Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VX948J2VTCDQVP6W27XPM

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.005010
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk. Rory pulled the door open, her free hand still wrapped around the neck of a half-empty bottle of cider. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway. The dim hall light caught the platinum slick of his hair, the sharp line of his jaw. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, a charcoal suit tailored to within an inch of its life. He looked like he’d stepped out of a boardroom, not the stale-carpet hallway of a Brick Lane walk-up. Her grip tightened on the bottle. “You’re kidding.” “Aurora.” His voice was a low rumble, the French accent softened by years in London but still there, a ghost at the edges of his words. “It’s Rory.” She didn’t move. The tabby, Ptolemy, wound itself around her ankles, then darted back into the jungle of paper. “May I come in?” “No.” He didn’t flinch. His heterochromatic eyes held hers—one amber, one black as a starless night. They tracked the minute tremor in her hand, the way her shoulders had gone rigid. “It’s important.” “Everything with you is important. World-ending. Crucial.” She took a swig from the bottle, the cider sour on her tongue. “My evening isn’t. I’m busy.” “Reading?” His gaze drifted past her, over the avalanches of books on the sofa, the scrolls unfurled across the floor, Eva’s chaotic research. “Or drinking alone?” “Both. It’s a versatile skill set.” She started to shut the door. The tip of his cane met the wood, not with force, but with a finality that stopped it. “Five minutes.” “You lost your five minutes six months ago, Luc. When you walked out of Silas’s bar and didn’t look back.” The amber eye seemed to glow in the shadows. “You told me to leave.” “And you’re so good at following instructions.” She released the door, turned her back on him, and walked into the flat. Let him follow or not. The decision was his, and she hated that it still felt like hers, too. She heard the quiet click of the latch, the tap of his cane on the floorboards. He closed the door, engaging the top deadbolt with a smooth, practiced motion. “Making yourself at home?” “The locks are for her protection. They should be used.” He remained by the door, a statue in expensive wool. “You look well.” “Liar.” She set the bottle down on a stack of grimoires. “You look the same. Which is the problem.” A faint smile touched his mouth. “You haven’t changed either. Still delivering for Madame Cheung?” “Pays the rent. What do you want?” He moved then, a slow, deliberate path through the clutter. He didn’t touch anything, but his presence seemed to rearrange the air. Ptolemy emerged from behind a bookcase and stared, unblinking. “I need a retrieval,” Lucien said. “A small item. From a private collection in Mayfair.” Rory barked a laugh. “Call a thief.” “I did.” He stopped a few feet from her. The scent of him reached her—sandalwood and cold stone, something utterly inhuman beneath the cologne. “You are the thief I am calling.” “I’m a delivery girl.” “You are a woman who walked away from a law degree, fled an abusive man, and carved a life out of nothing in a city that eats the hopeful for breakfast. You have a mind that solves puzzles in the spaces between breaths. And you have, whether you admit it or not, a particular set of skills honed in Silas’s employ.” She folded her arms, the gesture pulling her shirt tight across her shoulders. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched. “Silas and I are square. I don’t do that work anymore.” “This is different.” “It’s always different with you. And then it’s exactly the same.” She turned to face the window, the neon sign of the curry house below painting the room in garish red and green. “Why me?” “Because the item is warded. Human magic, but intricate. It requires a touch… a sensibility. Someone who can think around corners.” “And you know all about corners, don’t you?” His silence was heavier than any reply. She glanced back. He was watching her, his face a mask of perfect control. But she saw the slight tension in the hand gripping the cane, the almost imperceptible tightening of his jaw. He needed this. He needed her. The hurt was a cold, hard stone in her chest. Six months of silence. Six months of wondering if she’d imagined the heat of his hand on the small of her back, the way his laughter felt like a secret. Then he shows up, needing a favor. “What’s the item?” “A ledger. Bound in pale leather.” “What’s in it?” “Names. Transactions. The kind that get people killed.” “Demon people?” “All kinds of people.” He took a step closer. The space between them crackled. “The collector is a dilettante. He doesn’t know what he has. The security is electronic, mundane. The ward is on the ledger itself. A simple aversion charm, keyed to the supernatural. It repels anything with a trace of the other realms. Makes their skin crawl, their vision blur. They can’t get near it.” “And you can’t get near it.” “My heritage makes it… disagreeable.” He said it without shame. A fact. “A human could pick it up, but a human wouldn’t understand the ward, wouldn’t know how to dismantle it without triggering God knows what. You are the in-between.” “Half-human, half-mess.” The old bitterness tasted familiar. “Fully capable.” Another step. She could see the individual threads of his silver tie, the dark fan of his lashes. “I will pay you. Triple your usual rate.” “I don’t have a usual rate for breaking into Mayfair mansions.” “Name your price, then.” Her heart hammered against her ribs. It wasn’t about the money. It was about him standing here, in Eva’s cluttered flat, bringing the past back with the chill of the evening on his coat. It was about the way her body remembered his before her mind could protest. “Why did you really leave?” The question was out, raw and unplanned. He went very still. “You told me to.” “I was angry. You said things.” “So did you.” “You said my world was small. That I was playing at something I didn’t understand.” “And you said I was a monster. That the demon in me would always win.” His voice was flat, stripped of emotion. “We were both right, perhaps.” She flinched. “I didn’t mean—” “You did.” He closed the final distance. He didn’t touch her, but she felt the heat of him, the magnetic pull that had always been there, a dangerous, dizzying force. “You saw the truth, Aurora. And it frightened you. It frightens you still.” Her breath hitched. “Don’t.” “Don’t what? Don’t say what we both know?” His amber eye