| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asked quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 72.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1448 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1448 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "mechanical" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 67 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1463 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1378 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 13 | | Nyx | 6 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Dymas" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Gluttony" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile" | | 1 | "looked like exhaustion that had passed th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.684 | | wordCount | 1463 | | matches | | 0 | "not old in the sense of a face that had weathered time, but old in the sense of a depth she could not see the bottom of" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 34.02 | | std | 38.97 | | cv | 1.145 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 88 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 148 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 115 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 119 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 152 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 58 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 59 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 56 | | 42 | 2 |
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| 86.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "been called" | | 1 | "was, descended" | | 2 | "were stationed" | | 3 | "being served" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 225 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "Not warm the way a stone left in sunlight was warm, passive and borrowed — this was alive, a pulse against her sternum like a second heartbeat." | | 1 | "Behind her, she heard Nyx slip through the rift with that near-silent displacement they always made — less a footstep and more the suggestion of one — and then the rift sealed itself with a sound like the snap of a green branch." | | 2 | "She had expected darkness — Hel in her imagination had always been a word for absence, for cold and shadow and the closing of things." | | 3 | "Not decayed — not yet — but tipping forward into it, gorgeous in the way a bruise was occasionally gorgeous, too much of everything." | | 4 | "Their form had compressed slightly, the shadow-edges of them drawing inward, and she realised it was the light — that amber saturation had nowhere to pool, no proper shadows in which they could spread." | | 5 | "The path, such as it was, descended between the vine rows, and with the descent came sound — a low and constant swell of noise Aurora had taken for wind at first but wasn't." | | 6 | "They were stationed between the rows — a dozen of them in her immediate sightline, more beyond — bent to the work of harvest, cutting and sorting and carrying the heavy clusters in wooden crates." | | 7 | "Figures moved between the tables, eating and being served and eating again, and the music she'd heard — she found its source now, a cluster of musicians on a raised platform at the far end whose instruments were unlike anything she recognised, strung with what might have been gut or might have been something she preferred not to consider." | | 8 | "Beside her, she heard Nyx exhale — a long, controlled sound — and felt them shift marginally closer, close enough that the edge of their shadow fell across her arm." | | 9 | "In the sudden gap of sound, Aurora heard, very clearly, the pendant pulse once — twice — against her chest like a question." |
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| 90.87% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1368 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 69 | | adverbRatio | 0.05043859649122807 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01608187134502924 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 18.29 | | std | 13.98 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 40 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 49 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 79.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the sky above her" | | 1 | "Only the impression of it:" | | 2 | "Somewhere in the feast below," |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 67.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 1 | "It was thick, syrupy almost," | | 2 | "She pulled a breath through" | | 3 | "She had expected darkness —" | | 4 | "Their form had compressed slightly," | | 5 | "They looked denser here, more" | | 6 | "she asked quietly" | | 7 | "Their voice came out softer" | | 8 | "She filed that away and" | | 9 | "She was looking at the" | | 10 | "It was not quite a" | | 11 | "She left no footprints as" | | 12 | "They moved deeper into it." | | 13 | "It was many things layered:" | | 14 | "She couldn't see the source." | | 15 | "She noticed the workers when" | | 16 | "They were stationed between the" | | 17 | "They moved with a mechanical" | | 18 | "She looked away." | | 19 | "She offered it simply, with" |
| | ratio | 0.382 | |
| 70.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone went warm the" | | 1 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 2 | "The air hit her first." | | 3 | "It was thick, syrupy almost," | | 4 | "She pulled a breath through" | | 5 | "Aurora said, because she needed" | | 6 | "Dymas opened before her." | | 7 | "The sky was the first" | | 8 | "She had expected darkness —" | | 9 | "An orchard curved away to" | | 10 | "Everything here was in the" | | 11 | "That was the word that" | | 12 | "Nyx moved alongside her, and" | | 13 | "Their form had compressed slightly," | | 14 | "They looked denser here, more" | | 15 | "she asked quietly" | | 16 | "Their voice came out softer" | | 17 | "She filed that away and" | | 18 | "The Seer stood three paces" | | 19 | "She was looking at the" |
| | ratio | 0.779 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the sky above her burned amber, a deep and saturated gold that had nothing to do with any sun she could identify, no single source casting it, just the…" | | 1 | "Beneath it, the land rolled outward in extravagant abundance: vineyards, row upon row of them, the vines heavy with clusters so dark they were nearly black, som…" | | 2 | "Isolde turned those pale lavender eyes toward her, and there was something in them that was old in a way Aurora still hadn't quite grown accustomed to, not old …" | | 3 | "They moved with a mechanical efficiency that would have looked normal at a distance." | | 4 | "Up close, it looked like exhaustion that had passed through the other side of itself and come out as something compulsive." | | 5 | "A woman not far off was cutting grapes with her hands moving in the same rhythm so precisely repeated that Aurora found herself watching the pattern of it, grip…" | | 6 | "The feasting ground spread across a bowl in the terrain, vast and terraced, tables upon tables loaded with food in quantities that defied any purpose beyond spe…" | | 7 | "Only the impression of it: enormous, settled into its throne with the particular stillness of something that had not needed to move in a very long time." | | 8 | "Somewhere in the feast below, something that had been laughing stopped." | | 9 | "She straightened, lifted her chin, and considered her next step with the particular cool deliberateness that had carried her through worse than this." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |