Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8W34PF3TTQX64F5J5SBK0Y

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 21s
Cost:
$0.005746
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk. Aurora Carter peered through the narrow gap the security chain allowed, the dim hallway light catching the platinum blond hair first. Her breath hitched. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other tucked into the pocket of a charcoal suit that looked tailored within an inch of its life. The amber and black eyes found hers through the gap. “Rory.” The sound of his voice, that low Marseille accent wrapping around her nickname, unlocked something in her chest she’d bolted shut months ago. She didn’t move. “You’re a hard woman to find.” He didn’t smile. “Three deadbolts. Eva’s paranoia is rubbing off.” “What do you want, Lucien?” “To talk. May I come in, or shall we conduct our business in the hall? I believe your neighbor is listening.” He tilted his head slightly toward the door across the landing, behind which a television blared. Aurora pushed the door shut, slipped the chain, and opened it fully. She didn’t step back, forcing him to brush past her in the cramped doorway. The scent of him—sandalwood, ozone, something metallic and dark—flooded the small space. He moved into the flat with the familiar, slight hesitation she remembered, the cane a quiet tap on the floorboards. She closed the door, reset all three locks. The sounds were overly loud in the silence. When she turned, he was standing amid the chaos of Eva’s research, his gaze taking in the towers of books, the unfurled scrolls on the kitchen table, the cat Ptolemy watching him from the top of a bookshelf. “Charming,” Lucien said, though his tone held no mockery. “Eva’s at the library. She won’t be back for hours.” “I didn’t come to see Eva.” Aurora crossed her arms, leaning against the door. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a nervous habit. “Then say what you came to say and go.” His heterochromatic eyes settled on her. The amber one seemed to glow in the flat’s weak light. “You left London. Suddenly. No word. Then I hear you’re back, living above a bar, working for a restaurateur, and your ex-boyfriend with the violent temper is asking around Soho about a black-haired girl with bright blue eyes.” The facts, delivered in that calm, analytical tone, felt like stones dropped into still water. “Evan is not your concern.” “He became my concern when he started frequenting establishments that cater to my clientele, asking questions with more money than sense. He’s looking for you, Rory. He’s not just angry. He’s funded.” A cold trickle traced her spine. She pushed away from the door, walking to the kitchenette to put the kettle on. A pointless, domestic gesture. “I can handle Evan.” “Can you?” The cane tapped as he followed her, stopping at the edge of the cluttered table. “The Aurora Carter I knew was pre-law, poised, always three steps ahead. The woman I see now delivers dumplings and hides in a friend’s book-hoard. Handling things does not appear to be going well.” She spun, the kettle forgotten. “The Aurora Carter you knew was naive. She thought a half-demon fixer in a pretty suit was something other than a dangerous complication. She was wrong.” A muscle flexed in his jaw. “I never lied to you.” “You didn’t have to. The omissions were enough.” The words hung between them, the old hurt swelling in the room like a physical presence. They had spent six months in a blur of late-night conversations in his curated Mayfair apartment, a heady mix of intellectual sparring and a tension so thick it tasted like electricity. It had ended the night a ghoul’s blood splattered across her coat because she’d been with him. He’d told her it was part of his world. She’d told him she couldn’t live in it. She’d walked out and never answered his calls. “Why are you really here, Luc? To warn me about Evan? You could have sent a note. You have people for that.” He leaned his cane against the table and slowly, deliberately, removed his leather gloves, finger by finger. “I saw the report of the incident at the Golden Empress. A broken window, a scuffle. Yu-Fei Cheung is connected, but not that connected. I put it together.” “So this is professional curiosity? A broker tying up loose ends?” “This is me standing in a room that smells of old paper and curry, looking at you.” His voice dropped, stripped of its usual polished edge. “Looking at the shadows under your eyes. At the way you hold your left wrist when you’re nervous. I came because the thought of Evan Pierce getting within a mile of you made the demon in my bloodline want to peel the skin from his bones.” The raw violence in the words, so at odds with his impeccable exterior, stunned her silent. Ptolemy meowed from the shelf. “You left,” Aurora whispered. “After I ended it. You just… stopped.” “You asked me to.” He took a step closer. The small space meant the hem of his coat almost touched her jeans. “You said my world would get you killed. What was I to do? Drag you back into it to prove you right?” “You could have fought.” “For what? You made your choice. You wanted safety, normality. I am the antithesis of that.” He gestured around the flat. “And yet here you are, immersed in Eva’s world of magical theory, living in a flat owned by a man who runs a bar for supernatural clientele. You did not escape our world, Rory. You dove into a different corner of it.” She had no rebuttal. He was right. She’d run from him to Eva, from one kind of danger to another, thinking it was safer because it was academic. It was just another layer of the same hidden city. “I was scared,” she admitted, the words torn from her. “Of you. Of what I felt. It was too much, too fast. And then the blood… it was a shock. I needed space.” “And now?” His amber eye seemed to burn. “Now I have a psychotic ex with money looking for me, and you’re in my friend’s flat telling me things that make me want to put another deadbolt on the door.” A faint, humorless smile touched his lips. “Always practical.” The kettle began a low rumble on the stove. Neither of them moved to stop it. The sound filled the room, a rising whine. “I can make Evan disappear,” Lucien said, his tone returning to its businesslike neutrality. “It would be a simple transaction. No trace. No connection to you.” “I don’t want that.” “Why? Because it’s not legal? Your father the barrister would disapprove?” He shook his head. “This is not Cardiff. This is not a courtroom. This is the street, and he is a threat.” “I don’t want you to do that for me.” She met his gaze, holding both the amber and the black. “I don’t want to owe you.” “You wouldn’t owe me.” “Everything with you is a transaction, Luc. Information, protection, favors. It’s all currency. I won’t be another item on your ledger.” The rumble of the kettle peaked into a shrill whistle. Aurora jumped, turning to yank it from the heat. The sudden silence that followed was deafening. She felt him behind her before his hands touched her shoulders. His grip was firm, not restraining, just present. The heat of him seeped through her thin sweater. “You were never a transaction.” His breath stirred the hair at her temple. “From the first moment you walked into Silas’s bar and corrected my pronunciation of ‘Mabinogion,’ you were a complication I could not quantify. You still are.” She let her head fall forward, the tension draining from her neck. “What are we doing?” “I don’t know.” His thumbs moved in small circles on her shoulders. “But I know I spent months trying to forget the sound of your laugh. I know that when I heard Evan’s name linked with yours, I came here instead of sending a messenger. That is not good business. That is something else entirely.” Aurora turned within the circle of his arms. They were close, too close. She could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the perfect cut of his hair, the pulse in his throat. The cane leaned forgotten against the table. “Something else,” she echoed. His gaze dropped to her mouth. “A mistake, perhaps.” “Probably.” He didn’t move away. The air between them crackled with all the things left unsaid—the attraction that had never died, the hurt of the abrupt ending, the fear of what he was, and the deeper fear of what she became when she was with him. “I can’t go back to what we were,” she said, her voice barely audible. “I’m not asking you to.” “What are you asking?” “For now?” He lifted a hand, his fingers hovering near her cheek before he brushed a strand of black hair behind her ear. The touch was electric. “To let me help you. Not as a broker. Not for a fee. Let me… be here. However you’ll allow.” It was the most vulnerable thing he’d ever said to her. The man who spoke four languages fluently, who navigated the underworld with an ivory-handled cane and a blade, was standing in a messy flat asking for permission to stay. The old warning bells rang in her mind. Dangerous complication. But the man in front of her didn’t look like a demon in that moment. He looked tired. He looked real. Outside, a siren wailed on Brick Lane, fading into the distance. Ptolemy jumped down from the shelf and wound himself around Lucien’s legs, purring. Aurora let out a slow breath. “The kettle’s boiled. Do you still take your tea black?” His lips curved, a genuine smile this time, small but there. “You remembered.” “I remember everything, Luc.” She turned back to the counter, pulling down two mismatched mugs from Eva’s cupboard. Her hands were steady. “It’s the problem.” She felt his eyes on her back, a weight and a warmth. The first step, however tentative, had been taken. The door had been opened, and neither of them had walked away. Not yet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
