Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8W4FQA9XCMQZXT8Z5ZMTER

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.079690
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The platform tiles had been white once. Now they wore decades of grime in overlapping shades of grey and brown, cracked in places where London's damp had wormed its way beneath the glaze. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the cordon tape that her constables had strung between two rusted stanchions and stepped onto the abandoned platform. The air tasted of old stone and something else — something copper-bright and wrong. "Watch your step past the third pillar," called DC Osei from somewhere deeper in the tunnel. "The floor's gone to mush." Quinn pulled a torch from her coat and swept the beam across the platform. The station had no name anymore. Whatever signs had once hung here had been stripped, leaving rectangular wounds in the tile where the adhesive had bonded and torn. Her boots crunched on grit and what sounded like glass. She looked down. Not glass. Bone. Small fragments of bone, pale and dry, scattered across the platform floor like confetti. She crouched. Picked up a shard between gloved fingers. Thin. Hollow. Bird bone, maybe, though she'd never seen bird bone polished to this kind of smoothness. It caught the torchlight and threw back a faint iridescence, like mother-of-pearl. "Harlow." DC Osei appeared at the edge of her torch beam. Young, broad-shouldered, his face arranged in that particular expression she'd come to recognize over their four months working together — the one that said he had a theory and was bursting with it. "You need to see the body." She pocketed the bone fragment and followed him along the platform, past columns thick with peeling notices for shows that had closed before she was born. The station had been sealed in the seventies, according to Transport for London's records. No public access. No maintenance crews. The padlocked entrance above them had been cut open with bolt cutters, and the Met had been called when a utility surveyor stumbled in and found more than he'd bargained for. The body lay at the far end of the platform, in an alcove that might once have been a staff room. The door had been removed from its hinges and propped against the opposite wall. Inside, the space was maybe ten feet square, and every surface had been covered with writing. Quinn stepped inside and stopped. The walls, the ceiling, the floor — all of it inscribed in a dense, spiraling script she didn't recognize. The characters had been painted in something dark that had dried to a reddish-brown. And in the center of the room, a man lay on his back with his arms crossed over his chest, eyes open, mouth frozen in what looked less like a scream and more like surprise. "White male, late fifties, no ID," Osei said, reading from his notepad. "No wallet, no phone, no keys. Pathologist's initial look says no visible cause of death. No wounds, no ligature marks, no signs of poisoning that she could see on-site. She's flagged it for a full post-mortem." Quinn knelt beside the body. The man wore a heavy wool coat, old-fashioned cut, double-breasted. Underneath, a waistcoat with a watch chain, though whatever had hung from the chain was gone — only a broken link remained. His shoes were handmade. Good leather. Recent polish. His fingernails were clean but stained at the tips with the same dark substance that covered the walls. "He wrote all this himself," Quinn said. "That's my read too. Look at his right hand." She lifted the hand gently. The index and middle fingers were raw, the skin worn through in places, as though he'd been writing for hours. Days, possibly. She set the hand back down. "So a man breaks into a sealed Tube station, covers a room in some kind of script, and dies." She stood. "Who found the entrance cut?" "The surveyor, bloke named Kapoor. He was doing ground-penetrating radar work for a new water main. Found the hatch, saw the bolt cutters had been at the lock, called it in as a break-in. Uniform went down, found our man." Quinn turned her attention to the walls. The script was tight, obsessive, each character placed with obvious care despite the rawness of the dead man's fingers. She photographed several sections with her phone. The writing circled the room in a continuous spiral that started at the door and wound inward toward where the body lay, like a snail's shell viewed from above. "Osei. What's your theory." He straightened. "Mentally unwell individual. Obsessive graphomania — I looked it up. It's a condition where people write compulsively, cover every surface. He breaks in looking for somewhere private, somewhere underground where nobody will disturb him, spends days writing until he has a cardiac event or a stroke. The script's probably nonsense. Invented language, maybe. Pathologist will find a natural cause." It was a clean theory. Tidy. Quinn ran her torch along the baseboard, where the writing met the floor. "What about the bone fragments on the platform?" "Animal remains. Urban foxes get in everywhere. Pigeons die down here." "Polished bone, Osei. Iridescent. Scattered in a pattern." "A pattern?" She walked back out onto the platform and pointed her torch at the ground. The bone fragments weren't random — she could see it now that she was looking. They radiated outward from the alcove doorway in lines, like the spokes of a wheel. Someone had placed each piece deliberately. Osei followed her gaze and said nothing for a moment. "Could still be our victim," he offered. "Part of the same compulsive behavior." Quinn didn't answer. She was looking at the space between the bone lines. In the dust of the platform floor, she could make out marks — dozens of footprints, overlapping, different sizes. Some were boot prints. Some were barefoot. Some had treads she didn't recognize, odd geometries that left impressions like no shoe she'd ever catalogued. "How many people have been down here, Osei? Before us." "Uniform says two constables and the surveyor. That's it." "Three people made all these prints?" He looked at the floor. His confidence faltered. The footprints covered the platform from edge to edge, worn into the dust in paths that suggested repeated movement — back and forth, clustering in certain areas, thinning in others. This wasn't three people passing through once. This was foot traffic. Regular, sustained foot traffic, from dozens of individuals over weeks or months. Quinn walked along the platform, reading the floor like a map. The footprints converged at a point near the tunnel mouth, where the platform gave way to darkness. She shone her torch into the tunnel. The tracks continued along the maintenance walkway, disappearing around the curve. On the wall beside the tunnel entrance, someone had scratched a symbol into the tile. A circle, bisected by a vertical line, with three horizontal lines crossing it at intervals. The scratches were fresh — white tile dust still clung to the grooves. She photographed it. "There's something else," she said, turning back to the alcove. She crouched beside the body again and examined the broken watch chain more carefully. The remaining links were unusual — not gold, not silver, but a metal with a greenish patina. Brass. She turned the last intact link over. On its inner surface, someone had engraved a tiny mark. She held her torch close. It matched one of the characters on the walls. "Our man didn't wander in here because he was unwell," Quinn said. "He came here because he knew this place. He was part of whatever happened on this platform." "Whatever happened?" "Regular gatherings. A market, maybe, or a meeting point. Look at the wear patterns in the dust. There are areas where people stood for long periods — that could be stalls, or stations. The bone fragments are placed deliberately to mark something. A boundary, possibly. An entrance requirement that got discarded." Osei crossed his arms. "You're describing a criminal operation." "I'm describing what the evidence shows." "Based on footprints in dust and bits of bone." Quinn reached into her coat pocket and took out the fragment she'd collected earlier. Held it up between them. Under the torchlight, the iridescence shifted — green to blue to violet — in a way that no bird bone she'd ever encountered could account for. "Have you ever seen animal bone do that?" Osei took it from her, turned it over. His face changed. The certainty drained out of it, replaced by something more cautious. "No," he admitted. Quinn took the fragment back and sealed it in an evidence bag. She returned to the body and began a more thorough search of the coat pockets. The outer pockets were empty, but in the inside breast pocket, her fingers found something small and hard. She drew it out. A compass. Brass, small enough to sit comfortably in her palm, the casing covered in a green patina of verdigris. The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize — not quite the same as the wall script, but from the same family. Deliberate. Old. The needle inside didn't point north. It drifted, trembled, and then swung sharply toward the tunnel mouth with a certainty that had nothing to do with magnetic poles. She held it flat and watched the needle. It held its bearing. She rotated her body. The needle didn't move with her — it stayed fixed, pointing into the dark of the tunnel. "That's not a compass," Osei said, peering over her shoulder. "It is. Just not for geography." She sealed it in a separate evidence bag and stood. Her knees ached from crouching on cold tile. She checked her watch — the worn leather band had shifted around her wrist again, and she straightened it absently while she thought. Three years ago, DS Morris had followed a lead underground and never come back. They'd found his body two days later in a service tunnel beneath King's Cross, with no visible cause of death, no wounds, no ligature marks, no signs of poisoning. The case had gone to the coroner, who'd returned an open verdict that satisfied nobody. Quinn had read the file so many times that the pages had gone soft at the edges. Morris's fingertips had been stained with a dark, reddish-brown substance. The toxicology report had identified it as iron-rich, organic in origin, but not blood. Beyond that classification, nobody could say what it was. The same substance, she was quite certain, that covered every surface of this alcove. She said none of this to Osei. Instead, she stepped back out onto the platform and swept her torch across the full length of the space one more time. The bone-spoke pattern. The footprints. The scratched symbol at the tunnel mouth. The body that shouldn't be dead. The compass that pointed at something she couldn't see. "I want forensics on every inch of this platform," she said. "Full footprint analysis, not just the alcove. Get samples of the wall substance and have it matched against the Morris case file — reference number's on my desk, yellow folder. And I want someone from the British Museum to look at that script. Someone who specializes in old languages. Restricted archives, if they have anyone." Osei wrote it down without argument. Whatever skepticism remained in him had been overruled by the compass needle, sitting in its evidence bag on the platform floor, still pointing with absolute conviction into the dark. Quinn turned off her torch and stood in the blackness for a moment. The tunnel breathed — a slow push of air that carried sounds from deep below. Not the rumble of trains on nearby lines. Something lower. A hum at the edge of hearing that resonated in her teeth and along the bones of her skull. She turned her torch back on and headed for the exit, climbing the rusted service ladder toward the grey London morning above. Behind her, the compass needle held its bearing, and the body of the unknown man stared at the ceiling of his written room with an expression of permanent, gentle astonishment.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1999
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"deliberately"
2"carefully"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1999
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"magnetic"
count1
3
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"trembled"
2"magnetic"
3"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences142
filterMatches
0"watch "
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2017
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1564
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London3
Harlow1
Quinn14
Osei9
Young1
Transport1
Met1
Morris2
King1
Cross1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Osei"
3"Met"
4"Morris"
5"King"
6"Cross"
places
0"London"
1"Transport"
globalScore1
windowScore1
98.45% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like glass"
1"not quite the same as the wall script, but from the same family"
51.26% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.487
wordCount2017
matches
0"not gold, not silver, but a metal with a greenish patina"
1"not silver, but a metal with a greenish patina"
2"not quite the same as the wall script, but from the same family"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean33.62
std24.37
cv0.725
sampleLengths
070
121
272
338
450
577
651
75
868
948
1063
117
129
1333
1426
1540
1662
174
1861
1919
208
2111
228
232
2450
2510
2613
2756
2810
299
306
3161
3246
3343
343
3573
3629
372
3851
399
406
419
4245
438
4422
453
4649
4773
4833
4910
80.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount10
totalSentences142
matches
0"been stripped"
1"been sealed"
2"been called"
3"been removed"
4"been covered"
5"been painted"
6"was gone "
7"was etched"
8"been stained"
9"been overruled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs250
matches
0"was bursting"
1"was looking"
2"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences167
ratio0.084
matches
0"The air tasted of old stone and something else — something copper-bright and wrong."
1"Young, broad-shouldered, his face arranged in that particular expression she'd come to recognize over their four months working together — the one that said he had a theory and was bursting with it."
2"The walls, the ceiling, the floor — all of it inscribed in a dense, spiraling script she didn't recognize."
3"Underneath, a waistcoat with a watch chain, though whatever had hung from the chain was gone — only a broken link remained."
4"The bone fragments weren't random — she could see it now that she was looking."
5"In the dust of the platform floor, she could make out marks — dozens of footprints, overlapping, different sizes."
6"The footprints covered the platform from edge to edge, worn into the dust in paths that suggested repeated movement — back and forth, clustering in certain areas, thinning in others."
7"The scratches were fresh — white tile dust still clung to the grooves."
8"The remaining links were unusual — not gold, not silver, but a metal with a greenish patina."
9"Under the torchlight, the iridescence shifted — green to blue to violet — in a way that no bird bone she'd ever encountered could account for."
10"The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize — not quite the same as the wall script, but from the same family."
11"The needle didn't move with her — it stayed fixed, pointing into the dark of the tunnel."
12"She checked her watch — the worn leather band had shifted around her wrist again, and she straightened it absently while she thought."
13"The tunnel breathed — a slow push of air that carried sounds from deep below."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1559
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.026298909557408594
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005772931366260423
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean12.08
std10
cv0.828
sampleLengths
07
126
223
314
416
55
614
76
822
910
103
112
121
1314
142
157
161
171
1815
1912
2011
2133
226
2326
2414
253
263
2731
2821
2914
3016
315
3219
3314
3435
3512
3636
375
3810
3922
404
412
422
4318
447
459
465
4720
482
496
60.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.40119760479041916
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners67
27.78% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Instead, she stepped back out"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences120
matches
0"Her boots crunched on grit"
1"She looked down."
2"It caught the torchlight and"
3"She pocketed the bone fragment"
4"His shoes were handmade."
5"His fingernails were clean but"
6"She lifted the hand gently."
7"She set the hand back"
8"She photographed several sections with"
9"It was a clean theory."
10"She walked back out onto"
11"They radiated outward from the"
12"She was looking at the"
13"He looked at the floor."
14"His confidence faltered."
15"She shone her torch into"
16"She photographed it."
17"she said, turning back to"
18"She crouched beside the body"
19"She turned the last intact"
ratio0.292
47.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences120
matches
0"The platform tiles had been"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The air tasted of old"
3"Quinn pulled a torch from"
4"The station had no name"
5"Whatever signs had once hung"
6"Her boots crunched on grit"
7"She looked down."
8"Bird bone, maybe, though she'd"
9"It caught the torchlight and"
10"DC Osei appeared at the"
11"She pocketed the bone fragment"
12"The station had been sealed"
13"The padlocked entrance above them"
14"The body lay at the"
15"The door had been removed"
16"Quinn stepped inside and stopped."
17"The walls, the ceiling, the"
18"The characters had been painted"
19"Osei said, reading from his"
ratio0.825
41.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Now they wore decades of"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His fingernails were clean but stained at the tips with the same dark substance that covered the walls."
1"The writing circled the room in a continuous spiral that started at the door and wound inward toward where the body lay, like a snail's shell viewed from above."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.056
86.1661%