burned. The black one was depthless, swallowing the light. “You look at me and you see the father I never knew. You see the darkness that might seep out. You see a risk.” “And you see a human. Fragile. Temporary.” The words were a whisper. “I see you.” His hand came up, stopping just short of her cheek. “Brilliant. Stubborn. Alive in a way that scorches everything around you. I stayed away because you asked. Because my world is full of things that would snuff that light out without a second thought. And I am one of those things.” She turned her face into the space near his palm. Not a touch, but an acknowledgment. “You didn’t stay away tonight.” “No.” The word was a confession. “I need the ledger. But I also needed to see you. To know if the silence had healed the wound.” “Has it?” “No.” The single syllable hung between them. Ptolemy meowed, a plaintive sound in the quiet. “The job,” she said, her voice unsteady. “If I do it. We do it clean. Professional.” “Of course.” “No history. No… anything else.” His hand fell back to his side. The professional mask slid back into place, but it was cracked now, a hairline fracture she could see. “Agreed.” “I want the details. Floor plans, schedules, everything.” “I have them in the car.” She nodded, wrapping her arms around herself again. The attraction was a live wire, buzzing under her skin. The hurt was a fresh bruise, aching with his proximity. And the unsaid things—they crowded the room, thicker than the dust on Eva’s books. “Wait downstairs,” she said. “I’ll get my coat.” He inclined his head, a gesture that was almost old-world courtesy. He turned, his cane tapping a soft rhythm back toward the door. He paused with his hand on the knob. “The scar on your wrist,” he said, without looking back. “You got it falling out of an apple tree. You were seven. Your father told you to wait for the ladder, but you never waited for anything.” She stared at the pale crescent on her skin. “How did you—” “You told me. The night before I left.” He opened the door. The hall light framed him for a moment, a sharp silhouette against the gloom. “You were laughing. You said it was your first lesson in gravity.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.247
leniency0.494
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1537
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"really"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1537
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"intricate"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"charm"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"intricate"
2"silence"
3"perfect"
4"tension"
5"charm"
6"familiar"
7"chill"
8"magnetic"
9"whisper"
10"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"without second thought"
count1
highlights
0"without a second thought"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
94.16% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1534
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount855
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
French1
London1
Ptolemy3
Eva3
Let1
Rory2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like he’d stepped out of a boardro"
1"felt like hers, too"
2"felt like a secret"
69.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.304
wordCount1534
matches
0"not with force, but with a finality"
1"Not a touch, but an acknowledgment"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean19.92
std16.13
cv0.81
sampleLengths
028
157
28
326
421
54
61
732
825
926
1012
1120
1220
1314
1440
1529
164
1723
1819
1915
207
2131
2215
237
2431
254
2661
2733
283
2935
3021
318
327
3339
3447
353
366
373
388
392
4067
416
4240
437
4428
4511
464
4748
4812
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs134
matches
0"was watching"
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences147
ratio0.02
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes held hers—one amber, one black as a starless night."
1"The scent of him reached her—sandalwood and cold stone, something utterly inhuman beneath the cologne."
2"And the unsaid things—they crowded the room, thicker than the dust on Eva’s books."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount863
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02549246813441483
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002317497103128621
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean10.44
std8.97
cv0.86
sampleLengths
09
119
25
317
417
518
66
72
826
95
1016
114
121
133
1412
1515
162
1720
185
1923
203
2112
2218
232
2420
259
265
2721
285
2914
3016
3113
324
3320
343
3511
368
376
389
397
4010
4112
429
436
449
454
463
479
4815
497
50.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.36054421768707484
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners53
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then he shows up, needing"
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences83
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1"He looked like he’d stepped"
2"Her grip tightened on the"
3"His voice was a low"
4"She didn’t move"
5"He didn’t flinch."
6"His heterochromatic eyes held hers—one"
7"They tracked the minute tremor"
8"She took a swig from"
9"His gaze drifted past her,"
10"She started to shut the"
11"She released the door, turned"
12"She heard the quiet click"
13"He closed the door, engaging"
14"He remained by the door,"
15"She set the bottle down"
16"He moved then, a slow,"
17"He didn’t touch anything, but"
18"He stopped a few feet"
19"She folded her arms, the"
ratio0.602
2.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences83
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway."
3"The dim hall light caught"
4"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
5"He looked like he’d stepped"
6"Her grip tightened on the"
7"His voice was a low"
8"She didn’t move"
9"The tabby, Ptolemy, wound itself"
10"He didn’t flinch."
11"His heterochromatic eyes held hers—one"
12"They tracked the minute tremor"
13"She took a swig from"
14"His gaze drifted past her,"
15"She started to shut the"
16"The tip of his cane"
17"The amber eye seemed to"
18"She released the door, turned"
19"The decision was his, and"
ratio0.916
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He didn’t touch her, but she felt the heat of him, the magnetic pull that had always been there, a dangerous, dizzying force."
1"He inclined his head, a gesture that was almost old-world courtesy."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice unsteady"
1"he said, without looking back"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.6109%