Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VXRCBFX8RYJP96QZ9D2FJ

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Duration:
54.5s
Cost:
$0.039165
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The call had come in at 02:14, and Quinn had been awake for all of it — not because of any detective's instinct, but because sleep had stopped being reliable sometime around the third anniversary of Morris's death. She'd been sitting at her kitchen table with cold tea and a crossword she couldn't finish when her mobile lit up the darkness. Abandoned Underground infrastructure, the report said. Body discovered by a maintenance contractor who'd then promptly vomited on the platform and was now being interviewed in a Transit Authority van somewhere above ground. Suspected cardiac event. Low priority. Quinn had pulled on her coat anyway, because it was her name on the out-of-hours rota and because low priority was exactly what people said when they hadn't looked closely enough. The entrance was unremarkable — a steel maintenance door set into a brick arch on the canal side of Camden, the kind of threshold Londoners had learned not to see over a century of layering new city over old. It took three different keys from the Transit Authority liaison to get it open. The door gave a long, reluctant groan, and the smell hit her immediately: damp stone and old metal and something underneath that she had no ready name for, something faintly acrid and sweet at once, like burnt copper. She pulled on gloves and descended. The staircase was narrow and the walls wept moisture. Her torch found graffiti she didn't recognise — not the usual tags, but symbols, concentric and layered, cut into the brick rather than sprayed. Old work. She ran her gloved finger along one without thinking, then pulled it back. The platform opened up below with the particular grandeur of Edwardian construction left to rot: vaulted ceilings, decorative tilework still holding its pattern under decades of grime, two parallel tracks gone orange with rust. And light. That was the first wrong thing. The scene-of-crime team had brought portable floods, yes, but there was other light too — a low amber glow emanating from sources Quinn couldn't immediately place, distributed along the platform at intervals like lanterns, except there were no lanterns. She filed that and kept moving. The body was at the north end of the platform, and DS Farrer was crouched beside it, notebook open, expression performing the studied neutrality of a man who very much wanted to be in bed. "Quinn," he said, by way of greeting. "Farrer. What have we got?" "White male, late thirties, no ID on him yet. No visible trauma. SOCO thinks cardiac, maybe a substance event — there's residue on his hands we can't place yet. The contractor found him face down." He stood up, knees clicking. "Contractor says he had no idea anyone was using this space. Says the door was secure when he arrived." Quinn crouched where Farrer had been. The man was slight, dressed in clothes that were well-made and old-fashioned in a way that wasn't quite costume — a long dark coat, boots that had been resoled multiple times. His face was turned toward her, and it wore an expression she'd learned to read: not pain, not surprise. Release. She looked at his hands. The residue was a fine grey-white powder in the creases of his palms and the pads of his fingers. Not chalk. Not plaster. Something with more weight to it. "What's the residue on?" she said. "Both hands. Some on the knees of his trousers." "So he was kneeling." "Could've fallen forward kneeling." "Could've," she agreed. She stood and swept her torch in a slow arc. The amber light sources resolved, on closer inspection, into small glass vessels set into recessed alcoves in the wall — filled with something that burned without visible flame. She'd taken them for emergency lighting at first glance. They weren't. She looked at Farrer. "You logged those?" "The alcove things? SOCO's getting to them." "They're not Victorian infrastructure, Farrer." He looked mildly annoyed. "How d'you know?" She didn't answer him, because she'd found the next wrong thing. The platform was not empty. She had thought initially that what lined the far wall were transit equipment boxes — the kind of battered metal caging that stored track maintenance kit. But her torch found edges that were too deliberate, arrangements that were too considered. Tables. Shelves. Some of them bare, items cleared in haste by the look of it — the dust displaced, ghost-rings where objects had stood. Some still held things she needed to look at more carefully and wasn't going to do so in Farrer's company until she understood more. She moved toward them, keeping her stride measured. The evidence bag was already tagged and waiting beside the body, collated by SOCO's preliminary sweep. She crouched again and went through it piece by piece. A fragment of cloth. A key that fit no lock she knew. And there — near the bottom of the bag, separated in its own smaller evidence sleeve — a compass. Small. Brass. The casing had gone green-grey with age, a fine verdigris eating into the metalwork in a pattern that was almost decorative. She held it up in her torchlight. The face was etched — not worn, deliberately etched — with markings arranged around the cardinal points like a diagram she'd seen somewhere before and couldn't immediately place. The needle was still. Pointed not north, not anywhere the compass should be pointing, but directly downward, as if dragged by an invisible weight beneath the floor. "That was in his left coat pocket," Farrer said from behind her. "Compass. Probably a hobby thing. City exploring type." Quinn looked at the compass. She thought about the door, with its three locks, secure when the contractor arrived at two in the morning. She thought about the tables with their cleared surfaces and the alcoves with their impossible light and the symbols cut into the brick at the entrance. She thought about a man kneeling on a stone floor in a room that shouldn't exist. "Farrer," she said. "When did Transport say this station was last in active use?" "Nineteen-thirties, thereabouts." "And this space. The platform specifically." "Same." "Then explain to me," she said, standing and turning, "the fresh footprints." He stared at her. She watched the moment arrive in his face when he stopped seeing a derelict platform and started actually looking at one. The dust on the platform was not uniformly old. In the patches furthest from the body, in the spaces between the vacant shelves and the wall, it had been disturbed recently and repeatedly — overlapping prints, back and forth, dozens of them. Small ones. Large ones. Boots, shoes, something else she couldn't categorise without a closer look. This was not an abandoned platform. This was a room that had been used and used and used, and had been emptied very recently. "Right," Farrer said carefully. "That's—" "Get uniforms to seal the entrance," Quinn said. "Nobody in or out without my say-so. And bag the compass separately. In a new bag, not that one. Label it." "Quinn—" "The residue on his hands." She looked back at the body, at the coat, at the resoled boots that had walked a long way to end up here. "That's not a substance event. That's effort. He was here for something specific, and somebody didn't want him to have it." Farrer was writing in his notebook, the model of compliance, but she could hear the gentle scepticism in his silence. She let him have it. She turned back to the alcoves and the bare shelves and the ghost-circles in the dust, and she moved toward them with her torch in one hand and the clear evidence sleeve in the other, the brass compass catching amber light through the plastic, its needle still pointing steadfastly down. She found the girl in the deepest recess, behind a shelf that had been pulled partially across the alcove as a screen. She was sitting with her knees drawn up and her arms wrapped around a leather satchel, a pair of round glasses on her nose and curly red hair loose around her face, freckles stark against white skin. She was shaking — fine, continuous trembling, the kind that came from cold or shock or the effort of keeping very still for a very long time. Quinn crouched to her level. She kept her voice level and clear. "I'm Detective Quinn, Metropolitan Police. You're safe. What's your name?" The girl's green eyes moved to the compass in the evidence sleeve. Then they moved to Quinn. "My name is Eva Kowalski," she said. Her voice was steadier than Quinn expected. "And before you do anything else, I need you to understand that whatever you think you're looking at — you're wrong about all of it." Quinn looked at this young woman with her satchel and her shaking hands and her too-steady voice, and she made the only reasonable professional determination available to her. She was not wrong. But she was not, she suspected, the only one who wasn't. She sat down on the cold stone floor beside Eva Kowalski, took out her own notebook, and said: "Start from the beginning."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Farrer said carefully [carefully]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.063
76.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1512
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1512
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"resolved"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"resolved"
2"measured"
3"etched"
4"silence"
5"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1528
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1285
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn10
Morris1
Underground1
Transit2
Authority2
Camden1
Londoners1
Edwardian1
Farrer7
Eva1
Kowalski1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Londoners"
3"Farrer"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
places
0"Transit"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite costume — a long dark coat, boots that had been resoled multiple times"
3.66% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.963
wordCount1528
matches
0"not the usual tags, but symbols, concentric"
1"not north, not anywhere the compass should be pointing, but directly downward, as if dragged by an invisible weight bene"
2"not anywhere the compass should be pointing, but directly downward, as if dragged by an invisible weight bene"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean28.3
std27.1
cv0.958
sampleLengths
061
137
231
391
46
548
681
76
835
97
105
1159
1257
1334
146
159
164
174
1859
197
205
217
2211
235
2488
258
2657
2785
2820
2950
3016
3114
322
336
341
3512
3682
3724
385
3929
401
4149
4220
4355
4486
4512
4610
4712
485
4939
79.68% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences96
matches
0"being interviewed"
1"was crouched"
2"been resoled"
3"was etched "
4"been disturbed"
5"been emptied"
6"been pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was writing"
1"was sitting"
2"was shaking "
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences116
ratio0.103
matches
0"The call had come in at 02:14, and Quinn had been awake for all of it — not because of any detective's instinct, but because sleep had stopped being reliable sometime around the third anniversary of Morris's death."
1"The entrance was unremarkable — a steel maintenance door set into a brick arch on the canal side of Camden, the kind of threshold Londoners had learned not to see over a century of layering new city over old."
2"Her torch found graffiti she didn't recognise — not the usual tags, but symbols, concentric and layered, cut into the brick rather than sprayed."
3"The scene-of-crime team had brought portable floods, yes, but there was other light too — a low amber glow emanating from sources Quinn couldn't immediately place, distributed along the platform at intervals like lanterns, except there were no lanterns."
4"The man was slight, dressed in clothes that were well-made and old-fashioned in a way that wasn't quite costume — a long dark coat, boots that had been resoled multiple times."
5"The amber light sources resolved, on closer inspection, into small glass vessels set into recessed alcoves in the wall — filled with something that burned without visible flame."
6"She had thought initially that what lined the far wall were transit equipment boxes — the kind of battered metal caging that stored track maintenance kit."
7"Some of them bare, items cleared in haste by the look of it — the dust displaced, ghost-rings where objects had stood."
8"And there — near the bottom of the bag, separated in its own smaller evidence sleeve — a compass."
9"The face was etched — not worn, deliberately etched — with markings arranged around the cardinal points like a diagram she'd seen somewhere before and couldn't immediately place."
10"In the patches furthest from the body, in the spaces between the vacant shelves and the wall, it had been disturbed recently and repeatedly — overlapping prints, back and forth, dozens of them."
11"She was shaking — fine, continuous trembling, the kind that came from cold or shock or the effort of keeping very still for a very long time."
86.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1280
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"fine grey-white powder"
1"stark against white skin."
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.04140625
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.01796875
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean13.17
std11.39
cv0.865
sampleLengths
038
123
26
326
43
52
631
739
814
938
106
119
1224
132
1413
1534
162
176
1839
196
2035
217
225
2340
2419
256
2631
2719
281
295
3019
312
322
336
346
359
364
374
383
3910
4028
419
422
434
443
457
465
474
483
4911
60.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4224137931034483
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners49
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then they moved to Quinn."
ratio0.013
40.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences78
matches
0"She'd been sitting at her"
1"It took three different keys"
2"She pulled on gloves and"
3"Her torch found graffiti she"
4"She ran her gloved finger"
5"She filed that and kept"
6"he said, by way of"
7"He stood up, knees clicking"
8"His face was turned toward"
9"She looked at his hands."
10"She stood and swept her"
11"She'd taken them for emergency"
12"She looked at Farrer."
13"He looked mildly annoyed."
14"She didn't answer him, because"
15"She had thought initially that"
16"She moved toward them, keeping"
17"She crouched again and went"
18"She held it up in"
19"She thought about the door,"
ratio0.449
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences78
matches
0"The call had come in"
1"She'd been sitting at her"
2"Body discovered by a maintenance"
3"Quinn had pulled on her"
4"The entrance was unremarkable —"
5"It took three different keys"
6"The door gave a long,"
7"She pulled on gloves and"
8"The staircase was narrow and"
9"Her torch found graffiti she"
10"She ran her gloved finger"
11"The platform opened up below"
12"That was the first wrong"
13"The scene-of-crime team had brought"
14"She filed that and kept"
15"The body was at the"
16"he said, by way of"
17"He stood up, knees clicking"
18"Quinn crouched where Farrer had"
19"The man was slight, dressed"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.19% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Body discovered by a maintenance contractor who'd then promptly vomited on the platform and was now being interviewed in a Transit Authority van somewhere above…"
1"The man was slight, dressed in clothes that were well-made and old-fashioned in a way that wasn't quite costume — a long dark coat, boots that had been resoled …"
2"But her torch found edges that were too deliberate, arrangements that were too considered."
3"The casing had gone green-grey with age, a fine verdigris eating into the metalwork in a pattern that was almost decorative."
4"Pointed not north, not anywhere the compass should be pointing, but directly downward, as if dragged by an invisible weight beneath the floor."
5"She was shaking — fine, continuous trembling, the kind that came from cold or shock or the effort of keeping very still for a very long time."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stood up, knees clicking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.281
leniency0.563
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.063
76.9343%