Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VZ4544DX5V09CSZH0JZJP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.102575
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The delivery bag still hung from Rory's shoulder when she pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest, trailing the smell of sesame oil and the November cold. Silas stood behind the bar drying a tumbler, the green neon from the sign outside painting a stripe across his silver signet ring. He glanced at her, then at the bag. "Yu-Fei's working you late." "Last run." Rory dropped onto a stool and shrugged off the bag. Her cheeks stung from the wind. "Bloke in Fitzrovia ordered six portions of char siu and then pretended he wasn't home. I stood there ringing the bell like an idiot for ten minutes." Silas set a glass of water in front of her without being asked and moved down the bar to pour a whisky for one of the regulars. A Tuesday night, thin crowd. Two men in overcoats occupied a corner booth. A woman sat alone near the old maps on the far wall, scrolling through her phone, a half-finished gin and tonic sweating on the table. Rory barely registered any of them. She peeled open the rejected order and ate a piece of pork with her fingers. The woman near the maps stood up, phone still in hand, and walked toward the bar. Rory reached for another piece of char siu, and the woman stopped mid-stride. "Aurora?" Nobody called her that. Not here. Rory looked up, and the years collapsed like a telescope folding shut. Ceri Morgan stood three feet away in a charcoal coat that fit like it had been measured to the millimetre. Her dark hair, once a defiant tangle she'd refused to brush through three years of university, was blown straight and cut in a geometric line just above her jaw. Pearl studs. A leather bag that probably cost more than Rory's monthly rent. But the face was the same underneath all of it — the pointed chin, the gap between her front teeth that she used to say made her look like a jack-o'-lantern but that Rory had always found disarming. "Ceri." For a beat nothing happened. Then Ceri's mouth opened and closed and opened again, and the corporate architecture of her cracked just enough to show something raw. "God. It's — how long has it been?" "Four years. Almost five." "Five years." Ceri repeated it like she was reading a verdict. She pulled out the stool next to Rory and sat down without asking, and that at least was familiar. Ceri had never waited for invitations. Silas drifted back, took in the situation with the quick quiet read he gave everything, and raised an eyebrow at Rory. She gave him a small nod. He addressed Ceri. "What can I get you?" "Gin and tonic. Actually — no. Whisky. Whatever you'd recommend." He poured a measure of Talisker and set it in front of her, then moved away with the practised discretion that made Rory sometimes forget he'd ever been anything other than a bartender. Ceri stared at the glass. She hadn't touched it. "I thought you were in Cardiff." "I haven't been in Cardiff in three years." "Your mum said you'd gone travelling." "My mum says a lot of things." Rory folded the delivery bag twice and set it on the bar. Grease stained the canvas where the containers had leaked. She didn't bother hiding it. "What are you doing in Soho?" "Conference. Corporate mediation seminar at the Soho Hotel. Three days of people in lanyards arguing about conflict resolution, which is — " She stopped, laughed in a clipped way that had no warmth in it. "It's ironic, actually." "You're a mediator?" "I'm a partner at Haldane Ross. Commercial litigation." She said it the way someone might report the weather. "We handle mediation as part of the broader dispute resolution practice. It's — it pays well." Rory picked up her water. The old maps on the walls seemed to push in closer. Between her and Ceri there had once been no space at all — shared lecture notes, shared hangovers, shared cigarettes on the fire escape of their hall of residence while Cardiff rain hammered the metal stairs. Ceri had been the one who'd said the law was a blunt instrument, that they'd sharpen it together, that they'd open a practice in Splott and represent people who'd never hired a solicitor in their lives. That version of Ceri had worn oversized jumpers with holes in the elbows and argued through the night about sentencing reform. "You look different," Rory said. The words landed harder than she'd intended. Ceri's fingers tightened around the whisky glass. "People do. After five years." "That's not what I meant." "What did you mean?" Rory studied her. The pearl studs. The coat. The way Ceri sat with her spine unnaturally straight, shoulders pulled back, as though maintaining a shape that didn't come naturally. "You used to slouch." Ceri's jaw twitched. She drank the Talisker in one sharp pull and set the glass down. "And you used to study law instead of delivering Chinese food." The silence that followed had teeth. Silas, who'd been polishing glasses near the till, moved further down the bar. The two men in the corner booth were leaving, shrugging into their coats. "I'm sorry," Ceri said. "That was —" "Accurate." "Mean. It was mean." She pressed her thumb into the base of the glass, rotating it in a slow circle on the bartop. "I just. I didn't expect to see you. And you're sitting here with a delivery bag eating char siu with your fingers, and you look —" "What." "Happy." The word sat there like a stone dropped into still water. Rory felt the ripples of it move outward, touching things she hadn't examined in months. "Are you?" Rory asked. Ceri's rotation of the glass stopped. Her thumbnail had gone white from the pressure against it. In the silence, Rory could hear the faint old song leaking from the speakers overhead, something Silas had chosen, jazz or blues or whatever it was he played when the crowd thinned. "I have a flat in Canary Wharf. River view. I can see the O2 from my bathroom." Ceri smiled, and it looked like something she'd practised. "I made partner at thirty-one. Youngest in the firm's history. My mother keeps the Financial Times profile laminated on the fridge." "That's not what I asked." Ceri flagged Silas for another whisky. He poured. She wrapped both hands around it this time, and Rory noticed the tremor in her fingers. Slight. Easy to miss if you hadn't spent two years sitting next to someone in lecture halls, watching those same hands scribble furious marginalia in textbooks. "I heard about Evan," Ceri said. The pivot was so abrupt that Rory's stomach dropped before her brain caught up. She kept her face level. The crescent scar on her left wrist pulsed with a phantom itch. "Who told you?" "Eva. Last year. We bumped into each other at a bar in Bristol, funny enough. She'd had a few drinks and she told me — not details. Just that it had been bad and that you'd left Cardiff because of him." Ceri's eyes were wet now, and she blinked fiercely, as though angry at the tears for materialising. "I had no idea, Rory." The nickname landed soft, a key turning in an old lock. Rory hadn't heard Ceri say it in five years. "It wasn't your job to know." "I was your best friend." "You were in London by then. We'd already stopped calling." "That doesn't — " Ceri's voice splintered. She pressed her lips together and breathed through her nose. The woman who'd mastered corporate litigation at thirty-one sat in a Soho bar fighting for composure with the same ferocity she'd once reserved for arguing about judicial overreach. "I should have known. I should have — I was so wrapped up in the job and the partnership track and impressing people whose names I can't even remember anymore, and you were —" "I was handling it." "You were twenty-two." "And you were building a career. That's what we said we'd do." "No." Ceri shook her head. "That's what I said I'd do. You said we'd help people." She laughed, and this time it was genuine — wet and broken but genuine. "You were always the one who meant it." Rory looked at her hands. The delivery bag. The grease stain. She thought about Yu-Fei, who paid her in cash and leftover dumplings and asked no questions. About the flat upstairs with its crooked radiator and the window that stuck. About Silas, who'd given her a place to land when she'd arrived in London with a duffel bag and nothing resembling a plan. "I deliver food, Ceri. I'm not saving anyone." "You got yourself out." The sentence hung between them. Below it, like sediment at the bottom of a glass, all the things neither of them would say tonight. That Ceri had seen something wrong in their final year and chosen not to press. That Rory had stopped returning texts because it was easier to vanish than to explain. That time didn't heal so much as calcify, building up layers of distance that felt permanent until a woman in a charcoal coat walked up to you in a bar and said your name as though she still had a right to it. "I'm here until Thursday," Ceri said. She pulled a card from her bag and placed it on the bar. The card was heavy cream stock, embossed. CERI MORGAN — PARTNER — HALDANE ROSS LLP. A London number, an email, a small tasteful logo. Rory picked it up and turned it over. The back was blank. "I don't have a card," Rory said. "I don't need a card. I need your number written on a napkin." Rory looked at her. Ceri's mascara had smudged faintly beneath her left eye. The pearls gleamed under the bar's low light. Behind her, the old black-and-white photographs on the walls showed streets that no longer existed, captured in a moment before they'd been torn down and rebuilt as something unrecognisable. Rory reached across the bar for a pen — Silas kept one next to the register — and pulled a paper napkin from the dispenser. She wrote her number in the same cramped handwriting that had once filled the margins of their shared law notes. She slid it across. Ceri folded it carefully and put it in her coat pocket. She finished the second whisky. She placed a twenty-pound note on the bar, far more than the drinks cost, and stood. "The char siu smells incredible, by the way." "Want some? Bloke in Fitzrovia is never getting it." Ceri hesitated. For half a second the architecture fell away entirely, and she was just a girl on a fire escape in the rain, bumming a cigarette, saying they'd change the world. Then she buttoned her coat. "Thursday. Before my train. I'll call you." She walked out. The door swung shut behind her, and the green neon washed briefly across the floor and withdrew. Rory sat with the business card in one hand and a piece of cold pork in the other, and she stayed like that long enough for Silas to finish with his glasses and come back down. He looked at the card. Looked at her. "Old friend?" "Used to be." He nodded, the way he did when he understood more than the words offered, and poured her a small measure of the same Talisker without asking. Rory picked it up. She could still smell Ceri's perfume — something expensive and deliberate, nothing like the cheap vanilla body spray from their university days. The scent lingered at the edge of the bar like a question neither of them had known how to finish. She drank, and the whisky burned clean.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she blinked fiercely [fiercely]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.032
97.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1963
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1963
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"familiar"
2"eyebrow"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
5"stomach"
6"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1979
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions78
wordCount1494
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Ceri"
discoveredNames
Rory27
Raven1
Nest1
November1
Tuesday1
Morgan1
Ceri27
Talisker3
Grease1
Cardiff1
Splott1
Silas9
Soho1
Yu-Fei1
London2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Morgan"
4"Ceri"
5"Grease"
6"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Splott"
2"Soho"
3"London"
globalScore0.596
windowScore0.5
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though maintaining a shape that didn't come naturally"
1"looked like something she'd practised"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1979
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences167
matches
0"together, that they'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean25.37
std26
cv1.025
sampleLengths
059
14
245
386
429
51
618
7100
81
927
108
114
1236
1330
145
1510
1633
1715
188
196
2039
2138
223
2334
24109
255
2614
275
285
294
3033
3127
3232
337
341
3549
361
371
3826
394
4048
4147
425
4350
446
4531
463
4763
4820
496
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences122
matches
0"being asked"
1"been measured"
2"was blown"
3"been torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs252
matches
0"was reading"
1"were leaving"
40.21% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences167
ratio0.036
matches
0"But the face was the same underneath all of it — the pointed chin, the gap between her front teeth that she used to say made her look like a jack-o'-lantern but that Rory had always found disarming."
1"Between her and Ceri there had once been no space at all — shared lecture notes, shared hangovers, shared cigarettes on the fire escape of their hall of residence while Cardiff rain hammered the metal stairs."
2"\"That's what I said I'd do. You said we'd help people.\" She laughed, and this time it was genuine — wet and broken but genuine."
3"CERI MORGAN — PARTNER — HALDANE ROSS LLP."
4"Rory reached across the bar for a pen — Silas kept one next to the register — and pulled a paper napkin from the dispenser."
5"She could still smell Ceri's perfume — something expensive and deliberate, nothing like the cheap vanilla body spray from their university days."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1091
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.0384967919340055
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007332722273143905
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean11.85
std10.1
cv0.852
sampleLengths
028
123
28
34
412
56
627
727
85
98
1025
116
1215
1316
1413
151
164
172
1812
1920
2029
212
2211
2338
241
255
2622
278
284
2911
3019
316
3221
336
343
355
3610
3733
385
394
406
418
426
4319
449
455
466
4735
483
493
46.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.32335329341317365
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners54
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then Ceri's mouth opened and"
1"Then she buttoned her coat."
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences110
matches
0"He glanced at her, then"
1"Her cheeks stung from the"
2"She peeled open the rejected"
3"Her dark hair, once a"
4"She pulled out the stool"
5"She gave him a small"
6"He addressed Ceri."
7"He poured a measure of"
8"She hadn't touched it."
9"She didn't bother hiding it."
10"She stopped, laughed in a"
11"She said it the way"
12"She drank the Talisker in"
13"She pressed her thumb into"
14"Her thumbnail had gone white"
15"She wrapped both hands around"
16"She kept her face level."
17"She pressed her lips together"
18"She laughed, and this time"
19"She thought about Yu-Fei, who"
ratio0.273
23.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences110
matches
0"The delivery bag still hung"
1"Silas stood behind the bar"
2"He glanced at her, then"
3"Rory dropped onto a stool"
4"Her cheeks stung from the"
5"Silas set a glass of"
6"A Tuesday night, thin crowd."
7"A woman sat alone near"
8"Rory barely registered any of"
9"She peeled open the rejected"
10"The woman near the maps"
11"Rory reached for another piece"
12"Nobody called her that."
13"Rory looked up, and the"
14"Ceri Morgan stood three feet"
15"Her dark hair, once a"
16"A leather bag that probably"
17"Ceri repeated it like she"
18"She pulled out the stool"
19"Ceri had never waited for"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He poured a measure of Talisker and set it in front of her, then moved away with the practised discretion that made Rory sometimes forget he'd ever been anythin…"
1"Ceri had been the one who'd said the law was a blunt instrument, that they'd sharpen it together, that they'd open a practice in Splott and represent people who…"
2"The way Ceri sat with her spine unnaturally straight, shoulders pulled back, as though maintaining a shape that didn't come naturally."
3"The woman who'd mastered corporate litigation at thirty-one sat in a Soho bar fighting for composure with the same ferocity she'd once reserved for arguing abou…"
4"She thought about Yu-Fei, who paid her in cash and leftover dumplings and asked no questions."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she blinked fiercely, as though angry at the tears for materialising"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Ceri repeated (repeat)"
1"She pressed (press)"
2"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.323
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.097
85.1481%