Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VYH4JP7SPZV4YMPWXF76T

Run Details

Duration:
46.8s
Cost:
$0.028980
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for two hours by the time Quinn spotted him. She had been nursing a coffee she didn't want outside a chicken shop on Camden High Street, her unmarked car double-parked thirty meters back with the engine running. Surveillance work was ninety percent waiting and ten percent not thinking about DS Morris, and she was failing at both when Tomás Herrera came around the corner at a pace that wasn't quite running — the deliberate, controlled stride of a man who knew he was being watched and was trying not to show it. Quinn was moving before she'd finished processing him. She left the coffee on the bollard and cut across the pavement, water sheeting off her jacket, eyes fixed on the back of his dark hoodie weaving through the Friday night crowd. She'd pulled his file four days ago. Former paramedic. Lost his licence eighteen months back under circumstances the NHS disciplinary panel had described as "gross misconduct involving unauthorized and medically inexplicable interventions." The kind of language bureaucrats used when they wanted to say something impossible without actually saying it. She'd been collecting that kind of language for three years, ever since the night Morris had died in a building that the coroner's report still couldn't adequately explain. Herrera ducked left down a side street and she followed, closing the gap. Fifteen meters. Ten. He glanced back once — that was what broke his composure. The moment his warm brown eyes found her face in the dark, the pretense of a casual stroll evaporated completely and he ran. Quinn ran harder. She was forty-one years old and had spent eighteen years maintaining the kind of physical condition that made younger constables privately resentful, and she gained ground fast. Herrera vaulted a low railing with practiced agility, landed on the slick pavement of a pedestrian cut-through, and she went over it half a second behind him. Her left hand slapped the wet metal and she felt the worn leather of her watch strap drag against the rail. She hit the ground running. "Police!" She didn't waste breath on more than the word. There was nobody around to hear it anyway — the cut-through was a narrow canyon between two Victorian buildings, the walls dark with rain-wet brick, a single overhead lamp casting a jaundiced circle of light at the far end. He wasn't heading for the main road. She realized it just as he wrenched open a rusted metal door set into the base of one of the buildings — not a proper door, more like an access hatch, the kind that maintenance workers used. He went through it and she lost two seconds on the threshold, one hand braced against the doorframe, peering into the dark below. Stairs. Iron, descending steeply. The smell that rose from below was wrong in a way she couldn't immediately articulate — not sewage, not the usual subterranean rot of the city's innards. Something else. Something that reminded her, disturbingly, of the smell in the stairwell where Morris had died. Cold and mineral and faintly sweet, like copper left in the rain. She went down. The stairs switchbacked twice. She counted her footfalls and kept one hand trailing the wall, not trusting the darkness, and then the darkness gave way to something stranger. Light. Not electric — at least, not entirely. There were bare bulbs strung on cables that drooped in long festoons from the curved ceiling of an abandoned Tube platform, but scattered among them were other light sources: glass vessels that glowed amber and green, lanterns that burned with flames in colors fire wasn't supposed to make. The platform walls still bore the ghost of old roundel signage, the lettering long since flaked away, and beneath Quinn's feet the original tiled floor had been covered in overlapping rugs and wooden pallets. And on those pallets, in the stalls lining both sides of the platform — things. She stopped walking. Her hand found her radio by instinct, her fingers closing around it without bringing it to her lips. Training kept her breathing even. Training kept her feet from backing up the stairs. The station was populated in a way she had no framework for. She registered the bodies first — people, or things shaped like people — moving between the stalls with the unhurried purpose of ordinary commerce. Here, a figure in a grey coat examining a row of stoppered bottles. There, two women in conversation beside a table piled with what appeared to be dried bundles of bone. The ambient noise was low, transactional, the murmur of a market. It smelled of incense and something sharper underneath, and beneath that the unmistakable damp-stone breath of deep underground places. Herrera was thirty meters ahead, moving fast through the crowd, his dark curls plastered flat with rain. She saw the Saint Christopher medallion catch the light as he glanced over his shoulder — cataloguing the distance between them, calculating. She catalogued too. One exit visible, the stairs behind her. No way to know what lay at the far end of the platform. No radio signal down here — she'd known that the moment the bars dropped on her phone as she descended. No backup. No jurisdiction that she could name in any report she'd ever filed or would be able to file. And everywhere she looked, things she had spent three years quietly accumulating evidence of and three years louder denying to herself. The figure in the grey coat had turned to look at her. Then the two women. Then others, in a slow, rippling awareness, like a stone dropped in still water. She was the stone. Herrera stopped. He'd put forty meters between them but he stopped, turned fully to face her, and she could read the calculation on his face even at this distance. He was waiting to see what she would do — and there was something in his expression besides wariness. Something that looked almost like worry focused not on himself but on her. Quinn's jaw tightened. She was aware of her own heartbeat in a way she rarely let herself be, steady and too-fast and honest, the way Morris's heart monitor had been honest before it wasn't anymore. She had a decision to make. Her hand was still on the radio that wasn't working. Her feet were still at the bottom of the stairs. The market breathed around her, indifferent and ancient, and Tomás Herrera watched her from across thirty meters of impossible underground commerce, and the worn leather of her watch pressed against the inside of her wrist where she could feel the pulse there if she wanted to. She let go of the radio. She walked forward, and the crowd parted around her with a silence that was less like courtesy and more like the careful stillness of a forest when an unfamiliar predator enters it.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:22:37.212Z" 2/24/2026, 10:22:37 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"framework"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"framework"
