| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Farrer said carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 76.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1512 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 73.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1512 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "resolved" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1528 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1285 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 10 | | Morris | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Transit | 2 | | Authority | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | Londoners | 1 | | Edwardian | 1 | | Farrer | 7 | | Eva | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Londoners" | | 3 | "Farrer" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite costume — a long dark coat, boots that had been resoled multiple times" |
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| 3.66% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.963 | | wordCount | 1528 | | matches | | 0 | "not the usual tags, but symbols, concentric" | | 1 | "not north, not anywhere the compass should be pointing, but directly downward, as if dragged by an invisible weight bene" | | 2 | "not anywhere the compass should be pointing, but directly downward, as if dragged by an invisible weight bene" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 28.3 | | std | 27.1 | | cv | 0.958 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 91 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 81 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 88 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 57 | | 27 | 85 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 82 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 55 | | 44 | 86 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 79.68% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "being interviewed" | | 1 | "was crouched" | | 2 | "been resoled" | | 3 | "was etched " | | 4 | "been disturbed" | | 5 | "been emptied" | | 6 | "been pulled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "was writing" | | 1 | "was sitting" | | 2 | "was shaking " |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "The call had come in at 02:14, and Quinn had been awake for all of it — not because of any detective's instinct, but because sleep had stopped being reliable sometime around the third anniversary of Morris's death." | | 1 | "The entrance was unremarkable — a steel maintenance door set into a brick arch on the canal side of Camden, the kind of threshold Londoners had learned not to see over a century of layering new city over old." | | 2 | "Her torch found graffiti she didn't recognise — not the usual tags, but symbols, concentric and layered, cut into the brick rather than sprayed." | | 3 | "The scene-of-crime team had brought portable floods, yes, but there was other light too — a low amber glow emanating from sources Quinn couldn't immediately place, distributed along the platform at intervals like lanterns, except there were no lanterns." | | 4 | "The man was slight, dressed in clothes that were well-made and old-fashioned in a way that wasn't quite costume — a long dark coat, boots that had been resoled multiple times." | | 5 | "The amber light sources resolved, on closer inspection, into small glass vessels set into recessed alcoves in the wall — filled with something that burned without visible flame." | | 6 | "She had thought initially that what lined the far wall were transit equipment boxes — the kind of battered metal caging that stored track maintenance kit." | | 7 | "Some of them bare, items cleared in haste by the look of it — the dust displaced, ghost-rings where objects had stood." | | 8 | "And there — near the bottom of the bag, separated in its own smaller evidence sleeve — a compass." | | 9 | "The face was etched — not worn, deliberately etched — with markings arranged around the cardinal points like a diagram she'd seen somewhere before and couldn't immediately place." | | 10 | "In the patches furthest from the body, in the spaces between the vacant shelves and the wall, it had been disturbed recently and repeatedly — overlapping prints, back and forth, dozens of them." | | 11 | "She was shaking — fine, continuous trembling, the kind that came from cold or shock or the effort of keeping very still for a very long time." |
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| 86.77% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1280 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "fine grey-white powder" | | 1 | "stark against white skin." |
| | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.04140625 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01796875 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 13.17 | | std | 11.39 | | cv | 0.865 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 60.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.4224137931034483 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 42.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they moved to Quinn." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 40.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been sitting at her" | | 1 | "It took three different keys" | | 2 | "She pulled on gloves and" | | 3 | "Her torch found graffiti she" | | 4 | "She ran her gloved finger" | | 5 | "She filed that and kept" | | 6 | "he said, by way of" | | 7 | "He stood up, knees clicking" | | 8 | "His face was turned toward" | | 9 | "She looked at his hands." | | 10 | "She stood and swept her" | | 11 | "She'd taken them for emergency" | | 12 | "She looked at Farrer." | | 13 | "He looked mildly annoyed." | | 14 | "She didn't answer him, because" | | 15 | "She had thought initially that" | | 16 | "She moved toward them, keeping" | | 17 | "She crouched again and went" | | 18 | "She held it up in" | | 19 | "She thought about the door," |
| | ratio | 0.449 | |
| 17.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The call had come in" | | 1 | "She'd been sitting at her" | | 2 | "Body discovered by a maintenance" | | 3 | "Quinn had pulled on her" | | 4 | "The entrance was unremarkable —" | | 5 | "It took three different keys" | | 6 | "The door gave a long," | | 7 | "She pulled on gloves and" | | 8 | "The staircase was narrow and" | | 9 | "Her torch found graffiti she" | | 10 | "She ran her gloved finger" | | 11 | "The platform opened up below" | | 12 | "That was the first wrong" | | 13 | "The scene-of-crime team had brought" | | 14 | "She filed that and kept" | | 15 | "The body was at the" | | 16 | "he said, by way of" | | 17 | "He stood up, knees clicking" | | 18 | "Quinn crouched where Farrer had" | | 19 | "The man was slight, dressed" |
| | ratio | 0.885 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 43.19% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Body discovered by a maintenance contractor who'd then promptly vomited on the platform and was now being interviewed in a Transit Authority van somewhere above…" | | 1 | "The man was slight, dressed in clothes that were well-made and old-fashioned in a way that wasn't quite costume — a long dark coat, boots that had been resoled …" | | 2 | "But her torch found edges that were too deliberate, arrangements that were too considered." | | 3 | "The casing had gone green-grey with age, a fine verdigris eating into the metalwork in a pattern that was almost decorative." | | 4 | "Pointed not north, not anywhere the compass should be pointing, but directly downward, as if dragged by an invisible weight beneath the floor." | | 5 | "She was shaking — fine, continuous trembling, the kind that came from cold or shock or the effort of keeping very still for a very long time." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He stood up, knees clicking" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.281 | | leniency | 0.563 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |