Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VY8PBHWE8YNJP6ZMXTHFM

Run Details

Duration:
1m
Cost:
$0.038670
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for three hours and Quinn was soaked to the bone before she even turned onto Kentish Town Road. She kept her distance — forty feet back, maybe forty-five — letting the crowd of umbrellas and hunched shoulders absorb her. Herrera hadn't looked back yet, but he would. They always did, eventually. The ones who knew they were being followed developed a kind of animal awareness, a twitch in the shoulders that came just before they bolted. Quinn had learned to read it in the first year on the job. She was reading it now. Tomás Herrera walked fast, hands buried in the pockets of a dark canvas jacket, head bent against the rain. The Saint Christopher medallion at his throat caught the amber smear of a streetlamp for just a moment as he cut left across the road, threading between two black cabs without looking. Quinn stepped off the kerb and followed, a lorry blasting its horn as she cleared its bonnet by less than a metre. She hadn't planned on running surveillance tonight. She'd been parked outside the Raven's Nest in Soho for six hours, nursing cold coffee and watching the green neon sign bleed its colour down the wet cobblestones, when Herrera had come out the side entrance — not the front, the side, which meant he knew things he wasn't supposed to know — and turned north at a pace that wasn't casual. Quinn had been out of her car before she'd consciously decided to move. That was instinct. Eighteen years of it. She checked her watch — the leather strap dark with rain, the face a little fogged — and noted the time. 23:14. She'd called it in an hour ago, just a loose surveillance tail, nothing formal. Her sergeant had told her to stand down and get some sleep. She had said yes, of course, sir, and then she had continued doing exactly what she was doing. DS Morris used to say she had a problem with authority. Morris had been right about most things. She pushed that thought back into its box and kept walking. Camden now. The high street's chaos of neon and puddles and late-night foot traffic should have swallowed Herrera, but Quinn had locked onto the rhythm of his walk — that slight forward lean, the way his left arm swung a fraction less than his right, probably the old knife scar pulling at the muscle — and she kept him in her peripheral vision even when she wasn't looking directly at him. He turned off the main drag, ducking into a narrow service road that ran behind the market stalls, and Quinn counted to three before following. The service road was darker. Quieter. Rain hammering corrugated iron overhead, water sluicing through a broken gutter in a silver rope. Quinn pressed herself against the wall and watched Herrera stop. He was looking at something she couldn't see yet — a door, maybe, or a gap in the hoardings. He reached into his jacket and produced something small. She couldn't make out what it was from this distance. He held it out at arm's length, as if presenting it to the darkness, and the darkness — Quinn's chest tightened — seemed to respond. A low, resonant sound, more felt than heard, passed through the soles of her shoes and up through her shins. Then a section of the hoarding swung inward, and Herrera disappeared through it. Quinn moved immediately, crossing the remaining distance in eight fast strides. She pressed her back to the wall beside the opening and listened. No voices. No footsteps retreating. She could feel warm air coming up from below, and with it a smell that made no sense in context — burnt copper, lamp oil, and something sweet she couldn't name. She counted her heartbeats. She had left her radio in the car. Her sidearm was on her hip. She had her badge and she had her instincts and she had the particular stubbornness that her last three superintendents had each mentioned in writing as both her greatest professional asset and her most significant personal failing. She peered through the gap. Steps. Steep, old, the kind cut from stone rather than poured concrete. They descended at a sharp angle into yellow-orange light that wasn't fluorescent and wasn't electric, or at least not any electricity she recognised. The walls on either side were tiled — cream and brown, the old Underground pattern, cracked and stained with decades of damp. An abandoned Tube station. She'd grown up near Aldgate. She knew there were ghost stations under the city, sealed up and forgotten, and she'd spent enough years working the streets to know that the forgotten spaces beneath London attracted the kind of activity that generated paperwork she wasn't always allowed to read. There had been a file, once. Three years ago, just before Morris. She had found it open on his desk and he had closed it before she could read more than a single paragraph. She had thought about that file many times in the years since. She looked again at the steps. At the orange light below. She could hear things now — not clearly, but the suggestion of sound. Voices. Movement. The low hum of something that vibrated at a frequency that made her back teeth ache. The sensible thing was to retreat. To call for backup. To document the location, establish a perimeter, do everything by the book she had been handed eighteen years ago and which she had been quietly deviating from ever since. Herrera had a kit bag. She'd clocked it at the Raven's Nest, slung over one shoulder, heavy by the way it moved. He was a former paramedic running unlicensed medical care — that was what the intelligence suggested, though intelligence was a generous word for the thread of rumour and half-confirmed sighting that had led her here. If there was something in that bag. If he was supplying something to someone down there. If there were answers down those stairs about what had happened to Morris. Quinn's jaw tightened. She pressed two fingers to the worn leather of her watch, a habit she'd developed without ever quite understanding why — something about feeling time against her wrist, grounding herself in the sequential, the rational. She was a rational woman. She had built her entire career on the premise that the world operated according to cause and effect, evidence and consequence, the demonstrable and the prosecutable. She took a breath of copper-scented air. Then she put her hand on her sidearm, checked the fastening on her holster, and started down the steps. The stone was slick under her shoes. The light grew warmer as she descended, and the smell intensified — the lamp oil smell became distinct now, actual oil-fed flames in iron sconces bolted to the old tiled walls, their tongues of fire bending toward her in the updraught from below. She slowed her pace, keeping close to the wall, trying to make herself small in the way that a five-foot-nine woman with military bearing cannot entirely manage. The staircase opened onto a platform. Quinn stopped on the last step and looked. The platform was long, the tracks below buried under wooden boards and rugs that shouldn't have survived underground. The vaulted tunnel stretched in both directions, and in both directions it was occupied. Stalls and tables lined the walls, their surfaces covered with objects she could see but not immediately categorise — glass vessels containing things that moved, bundles of material tied with dark thread, small wooden boxes with locks that didn't correspond to any key she'd ever seen. The vendors behind the stalls were human, mostly. Mostly. A woman in a grey coat examined a small bottle held up to the flame of a candelabra, and the light that passed through the liquid was the wrong colour, a deep arterial red that seemed to pulse. A man in a wide-brimmed hat paid for something with coins that Quinn couldn't make out clearly but which seemed too large and too dark for sterling. And there — twenty metres down the platform, turning to speak to a vendor with the careful, transactional manner of someone conducting regular business — was Herrera. He had the kit bag open on the counter. He placed something on the surface and the vendor, a compact, bald person of indeterminate age, examined it under a loupe. Quinn stood on the last step and did not move. Every piece of training she had told her what she was looking at. Black market. Contraband. Unlicensed trade. She had the grounds for intervention. She had the legal authority, the professional obligation, and the personal motivation. What she did not have was any meaningful framework for the burning oil lamps, the wrong-coloured light in the glass vessel, or the low resonant hum that she could now identify as coming from the tunnel itself — from the walls, from the tracks — as if the station were alive in some dim, geological way and barely tolerating their presence. DS Morris had opened that file. Three weeks later, DS Morris was dead. Quinn stepped off the stair and onto the platform. The nearest vendor looked up. A few feet away, a man in a long coat went very still. But no one moved against her and no one called out, and the ambient noise of transaction and low conversation continued around her like water rerouting around a stone. She kept her eyes on Herrera's back and walked forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1579
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1579
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"framework"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"could feel"
2"electric"
3"vibrated"
4"pulse"
5"framework"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
63.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch "
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1601
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1601
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn14
Kentish1
Town1
Road1
Herrera9
Saint1
Christopher1
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Morris6
Underground1
Tube1
Aldgate1
London1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Morris"
places
0"Kentish"
1"Town"
2"Road"
3"Raven"
4"Soho"
5"Aldgate"
6"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if presenting it to the darkness, and the darkness — Quinn's chest tightened — seemed to respond"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.625
wordCount1601
matches
0"not clearly, but the suggestion of sound"
74.07% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"pushed that thought"
1"know that the"
2"opened that file"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean44.47
std38.26
cv0.86
sampleLengths
023
176
273
382
47
566
618
711
896
931
1083
1113
12114
135
1457
154
1694
1742
1839
1973
2013
2169
227
2319
2477
256
268
27152
2857
2910
3097
316
327
339
3447
3510
89.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences108
matches
0"was soaked"
1"being followed"
2"been parked"
3"were tiled "
4"been handed"
40.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs251
matches
0"was reading"
1"was doing"
2"wasn't looking"
3"was looking"
4"was supplying"
5"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount22
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences108
ratio0.139
matches
0"She kept her distance — forty feet back, maybe forty-five — letting the crowd of umbrellas and hunched shoulders absorb her."
1"She'd been parked outside the Raven's Nest in Soho for six hours, nursing cold coffee and watching the green neon sign bleed its colour down the wet cobblestones, when Herrera had come out the side entrance — not the front, the side, which meant he knew things he wasn't supposed to know — and turned north at a pace that wasn't casual."
2"She checked her watch — the leather strap dark with rain, the face a little fogged — and noted the time."
3"The high street's chaos of neon and puddles and late-night foot traffic should have swallowed Herrera, but Quinn had locked onto the rhythm of his walk — that slight forward lean, the way his left arm swung a fraction less than his right, probably the old knife scar pulling at the muscle — and she kept him in her peripheral vision even when she wasn't looking directly at him."
4"He was looking at something she couldn't see yet — a door, maybe, or a gap in the hoardings."
5"He held it out at arm's length, as if presenting it to the darkness, and the darkness — Quinn's chest tightened — seemed to respond."
6"She could feel warm air coming up from below, and with it a smell that made no sense in context — burnt copper, lamp oil, and something sweet she couldn't name."
7"The walls on either side were tiled — cream and brown, the old Underground pattern, cracked and stained with decades of damp."
8"She could hear things now — not clearly, but the suggestion of sound."
9"He was a former paramedic running unlicensed medical care — that was what the intelligence suggested, though intelligence was a generous word for the thread of rumour and half-confirmed sighting that had led her here."
10"She pressed two fingers to the worn leather of her watch, a habit she'd developed without ever quite understanding why — something about feeling time against her wrist, grounding herself in the sequential, the rational."
11"The light grew warmer as she descended, and the smell intensified — the lamp oil smell became distinct now, actual oil-fed flames in iron sconces bolted to the old tiled walls, their tongues of fire bending toward her in the updraught from below."
12"Stalls and tables lined the walls, their surfaces covered with objects she could see but not immediately categorise — glass vessels containing things that moved, bundles of material tied with dark thread, small wooden boxes with locks that didn't correspond to any key she'd ever seen."
13"And there — twenty metres down the platform, turning to speak to a vendor with the careful, transactional manner of someone conducting regular business — was Herrera."
14"What she did not have was any meaningful framework for the burning oil lamps, the wrong-coloured light in the glass vessel, or the low resonant hum that she could now identify as coming from the tunnel itself — from the walls, from the tracks — as if the station were alive in some dim, geological way and barely tolerating their presence."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1589
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"actual oil-fed flames"
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.030207677784770296
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.00881057268722467
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean14.82
std13.38
cv0.903
sampleLengths
023
121
28
34
425
513
65
719
832
922
107
1162
1213
133
144
1521
161
1714
1812
1918
2011
217
2211
232
2469
2525
265
271
2815
2910
3019
319
3210
3325
3420
3513
3611
3712
382
393
4031
414
428
436
4437
455
461
4711
4823
4922
37.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.34579439252336447
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners37
68.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"Then a section of the"
1"Then she put her hand"
ratio0.021
50.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences97
matches
0"She kept her distance —"
1"They always did, eventually."
2"She was reading it now."
3"She hadn't planned on running"
4"She'd been parked outside the"
5"She checked her watch —"
6"She'd called it in an"
7"Her sergeant had told her"
8"She had said yes, of"
9"She pushed that thought back"
10"He turned off the main"
11"He was looking at something"
12"He reached into his jacket"
13"She couldn't make out what"
14"He held it out at"
15"She pressed her back to"
16"She could feel warm air"
17"She counted her heartbeats."
18"She had left her radio"
19"Her sidearm was on her"
ratio0.423
52.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences97
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"She kept her distance —"
2"Herrera hadn't looked back yet,"
3"They always did, eventually."
4"The ones who knew they"
5"Quinn had learned to read"
6"She was reading it now."
7"Tomás Herrera walked fast, hands"
8"The Saint Christopher medallion at"
9"Quinn stepped off the kerb"
10"She hadn't planned on running"
11"She'd been parked outside the"
12"Quinn had been out of"
13"That was instinct."
14"She checked her watch —"
15"She'd called it in an"
16"Her sergeant had told her"
17"She had said yes, of"
18"DS Morris used to say"
19"Morris had been right about"
ratio0.814
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences97
matches
0"To call for backup."
1"To document the location, establish"
2"If there was something in"
3"If he was supplying something"
4"If there were answers down"
ratio0.052
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The ones who knew they were being followed developed a kind of animal awareness, a twitch in the shoulders that came just before they bolted."
1"She'd been parked outside the Raven's Nest in Soho for six hours, nursing cold coffee and watching the green neon sign bleed its colour down the wet cobblestone…"
2"He turned off the main drag, ducking into a narrow service road that ran behind the market stalls, and Quinn counted to three before following."
3"She could feel warm air coming up from below, and with it a smell that made no sense in context — burnt copper, lamp oil, and something sweet she couldn't name."
4"They descended at a sharp angle into yellow-orange light that wasn't fluorescent and wasn't electric, or at least not any electricity she recognised."
5"She knew there were ghost stations under the city, sealed up and forgotten, and she'd spent enough years working the streets to know that the forgotten spaces b…"
6"He was a former paramedic running unlicensed medical care — that was what the intelligence suggested, though intelligence was a generous word for the thread of …"
7"She pressed two fingers to the worn leather of her watch, a habit she'd developed without ever quite understanding why — something about feeling time against he…"
8"She slowed her pace, keeping close to the wall, trying to make herself small in the way that a five-foot-nine woman with military bearing cannot entirely manage…"
9"The platform was long, the tracks below buried under wooden boards and rugs that shouldn't have survived underground."
10"Stalls and tables lined the walls, their surfaces covered with objects she could see but not immediately categorise — glass vessels containing things that moved…"
11"A woman in a grey coat examined a small bottle held up to the flame of a candelabra, and the light that passed through the liquid was the wrong colour, a deep a…"
12"What she did not have was any meaningful framework for the burning oil lamps, the wrong-coloured light in the glass vessel, or the low resonant hum that she cou…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.6189%