Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8W60H3JGVNS9GC8HVMFS2V

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.005609
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest held the quiet of a weeknight, the kind of silence that felt like a held breath. Rory traced the rim of her glass with a fingertip, the condensation cool against her skin. Behind the bar, Silas polished a tumbler with a slow, methodical rhythm, his silver signet ring catching the low light each time his hand turned. The green neon from the sign outside bled through the front window, painting a sickly hue across the old maps on the wall. The door groaned open, letting in a slice of damp London air and the distant murmur of Soho. A man stepped inside, shaking rain from a trench coat. He was around her age, his hair neatly trimmed, his suit too crisp for this place. He hesitated, scanning the room, his eyes adjusting to the gloom. His gaze landed on her. It passed over, then snapped back. A flicker of confusion, then a slow, dawning recognition that tightened something in Rory’s chest. “Aurora?” The name hit the quiet like a stone. Silas didn’t look up, but his polishing stilled for a half-second. Rory kept her face neutral, the cool mask she’d practiced. She took a sip of her drink, the whiskey burning a familiar path. “Liam.” He moved toward the bar, his steps unsure. “My God. Aurora Carter.” He stopped a few feet away, as if approaching a wild animal. “I thought it was you. I’m in town for a merger symposium. I just… I needed a drink away from the hotel crowd. I never expected…” “Small world.” Her voice was flat. “Can I…?” He gestured to the stool beside her. She gave a slight nod. He sat, the leather sighing under his weight. He ordered a gin and tonic from Silas, who served it without a word, his hazel eyes missing nothing. Liam took a long drink. “You look different.” “It’s been years.” “Five. Almost six. Since graduation.” He turned on the stool to face her. “You vanished. One day you were there, top of our torts seminar, the next… poof. No one knew where you went. Your father was tight-lipped. Evan said you’d gone travelling.” At Evan’s name, her fingers tightened around the glass. The small crescent scar on her left wrist seemed to pulse. She didn’t answer. “I heard you left Cardiff. London, obviously.” His eyes swept over her simple black jumper, her jeans, the lack of any professional gloss. “What are you doing here?” “Having a drink.” “I mean… what do you do?” “I deliver food.” She saw the surprise he tried to mask. “For a restaurant in Chinatown. Part-time.” “Delivery.” He repeated the word as if testing its weight. “Aurora, you were going to be a barrister. You were the one who was going to change the world. You argued circles around everyone.” “Plans change.” “Because of Evan?” The question came out soft, almost cautious. She met his eyes then. His were the same warm brown she remembered, but now they held a lawyer’s assessing gleam. “Because of a lot of things.” He swirled his drink. “I saw him last year. At a legal conference in Bristol. He’s a junior partner at Fletcher & Grey now. Married. To a corporate solicitor. He asked about you.” “What did you tell him?” “That I didn’t know. Which was the truth.” He leaned forward, elbows on the bar. “He said you just… left. That things had gotten difficult. He made it sound like you had a breakdown.” A cold laugh escaped her. “Did he.” “I never believed it. Not the breakdown part. But the leaving… that was true. Why, Aurora? You had everything mapped out. Your father’s connections, your grades… you were set.” The weight of the unspoken pressed down. The fear that had been a constant companion in Cardiff, the way Evan’s criticisms had slowly eroded her until she doubted her own mind, the final, terrifying night when his grip had left bruises that matched the old scar on her wrist. The frantic phone call to Eva, the train to London with nothing but a backpack. “The map was wrong,” she said finally. “So you threw it away? You’re delivering noodles?” There was no malice in his voice, just a profound, bewildered disappointment. “It pays the rent. I live upstairs.” He looked toward the ceiling, then back at her, his expression shifting from confusion to something like pity. It was worse than anger. “This is… a bar. You live above a bar.” “It’s quiet.” “Is it?” He gestured around at the empty stools, the pervasive gloom. “Aurora, this is a dead end. You’re smarter than this. You could still go back. Finish your degree. It’s not too late.” “It is for that.” “Why? Because of some… some setback? Everyone has setbacks.” “Not everyone’s setback leaves them afraid to answer their own door.” The words were out before she could stop them, sharp and brittle. He fell silent. The hum of the neon sign filled the space between them. Silas had moved to the other end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. “Evan,” Liam said, the name a conclusion. She didn’t confirm or deny. She drank her whiskey. “He was always… intense,” Liam ventured. “But we all thought you two were solid. The power couple.” “We were a couple. There was a power imbalance.” She set her glass down with a firm click. “It’s done. I’m done with that life.” “And this is the alternative?” His gesture took in the whole bar. “Hiding in the dark?” “I’m not hiding. I’m living. It’s different.” “Is it?” He shook his head, a sad smile touching his lips. “Do you remember our second year? That debate on judicial activism. You tore apart the opposition’s argument in three minutes flat. Professor Davies said you had the most formidable legal mind he’d seen in a decade. I was so jealous. I still am, I think.” The memory was a ghost, vivid but disconnected from the person she was now. That girl had been sure of everything. This woman calculated the quickest exit from any room. “That person isn’t here anymore, Liam.” “I can see that.” He finished his gin. “I just wish I knew what happened to her.” “She grew up. She learned that plans are just wishes, and wishes get broken.” He signalled Silas for another drink, then turned his full attention to her. “What do you do when you’re not delivering food? Do you read? Paint? God, you used to paint beautiful watercolours.” “I think. I observe. I help a friend with his business.” She glanced at Silas, who was watching the door. “It’s complicated.” “It sounds lonely.” “It’s quiet,” she repeated, the word a shield. “Quiet isn’t peace, Aurora.” “And a partnership at a law firm is?” she shot back, a spark of the old fire in her eyes. He flinched. “Touché. It’s… it’s what was expected. What I worked for. It’s secure.” “Secure isn’t peace either.” They sat in a new silence, the kind that acknowledged a chasm too wide to bridge. He was living the life she had fled. She was living a life he couldn’t comprehend. “I miss you,” he said, so quietly she almost didn’t hear it. “I miss that version of you. The one who believed she could fix broken systems with a well-argued precedent.” “I miss her too, sometimes.” The admission cost her. “But she wasn’t real. She was an idea. Ideas are fragile.” “People are fragile.” He reached out, as if to touch her hand, but stopped short. “Are you happy?” She considered the question. The flat above the bar was small but hers. Silas’s mentorship was gruff but real. The delivery job was mindless, but it left her brain free to puzzle over the strange requests and coded messages that sometimes came through the bar’s back room. There was a purpose here, shadowy and undefined, but it was her own. “I’m not unhappy,” she said, which was the closest to truth she could offer. He nodded, accepting the boundary. “Will you be here? If I come back to London?” “Maybe. Probably.” He took a card from his wallet, a thick, embossed rectangle. He slid it across the bar. “If you ever need anything. A reference. A friend. I’m… I’m still your friend, Aurora. Even if I don’t understand.” She looked at the card. *Liam Byrne, Solicitor, Byrne & Associates*. It belonged to a different universe. She didn’t pick it up. “Thank you, Liam.” He stood, pulling his coat on. He looked older than he had when he walked in, the confident sheen rubbed away by the dim light and harder truths. “Take care of yourself.” “You too.” He lingered for a moment, his eyes searching her face one last time, as if trying to superimpose the old image over the new. Then he turned and walked out into the rain, the door swinging shut behind him. The silence of the bar deepened, now filled with the ghost of the conversation. Rory stared at the business card on the polished wood. After a minute, Silas limped over and picked it up. He didn’t ask. He simply held it over the small candle on the bar. The flame caught the edge, curling the expensive paper into black ash, which he dropped into an ashtray. “The past has a way of knocking,” he murmured, resuming his polishing. Rory watched the last ember die. “It doesn’t get to come in.” She finished her whiskey, the taste now only of smoke and regret.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"He gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.053
96.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
11
word"calculated"
count1
12
word"coded"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"traced"
2"methodical"
3"scanning"
4"gloom"
5"flicker"
6"familiar"
7"weight"
8"pulse"
9"unspoken"
10"profound"
11"calculated"
12"coded"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences96
matches
0"A flicker of confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1591
ratio0.004
matches
0"Liam Byrne, Solicitor, Byrne & Associates"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount983
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas8
London2
Soho1
Rory5
Evan2
Cardiff1
Eva1
Byrne2
Solicitor1
Liam4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Eva"
6"Byrne"
7"Liam"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a held breath"
1"as if approaching a wild animal"
2"as if testing its weight"
3"something like pity"
4"as if trying to superimpose the old image over the new"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1591
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean21.21
std17.38
cv0.82
sampleLengths
083
155
226
31
419
524
650
76
89
932
108
113
1243
1323
1428
153
166
1717
1834
192
2010
2127
2233
235
2434
257
2629
2764
287
2920
307
3132
322
3334
344
359
3623
3730
387
399
4017
4125
4216
437
4457
4530
466
4717
4814
4933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
79.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was watching"
1"was living"
2"was living"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences144
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount984
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.028455284552845527
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007113821138211382
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean11.05
std7.78
cv0.705
sampleLengths
019
116
225
323
418
510
616
711
85
96
1015
111
128
1311
1410
1513
161
178
1816
1926
206
219
225
238
2419
255
263
273
2813
2930
309
3111
323
3323
345
353
366
3711
386
3910
4024
412
4210
435
4416
456
464
4729
485
4915
47.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3541666666666667
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners51
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Then he turned and walked"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences94
matches
0"He was around her age,"
1"He hesitated, scanning the room,"
2"His gaze landed on her."
3"It passed over, then snapped"
4"She took a sip of"
5"He moved toward the bar,"
6"He stopped a few feet"
7"Her voice was flat"
8"He gestured to the stool"
9"She gave a slight nod."
10"He sat, the leather sighing"
11"He ordered a gin and"
12"He turned on the stool"
13"She didn’t answer."
14"His eyes swept over her"
15"She saw the surprise he"
16"He repeated the word as"
17"She met his eyes then."
18"His were the same warm"
19"He swirled his drink."
ratio0.596
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences94
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest held the"
1"Rory traced the rim of"
2"The green neon from the"
3"The door groaned open, letting"
4"A man stepped inside, shaking"
5"He was around her age,"
6"He hesitated, scanning the room,"
7"His gaze landed on her."
8"It passed over, then snapped"
9"A flicker of confusion, then"
10"The name hit the quiet"
11"Silas didn’t look up, but"
12"Rory kept her face neutral,"
13"She took a sip of"
14"He moved toward the bar,"
15"He stopped a few feet"
16"Her voice was flat"
17"He gestured to the stool"
18"She gave a slight nod."
19"He sat, the leather sighing"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He hesitated, scanning the room, his eyes adjusting to the gloom."
1"A flicker of confusion, then a slow, dawning recognition that tightened something in Rory’s chest."
2"He ordered a gin and tonic from Silas, who served it without a word, his hazel eyes missing nothing."
3"The fear that had been a constant companion in Cardiff, the way Evan’s criticisms had slowly eroded her until she doubted her own mind, the final, terrifying ni…"
4"He lingered for a moment, his eyes searching her face one last time, as if trying to superimpose the old image over the new."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"He stopped, as if approaching a wild animal"
1"His eyes swept, her jeans, the lack of any professional gloss"
2"Liam said, the name a conclusion"
3"He shook, a sad smile touching his lips"
4"she repeated, the word a shield"
5"she shot back, a spark of the old fire in her eyes"
6"He reached out, as if to touch her hand, but stopped short"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences75
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.187
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.08
74.7769%