Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8W0Q23S3G452S9P0WNWYY8

Run Details

Duration:
51.6s
Cost:
$0.033630
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, not drops, and Detective Harlow Quinn had lost feeling in her left hand somewhere around Charing Cross Road. She kept running anyway. The man ahead of her was fast — faster than she'd expected when she'd first clocked him outside the Raven's Nest, standing under that garish green neon sign with his collar up and his hands shoved deep into his jacket pockets. She'd been watching the bar for six nights straight, cycling unmarked vehicles, sitting on cold leather in rental cars that smelled of other people's takeaway. Six nights of nothing. Then Tomás Herrera had walked out at quarter past eleven, looked both ways like a man who knew exactly what looking both ways meant, and broken into a run before she'd even had her hand on the door handle. He was good. She'd give him that. He cut left off Shaftesbury Avenue without slowing, shouldering through a cluster of tourists wrestling with inside-out umbrellas, and Quinn followed, badge already in her coat pocket, no time for that now. Her shoes found every puddle. The city at this hour was all fractured neon and the hiss of tyres, black cabs spraying arcs of water as they turned, and Herrera was a dark shape threading through all of it with the ease of someone who'd mapped these streets in the dark many times before. She'd pulled his file three weeks ago. Former paramedic. NHS trained. Lost his license eighteen months back under circumstances that her superintendent had called administrative and she'd called suspicious. He kept company with people whose names appeared in reports she wasn't supposed to have accessed — reports connected to the case that had taken Morris from her three years ago and left her with nothing but a sealed file and a grief she'd since weaponised into something useful. She cut through a side alley after him, her shoulder clipping a drainpipe, water dumping down the back of her neck. He was maybe thirty metres ahead now, and he wasn't losing her but he wasn't slowing either, and she had the sudden unsettling sense that he wasn't running from her so much as running toward something. The thought made her push harder. He went north. Long stretches of wet pavement, the city thinning out as they crossed into Camden, the market stalls long locked up and shuttered, the smell of the canal somewhere beneath the rain. Quinn's leather watch pressed cold against her wrist as she checked the time — eleven forty-three — and filed the fact away. Her lungs burned. She hadn't smoked in four years, which she considered still a recent enough victory to resent. Herrera turned down a service lane behind a row of closed shops, and she rounded the corner to find him gone. She stopped. The lane was narrow, maybe three metres wide, brick on both sides, a single security light casting a bruised yellow circle near a loading dock. Puddles. A dumpster. The sound of rain on metal. No Herrera. She stood very still and listened the way Morris had taught her — listen past what you're hearing for what you're not. A sound below. A scrape of metal. Then nothing. Quinn moved to the far end of the lane where the wall met a corrugated fence, and found it: a gap, barely a shoulder's width, and on the other side a set of concrete steps descending steeply into the ground. No signage. No lighting that she could see. Just the steps and the dark and the faint suggestion of air moving upward, carrying a smell she couldn't quite name — something old and mineral and wrong in a way that raised the hair on her forearms. She stood at the top of the steps with rain running off her chin and thought about DS Morris. She thought about him the way she always did in moments like this — not his face or his voice, but his absence, the precise negative shape of him that had never been adequately explained. The sealed file. The witness accounts that contradicted one another in ways the investigating team had attributed to trauma rather than examine properly. She'd examined them properly. She'd been examining them properly for three years, and every thread she pulled led somewhere her colleagues refused to follow, somewhere that sat just outside the edges of what she was professionally permitted to believe. She knew what was down there was connected. She didn't know precisely how. Her hand found her torch in her coat pocket. She didn't switch it on yet — too visible, too early. She breathed once, measured, and started down. The steps were uneven beneath her feet, worn smooth in the centre, which meant traffic. Regular traffic. More than she would have expected from an unmapped access point behind a shuttered service lane in Camden at midnight. She kept one hand lightly on the wall as the darkness thickened and the smell grew stronger — that mineral wrongness resolving slowly into something closer to woodsmoke and copper and something else entirely, something she had no category for yet. The steps ended. She pressed herself against the wall and switched the torch on, kept it low and angled. A corridor, wide enough for two people abreast, vaulted ceiling, the old tiles of it covered in decades of grime. Tube infrastructure — old, decommissioned, the kind the city swallowed and forgot. The floor was not empty. There were marks on it, a tracked path worn into the dust, diverging at a junction twenty metres ahead. And on the wall opposite the junction, someone had scratched an arrow. No torches except hers. No sound of Herrera's footsteps anymore. But ahead, beneath the junction, she could see a faint light blooming — warm, amber, sourceless. She clicked her torch off. The amber light was enough to move by. She went to the junction and stopped again, back to the wall, and looked around the corner slowly. The corridor opened into something larger beyond — a platform, she registered, an old platform, the kind that hadn't seen a scheduled train since before she was born, and on it was something she had absolutely no framework for and spent two full seconds simply processing before the detective part of her brain overrode everything else and began, methodically, to record. Stalls. Dozens of them, draped in dark cloth and lit by lanterns that burned with that amber light, arranged along the platform length like a market — a proper market, densely packed, moving, alive with commerce. The figures browsing were human, mostly, but mostly was doing a great deal of work in that sentence. She saw things she catalogued simply as anomalous and set aside for later. She heard voices in at least six languages. She smelled things she had no names for. And there at the nearest stall, his back to her, his curly hair damp from the rain and his olive skin lit amber-gold by a nearby lantern, was Tomás Herrera. He was talking to the stall holder in a low, rapid voice, his left hand braced on the counter, and she could see the pale line of the scar running along his forearm where his sleeve had ridden up. His other hand went to his chest, briefly, touching the Saint Christopher medallion at his collar the way a man touches a thing he carries for luck. Quinn pressed her back to the wall of the platform entrance and breathed. She had no backup. She had no warrant. She had no jurisdiction over whatever this was or whatever law, if any, governed it. She had her badge and her torch and eighteen years of decorated service and a sealed file with her dead partner's name on it, and ahead of her was a man who was her only live thread to every unanswered question she'd been carrying for three years. The worn leather of her watch pressed against her wrist. She tightened her fist until she felt her pulse against it. Then she pulled her collar up, switched her torch off, and stepped onto the platform.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:23:48.811Z" 2/24/2026, 10:23:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
81.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"precisely"
2"lightly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"resolving"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"absolutely"
count1
5
word"framework"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"measured"
2"resolving"
3"footsteps"
4"absolutely"
5"framework"
6"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
92.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"listen"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1359
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1359
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn5
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás2
Herrera6
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Morris3
Camden2
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Nest"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Morris"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Charing"
1"Cross"
2"Road"
3"Raven"
4"Shaftesbury"
5"Avenue"
6"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name — something old and mineral and wrong in a way that raised the hair on her forearms"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.736
wordCount1359
matches
0"not his face or his voice, but his absence, the precise negative shape of him"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"lighting that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean41.18
std34.88
cv0.847
sampleLengths
024
14
2109
37
486
578
657
76
875
921
102
1136
1222
139
1486
1519
1697
1713
1827
1978
203
2116
2268
2326
245
258
2679
27113
2866
2913
3070
3121
3215
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"was connected"
48.48% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs220
matches
0"wasn't losing"
1"wasn't slowing"
2"wasn't running"
3"was doing"
4"was talking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences85
ratio0.141
matches
0"The man ahead of her was fast — faster than she'd expected when she'd first clocked him outside the Raven's Nest, standing under that garish green neon sign with his collar up and his hands shoved deep into his jacket pockets."
1"He kept company with people whose names appeared in reports she wasn't supposed to have accessed — reports connected to the case that had taken Morris from her three years ago and left her with nothing but a sealed file and a grief she'd since weaponised into something useful."
2"Quinn's leather watch pressed cold against her wrist as she checked the time — eleven forty-three — and filed the fact away."
3"She stood very still and listened the way Morris had taught her — listen past what you're hearing for what you're not."
4"Just the steps and the dark and the faint suggestion of air moving upward, carrying a smell she couldn't quite name — something old and mineral and wrong in a way that raised the hair on her forearms."
5"She thought about him the way she always did in moments like this — not his face or his voice, but his absence, the precise negative shape of him that had never been adequately explained."
6"She didn't switch it on yet — too visible, too early."
7"She kept one hand lightly on the wall as the darkness thickened and the smell grew stronger — that mineral wrongness resolving slowly into something closer to woodsmoke and copper and something else entirely, something she had no category for yet."
8"Tube infrastructure — old, decommissioned, the kind the city swallowed and forgot."
9"But ahead, beneath the junction, she could see a faint light blooming — warm, amber, sourceless."
10"The corridor opened into something larger beyond — a platform, she registered, an old platform, the kind that hadn't seen a scheduled train since before she was born, and on it was something she had absolutely no framework for and spent two full seconds simply processing before the detective part of her brain overrode everything else and began, methodically, to record."
11"Dozens of them, draped in dark cloth and lit by lanterns that burned with that amber light, arranged along the platform length like a market — a proper market, densely packed, moving, alive with commerce."
98.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1349
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.04151223128243143
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.017790956263899184
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean15.99
std14.11
cv0.882
sampleLengths
024
14
241
325
44
539
63
74
832
95
1049
117
122
132
1418
1549
1621
1736
186
193
2031
2122
223
2316
2421
252
2625
271
282
296
302
3122
323
334
342
3540
362
376
3838
3919
4035
413
4220
434
4435
458
465
479
4811
497
33.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then Tomás Herrera had walked"
1"Just the steps and the"
2"More than she would have"
3"Then she pulled her collar"
ratio0.053
22.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences75
matches
0"She kept running anyway."
1"She'd been watching the bar"
2"He was good."
3"She'd give him that."
4"He cut left off Shaftesbury"
5"Her shoes found every puddle."
6"She'd pulled his file three"
7"He kept company with people"
8"She cut through a side"
9"He was maybe thirty metres"
10"He went north."
11"Her lungs burned."
12"She hadn't smoked in four"
13"She stood very still and"
14"She stood at the top"
15"She thought about him the"
16"She'd examined them properly."
17"She'd been examining them properly"
18"She knew what was down"
19"She didn't know precisely how."
ratio0.493
53.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences75
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"She kept running anyway."
2"The man ahead of her"
3"She'd been watching the bar"
4"He was good."
5"She'd give him that."
6"He cut left off Shaftesbury"
7"Her shoes found every puddle."
8"The city at this hour"
9"She'd pulled his file three"
10"He kept company with people"
11"She cut through a side"
12"He was maybe thirty metres"
13"The thought made her push"
14"He went north."
15"Quinn's leather watch pressed cold"
16"Her lungs burned."
17"She hadn't smoked in four"
18"Herrera turned down a service"
19"The lane was narrow, maybe"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
3.11% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She'd been watching the bar for six nights straight, cycling unmarked vehicles, sitting on cold leather in rental cars that smelled of other people's takeaway."
1"The city at this hour was all fractured neon and the hiss of tyres, black cabs spraying arcs of water as they turned, and Herrera was a dark shape threading thr…"
2"He kept company with people whose names appeared in reports she wasn't supposed to have accessed — reports connected to the case that had taken Morris from her …"
3"She cut through a side alley after him, her shoulder clipping a drainpipe, water dumping down the back of her neck."
4"Just the steps and the dark and the faint suggestion of air moving upward, carrying a smell she couldn't quite name — something old and mineral and wrong in a w…"
5"She thought about him the way she always did in moments like this — not his face or his voice, but his absence, the precise negative shape of him that had never…"
6"The corridor opened into something larger beyond — a platform, she registered, an old platform, the kind that hadn't seen a scheduled train since before she was…"
7"Dozens of them, draped in dark cloth and lit by lanterns that burned with that amber light, arranged along the platform length like a market — a proper market, …"
8"She had her badge and her torch and eighteen years of decorated service and a sealed file with her dead partner's name on it, and ahead of her was a man who was…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.2552%