1"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.656
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.066
85.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1727
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"slowly"
4"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1727
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"tension"
count2
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"navigated"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"traced"
3"tension"
4"perfect"
5"pulse"
6"echoed"
7"electric"
8"navigated"
9"weight"
10"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1724
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount987
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Marseille1
Aurora7
Eva3
Ptolemy3
Mayfair1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like stones dropped into still wat"
1"tasted like electricity"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1724
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean27.37
std19.29
cv0.705
sampleLengths
033
145
21
326
416
55
637
758
854
99
1010
116
1229
1355
1420
1532
1629
1751
1831
1911
2097
2122
2245
2311
2472
2521
2611
2744
284
2963
3038
3133
328
3331
349
3524
3626
374
3833
3926
404
4121
4226
4328
4439
4516
4655
4743
484
499
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"been taken"
1"been opened"
76.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was standing"
1"was deafening"
2"was standing"
99.89% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences133
ratio0.015
matches
0"The scent of him—sandalwood, ozone, something metallic and dark—flooded the small space."
1"The air between them crackled with all the things left unsaid—the attraction that had never died, the hurt of the abrupt ending, the fear of what he was, and the deeper fear of what she became when she was with him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount992
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.023185483870967742
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007056451612903226
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean12.96
std10.12
cv0.78
sampleLengths
09
121
23
335
410
51
623
73
89
97
105
1137
1212
1314
1412
1520
168
178
1838
199
2010
216
228
2312
249
256
2611
2738
2815
295
3032
316
3215
334
344
3517
3634
375
3826
396
405
4124
4231
4317
449
458
468
4722
4817
4928
47.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences88
matches
0"Her breath hitched."
1"She didn’t move."
2"He didn’t smile"
3"He tilted his head slightly"
4"She didn’t step back, forcing"
5"He moved into the flat"
6"She closed the door, reset"
7"His heterochromatic eyes settled on"
8"She pushed away from the"
9"She spun, the kettle forgotten."
10"They had spent six months"
11"It had ended the night"
12"He’d told her it was"
13"She’d told him she couldn’t"
14"She’d walked out and never"
15"He leaned his cane against"
16"His voice dropped, stripped of"
17"He took a step closer"
18"He gestured around the flat"
19"She had no rebuttal."
ratio0.511
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences88
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Aurora Carter peered through the"
2"Her breath hitched."
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"The amber and black eyes"
5"The sound of his voice,"
6"She didn’t move."
7"He didn’t smile"
8"He tilted his head slightly"
9"Aurora pushed the door shut,"
10"She didn’t step back, forcing"
11"The scent of him—sandalwood, ozone,"
12"He moved into the flat"
13"She closed the door, reset"
14"The sounds were overly loud"
15"Lucien said, though his tone"
16"Aurora crossed her arms, leaning"
17"The small crescent scar on"
18"His heterochromatic eyes settled on"
19"The amber one seemed to"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, the other tucked into the pocket of a charcoal suit that looked tailored w…"
1"When she turned, he was standing amid the chaos of Eva’s research, his gaze taking in the towers of books, the unfurled scrolls on the kitchen table, the cat Pt…"
2"The man who spoke four languages fluently, who navigated the underworld with an ivory-handled cane and a blade, was standing in a messy flat asking for permissi…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Lucien said, though his tone held no mockery"
1"she admitted, the words torn from her"
2"Lucien said, his tone returning to its businesslike neutrality"
3"she said, her voice barely audible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.164
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.066
78.9093%