Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8W7QJRWVC18X0WWMTRP3CJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.068645
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last dog walker had left Richmond Park an hour ago. Rory watched the final torchlight bob along the path toward the Roehampton Gate until it shrank to a pinprick and vanished, and then she climbed the fence. The iron railing bit cold through her gloves. She dropped onto soft earth on the other side, her boots sinking into turf that had gone spongy with three days of rain. The park spread before her in shades of charcoal — the skeletal canopy of oaks against a sky smeared with London's amber light pollution, the long slope of open grassland where deer sometimes bedded down. No deer tonight. She'd noticed that. The dark meadow lay empty, the grass undisturbed. She pulled her phone from her jacket pocket. The map she'd screenshotted from Eva's notes showed a route that cut northwest through the Isabella Plantation and into a section of old-growth woodland that didn't appear on the official park maps. The Fae Grove. Isolde's grove. Whatever you wanted to call the place that shouldn't exist in a public park in Zone 4. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her collarbone beneath two layers of fabric, and she pressed her fingers to it through her jacket. Cool. Inert. That was fine. She wasn't looking for a Hel portal tonight. She was looking for answers. The footpath crunched under her boots. Gravel, then packed dirt, then something softer as she left the maintained trail and pushed into the trees. Branches scraped her shoulders. She kept her phone's torch aimed low, the beam catching root systems that erupted from the soil like the knuckles of buried hands. The smell changed — wet bark and leaf mould giving way to something sweeter, almost cloying. Night-blooming jasmine, maybe. In November. Rory stopped walking. She stood in the dark between two oaks and listened. The city noise had faded. Not gradually, the way sound drops off when you move further from a road, but abruptly, as if someone had pressed a thumb over the speaker of the world. No distant traffic. No planes descending toward Heathrow. No foxes screaming in the undergrowth. Just her breath, and the creak of wood above her, and something else — a low, arrhythmic tapping, like a fingernail against glass. She turned her head. The sound stopped. "Right," she whispered. She walked on. The oaks grew closer together the deeper she went. Their trunks had thickened beyond anything natural, bark split into deep vertical fissures that gaped like open mouths. Eva's notes had mentioned standing stones, but these weren't stones. They were trees that had forgotten how to be trees — petrified in some halfway state, their wood gone to something dense and mineral, grey as granite under her torchlight. She ran her hand along one as she passed. Cold. Hard. It did not feel like bark. The standing stones marked the boundary. She was at the edge. Wildflowers carpeted the ground between the trunks. Bluebells and foxglove and things she couldn't name, all blooming in vivid defiance of the season, their petals slightly luminous in the dark. Not reflecting her torchlight. Generating their own. A faint bioluminescence, blue-white at the margins, that gave the undergrowth the appearance of shallow water. She switched off her phone torch. The flowers provided enough light to see by — just barely. Enough to make out the clearing ahead, a rough circle perhaps thirty feet across, bounded by more of the petrified oaks. The Fae Grove. It was smaller than she'd imagined. Quieter, too. The air hung still. No breeze moved the flowers. Nothing moved at all. Rory stepped into the clearing. The ground beneath her feet felt different. Harder. Each step produced a faint resonance, as if the earth were hollow underneath. She knelt and brushed the grass aside. Beneath the thin layer of soil, her fingertips met stone — smooth, fitted stone, like a floor. She straightened up and turned in a slow circle, scanning the perimeter. That was when she noticed the flowers had stopped glowing behind her. Not all of them — just along the path she'd walked in on. A corridor of darkness cut through the luminescent carpet, stretching back into the woods. The light had died in a perfect line, as though something had followed her trail and extinguished each bloom as it passed. The dark corridor ended about fifteen feet from where she stood. Whatever had been following it had stopped there. Rory held very still. Her hand moved to the pendant at her throat — still cool, still inert, its crimson facets dark beneath her shirt. Not a Hel portal, then. Something else. "I know you're there," she said. Her voice came out steady. She was grateful for that, because the rest of her had gone rigid, every muscle locked in the ancient calculus of fight or flee. Nothing answered. But the darkness at the end of the corridor shifted. Not movement, exactly. More like a rearrangement. The shadows between the nearest petrified oaks deepened and consolidated, gaining a density that shadows shouldn't have. She could feel it — a weight in the air, a pressure against her skin, the way you feel a hand hovering just above your arm before it touches. The tapping started again. Closer now. Not a fingernail against glass — she'd been wrong about that. It was a clicking, wet and organic, like a tongue unsticking from the roof of a mouth. Click. Click. Click. Arrhythmic. Almost exploratory, as if whatever produced the sound was tasting the air. Rory took one step backward. Her heel hit the stone beneath the soil and produced that hollow resonance, and the clicking stopped. Silence. Then, from directly behind her: breathing. Not her own. She knew the rhythm of her own breath, and this was wrong — too slow, too deep, with a ragged undertone that sounded like air being drawn through wet cloth. It was close enough that she should have felt it on the back of her neck. She didn't. Whatever breathed behind her produced no warmth. She didn't turn around. Every instinct screamed at her to spin, to look, to confront whatever stood at her back. She locked her knees and held her ground and kept her eyes forward in the dark, because some buried part of her understood with absolute clarity that turning around was exactly what it wanted. The breathing drew closer. The pressure against her skin intensified — not physical contact, but the promise of it, the charge before the spark. The pendant at her throat remained cold. Whatever this was, it wasn't from Hel. It belonged here. It was native to this place, to this impossible clearing with its hollow stone floor and its year-round flowers and its petrified sentinels. She'd walked into someone's home uninvited. "I came to talk," Rory said. She kept her voice low. Calm. The barrister's daughter, trained from childhood in the architecture of controlled speech, in the way tone could defuse or escalate. "I was told I could find answers here. About the pendant. About what's happening in the city." The breathing paused. Then something cold grazed the back of her left hand — not a touch, lighter than that, the brush of a single fingertip tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. It lingered there. Pressed, gently, into the old raised tissue. Rory's vision blurred. For an instant — less than a second — she saw the clearing as it existed in some other frequency. The petrified oaks blazed with silver light. The stone floor beneath the grass was carved with symbols that spiraled inward toward the center of the grove, and at the center stood something tall and pale, with too many joints in its limbs and a face made of overlapping angles that her mind refused to assemble into features. She blinked and it was gone. The grove returned to its dim blue glow, its silence, its emptiness. Except the flowers behind her had all gone dark now. Every single one. The only light came from the blooms at the far edge of the clearing, a thin crescent of bioluminescence that illuminated nothing useful. And the stone beneath her feet had grown warm. The pendant pulsed once against her collarbone. Not its usual response — not the steady warmth that signaled a Hel portal. This was a single sharp throb, like a heartbeat, and then nothing. A warning shot. A signal flare fired into the dark of her ribcage. The clicking resumed. Not from one direction now but from several — from the trees to her left, from the darkness behind her, from somewhere beneath the hollow stone floor. Multiple sources. Multiple mouths. The sound filled the clearing from every angle, overlapping and asynchronous, building in speed and volume until it became continuous, a wet rattling chatter that vibrated in her teeth. Rory bolted. She didn't choose a direction so much as her legs chose it for her — forward, toward the last remaining light, through the gap between two standing oaks that still held a thin vein of luminescence in their bark. Branches whipped her face. Something grabbed at her jacket — not hands, something fibrous and strong, root or vine, wrapping her elbow with a grip that tore fabric when she wrenched free. The park materialized around her with the violence of a cold plunge. Traffic noise crashed back in. A plane roared overhead, landing gear visible against the clouds. Her boots hit gravel, a maintained path, and she ran until her lungs burned and the fence appeared before her in the streetlight glow. She hit the iron railing at full speed and climbed it with shaking hands. On the pavement outside Richmond Park, under a functioning streetlamp, a night bus hissing past on the road behind her, Rory bent double and pressed her hands to her knees and gasped until the black spots left her vision. Her left wrist throbbed. She pushed her sleeve back. The crescent-shaped scar, the one she'd carried since she was seven years old, had turned black. Not bruised. Not discolored. Black, as if someone had filled the old wound with ink. And beneath her shirt, the Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a warmth that hadn't been there before — faint, steady, and oriented not toward any Hel portal she knew of, but back toward the park. Back toward the grove. Back toward whatever had touched her and learned her name without asking.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:27:38.721Z" 2/24/2026, 10:27:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1725
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1725
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"resonance"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count3
7
word"sentinels"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"resonance"
1"scanning"
2"perfect"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"warmth"
7"sentinels"
8"tracing"
9"pulsed"
10"throb"
11"vibrated"
12"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences163
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences163
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1745
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1719
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Click"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Roehampton1
Gate1
London1
Eva2
Isabella1
Plantation1
Fae2
Grove2
Zone1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Hel5
November1
Heathrow1
Rory9
Click3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Roehampton"
3"London"
4"Isabella"
5"Plantation"
6"Fae"
7"Grove"
8"Zone"
9"Hel"
10"November"
11"Heathrow"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like air being drawn through wet c"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.292
wordCount1745
matches
0"Not gradually, the way sound drops off when you move further from a road, but abruptly, as if someone had pressed a thumb over the speaker"
1"not physical contact, but the promise of it, the charge before the spark"
2"Not from one direction now but from several"
3"not toward any Hel portal she knew of, but back toward the park"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean31.73
std25.05
cv0.789
sampleLengths
038
180
262
335
45
572
63
758
823
97
103
113
1284
1311
1453
1541
1621
175
1845
1912
2012
2149
2211
238
2432
2535
262
2710
2853
2950
3022
311
326
3358
344
3550
3664
376
3849
393
4040
4180
4218
4336
449
4546
4663
472
4871
4951
98.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences163
matches
0"being drawn"
1"was carved"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs262
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was looking"
2"was tasting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences164
ratio0.116
matches
0"The park spread before her in shades of charcoal — the skeletal canopy of oaks against a sky smeared with London's amber light pollution, the long slope of open grassland where deer sometimes bedded down."
1"The smell changed — wet bark and leaf mould giving way to something sweeter, almost cloying."
2"Just her breath, and the creak of wood above her, and something else — a low, arrhythmic tapping, like a fingernail against glass."
3"They were trees that had forgotten how to be trees — petrified in some halfway state, their wood gone to something dense and mineral, grey as granite under her torchlight."
4"The flowers provided enough light to see by — just barely."
5"Beneath the thin layer of soil, her fingertips met stone — smooth, fitted stone, like a floor."
6"Not all of them — just along the path she'd walked in on."
7"Her hand moved to the pendant at her throat — still cool, still inert, its crimson facets dark beneath her shirt."
8"She could feel it — a weight in the air, a pressure against her skin, the way you feel a hand hovering just above your arm before it touches."
9"Not a fingernail against glass — she'd been wrong about that."
10"She knew the rhythm of her own breath, and this was wrong — too slow, too deep, with a ragged undertone that sounded like air being drawn through wet cloth."
11"The pressure against her skin intensified — not physical contact, but the promise of it, the charge before the spark."
12"Then something cold grazed the back of her left hand — not a touch, lighter than that, the brush of a single fingertip tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist."
13"For an instant — less than a second — she saw the clearing as it existed in some other frequency."
14"Not its usual response — not the steady warmth that signaled a Hel portal."
15"Not from one direction now but from several — from the trees to her left, from the darkness behind her, from somewhere beneath the hollow stone floor."
16"She didn't choose a direction so much as her legs chose it for her — forward, toward the last remaining light, through the gap between two standing oaks that still held a thin vein of luminescence in their bark."
17"Something grabbed at her jacket — not hands, something fibrous and strong, root or vine, wrapping her elbow with a grip that tore fabric when she wrenched free."
18"And beneath her shirt, the Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a warmth that hadn't been there before — faint, steady, and oriented not toward any Hel portal she knew of, but back toward the park."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1705
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03167155425219941
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005278592375366569
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean10.64
std9.67
cv0.909
sampleLengths
011
127
28
323
435
53
63
78
88
932
103
112
1217
1322
141
151
163
178
185
196
2018
214
2223
2316
243
252
263
2710
285
2929
303
315
326
3323
344
353
363
373
389
3918
4010
4130
429
431
441
456
466
475
487
4923
46.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3353658536585366
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences137
matches
0"Just her breath, and the"
1"More like a rearrangement."
2"Almost exploratory, as if whatever"
3"Then, from directly behind her:"
4"Then something cold grazed the"
ratio0.036
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences137
matches
0"She dropped onto soft earth"
1"She'd noticed that."
2"She pulled her phone from"
3"She wasn't looking for a"
4"She was looking for answers."
5"She kept her phone's torch"
6"She stood in the dark"
7"She turned her head."
8"She walked on."
9"Their trunks had thickened beyond"
10"They were trees that had"
11"She ran her hand along"
12"It did not feel like"
13"She was at the edge."
14"She switched off her phone"
15"It was smaller than she'd"
16"She knelt and brushed the"
17"She straightened up and turned"
18"Her hand moved to the"
19"Her voice came out steady."
ratio0.285
76.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences137
matches
0"The last dog walker had"
1"Rory watched the final torchlight"
2"The iron railing bit cold"
3"She dropped onto soft earth"
4"The park spread before her"
5"She'd noticed that."
6"The dark meadow lay empty,"
7"She pulled her phone from"
8"The map she'd screenshotted from"
9"The Fae Grove."
10"Whatever you wanted to call"
11"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
12"That was fine."
13"She wasn't looking for a"
14"She was looking for answers."
15"The footpath crunched under her"
16"Gravel, then packed dirt, then"
17"Branches scraped her shoulders."
18"She kept her phone's torch"
19"The smell changed — wet"
ratio0.766
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"She dropped onto soft earth on the other side, her boots sinking into turf that had gone spongy with three days of rain."
1"The map she'd screenshotted from Eva's notes showed a route that cut northwest through the Isabella Plantation and into a section of old-growth woodland that di…"
2"She kept her phone's torch aimed low, the beam catching root systems that erupted from the soil like the knuckles of buried hands."
3"Their trunks had thickened beyond anything natural, bark split into deep vertical fissures that gaped like open mouths."
4"They were trees that had forgotten how to be trees — petrified in some halfway state, their wood gone to something dense and mineral, grey as granite under her …"
5"A faint bioluminescence, blue-white at the margins, that gave the undergrowth the appearance of shallow water."
6"Each step produced a faint resonance, as if the earth were hollow underneath."
7"The shadows between the nearest petrified oaks deepened and consolidated, gaining a density that shadows shouldn't have."
8"The stone floor beneath the grass was carved with symbols that spiraled inward toward the center of the grove, and at the center stood something tall and pale, …"
9"The sound filled the clearing from every angle, overlapping and asynchronous, building in speed and volume until it became continuous, a wet rattling chatter th…"
10"Something grabbed at her jacket — not hands, something fibrous and strong, root or vine, wrapping her elbow with a grip that tore fabric when she wrenched free."
11"And beneath her shirt, the Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a warmth that hadn't been there before — faint, steady, and oriented not toward any Hel portal she kne…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
79.1486%