked again, the fight draining out of her, leaving exhaustion and a confusing ache. “Because when I heard about Evan,” he said, his gaze dropping for a moment to her crossed arms, as if he could see the old scar through her sweater, “my first thought was not of business, or debts, or the delicate balance of power in Southwark.” He looked up, and the amber eye was fierce, the black one unreadable. “My first thought was that if he laid a finger on you, I would unmake him. Slowly. And that this impulse was… inconvenient. And entirely personal.” The confession hung in the book-heavy air. It was the most honest, most vulnerable thing he’d ever said to her. It acknowledged everything they’d never said: the attraction that had sparked between them during that fraught week in Paris, the late-night conversations over bad brandy, the way his hand had once, just once, brushed the small of her back to guide her through a crowd, and she’d felt it like a brand. It acknowledged the hurt of her leaving, and the unsaid thing that had been growing between them before she’d severed it. “Inconvenient,” she repeated, her voice barely audible. “Profoundly.” He took another step. He was close enough now that she could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the precise cut of his collar, the pulse in his throat. “I told myself you made your choice. You wanted normal. A human life. I am… not that. I cannot be that. So I stayed away. But this threat… it is human. Brutishly, stupidly human. And it is a threat to you. So here I am, being inconvenient.” Rory uncrossed her arms. Her hands felt useless. She wanted to touch the smooth ivory of his cane, to feel the wool of his suit, to see if his skin was as warm as it looked. She wanted to push him back out into the night. “What are you proposing?” she asked, her practical mind grasping for a framework, a deal, something to structure this dizzying freefall. “Nothing,” he said. “I am not proposing. I am informing. I have people watching your usual routes—the restaurant, Silas’s bar, this flat. Discreetly. They will report any sign of him or his associates. You will not see them. You will go about your life.” “And in return?” There was always a return with Lucien. He smiled then, a real one, small and bittersweet, that softened the severe line of his mouth. “In return, you tolerate my presence for five minutes, which…” he glanced at a slim, antique watch on his wrist, “…have now elapsed. And you consider, perhaps, that not all monsters are what they seem. Some just have… inconvenient timing, and worse manners.” He gave a slight, formal nod and turned to go, his cane tapping softly towards the door. “Lucien.” He stopped, hand on the deadbolt, but didn’t turn. “Thank you,” she said. It was inadequate, a tiny bridge over a canyon of unsaid things. He looked over his shoulder, the amber eye catching hers. “*Je t'en prie*, Rory.” *You’re welcome*. The French was soft, intimate. Then he was gone, the door closing with a whisper, the deadbolts sliding home from the outside. Rory stood in the sudden, immense silence of the flat. Ptolemy meowed plaintively. The scent of sandalwood and ozone lingered in the air, a ghost in the room. She looked at her left wrist, at the pale crescent scar. For the first time since she’d seen Evan’s release notice, the fear was edged with something else. Not safety. Something more dangerous. A faint, treacherous warmth. The memory of a black and amber gaze, and the word ‘inconvenient’, spoken like a confession.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she asked again [again]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.038
86.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1895
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
2"really"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1895
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"raced"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"normalcy"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"practiced ease"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"coded"
count1
10
word"facade"
count1
11
word"throb"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"sanctuary"
count1
14
word"efficient"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
16
word"unreadable"
count1
17
word"pulse"
count1
18
word"framework"
count1
19
word"structure"
count1
20
word"treacherous"
count1
21
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"raced"
2"familiar"
3"simmering"
4"glinting"
5"normalcy"
6"weight"
7"practiced ease"
8"chaotic"
9"coded"
10"facade"
11"throb"
12"whisper"
13"sanctuary"
14"efficient"
15"silence"
16"unreadable"
17"pulse"
18"framework"
19"structure"
20"treacherous"
21"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences130
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords8
totalWords1890
ratio0.004
matches
0"ma chère"
1"you"
2"Je t'en prie"
3"You’re welcome"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1413
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Eva3
Brick1
Lane1
French2
Ptolemy4
Oxford1
Rory6
Evan3
London3
Yu-Fei1
Silas1
Prague1
Carter1
Lucien6
Paris1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Carter"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Oxford"
3"London"
4"Prague"
5"Paris"
globalScore1
windowScore1
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite reaching his eyes"
1"felt like a counterfeit note"
2"felt like a sanctuary, now felt like a"
3"felt like a paper fortress"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.529
wordCount1890
matches
0"neither fully French nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean40.21
std26.02
cv0.647
sampleLengths
044
1127
228
350
456
558
616
729
871
920
1076
1154
1230
1323
1445
1527
1656
1754
1830
198
2036
2134
2251
2362
2438
2521
2611
2728
2818
2934
3026
3120
3285
3393
347
3581
3646
3721
3844
3910
4060
4117
421
439
4416
4538
4681
97.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences130
matches
0"being seen"
1"was gone"
2"was edged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs230
matches
0"was going"
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences147
ratio0.02
matches
0"He leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber like aged whiskey, one black as a starless void—taking her in with an unnerving, practiced slowness."
1"But the alternative—slamming the door in his face—felt childish, and Rory Carter was not childish."
2"She didn’t offer him a seat; every surface was occupied."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1159
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"blessed, supernatural-free normalcy"
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03537532355478861
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.015530629853321829
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean12.86
std9.91
cv0.771
sampleLengths
08
122
214
316
42
515
621
727
85
91
1023
1117
123
1325
143
159
1616
177
1815
1915
2041
2112
2210
239
246
254
2617
278
288
2918
307
314
3210
3321
3416
359
3615
3712
388
3916
4017
4115
4228
436
444
4524
465
472
484
499
49.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.36054421768707484
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners53
56.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences119
matches
0"Once, that had been a"
1"Then he was gone, the"
ratio0.017
8.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount63
totalSentences119
matches
0"He filled the space, his"
1"He leaned lightly on his"
2"He looked exactly the same."
3"He smelled of cold night"
4"His voice was a low"
5"She didn’t move."
6"She’d made it her business"
7"He glanced down at Ptolemy,"
8"He had no right."
9"He’d forfeited any right to"
10"she said, instead of answering"
11"She made no move to"
12"His amber eye seemed to"
13"She thought of the three"
14"He was the embodiment of"
15"she said, her voice tighter"
16"He shifted his weight onto"
17"She remembered the shouting."
18"He’d offered her a job."
19"She’d called him monstrous."
ratio0.529
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences119
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave a"
1"Rory stood in the dim"
2"Ptolemy the tabby wove between"
3"The man on the other"
4"The sight of him was"
5"He filled the space, his"
6"He leaned lightly on his"
7"He looked exactly the same."
8"A tailored charcoal suit that"
9"He smelled of cold night"
10"His voice was a low"
11"She didn’t move."
12"The pizza crust was going"
13"The words came out flat,"
14"She’d made it her business"
15"A ghost of a smile"
16"He glanced down at Ptolemy,"
17"Rory’s mind raced, cool-headedness warring"
18"Attraction, yes, a humiliating, instant"
19"He had no right."
ratio0.882
42.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His voice was a low baritone, smooth as poured velvet, with that faint, untraceable accent that was neither fully French nor entirely of this world."
1"It acknowledged everything they’d never said: the attraction that had sparked between them during that fraught week in Paris, the late-night conversations over …"
2"He smiled then, a real one, small and bittersweet, that softened the severe line of his mouth."
28.85% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"a smile touched, not quite reaching his eyes"
1"she said, her voice tighter now"
2"she shot back, the old wound raw"
3"he corrected, his voice dropping"
4"she repeated, her voice barely audible"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she challenged (challenge)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
3"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.609
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.174
81.1809%