2"calculating"
3"could feel"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
84.15% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1154
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1145
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn5
Camden1
High1
Street1
Morris4
Tomás2
Herrera6
Friday1
Victorian1
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Friday"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite running — the deliberate, controlled stride of a man who knew he was being watched and was trying not to show it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.867
wordCount1154
matches
0"not on himself but on her"
29.68% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"collecting that kind building that the"
1"known that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean41.21
std32.03
cv0.777
sampleLengths
014
183
240
377
416
534
63
780
849
97
1060
1160
123
13118
1415
1535
1697
1739
183
1981
2030
214
2261
2335
246
2566
266
2732
90.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"being watched"
1"been covered"
2"was populated"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was failing"
1"was being"
2"was trying"
3"wasn't quite running "
4"wasn't heading"
5"was waiting"
6"wasn't working"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences73
ratio0.151
matches
0"Surveillance work was ninety percent waiting and ten percent not thinking about DS Morris, and she was failing at both when Tomás Herrera came around the corner at a pace that wasn't quite running — the deliberate, controlled stride of a man who knew he was being watched and was trying not to show it."
1"He glanced back once — that was what broke his composure."
2"There was nobody around to hear it anyway — the cut-through was a narrow canyon between two Victorian buildings, the walls dark with rain-wet brick, a single overhead lamp casting a jaundiced circle of light at the far end."
3"She realized it just as he wrenched open a rusted metal door set into the base of one of the buildings — not a proper door, more like an access hatch, the kind that maintenance workers used."
4"The smell that rose from below was wrong in a way she couldn't immediately articulate — not sewage, not the usual subterranean rot of the city's innards."
5"Not electric — at least, not entirely."
6"And on those pallets, in the stalls lining both sides of the platform — things."
7"She registered the bodies first — people, or things shaped like people — moving between the stalls with the unhurried purpose of ordinary commerce."
8"She saw the Saint Christopher medallion catch the light as he glanced over his shoulder — cataloguing the distance between them, calculating."
9"No radio signal down here — she'd known that the moment the bars dropped on her phone as she descended."
10"He was waiting to see what she would do — and there was something in his expression besides wariness."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1140
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03508771929824561
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean15.81
std12.52
cv0.792
sampleLengths
014
128
255
38
432
57
62
740
828
913
102
111
1211
1323
143
1527
1627
1721
185
1910
2039
217
2237
2323
241
253
2627
272
2815
2912
303
314
3224
331
347
3548
3634
3715
383
3918
405
419
4212
4324
4413
4518
4611
4719
4817
4922
42.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3561643835616438
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then the two women."
1"Then others, in a slow,"
ratio0.031
41.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences65
matches
0"She had been nursing a"
1"She left the coffee on"
2"She'd pulled his file four"
3"She'd been collecting that kind"
4"He glanced back once —"
5"She was forty-one years old"
6"Her left hand slapped the"
7"She hit the ground running."
8"She didn't waste breath on"
9"He wasn't heading for the"
10"She realized it just as"
11"He went through it and"
12"She went down."
13"She counted her footfalls and"
14"She stopped walking."
15"Her hand found her radio"
16"She registered the bodies first"
17"It smelled of incense and"
18"She saw the Saint Christopher"
19"She catalogued too."
ratio0.446
67.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences65
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"She had been nursing a"
2"Surveillance work was ninety percent"
3"Quinn was moving before she'd"
4"She left the coffee on"
5"She'd pulled his file four"
6"She'd been collecting that kind"
7"Herrera ducked left down a"
8"He glanced back once —"
9"The moment his warm brown"
10"Quinn ran harder."
11"She was forty-one years old"
12"Herrera vaulted a low railing"
13"Her left hand slapped the"
14"She hit the ground running."
15"She didn't waste breath on"
16"He wasn't heading for the"
17"She realized it just as"
18"He went through it and"
19"The smell that rose from"
ratio0.785
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Surveillance work was ninety percent waiting and ten percent not thinking about DS Morris, and she was failing at both when Tomás Herrera came around the corner…"
1"She was forty-one years old and had spent eighteen years maintaining the kind of physical condition that made younger constables privately resentful, and she ga…"
2"There were bare bulbs strung on cables that drooped in long festoons from the curved ceiling of an abandoned Tube platform, but scattered among them were other …"
3"Her hand found her radio by instinct, her fingers closing around it without bringing it to her lips."
4"She saw the Saint Christopher medallion catch the light as he glanced over his shoulder — cataloguing the distance between them, calculating."
5"She walked forward, and the crowd parted around her with a silence that was less like courtesy and more like the careful stillness of a forest when an unfamilia…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.9085%