| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 84.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1312 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1312 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "profound" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "tinged" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.65% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1304 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 998 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 11 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Rory | 16 | | English | 1 | | Unease | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Unease" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Blade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.698 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sharing a secret" | | 1 | "felt like a thin veneer here—and follow" | | 2 | "birdsong that seemed to come from above, but when Rory looked up, she saw no birds" | | 3 | "something like longing" | | 4 | "looked like captured moonlight" | | 5 | "felt like the beautiful veneer on a tra" | | 6 | "appeared ahead and as they passed between them, the pressure in her ears popped" |
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| 46.63% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.534 | | wordCount | 1304 | | matches | | 0 | "not footprints, but slight depressions in the flowers, as if someone of impossib" | | 1 | "not the trees above, but a star-strewn sky" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 39.52 | | std | 23.96 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 80 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 77 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 66 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 72 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 70 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 65 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 81 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 18 |
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| 89.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "were fixed" | | 1 | "was known" | | 2 | "was broken" | | 3 | "was tinged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter, the crescent scar on her left wrist itching faintly—a nervous habit." | | 1 | "The light changed, too—the grey English afternoon sun took on a honeyed, antique quality, painting the grass in gold." | | 2 | "The sounds of the park—distant traffic, a dog barking—faded, replaced by a profound, watchful silence." | | 3 | "Rory took a steadying breath—the cool-headedness she was known for felt like a thin veneer here—and followed." | | 4 | "But ahead, leading towards the heart of the grove, she saw a trail of faint impressions—not footprints, but slight depressions in the flowers, as if someone of impossible lightness had passed." | | 5 | "She checked her watch; the second hand was moving erratically, sometimes freezing, sometimes spinning." | | 6 | "The sounds of Richmond Park returned—the rustle of real leaves, the distant hum of the city." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1020 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "warm, amber-hued landscape" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.0392156862745098 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012745098039215686 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 12.66 | | std | 8.45 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 46.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.34951456310679613 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Only leaves moving in a" | | 1 | "Once, she saw a pool" | | 2 | "Just a circle of old" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 1 | "It was cool and inert" | | 2 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 3 | "It wasn’t a violent change," | | 4 | "Her own footprints pressed into" | | 5 | "She glanced behind her." | | 6 | "They began to walk." | | 7 | "She clutched it, the sudden" | | 8 | "Their voice was tinged with" | | 9 | "They were guests in a" | | 10 | "She checked her watch; the" | | 11 | "They found Isolde by a" | | 12 | "She stood on the moss," | | 13 | "Her voice was melodic, but" | | 14 | "She moved, gliding rather than" | | 15 | "She unwrapped the bundle." | | 16 | "It was a dagger, slender" | | 17 | "Her eyes held Rory’s" | | 18 | "It was beautiful and deadly." | | 19 | "She turned her gaze to" |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 33.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter," | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like" | | 3 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 4 | "The trees were too perfectly" | | 5 | "Rory’s fingers went to the" | | 6 | "It was cool and inert" | | 7 | "The light changed, too—the grey" | | 8 | "The sounds of the park—distant" | | 9 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 10 | "Nyx simply flowed forward, passing" | | 11 | "Rory took a steadying breath—the" | | 12 | "The world shifted." | | 13 | "It wasn’t a violent change," | | 14 | "The clearing beyond the stones" | | 15 | "The sky overhead was the" | | 16 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 17 | "Rory breathed, the word inadequate" | | 18 | "Nyx murmured, their shadowy form" | | 19 | "Rory looked down." |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 26.58% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees were too perfectly spaced, their trunks too straight, and between them stood rough-hewn standing stones, moss-covered and leaning inward as if sharing…" | | 1 | "But ahead, leading towards the heart of the grove, she saw a trail of faint impressions—not footprints, but slight depressions in the flowers, as if someone of …" | | 2 | "Trees with bark that shimmered like mother-of-pearl, vines that dripped with clear, sweet-smelling sap." | | 3 | "The Half-Fae seer was as ethereal as her description: silver hair that cascaded like moonlight to her waist, pale lavender eyes that saw too much." | | 4 | "It was a dagger, slender and leaf-shaped, forged from a metal that looked like captured moonlight." | | 5 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, a steady, warm rhythm against her chest, as if in answer to the distant call of that amber world." | | 6 | "Nyx fell into step beside her, their form dissolving slightly at the edges, blending with the long, stretching shadows of the grove." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over stone" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured, their shadowy form seeming more substantial in this light" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx confirmed (confirm)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.321 | | leniency | 0.643 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |