Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8VZ8Q2929ACV30V9E19NEW

Run Details

Duration:
59.1s
Cost:
$0.040149
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The call came through at half one in the morning: unresponsive male, disused Tube infrastructure, Camden. The uniforms had cordoned off the access point behind a shuttered fish-and-chip shop on Chalk Farm Road, a rusted service door that looked like it hadn't moved in decades. Quinn had to shoulder it open herself. DS Aldridge was already down there, standing at the edge of the portable floodlights with his hands in his jacket pockets, studying the body with the particular expression of a man who had already made up his mind. "Cardiac," he said, before she'd even reached him. "Male, late forties. No obvious trauma. Paramedics are ninety percent on it." Quinn crouched at the perimeter of the scene, not touching anything yet, just looking. The abandoned platform stretched away into the dark on both sides of the lights, tiles cracked and greened with damp. The air carried the particular smell of old stations — rust, clay, stagnant water — but beneath it something else. Something burnt. Not electrical. Organic. The man lay on his back between the platform edge and the far wall. Expensive shoes. Wool coat. His right hand was palm-up at his side, fingers slightly curled, as though he'd been holding something when he fell. His face showed no distress. No clutched chest. No contorted last expression. He looked like someone had simply switched him off. "Who found him?" "Transit maintenance crew. Registered complaint about a blocked utility duct and came down to check." Aldridge pulled out his notebook. "Except — and this is where it gets a bit odd — the duct they were called about is two stations north. They'd been sent the wrong address." "Wrong address." Quinn stood, moved along the edge of the tape in a slow arc. "So the person who made the maintenance call knew this platform, knew how to get someone official down here fast." "Or it's an admin cock-up." She didn't answer that. Along the far wall, past the floodlit radius, she could make out the faint outline of tables. Not furniture that had always been there — the legs were folding, portable, the kind used at market stalls. Three of them, all empty, pushed back against the tiles. She took out her torch and walked toward them. "Been some sort of gathering here," she said. "Squatters, probably. Camden's full of—" "Squatters don't use folding tables." She moved the beam slowly. The floor was gritty with dust that had been disturbed recently, footprints overlapping in multiple directions, too many to count or individualise. At the far end of the row of tables, something had been scrawled on the floor in a medium she couldn't identify from standing height. She crouched again. Not scrawled. Burned. Small, precise shapes burned into the stone floor at intervals, roughly in a circle perhaps three metres across. Each mark was different. Each was deliberate. She'd seen marks like this before — not on any case file, not in any training manual. Three years ago, she had seen something similar in the flat where Morris had died, and she had photographed it and the photographs had come back from the lab as inexplicable heat trauma to the surface material and she had closed that particular note in the file and not reopened it. "Aldridge." She kept her voice level. "What's the civilian doing still here?" He glanced toward the platform entrance. A woman sat on an upturned transit crate twenty metres back, a uniform standing beside her. Curly red hair, round glasses pushed up on her forehead. A worn leather satchel sat between her feet, thick with the spines of books pressing against the sides. "Found her in the corridor beyond the platform. Maintenance crew nearly tripped over her. She says she got lost." "In a sealed disused Tube station." "She said she heard something and followed a group in through the service entrance." Quinn walked toward her. The woman looked up as Quinn approached, and her expression did something complicated — a calculation happening just under the surface, the specific kind of alertness that people deployed when they were trying to appear less alert. She was in her mid-twenties and her freckled complexion had gone pale under the fluorescent wash of the portable lights. "Eva Kowalski." Quinn read from the uniform's notepad without looking at the woman. "Research assistant." "That's right." "British Museum." "Yes." "And you followed strangers into an access corridor of a decommissioned station at midnight because you heard something." "I was curious." Quinn looked at the satchel. "What's in the bag?" "Books. Research materials." "May I?" A pause — very brief, but it was there. "Of course." Quinn unclipped the satchel without ceremony. She moved the top books aside. Standard archival texts, two in languages she didn't recognise. A cloth-wrapped cylinder that turned out to be a set of rolled paper documents covered in dense text and hand-drawn diagrams. And at the very bottom, lodged in the corner under everything else, a small compass in a brass casing. She turned it over. The face was covered in fine etched markings — not directional notations, not any cartographic convention she knew. The needle swung loosely and then stopped, pointing not north but back toward the circle of burned marks on the platform floor. Kowalski said nothing. Quinn held the compass up. The needle held its bearing with complete steadiness, indifferent to orientation. "This doesn't point north." "It's broken." "Broken needles float. This one has a destination." Quinn wrapped her fingers around the casing. The verdigris caught under her thumbnail, old and genuine, nothing faked. "Who else was here tonight?" Kowalski tucked a curl of red hair behind her left ear. "I already told the officer. I don't know anyone who was here. I followed strangers in." "And the man who died." "I never saw him before." Quinn turned the compass over, studying the sigils etched into the brass. She looked back at the circle burned into the stone floor, and then at the empty folding tables, and then at the dead man's open right hand. His palm showed a faint reddish mark at its centre — circular, like something hot had been pressed against it briefly. She hadn't seen it from a distance. Aldridge hadn't mentioned it. The paramedics had called cardiac and moved on. She walked back to the body. Crouched. Brought the torch beam low across the palm. The mark was there, clean and deliberate, the same diameter as the compass casing she still held. "Aldridge." She kept her eyes on the dead man's hand. "Pull the cardiac ruling. I want a full pathology consult before anything goes in the report." "Quinn, it's two in the morning and the paramedics are—" "Pull it." She stood, the compass still in her hand, and looked back at Kowalski across the platform. The woman had replaced her glasses on her nose and sat very still, watching Quinn with an expression that had graduated from calculation to something closer to wariness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1156
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
3
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1156
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"standard"
1"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1166
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount903
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
Aldridge3
Quinn12
Morris1
Kowalski3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Kowalski"
places
0"Chalk"
1"Farm"
2"Road"
3"Aldridge"
globalScore0.836
windowScore0.667
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like it hadn't moved in decades"
1"looked like someone had simply switched h"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.858
wordCount1166
matches
0"not north but back toward the circle of burned marks on the platform floor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean24.29
std26
cv1.071
sampleLengths
052
138
220
359
459
53
648
735
85
94
1055
118
125
135
1455
1596
1612
1750
1819
196
2014
214
2257
2315
242
252
261
2718
283
299
303
312
3211
33105
343
3516
364
372
3831
3927
405
415
4279
4332
4426
4510
462
4744
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences76
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"been scrawled"
2"was covered"
3"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs140
matches
0"were folding"
1"were trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences106
ratio0.066
matches
0"The air carried the particular smell of old stations — rust, clay, stagnant water — but beneath it something else."
1"Not furniture that had always been there — the legs were folding, portable, the kind used at market stalls."
2"She'd seen marks like this before — not on any case file, not in any training manual."
3"The woman looked up as Quinn approached, and her expression did something complicated — a calculation happening just under the surface, the specific kind of alertness that people deployed when they were trying to appear less alert."
4"A pause — very brief, but it was there."
5"The face was covered in fine etched markings — not directional notations, not any cartographic convention she knew."
6"His palm showed a faint reddish mark at its centre — circular, like something hot had been pressed against it briefly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount901
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03551609322974473
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008879023307436182
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11
std9.12
cv0.829
sampleLengths
016
129
27
338
48
512
614
720
820
92
102
111
1214
132
142
1520
165
173
184
199
203
2120
2228
2315
2420
255
264
2717
2819
2910
309
318
325
335
345
3522
3625
373
382
391
4018
414
423
4317
4451
456
466
476
4816
4910
75.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.49056603773584906
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences67
matches
0"he said, before she'd even"
1"His right hand was palm-up"
2"His face showed no distress."
3"He looked like someone had"
4"She didn't answer that."
5"She took out her torch"
6"She moved the beam slowly."
7"She crouched again."
8"She'd seen marks like this"
9"She kept her voice level"
10"He glanced toward the platform"
11"She was in her mid-twenties"
12"She moved the top books"
13"She turned it over."
14"She looked back at the"
15"His palm showed a faint"
16"She hadn't seen it from"
17"She walked back to the"
18"She kept her eyes on"
19"She stood, the compass still"
ratio0.299
49.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences67
matches
0"The call came through at"
1"The uniforms had cordoned off"
2"Quinn had to shoulder it"
3"DS Aldridge was already down"
4"he said, before she'd even"
5"Quinn crouched at the perimeter"
6"The abandoned platform stretched away"
7"The air carried the particular"
8"The man lay on his"
9"His right hand was palm-up"
10"His face showed no distress."
11"He looked like someone had"
12"Aldridge pulled out his notebook"
13"Quinn stood, moved along the"
14"She didn't answer that."
15"She took out her torch"
16"She moved the beam slowly."
17"The floor was gritty with"
18"She crouched again."
19"Each mark was different."
ratio0.821
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The uniforms had cordoned off the access point behind a shuttered fish-and-chip shop on Chalk Farm Road, a rusted service door that looked like it hadn't moved …"
1"DS Aldridge was already down there, standing at the edge of the portable floodlights with his hands in his jacket pockets, studying the body with the particular…"
2"His right hand was palm-up at his side, fingers slightly curled, as though he'd been holding something when he fell."
3"The floor was gritty with dust that had been disturbed recently, footprints overlapping in multiple directions, too many to count or individualise."
4"The woman looked up as Quinn approached, and her expression did something complicated — a calculation happening just under the surface, the specific kind of ale…"
5"The woman had replaced her glasses on her nose and sat very still, watching Quinn with an expression that had graduated from calculation to something closer to …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.053
leniency0.105
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.2671%