| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1725 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1725 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "resonance" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 163 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 163 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1745 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1719 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Click" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Roehampton | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Zone | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Hel | 5 | | November | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Click | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Roehampton" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Isabella" | | 5 | "Plantation" | | 6 | "Fae" | | 7 | "Grove" | | 8 | "Zone" | | 9 | "Hel" | | 10 | "November" | | 11 | "Heathrow" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like air being drawn through wet c" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.292 | | wordCount | 1745 | | matches | | 0 | "Not gradually, the way sound drops off when you move further from a road, but abruptly, as if someone had pressed a thumb over the speaker" | | 1 | "not physical contact, but the promise of it, the charge before the spark" | | 2 | "Not from one direction now but from several" | | 3 | "not toward any Hel portal she knew of, but back toward the park" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 31.73 | | std | 25.05 | | cv | 0.789 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 84 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 53 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 58 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 50 | | 36 | 64 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 49 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 40 | | 41 | 80 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 36 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 46 | | 46 | 63 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 71 | | 49 | 51 |
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| 98.81% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "being drawn" | | 1 | "was carved" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 262 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was tasting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.116 | | matches | | 0 | "The park spread before her in shades of charcoal — the skeletal canopy of oaks against a sky smeared with London's amber light pollution, the long slope of open grassland where deer sometimes bedded down." | | 1 | "The smell changed — wet bark and leaf mould giving way to something sweeter, almost cloying." | | 2 | "Just her breath, and the creak of wood above her, and something else — a low, arrhythmic tapping, like a fingernail against glass." | | 3 | "They were trees that had forgotten how to be trees — petrified in some halfway state, their wood gone to something dense and mineral, grey as granite under her torchlight." | | 4 | "The flowers provided enough light to see by — just barely." | | 5 | "Beneath the thin layer of soil, her fingertips met stone — smooth, fitted stone, like a floor." | | 6 | "Not all of them — just along the path she'd walked in on." | | 7 | "Her hand moved to the pendant at her throat — still cool, still inert, its crimson facets dark beneath her shirt." | | 8 | "She could feel it — a weight in the air, a pressure against her skin, the way you feel a hand hovering just above your arm before it touches." | | 9 | "Not a fingernail against glass — she'd been wrong about that." | | 10 | "She knew the rhythm of her own breath, and this was wrong — too slow, too deep, with a ragged undertone that sounded like air being drawn through wet cloth." | | 11 | "The pressure against her skin intensified — not physical contact, but the promise of it, the charge before the spark." | | 12 | "Then something cold grazed the back of her left hand — not a touch, lighter than that, the brush of a single fingertip tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist." | | 13 | "For an instant — less than a second — she saw the clearing as it existed in some other frequency." | | 14 | "Not its usual response — not the steady warmth that signaled a Hel portal." | | 15 | "Not from one direction now but from several — from the trees to her left, from the darkness behind her, from somewhere beneath the hollow stone floor." | | 16 | "She didn't choose a direction so much as her legs chose it for her — forward, toward the last remaining light, through the gap between two standing oaks that still held a thin vein of luminescence in their bark." | | 17 | "Something grabbed at her jacket — not hands, something fibrous and strong, root or vine, wrapping her elbow with a grip that tore fabric when she wrenched free." | | 18 | "And beneath her shirt, the Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a warmth that hadn't been there before — faint, steady, and oriented not toward any Hel portal she knew of, but back toward the park." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1705 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.03167155425219941 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005278592375366569 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 10.64 | | std | 9.67 | | cv | 0.909 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 46.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3353658536585366 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her breath, and the" | | 1 | "More like a rearrangement." | | 2 | "Almost exploratory, as if whatever" | | 3 | "Then, from directly behind her:" | | 4 | "Then something cold grazed the" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "She dropped onto soft earth" | | 1 | "She'd noticed that." | | 2 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 3 | "She wasn't looking for a" | | 4 | "She was looking for answers." | | 5 | "She kept her phone's torch" | | 6 | "She stood in the dark" | | 7 | "She turned her head." | | 8 | "She walked on." | | 9 | "Their trunks had thickened beyond" | | 10 | "They were trees that had" | | 11 | "She ran her hand along" | | 12 | "It did not feel like" | | 13 | "She was at the edge." | | 14 | "She switched off her phone" | | 15 | "It was smaller than she'd" | | 16 | "She knelt and brushed the" | | 17 | "She straightened up and turned" | | 18 | "Her hand moved to the" | | 19 | "Her voice came out steady." |
| | ratio | 0.285 | |
| 76.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 105 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "The last dog walker had" | | 1 | "Rory watched the final torchlight" | | 2 | "The iron railing bit cold" | | 3 | "She dropped onto soft earth" | | 4 | "The park spread before her" | | 5 | "She'd noticed that." | | 6 | "The dark meadow lay empty," | | 7 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 8 | "The map she'd screenshotted from" | | 9 | "The Fae Grove." | | 10 | "Whatever you wanted to call" | | 11 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 12 | "That was fine." | | 13 | "She wasn't looking for a" | | 14 | "She was looking for answers." | | 15 | "The footpath crunched under her" | | 16 | "Gravel, then packed dirt, then" | | 17 | "Branches scraped her shoulders." | | 18 | "She kept her phone's torch" | | 19 | "The smell changed — wet" |
| | ratio | 0.766 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "She dropped onto soft earth on the other side, her boots sinking into turf that had gone spongy with three days of rain." | | 1 | "The map she'd screenshotted from Eva's notes showed a route that cut northwest through the Isabella Plantation and into a section of old-growth woodland that di…" | | 2 | "She kept her phone's torch aimed low, the beam catching root systems that erupted from the soil like the knuckles of buried hands." | | 3 | "Their trunks had thickened beyond anything natural, bark split into deep vertical fissures that gaped like open mouths." | | 4 | "They were trees that had forgotten how to be trees — petrified in some halfway state, their wood gone to something dense and mineral, grey as granite under her …" | | 5 | "A faint bioluminescence, blue-white at the margins, that gave the undergrowth the appearance of shallow water." | | 6 | "Each step produced a faint resonance, as if the earth were hollow underneath." | | 7 | "The shadows between the nearest petrified oaks deepened and consolidated, gaining a density that shadows shouldn't have." | | 8 | "The stone floor beneath the grass was carved with symbols that spiraled inward toward the center of the grove, and at the center stood something tall and pale, …" | | 9 | "The sound filled the clearing from every angle, overlapping and asynchronous, building in speed and volume until it became continuous, a wet rattling chatter th…" | | 10 | "Something grabbed at her jacket — not hands, something fibrous and strong, root or vine, wrapping her elbow with a grip that tore fabric when she wrenched free." | | 11 | "And beneath her shirt, the Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a warmth that hadn't been there before — faint, steady, and oriented not toward any Hel portal she kne…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |