Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VYVZFTBJ304QY5MXBZSGR

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Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.072890
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted like copper and chalk dust. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape strung across the mouth of the service tunnel and descended the rusted iron staircase into what the transit authority's records called Platform 9B — a station that, according to every official map of the London Underground, did not exist. Two portable halogen lamps threw harsh white cones across the platform. The tiles along the curved wall had once been cream and forest green, the station name spelled out in the old Johnston typeface: CAMDEN DEEP. Most of the letters had been pried away. What remained read C_M_EN D__P, a gap-toothed grin in ceramic. "Watch your step past the pillar. Blood pool." DS Ferris stood at the platform's edge, hands in his pockets, breath fogging in the subterranean cold. He was thirty-two, built like a prop forward going soft around the middle, and he had the kind of face that broadcast every thought half a second before he spoke it. Right now his face said he wanted to be anywhere else. Quinn adjusted her nitrile gloves and stepped around the pillar. The blood pool was smaller than she'd expected — more of a smear, really, trailing in a crooked line from the centre of the platform toward the tunnel mouth. A body lay face down beside an overturned trestle table. Male, mid-fifties, dressed in what looked like a Victorian frock coat over modern jeans. His hands were open at his sides, palms up, fingers curled. No defensive wounds that she could see from this angle. "Victim's name?" "No ID on him. Nothing in his pockets except these." Ferris held up an evidence bag. Inside were three small discs, ivory or bone, each roughly the size of a two-pound coin, each etched with a symbol she didn't recognize. Quinn took the bag, turned it under the light. The discs were smooth, hand-carved. Old. One had a hairline crack running through its centre. "What do you make of the scene?" Ferris pulled a hand from his pocket and gestured at the platform. For the first time, Quinn let her gaze widen past the body. The trestle table wasn't alone. A dozen more stood in two rough rows along the platform, draped in dark cloth. Some had been knocked over. Objects littered the ground — glass bottles stoppered with wax, bundles of dried herbs bound in copper wire, stacks of paper covered in dense calligraphy. It looked like a ransacked flea market. "Squatters running some kind of underground bazaar. Drugs, probably. The bottles could be homebrew narcotics, that synthetic hallucinogen thing Vice has been chasing. Victim was a dealer. Someone came to collect a debt, it went sideways." Ferris shrugged. "Open and shut, really." Quinn said nothing. She crouched beside the body and studied the blood trail. It moved in the wrong direction. The smear led away from the body toward the tunnel, but the victim lay face down with his head pointing toward the staircase. If he'd been struck and crawled, the trail should originate at the body and extend outward. Instead, it started six feet away and ended beneath him, as though the blood had flowed uphill. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Half past one in the morning. The call had come in forty minutes ago from a Transport for London maintenance crew who'd noticed the service tunnel's padlock had been cut. "Who secured the scene?" "Uniforms. Two PCs. They're topside with the TfL lads." "And they moved nothing." "Said they didn't." Quinn stood and walked the perimeter. Her shoes crunched on something. She looked down. A fine layer of salt covered the floor in a wide arc, partially scuffed by boots — hers, Ferris's, the uniforms'. Beneath the scuff marks, the salt line had been deliberate. Geometric. She followed its curve and traced it around the body in a near-perfect circle, broken only where the trestle table had fallen through it. "Ferris. Come look at this." He ambled over. She pointed at the salt. "Someone drew a circle around the victim before the table fell." "Or the salt spilled off one of the tables. Look at all this rubbish." He nudged a fallen bottle with his toe. "Salt doesn't spill in a twelve-foot radius circle with uniform depth." Quinn knelt again and ran a gloved finger along the line. Consistent grain size. Coarse, unrefined. Not table salt. She bagged a sample. She moved to the nearest intact table and lifted the cloth. Underneath, arranged with care that bordered on devotion, sat a row of objects she couldn't immediately categorize. A jar of dark liquid with something suspended inside it — a root, maybe, or a finger. A leather folio tied shut with red cord. And a small brass compass, its casing patinated with pale green verdigris, its face etched with symbols that matched the ones on the bone discs. Quinn picked up the compass. It was heavier than it looked, dense in a way that didn't correspond to its size, like holding a stone that had been carved to look like metal. The needle trembled, then swung — not north. It pointed down the tunnel, into the dark, and held steady. "Ferris, get a photo of this. And these symbols." "Looks like junk shop tat to me." "Photograph it anyway." She set the compass down and opened the leather folio. Inside were pages of handwritten notes in at least three languages — English, Latin, and something else, a script she'd never encountered. The English sections were fragmentary. She caught phrases: *rift alignment*, *bone token — entry only*, *next transit: full moon (14th)*. A hand-drawn map showed what appeared to be the very platform they were standing on, with an X marked at the tunnel mouth. The fourteenth was tomorrow night. Quinn closed the folio and bagged it. She returned to the body and crouched lower this time, cheek nearly to the ground, angling her torch beneath the victim's torso. There — clutched against his chest, invisible from above — was a fourth bone disc. This one was different. Larger. The symbol on it was more elaborate, and it seemed to catch the torchlight and hold it a beat too long. "Help me turn him." Ferris came over, and together they rolled the body onto its back. The man's face was gaunt, hollow-cheeked, and his eyes were open. His expression wasn't one of pain or fear. It was astonishment, deep and absolute, the kind of face a person made when they witnessed something so far beyond comprehension that the brain simply stopped processing. The fourth disc fell from his grip and rolled in a tight circle on the platform before settling flat. Quinn caught it before Ferris could. No wound on the front of the body. No wound on the back, either — she'd checked. No blood on his clothing at all. "That blood trail isn't his." Ferris blinked. "What?" "No lacerations, no puncture wounds, no blunt force trauma visible anywhere on the body. Clean clothes. The blood on the floor — it doesn't belong to him." "Then whose — " "That's the question." Quinn stood and followed the trail again with her torch. It started — or ended, depending on your interpretation — at a point in the centre of the salt circle. No body there. No discarded weapon. Just a point on the ground where blood appeared to have pooled and then extended in a line toward the tunnel mouth, thinning as it went, as though whatever bled had been moving with increasing speed. She shone her torch down the tunnel. The rails were rusted solid, the gravel between the sleepers undisturbed except — there. Twenty yards in. A single footprint in the dust, pressed deep, toes pointing away from the platform. Then nothing. No second footprint. As if whoever made it had taken one step and then ceased to exist. "Your drug deal theory," Quinn said, straightening. "Does it account for a bloodless body inside a salt circle, blood belonging to no one, and a single footprint that leads nowhere?" Ferris opened his mouth and closed it. Quinn turned the bone disc over in her gloved hand. The symbol's lines seemed to shift at the edge of her vision, never quite settling into a fixed shape. She thought of DS Morris — three years gone, a stairwell in Deptford, the door that shouldn't have been there, the sound she still couldn't describe. The official report said cardiac arrest. The official report was a lie she'd signed because the truth would have ended her career. "I want full forensics on this platform. Luminal the entire floor. Run the blood. Pull CCTV from every Camden station entrance within a half-mile radius for the last seventy-two hours. And find out who this man is." "You think this is more than a drug deal gone wrong." Quinn slid the bone disc into the evidence bag and sealed it. She looked at the salt circle, the strange compass with its needle aimed into the dark, the dead man's face frozen in impossible wonder. "I think this is a crime scene where the most important evidence is whatever isn't here anymore. The blood left, Ferris. It walked away. Something bled in that circle, and then it walked down the tunnel and vanished after a single step." "People don't vanish." She thought of Morris. The door in the stairwell that was gone when the response team arrived. The scorched outline on the floor where he'd fallen, shaped like nothing she'd ever seen outside a nightmare. "No. They don't." Quinn pulled off her gloves and tucked them into her coat pocket. "So either we're missing something, or we need a bigger definition of people." Ferris stared at her for a long beat, then pulled out his phone to call the forensics team. Quinn stood alone on the platform and watched the compass needle. It hadn't moved. It pointed steadily down the tunnel, into the space where the footprint ended and the dark began, trembling with the faintest vibration — not from trains, because no trains had run through this station in decades. She picked it up one more time. The verdigris felt rough under her bare fingertip, and the sigils on the face seemed to warm at her touch. The needle swung — sharply, suddenly — from the tunnel to the staircase behind her. Quinn turned. The staircase was empty. The halogen lamps hummed. Somewhere above, London carried on in its usual oblivious roar. The needle held its new bearing for five seconds, then slowly, as if reluctant, drifted back toward the tunnel. Quinn set the compass down on the table and did not touch it again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn knelt again [again]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.065
83.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1770
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"sharply"
3"suddenly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1770
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"etched"
count2
1
word"synthetic"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"synthetic"
2"traced"
3"perfect"
4"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords13
totalWords1791
ratio0.007
matches
0"M"
1"rift alignment"
2"bone token — entry only"
3"next transit: full moon (14th)"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1463
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Platform1
London3
Underground1
Johnston1
Ferris10
Victorian1
Transport1
Consistent1
English2
Latin1
Morris2
Deptford1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Underground"
3"Johnston"
4"Ferris"
5"Morris"
places
0"Platform"
1"London"
2"Transport"
3"Deptford"
globalScore0.885
windowScore0.833
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like copper and chalk dust"
1"looked like a Victorian frock coat over m"
2"looked like a ransacked flea market"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1791
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean31.98
std26.49
cv0.828
sampleLengths
055
154
267
384
42
540
624
77
881
942
1075
1140
124
139
144
153
1670
175
188
1911
2022
2134
2278
2352
249
257
263
2775
285
2970
304
3158
3225
3324
345
353
3627
374
3875
3957
4030
417
4277
4337
4411
4536
4642
473
4835
4928
88.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences122
matches
0"been pried"
1"been knocked"
2"been struck"
3"been carved"
4"were rusted"
5"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs246
matches
0"were standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences145
ratio0.103
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape strung across the mouth of the service tunnel and descended the rusted iron staircase into what the transit authority's records called Platform 9B — a station that, according to every official map of the London Underground, did not exist."
1"The blood pool was smaller than she'd expected — more of a smear, really, trailing in a crooked line from the centre of the platform toward the tunnel mouth."
2"Objects littered the ground — glass bottles stoppered with wax, bundles of dried herbs bound in copper wire, stacks of paper covered in dense calligraphy."
3"A fine layer of salt covered the floor in a wide arc, partially scuffed by boots — hers, Ferris's, the uniforms'."
4"A jar of dark liquid with something suspended inside it — a root, maybe, or a finger."
5"The needle trembled, then swung — not north."
6"Inside were pages of handwritten notes in at least three languages — English, Latin, and something else, a script she'd never encountered."
7"She caught phrases: *rift alignment*, *bone token — entry only*, *next transit: full moon (14th)*."
8"There — clutched against his chest, invisible from above — was a fourth bone disc."
9"No wound on the back, either — she'd checked."
10"It started — or ended, depending on your interpretation — at a point in the centre of the salt circle."
11"The rails were rusted solid, the gravel between the sleepers undisturbed except — there."
12"She thought of DS Morris — three years gone, a stairwell in Deptford, the door that shouldn't have been there, the sound she still couldn't describe."
13"It pointed steadily down the tunnel, into the space where the footprint ended and the dark began, trembling with the faintest vibration — not from trains, because no trains had run through this station in decades."
14"The needle swung — sharply, suddenly — from the tunnel to the staircase behind her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount738
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.028455284552845527
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0040650406504065045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean12.35
std9.32
cv0.754
sampleLengths
08
147
211
325
48
510
625
731
811
910
1029
1110
1214
1311
1410
152
1616
1724
189
195
201
219
227
2312
2412
255
2615
275
2825
297
3038
314
323
3310
346
3523
3616
3717
3810
396
4024
414
429
434
443
456
465
473
4821
4910
62.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.41379310344827586
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners60
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences114
matches
0"Instead, it started six feet"
1"Just a point on the"
2"Somewhere above, London carried on"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences114
matches
0"He was thirty-two, built like"
1"His hands were open at"
2"It looked like a ransacked"
3"She crouched beside the body"
4"It moved in the wrong"
5"She checked the worn leather"
6"Her shoes crunched on something."
7"She looked down."
8"She followed its curve and"
9"He ambled over."
10"She pointed at the salt."
11"He nudged a fallen bottle"
12"She bagged a sample."
13"She moved to the nearest"
14"It was heavier than it"
15"It pointed down the tunnel,"
16"She set the compass down"
17"She caught phrases: *rift alignment*,"
18"She returned to the body"
19"His expression wasn't one of"
ratio0.254
82.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences114
matches
0"The air tasted like copper"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The tiles along the curved"
3"DS Ferris stood at the"
4"He was thirty-two, built like"
5"Quinn adjusted her nitrile gloves"
6"The blood pool was smaller"
7"A body lay face down"
8"His hands were open at"
9"Ferris held up an evidence"
10"Quinn took the bag, turned"
11"The discs were smooth, hand-carved."
12"Ferris pulled a hand from"
13"The trestle table wasn't alone."
14"A dozen more stood in"
15"Some had been knocked over."
16"Objects littered the ground —"
17"It looked like a ransacked"
18"Quinn said nothing."
19"She crouched beside the body"
ratio0.754
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"If he'd been struck and"
1"As if whoever made it"
ratio0.018
86.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape strung across the mouth of the service tunnel and descended the rusted iron staircase into what the transit …"
1"Underneath, arranged with care that bordered on devotion, sat a row of objects she couldn't immediately categorize."
2"And a small brass compass, its casing patinated with pale green verdigris, its face etched with symbols that matched the ones on the bone discs."
3"It was heavier than it looked, dense in a way that didn't correspond to its size, like holding a stone that had been carved to look like metal."
4"Just a point on the ground where blood appeared to have pooled and then extended in a line toward the tunnel mouth, thinning as it went, as though whatever bled…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.4397%