Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8W5X9143J32QDT9RG0T81Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.068215
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement on Camden High Street, each drop exploding into tiny shrapnel of light beneath the sodium lamps. Quinn's boots slapped through a puddle that swallowed her ankle, cold water flooding the leather, but she didn't break stride. Thirty meters ahead, the figure in the dark hoodie cut left past a shuttered kebab shop and vaulted a row of bollards with the easy grace of someone who'd done it before. She keyed her radio. "Suspect heading north on Hawley Crescent. On foot. I need units to—" The radio coughed static. Died. Quinn shook it once, twice. The LED display flickered with symbols she didn't recognize, then went black. She shoved it back into her coat and pumped her arms harder. Eighteen years on the force and she'd never lost a tail. Not in Brixton, not in Tottenham, not in the labyrinth estates of Tower Hamlets where the corridors folded back on themselves like origami. She wasn't about to lose one in Camden because of a faulty Motorola. The suspect disappeared around the corner of a Victorian terrace. Quinn rounded it four seconds later, rain streaming into her eyes, and found herself staring at an empty street. Lock-ups on both sides. A single streetlight buzzing overhead, its glow the color of old teeth. No doors open. No movement. She pressed her back against the wet brickwork and controlled her breathing. In through the nose, out through the mouth. The old rhythm from her army days, before the Met, before Morris. A sound. Metal on metal, somewhere below her feet. Quinn looked down. A drainage grate, heavy iron, sat slightly askew in the pavement. Fresh scrape marks on the stone where it had been dragged. She crouched and pressed her fingers to the grate's edge. Still warm from someone's grip. She pulled. The grate shifted with a groan that the rain almost swallowed, revealing a narrow set of steps descending into amber light. The smell that rose up was unlike anything she'd catalogued in two decades of crime scenes—burned cinnamon, ozone, something mineral and ancient, like the air inside a cave that hadn't been opened in centuries. The steps were old. Older than the street above them. Worn smooth in the center by what must have been thousands of feet over God knew how many years. Quinn drew her Glock 17 from the shoulder holster beneath her soaked coat. Water ran off the barrel. She thumbed the safety and started down. The staircase turned twice before it opened into what she recognized immediately as a disused Tube platform. The tiled walls still bore the ghost of a station name in chipped ceramic letters, though someone had pried most of them away. But the platform itself— She stopped. Blinked. Felt the floor tilt beneath her even though it hadn't moved. The platform was full of people. Stalls lined both sides, draped in fabrics that shifted color when she wasn't looking directly at them. Lanterns hung from the vaulted ceiling on chains that seemed too thin to hold them, casting pools of warm gold across tables piled with merchandise she couldn't name. Glass vials filled with liquid that moved against gravity. Bundles of dried herbs bound with copper wire. Books with covers made of something that looked unsettlingly like skin. A woman with pupils shaped like keyholes was selling maps drawn on animal hide. A man whose shadow didn't match his body haggled over a jar of teeth. The air thrummed with conversation in half a dozen languages, at least three of which Quinn had never heard spoken anywhere on earth. She kept the Glock low against her thigh and scanned the crowd. The hooded figure could be anywhere in this press of bodies. Could have already ducked behind one of the stalls, slipped through the far tunnel, vanished into whatever the hell this place was. A hand closed around her upper arm. Quinn spun, weapon rising, and found herself staring into a pair of warm brown eyes set in an olive-skinned face. The man raised both palms, one of which bore a long pale scar running from wrist to elbow. "You don't want to do that here." His accent placed him somewhere Mediterranean. Spanish, maybe. His other hand gestured subtly at the crowd. "Wave a gun around in the Veil Market and you'll have bigger problems than whoever you're chasing." "Who the hell are you?" "Someone who can see you're Metropolitan Police from the way you hold your jaw and the regulation boots you're wearing." He lowered his voice. "And someone who knows that the last copper who wandered in here uninvited left without his memories of the previous six months." Quinn held her ground but tilted the Glock's barrel toward the floor. The man wore a Saint Christopher medallion over a dark henley. His curly hair was damp at the temples. Not from rain—he'd been down here already. "I'm looking for a suspect. Caucasian male, dark hoodie, approximately six foot. He came down the stairs less than a minute before I did." "I saw him." The man nodded toward the far end of the platform, where the tunnel mouth gaped like an open throat. "Went straight through to the back passages. He had a bone token. Means he's known here." "A bone token." "Entry requirement. Without one, you're trespassing. And the people who run this market don't call the police when they find trespassers. They handle it in-house." Quinn studied his face. Late twenties. Steady hands. The scar on his forearm was surgical in its straightness—not a fight wound, more like a blade drawn with purpose. He stood with the practiced calm of someone accustomed to emergencies. "You still haven't told me your name." "Tomás. Tomás Herrera." He glanced over his shoulder as two figures in hooded cloaks drifted past, their feet not quite touching the ground. "And you've got about ninety seconds before one of the market wardens notices you don't belong." "I'm a detective with—" "Your warrant card means nothing down here. Less than nothing. It's a liability." Tomás stepped closer, close enough that she could smell antiseptic beneath his cologne. A medic's smell. "Listen to me. I come here to buy supplies. Legitimate medical supplies for people who can't access the system. I'm not your enemy. But if you go charging down that tunnel after your suspect, you're walking into territory you don't understand and can't control." Quinn's eyes swept the market again. A child with too many fingers was stacking glass orbs at a nearby stall, each one containing what appeared to be a tiny storm. Two stalls down, an old woman was reading fortunes from a bowl of black water, and the images that flickered across its surface were sharp enough that Quinn could make out faces. Real faces. One of them wore a police uniform. Her left hand drifted to her worn leather watch. Morris had given it to her. Morris, whose case file still sat open on her desk because no amount of forensic evidence could explain how a twelve-year veteran detective sergeant had ended up dead in a locked room with injuries consistent with a fall from a great height, in a basement with seven-foot ceilings. She'd spent three years building a case against the people she believed were responsible. The trail had led her from Soho to Camden, from legitimate business fronts to whispered rumors of an underground economy that served a clientele the Metropolitan Police didn't know existed. Now she was standing in the middle of it. And the suspect who could connect the dots was getting further away with every heartbeat. "The tunnel. Where does it lead?" Tomás exhaled through his nose. "Depends on the night. The market moves every full moon. The back passages aren't fixed geography. They shift." "That's not an answer." "It's the only honest one I've got." He rubbed the scar on his forearm—an unconscious gesture, habitual. "If you go in there, I can't guarantee you come out the same way. Or the same anything." Quinn looked at the tunnel mouth. The darkness inside it wasn't natural. It absorbed the lantern light at its edges, swallowing the illumination two feet past the threshold. She could feel air moving from it, warm and stale, like breath. A market warden materialized at the periphery of her vision. Tall. Thin. Wearing a mask made from what appeared to be a single piece of carved bone, white as milk. It stood motionless at the end of the nearest stall row, its head angled in her direction. "He's seen us," Tomás said, his voice dropping to barely a murmur. "We need to make a decision." Quinn weighed it. The years of evidence. The dead ends. The way every lead she'd followed through conventional channels had dissolved like smoke. Morris's face in the crime scene photographs—eyes open, expression frozen in something that wasn't fear but recognition, as if he'd understood what was happening to him in the final moment and found it impossible. She holstered the Glock. "Take me through." Tomás stared at her. His fingers found the Saint Christopher medallion and squeezed. "You understand what you're asking." "I understand that my suspect is in there. I understand that three years of dead leads brought me to the top of those stairs, and the only thing waiting for me up there is more rain and another cold case file." She met his eyes and held them. "Take me through, Tomás." He held her gaze for a long three-count. Then he reached into his back pocket and produced a small object—a token, roughly the size of a fifty-pence piece, carved from something pale and slightly translucent. Bone. He pressed it into her palm. It was warm, warmer than it should have been, and she could feel a faint pulse against her skin, as if the thing had a heartbeat. "Stay close to me. Don't touch anything unless I tell you to. Don't make eye contact with anything that doesn't have a face you can count features on." He turned toward the tunnel. "And whatever happens, don't run. They can smell fear down here, and I mean that in the most literal sense." The bone warden took a step toward them. Then another. Tomás walked into the tunnel mouth without looking back. The darkness closed around him like water. Quinn felt the bone token pulse in her grip. Felt the weight of her badge in her coat and the ghost of Morris's watch on her wrist. She followed him in.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:26:39.017Z" 2/24/2026, 10:26:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1763
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1763
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"streaming"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"streaming"
2"scanned"
3"could feel"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
83.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences121
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1757
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1353
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden3
High1
Street1
Brixton1
Tottenham1
Tower1
Hamlets1
Motorola1
Victorian1
Met1
Morris5
God1
Glock4
Tube1
Quinn14
Mediterranean1
Spanish1
Saint2
Christopher2
Tomás5
Soho1
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Morris"
1"God"
2"Glock"
3"Quinn"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Police"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Brixton"
4"Tottenham"
5"Tower"
6"Hamlets"
7"Victorian"
8"Soho"
globalScore0.983
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching the ground"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1757
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean31.95
std22.71
cv0.711
sampleLengths
072
116
25
329
447
550
632
79
840
957
1029
1125
1244
1314
14107
1523
1645
177
1838
1940
205
2146
2238
2324
2438
253
2625
2739
287
2939
304
3173
3271
3363
3444
3524
366
3723
384
3935
4040
4147
4218
4357
444
453
4613
475
4852
4968
99.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"been dragged"
1"been opened"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs216
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was selling"
2"was stacking"
3"was reading"
4"was standing"
5"was getting"
6"was happening"
2.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences142
ratio0.049
matches
0"The smell that rose up was unlike anything she'd catalogued in two decades of crime scenes—burned cinnamon, ozone, something mineral and ancient, like the air inside a cave that hadn't been opened in centuries."
1"But the platform itself—"
2"Not from rain—he'd been down here already."
3"The scar on his forearm was surgical in its straightness—not a fight wound, more like a blade drawn with purpose."
4"\"It's the only honest one I've got.\" He rubbed the scar on his forearm—an unconscious gesture, habitual."
5"Morris's face in the crime scene photographs—eyes open, expression frozen in something that wasn't fear but recognition, as if he'd understood what was happening to him in the final moment and found it impossible."
6"Then he reached into his back pocket and produced a small object—a token, roughly the size of a fifty-pence piece, carved from something pale and slightly translucent."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1365
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03223443223443224
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006593406593406593
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean12.37
std9.62
cv0.777
sampleLengths
020
120
232
34
412
54
61
75
812
912
1011
1123
1213
1310
1419
154
1612
173
182
1912
208
2112
222
237
243
2511
2611
2710
285
292
3021
3134
324
336
3419
3513
365
377
3817
3923
404
412
421
4311
446
4517
4628
479
488
4911
66.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.43661971830985913
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners62
62.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"Still warm from someone's grip."
1"Then he reached into his"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences107
matches
0"She keyed her radio."
1"She shoved it back into"
2"She wasn't about to lose"
3"She pressed her back against"
4"She crouched and pressed her"
5"She thumbed the safety and"
6"She kept the Glock low"
7"His accent placed him somewhere"
8"His other hand gestured subtly"
9"He lowered his voice"
10"His curly hair was damp"
11"He stood with the practiced"
12"He glanced over his shoulder"
13"Her left hand drifted to"
14"She'd spent three years building"
15"He rubbed the scar on"
16"It absorbed the lantern light"
17"She could feel air moving"
18"It stood motionless at the"
19"She holstered the Glock."
ratio0.252
67.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences107
matches
0"Quinn's boots slapped through a"
1"She keyed her radio."
2"The radio coughed static."
3"Quinn shook it once, twice."
4"The LED display flickered with"
5"She shoved it back into"
6"She wasn't about to lose"
7"The suspect disappeared around the"
8"Quinn rounded it four seconds"
9"A single streetlight buzzing overhead,"
10"She pressed her back against"
11"The old rhythm from her"
12"Metal on metal, somewhere below"
13"Quinn looked down."
14"A drainage grate, heavy iron,"
15"She crouched and pressed her"
16"The grate shifted with a"
17"The smell that rose up"
18"The steps were old."
19"Quinn drew her Glock 17"
ratio0.785
46.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"Now she was standing in"
ratio0.009
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Quinn's boots slapped through a puddle that swallowed her ankle, cold water flooding the leather, but she didn't break stride."
1"Thirty meters ahead, the figure in the dark hoodie cut left past a shuttered kebab shop and vaulted a row of bollards with the easy grace of someone who'd done …"
2"The smell that rose up was unlike anything she'd catalogued in two decades of crime scenes—burned cinnamon, ozone, something mineral and ancient, like the air i…"
3"Lanterns hung from the vaulted ceiling on chains that seemed too thin to hold them, casting pools of warm gold across tables piled with merchandise she couldn't…"
4"Two stalls down, an old woman was reading fortunes from a bowl of black water, and the images that flickered across its surface were sharp enough that Quinn cou…"
5"The trail had led her from Soho to Camden, from legitimate business fronts to whispered rumors of an underground economy that served a clientele the Metropolita…"
6"Morris's face in the crime scene photographs—eyes open, expression frozen in something that wasn't fear but recognition, as if he'd understood what was happenin…"
7"It was warm, warmer than it should have been, and she could feel a faint pulse against her skin, as if the thing had a heartbeat."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He rubbed, habitual"
1"Tomás said, his voice dropping to barely a murmur"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.033
leniency0.067
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.5412%