| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.327 | | leniency | 0.654 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.038 | |
| 85.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2062 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2062 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "unsettled" | | 1 | "charm" | | 2 | "navigating" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "fractured" | | 5 | "churning" | | 6 | "intensity" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 157 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2086 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1735 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Deliveroo | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | British | 1 | | Library | 1 | | Singha | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Moreau | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | French | 2 | | London | 5 | | English | 2 | | Rory | 7 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | University | 1 | | Savile | 1 | | Row | 1 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Three | 1 | | Careful | 1 | | Evan | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "English" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "Ptolemy" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "British" | | 1 | "Library" | | 2 | "Marseille" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Savile" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 21.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like cumin and old carpet" | | 1 | "quite mastered, and he found the challenge more interesting than frustrating" | | 2 | "quite amusement" | | 3 | "sounded like exactly what she was — a twen" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 0.959 | | wordCount | 2086 | | matches | | 0 | "not the memories she'd boxed and shelved and refused to inventory, but the shape of it, the lesson she'd taken from it" | | 1 | "not just gold but layered, honey over copper over something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "maintaining that distance" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 74 | | mean | 28.19 | | std | 29.16 | | cv | 1.034 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 115 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 93 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 95 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 76 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 99 | | 29 | 63 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 104 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 54 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 79 | | 47 | 46 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 96.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "been holed" | | 1 | "being ignored" | | 2 | "being held" |
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| 16.72% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 291 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't wearing" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "wasn't happening" | | 3 | "was looking" | | 4 | "was already dulling" | | 5 | "was being" | | 6 | "was costing" | | 7 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 157 | | ratio | 0.121 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled the door open expecting the Deliveroo driver Eva had promised to send up before she'd left for the British Library — pad thai, extra chili, cold Singha — and found Lucien Moreau standing on the landing instead, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, the other holding a paper bag dark with grease stains." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes — amber and black, the mark of what he was on his father's side — studied her with that particular quality of attention she'd spent the last two months trying to forget." | | 2 | "It was the thing she resented most about him — that steadiness, that refusal to match her when she was looking for a fight." | | 3 | "That was the other thing about Lucien — he never smiled when he was being serious, and he was almost always being serious with her." | | 4 | "She pressed her thumbnail into the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — an old habit, grounding, the small smooth ridge of tissue a touchstone — and exhaled." | | 5 | "Books rose in precarious towers from every horizontal surface — the kitchen counter, the coffee table, the arms of the sofa where Ptolemy had already reclaimed his spot." | | 6 | "His cane he leaned against the wall beside the door, within arm's reach — always within arm's reach, the thin blade hidden inside it a secret Rory was one of very few people to know." | | 7 | "Now he did look at her —a flicker of something at the corner of his mouth that wasn't quite amusement." | | 8 | "His black eye — the demon eye, the one he couldn't disguise without effort — was darker than she remembered, the pupil indistinguishable from the iris, a well with no bottom." | | 9 | "In the months she'd known him — the late-night phone calls in French and English and sometimes a demon tongue she couldn't name, the favours exchanged like currency, the slow gravitational pull that had drawn them closer and closer until the night everything had fractured — she had never once seen Lucien Moreau nervous." | | 10 | "He said them the way he said everything — like language was a blade and he knew exactly where to place the cut." | | 11 | "She thought about Evan — not the specifics, not the memories she'd boxed and shelved and refused to inventory, but the shape of it, the lesson she'd taken from it: that wanting someone was a kind of vulnerability, and vulnerability was a door you could never fully close once it was open." | | 12 | "She'd meant to sound pragmatic and instead she sounded like exactly what she was — a twenty-five-year-old woman standing barefoot in her best friend's flat, terrified of the precise thing she wanted most." | | 13 | "She could hear the curry house music, bass-heavy and muffled, and the rattle of the old pipes in the wall, and London doing what London always did outside the window — living, churning, indifferent." | | 14 | "He stopped close enough that she could smell his cologne — something warm and resinous that she'd tried and failed to forget — and see the fine grain of the stubble along his jaw." | | 15 | "She laughed — a short, wet sound that startled them both." | | 16 | "This close, the amber eye was extraordinary — not just gold but layered, honey over copper over something that moved like light through deep water." | | 17 | "His touch was warm, warmer than a human's — the demon blood running hotter beneath the surface." | | 18 | "She felt her pulse kick against his touch, felt the sharp sweetness of it — being held gently by someone strong enough to be gentle, the deliberateness of it, the choice." |
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| 97.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1722 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 73 | | adverbRatio | 0.042392566782810684 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009872241579558653 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 157 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 157 | | mean | 13.29 | | std | 12.22 | | cv | 0.92 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 40.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3057324840764331 | | totalSentences | 157 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the second." | | 1 | "Then the third." | | 2 | "Instead she said," | | 3 | "Always so careful with her," | | 4 | "Then he closed the distance" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 1.82% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked exactly the same." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes — amber" | | 2 | "he said, his accent curling" | | 3 | "She had missed her shift." | | 4 | "She'd been holed up in" | | 5 | "She'd almost believed it." | | 6 | "She crossed her arms over" | | 7 | "Her hair was unwashed." | | 8 | "She wasn't wearing shoes." | | 9 | "She was, in short, a" | | 10 | "He had always been patient" | | 11 | "It was the thing she" | | 12 | "She'd learned to read the" | | 13 | "she said, but the edge" | | 14 | "She hated that too." | | 15 | "He didn't smile" | | 16 | "She opened her mouth to" | | 17 | "He was right." | | 18 | "He was usually right, and" | | 19 | "She pressed her thumbnail into" |
| | ratio | 0.545 | |
| 37.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "The first deadbolt turned with" | | 1 | "Rory pulled the door open" | | 2 | "He looked exactly the same." | | 3 | "That was the worst part." | | 4 | "The platinum hair slicked back" | | 5 | "The charcoal suit cut close" | | 6 | "His mismatched eyes — amber" | | 7 | "he said, his accent curling" | | 8 | "Rory gripped the door frame." | | 9 | "Ptolemy wound between her ankles," | | 10 | "Lucien lifted the paper bag" | | 11 | "The mention of Yu-Fei sent" | | 12 | "She had missed her shift." | | 13 | "She'd been holed up in" | | 14 | "She'd almost believed it." | | 15 | "Something shifted behind his eyes." | | 16 | "The amber one caught the" | | 17 | "She crossed her arms over" | | 18 | "Her hair was unwashed." | | 19 | "She wasn't wearing shoes." |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 90.91% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "As though she were a" | | 1 | "Now he did look at" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "As though she were a document in a language he hadn't quite mastered, and he found the challenge more interesting than frustrating." | | 1 | "She'd been holed up in Eva's flat for three days, combing through scrolls and research notes with curtains drawn, sleeping on the sofa with a tabby cat on her c…" | | 2 | "With other people, with clients and contacts and the various creatures that moved through London's underworld, he wore charm like another layer of tailoring." | | 3 | "Research notes in Eva's cramped handwriting papered the walls, connected by lengths of red string that made the whole flat look like the inside of a conspiracy …" | | 4 | "Now he did look at her —a flicker of something at the corner of his mouth that wasn't quite amusement." | | 5 | "In the months she'd known him — the late-night phone calls in French and English and sometimes a demon tongue she couldn't name, the favours exchanged like curr…" | | 6 | "Ptolemy had climbed onto the back of the sofa and was watching them both with the calm, judgmental gaze of a creature that had never once been uncertain about a…" | | 7 | "His mismatched eyes searched her face with an intensity that made something turn over low in her belly." | | 8 | "This close, the amber eye was extraordinary — not just gold but layered, honey over copper over something that moved like light through deep water." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, not looking at her" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.038 | |