| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 61.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1051 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1051 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "long shadow" | | 5 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 59 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1065 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1064 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.28 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Tuesday | 1 | | Wednesday | 1 | | Thursday | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | October | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed fractionally brighter than the last" | | 1 | "seemed stately and separate during the day pressed together into one continuous mass, and the sky between the canopy was a deep, lightless grey, the kind that came before rain" | | 2 | "appeared sooner than she expected" | | 3 | "Not visibly — not a flash — but" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1065 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.28% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "times that Tuesday" | | 1 | "see that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 32.27 | | std | 31.94 | | cv | 0.99 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 102 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 95 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 90 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 106 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | 0 | "was showing" | | 1 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "Not uncomfortably so — not like a burn — but steady and insistent, the way a mug of tea felt cupped between both palms." | | 1 | "The paths she remembered — wide and chalky pale in afternoon sun — were barely visible suggestions in the dark." | | 2 | "Not natural silence — not the kind a city park produced at midnight, which was really just traffic thinned to a murmur and the occasional fox bark." | | 3 | "Older than the trees around them by the look of it — the root systems had buckled up through the ground in great knuckled ridges that she had to step over carefully." | | 4 | "Not visibly — not a flash — but it went from warm to hot in the space of a single heartbeat, and she pressed her hand flat over it and stood very still until it steadied back to its former low pulse." | | 5 | "Not close — somewhere at the tree line, just outside the oak boundary, irregular and shallow." | | 6 | "It was behind her now, still at the perimeter but shifted — she was certain of it the way she was certain of the ground under her knees." | | 7 | "The movement was wrong for a fox — too upright, too deliberate." | | 8 | "There was movement again — not at the tree line this time." | | 9 | "Somewhere just beyond the nearest oak — no more than ten feet away, close enough to hear breath if there was breath to hear — a single twig snapped." |
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| 84.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1052 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "different: longer, softer-looking," |
| | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.05038022813688213 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019961977186311788 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 13.48 | | std | 12.42 | | cv | 0.922 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 51.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3924050632911392 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Entirely unremarkable, he'd said, unless" | | 1 | "Then she heard it." | | 2 | "Just the oaks, their bark" | | 3 | "Too slow for wind." | | 4 | "Too low for a person" | | 5 | "Somewhere just beyond the nearest" |
| | ratio | 0.087 | |
| 98.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been here once in" | | 1 | "She knew what to look" | | 2 | "She kept to the path" | | 3 | "She counted that as direction" | | 4 | "She walked on." | | 5 | "She stepped through." | | 6 | "She crouched and set her" | | 7 | "She worked carefully, using a" | | 8 | "She sat back on her" | | 9 | "She turned her phone slowly," | | 10 | "She turned back to the" | | 11 | "It was behind her now," | | 12 | "She turned again, faster this" | | 13 | "Her voice came out steady," | | 14 | "She faced the diagram again." | | 15 | "She was here for a" | | 16 | "She would finish what she'd" | | 17 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 18 | "Her torch caught it: a" | | 19 | "She watched the grass and" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant had been warm" | | 1 | "Rory had pressed her fingers" | | 2 | "She'd been here once in" | | 3 | "She knew what to look" | | 4 | "The park after closing was" | | 5 | "The paths she remembered —" | | 6 | "The oaks that had seemed" | | 7 | "The torch on her phone" | | 8 | "She kept to the path" | | 9 | "The pendant stayed warm against" | | 10 | "She counted that as direction" | | 11 | "The first thing she noticed" | | 12 | "This was silence with weight" | | 13 | "The moths that had been" | | 14 | "She walked on." | | 15 | "The oaks appeared sooner than" | | 16 | "She stepped through." | | 17 | "The pendant flared." | | 18 | "The flowers gave off a" | | 19 | "The silence, if anything, deepened." |
| | ratio | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "By Thursday night she found herself standing at the edge of Richmond Park at quarter past eleven, the iron gate cold under her hand, telling herself this was a …" | | 1 | "The oaks that had seemed stately and separate during the day pressed together into one continuous mass, and the sky between the canopy was a deep, lightless gre…" | | 2 | "The torch on her phone threw a thin white oval ahead of her that made everything outside its reach more absolute." | | 3 | "The moths that had been batting at her phone screen since the gate had simply stopped, somewhere around the second bend, and she hadn't registered their absence…" | | 4 | "Between them, the clearing opened, and even in the dark she could see that the grass inside was different: longer, softer-looking, and dotted with small white f…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |