| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She exhaled slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 86.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1515 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1515 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "absolutely" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1531 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1361 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | November | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | May | 1 | | London | 1 | | June | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Nyx | 8 | | Aurora | 12 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Sunday" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "June" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite have the sight — not properly, not yet — but she thought she understood what they meant" | | 1 | "quite given up yet" | | 2 | "quite the sound of leaves" | | 3 | "not quite a smile" | | 4 | "not quite offence and not quite amusement" | | 5 | "not quite amusement" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.653 | | wordCount | 1531 | | matches | | 0 | "not brown but deep silver-black, as though they had been there long enough" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 31.24 | | std | 30.59 | | cv | 0.979 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 103 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 78 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 113 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 108 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 52 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 56 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 50 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "were doing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.124 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora had been through Richmond Park twice before — once on a delivery run that had taken her badly off-course, and once on a hollow Sunday when she'd needed open land around her and couldn't afford a train back to Cardiff." | | 1 | "They were just ahead of her, or rather their shadow was — that long, lean darkness stretching across the leaf-litter at an angle that had nothing to do with the overcast sky." | | 2 | "She could feel it, the same way she'd learned over the last weeks to feel the Heartstone Pendant's moods — that faint warmth radiating against her sternum." | | 3 | "Her boots crunched over frost-stiffened grass, then dead leaves, then nothing — the ground between the path and the oaks was bare earth, but it made no sound beneath her feet." | | 4 | "Not warmer — that came later — but different in pressure, as though she'd stepped into a room where several people had just stopped speaking." | | 5 | "She didn't quite have the sight — not properly, not yet — but she thought she understood what they meant." | | 6 | "Not gradually, not with any warning, just — erased." | | 7 | "It was the particular pale, lucent blue of an early-summer evening — the sky you get in June at seven o'clock, when the day hasn't quite given up yet." | | 8 | "They had stopped a few feet ahead of her on the path, and where they stood their form was more solid than usual, more defined — as though the magic here was thick enough to give them better purchase on existing." | | 9 | "The wildflowers thickened and diversified in a way that made Rory's school biology feel like a polite fiction — foxglove and snowdrop and something tall and white she had no name for, all growing alongside one another, all precisely in bloom, all exactly right." | | 10 | "She found herself thinking of the Fae-forged blade tucked in the inner pocket of her jacket — the dagger Isolde's prophecy had sent her to find and which Isolde had then simply handed to her like a library book she'd been keeping for collection." | | 11 | "She'd been expecting something — a hut, a cottage, a mossy altar, the set-dressing of someone who had lived for three hundred years and developed strong aesthetic opinions." | | 12 | "Aurora took a breath and felt the Heartstone pulse once, hard, against her sternum — not warning, not hunger." | | 13 | "Her voice moved through the clearing air differently than voices should — evenly, without fade, as though the grove gathered it and carried it forward." |
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| 74.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1358 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "over frost-stiffened grass," | | 1 | "moon-cold against her" | | 2 | "developed strong aesthetic opinions." |
| | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.048600883652430045 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013991163475699559 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 13.55 | | std | 10.94 | | cv | 0.808 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 55.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3805309734513274 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "More like recognition." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 33.95% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew the deer came" | | 1 | "She knew the ground turned" | | 2 | "She did not know about" | | 3 | "They were just ahead of" | | 4 | "They stood in a rough" | | 5 | "She could feel it, the" | | 6 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 7 | "She moved toward the stones." | | 8 | "Her boots crunched over frost-stiffened" | | 9 | "She noticed that and didn't" | | 10 | "She felt the fine hairs" | | 11 | "Their voice was its usual" | | 12 | "She didn't quite have the" | | 13 | "She walked between two of" | | 14 | "She kept moving." | | 15 | "She could feel them." | | 16 | "They were real." | | 17 | "They were cold-dewed and fresh" | | 18 | "She looked up." | | 19 | "It was the particular pale," |
| | ratio | 0.465 | |
| 41.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The afternoon had gone grey" | | 1 | "Aurora had been through Richmond" | | 2 | "She knew the deer came" | | 3 | "She knew the ground turned" | | 4 | "She did not know about" | | 5 | "They were just ahead of" | | 6 | "Nyx's solid form flickered at" | | 7 | "Aurora followed their pointing, and" | | 8 | "They stood in a rough" | | 9 | "Each trunk was perhaps three" | | 10 | "Moss crept up each one" | | 11 | "Aurora said, and the word" | | 12 | "This was a boundary." | | 13 | "She could feel it, the" | | 14 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 15 | "Nyx said, without looking at" | | 16 | "She moved toward the stones." | | 17 | "Her boots crunched over frost-stiffened" | | 18 | "She noticed that and didn't" | | 19 | "The air changed two metres" |
| | ratio | 0.837 | |
| 58.14% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it was doing something" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora had been through Richmond Park twice before — once on a delivery run that had taken her badly off-course, and once on a hollow Sunday when she'd needed o…" | | 1 | "They were just ahead of her, or rather their shadow was — that long, lean darkness stretching across the leaf-litter at an angle that had nothing to do with the…" | | 2 | "Each trunk was perhaps three times the width of a man's shoulders, their bark not brown but deep silver-black, as though they had been there long enough to abso…" | | 3 | "Not warmer — that came later — but different in pressure, as though she'd stepped into a room where several people had just stopped speaking." | | 4 | "The path that had not been visible from outside made itself apparent now: a gentle narrowing in the undergrowth, flower-lined, that curved away from the oaks an…" | | 5 | "They had stopped a few feet ahead of her on the path, and where they stood their form was more solid than usual, more defined — as though the magic here was thi…" | | 6 | "The wildflowers thickened and diversified in a way that made Rory's school biology feel like a polite fiction — foxglove and snowdrop and something tall and whi…" | | 7 | "These were older, if older was a word that stretched far enough." | | 8 | "She'd been expecting something — a hut, a cottage, a mossy altar, the set-dressing of someone who had lived for three hundred years and developed strong aesthet…" | | 9 | "Around it, the wildflowers gave way to green, and the green was the specific, saturated shade of a colour that shouldn't occur in nature on this side of anythin…" | | 10 | "Her pale lavender eyes found Aurora's from across the clearing with the unhurried accuracy of someone who had spent three centuries watching things arrive that …" | | 11 | "It was what a smile becomes in a face that has witnessed enough to make the ordinary gesture feel too small." |
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| 97.22% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, without looking at her" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |