Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8W87WDN4ZNZ7Q04SW725T1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.048330
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The afternoon had gone grey by the time they found the stones. Aurora had been through Richmond Park twice before — once on a delivery run that had taken her badly off-course, and once on a hollow Sunday when she'd needed open land around her and couldn't afford a train back to Cardiff. She knew the deer came closer to the paths in winter, watching with the glazed patience of things that had survived everything. She knew the ground turned to cold mud after rain. She did not know about the stones. "There," Nyx said. They were just ahead of her, or rather their shadow was — that long, lean darkness stretching across the leaf-litter at an angle that had nothing to do with the overcast sky. Nyx's solid form flickered at the edges, the way a candle flame does when someone opens a door elsewhere in the house. Aurora followed their pointing, and she saw them. Seven oaks, old enough that the word ancient felt insufficient. They stood in a rough circle at the edge of a treeline that the park's official paths didn't reach, their roots coiled out of the ground like the knuckles of buried fists. Each trunk was perhaps three times the width of a man's shoulders, their bark not brown but deep silver-black, as though they had been there long enough to absorb every night that had passed through them. Moss crept up each one in thick, deliberate bands. Between the trunks, where the late November light should have reached through bare branches, it didn't. "Isolde's grove," Aurora said, and the word grove felt suddenly inadequate. This was a boundary. She could feel it, the same way she'd learned over the last weeks to feel the Heartstone Pendant's moods — that faint warmth radiating against her sternum. Now it was doing something different. Not warmth. A pulling. Like being stood at the edge of something with a current. She pressed her fingers to her coat, felt the pendant shift against them, and pulled her hand away. "You don't have to touch it for it to communicate," Nyx said, without looking at her. "I know," she said. "It's annoying." She moved toward the stones. Her boots crunched over frost-stiffened grass, then dead leaves, then nothing — the ground between the path and the oaks was bare earth, but it made no sound beneath her feet. She noticed that and didn't say it aloud. The air changed two metres out. Not warmer — that came later — but different in pressure, as though she'd stepped into a room where several people had just stopped speaking. She felt the fine hairs along her forearms lift. "The Veil's thin here," Nyx said, coming alongside her. Their voice was its usual low susurrus, the sound of wind through a gap in a window frame. "You can see the edge of it if you have the sight for it. Faint. Like heat shimmer over tarmac." Aurora squinted between the trunks. She didn't quite have the sight — not properly, not yet — but she thought she understood what they meant. There was a shimmer, possibly. Or possibly her eyes were doing what eyes do when you stare at something long enough: inventing. She walked between two of the oaks. The cold left her at once. Not gradually, not with any warning, just — erased. The air inside the circle was the temperature of early May, soft and green-smelling, and she stood stupidly for a moment, blinking. "Keep moving," Nyx said, stepping through beside her. "Standing in thresholds is bad practice." She kept moving. The path that had not been visible from outside made itself apparent now: a gentle narrowing in the undergrowth, flower-lined, that curved away from the oaks and down a shallow slope. Flowers. Aurora stopped and crouched before she'd quite decided to, pressing two fingers to a cluster of pale blue crocuses pushing through the dark soil. She could feel them. They were real. They were cold-dewed and fresh and they had absolutely no business existing in late November. She looked up. The sky above the grove was not the flat aluminium of the London afternoon she'd just walked out of. It was the particular pale, lucent blue of an early-summer evening — the sky you get in June at seven o'clock, when the day hasn't quite given up yet. She could see distant smudges of pink cloud moving slowly at the margins. The light that came through it was gold. "Nyx." Her voice came out quieter than she intended. "I see it," they said. They had stopped a few feet ahead of her on the path, and where they stood their form was more solid than usual, more defined — as though the magic here was thick enough to give them better purchase on existing. Their faintly violet eyes moved across the clearing with something she might have called hunger, if that didn't seem too human a word for them. They walked on. The path deepened. The wildflowers thickened and diversified in a way that made Rory's school biology feel like a polite fiction — foxglove and snowdrop and something tall and white she had no name for, all growing alongside one another, all precisely in bloom, all exactly right. The trees that closed in overhead were not the same oaks as the boundary stones. These were older, if older was a word that stretched far enough. Their canopy sealed the sky into patches, those gold patches shifting as the branches moved in a wind she couldn't feel on her face. The sound they made wasn't quite the sound of leaves. It was slower. More deliberate. She found herself thinking of the Fae-forged blade tucked in the inner pocket of her jacket — the dagger Isolde's prophecy had sent her to find and which Isolde had then simply handed to her like a library book she'd been keeping for collection. It was moon-cold against her ribs, the way it always was, and for the first time she found that comforting rather than unsettling. "Time," she said. "Yes," Nyx agreed. She hadn't finished the question. She tried again. "How long do we have before—" "There's no clean answer to that here," they said. "An hour inside the grove might be ten minutes outside or three days. It shifts. Isolde herself doesn't always know." Aurora absorbed this. "So we might step out of those stones and find it's February." "Possibly." "Or it's still today and all my deliveries are still on the book." "Also possible." A pause. "The second outcome is significantly less likely." "Right." She exhaled slowly. "Good to know." The path bent once more, and the grove opened. She'd been expecting something — a hut, a cottage, a mossy altar, the set-dressing of someone who had lived for three hundred years and developed strong aesthetic opinions. What the clearing held was simpler and stranger than any of that. At its centre stood a single stone table, low and broad, the surface worn smooth. On it lay objects she couldn't categorise from this distance. Around it, the wildflowers gave way to green, and the green was the specific, saturated shade of a colour that shouldn't occur in nature on this side of anything. It was the kind of green that made the back of Aurora's throat ache. And at the far edge of the clearing, silver-haired and motionless, back turned, Isolde stood with her face raised to that impossible summer sky. She left no impression in the grass beneath her feet. Aurora took a breath and felt the Heartstone pulse once, hard, against her sternum — not warning, not hunger. More like recognition. She thought of her father's voice on old answer-phone messages, the specific quality of knowing that something about to happen was going to be important before you could name why. "She knows we're here," Nyx said quietly. "She knew we were coming before we did," Aurora said. Isolde turned. Her pale lavender eyes found Aurora's from across the clearing with the unhurried accuracy of someone who had spent three centuries watching things arrive that they'd already seen. Her expression was not quite a smile. It was what a smile becomes in a face that has witnessed enough to make the ordinary gesture feel too small. "The wound-one comes," she said. Her voice moved through the clearing air differently than voices should — evenly, without fade, as though the grove gathered it and carried it forward. "And the shadow who is not yet ready to be named." Nyx made a sound beside Aurora that was not quite offence and not quite amusement. "And only one of you," Isolde continued, tilting her head, "knows what they are looking for." Aurora stepped forward into the green, feeling the grass under her boots, the warm air on her face, the cold of the blade at her ribs and the warmth of the pendant and the old particular weight of standing at the beginning of something she hadn't chosen and couldn't leave. "That would be me," she said. Isolde smiled then, and this time it reached her eyes. "Would it?" she said.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:27:55.412Z" 2/24/2026, 10:27:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She exhaled slowly [slowly]"
1"Nyx said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
86.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1515
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1515
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"absolutely"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"could feel"
2"warmth"
3"absolutely"
4"comforting"
5"pulse"
6"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1531
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1361
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Sunday1
Cardiff1
November2
Heartstone2
Pendant1
May1
London1
June1
Rory1
Fae-forged1
Isolde6
Nyx8
Aurora12
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Sunday"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
5"June"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite have the sight — not properly, not yet — but she thought she understood what they meant"
1"quite given up yet"
2"quite the sound of leaves"
3"not quite a smile"
4"not quite offence and not quite amusement"
5"not quite amusement"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.653
wordCount1531
matches
0"not brown but deep silver-black, as though they had been there long enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"arrive that they'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean31.24
std30.59
cv0.979
sampleLengths
012
180
23
362
4103
563
618
716
86
944
1040
1147
1247
137
1437
1514
163
1778
1872
199
2071
213
22113
2367
243
253
2614
2729
2815
291
3013
3111
327
339
34108
3524
3610
3752
387
3910
402
4156
4241
4315
4416
4550
466
4710
484
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"being stood"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was doing"
1"were doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences113
ratio0.124
matches
0"Aurora had been through Richmond Park twice before — once on a delivery run that had taken her badly off-course, and once on a hollow Sunday when she'd needed open land around her and couldn't afford a train back to Cardiff."
1"They were just ahead of her, or rather their shadow was — that long, lean darkness stretching across the leaf-litter at an angle that had nothing to do with the overcast sky."
2"She could feel it, the same way she'd learned over the last weeks to feel the Heartstone Pendant's moods — that faint warmth radiating against her sternum."
3"Her boots crunched over frost-stiffened grass, then dead leaves, then nothing — the ground between the path and the oaks was bare earth, but it made no sound beneath her feet."
4"Not warmer — that came later — but different in pressure, as though she'd stepped into a room where several people had just stopped speaking."
5"She didn't quite have the sight — not properly, not yet — but she thought she understood what they meant."
6"Not gradually, not with any warning, just — erased."
7"It was the particular pale, lucent blue of an early-summer evening — the sky you get in June at seven o'clock, when the day hasn't quite given up yet."
8"They had stopped a few feet ahead of her on the path, and where they stood their form was more solid than usual, more defined — as though the magic here was thick enough to give them better purchase on existing."
9"The wildflowers thickened and diversified in a way that made Rory's school biology feel like a polite fiction — foxglove and snowdrop and something tall and white she had no name for, all growing alongside one another, all precisely in bloom, all exactly right."
10"She found herself thinking of the Fae-forged blade tucked in the inner pocket of her jacket — the dagger Isolde's prophecy had sent her to find and which Isolde had then simply handed to her like a library book she'd been keeping for collection."
11"She'd been expecting something — a hut, a cottage, a mossy altar, the set-dressing of someone who had lived for three hundred years and developed strong aesthetic opinions."
12"Aurora took a breath and felt the Heartstone pulse once, hard, against her sternum — not warning, not hunger."
13"Her voice moved through the clearing air differently than voices should — evenly, without fade, as though the grove gathered it and carried it forward."
74.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1358
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"over frost-stiffened grass,"
1"moon-cold against her"
2"developed strong aesthetic opinions."
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.048600883652430045
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.013991163475699559
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean13.55
std10.94
cv0.808
sampleLengths
012
141
222
310
47
53
632
722
88
910
1032
1136
129
1316
1411
154
1627
176
182
192
2011
2118
2216
234
242
255
2631
278
286
2925
309
319
3218
3320
345
3520
365
3717
387
396
409
4122
428
436
443
4531
461
4724
484
493
55.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3805309734513274
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners43
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"More like recognition."
ratio0.012
33.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences86
matches
0"She knew the deer came"
1"She knew the ground turned"
2"She did not know about"
3"They were just ahead of"
4"They stood in a rough"
5"She could feel it, the"
6"She pressed her fingers to"
7"She moved toward the stones."
8"Her boots crunched over frost-stiffened"
9"She noticed that and didn't"
10"She felt the fine hairs"
11"Their voice was its usual"
12"She didn't quite have the"
13"She walked between two of"
14"She kept moving."
15"She could feel them."
16"They were real."
17"They were cold-dewed and fresh"
18"She looked up."
19"It was the particular pale,"
ratio0.465
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences86
matches
0"The afternoon had gone grey"
1"Aurora had been through Richmond"
2"She knew the deer came"
3"She knew the ground turned"
4"She did not know about"
5"They were just ahead of"
6"Nyx's solid form flickered at"
7"Aurora followed their pointing, and"
8"They stood in a rough"
9"Each trunk was perhaps three"
10"Moss crept up each one"
11"Aurora said, and the word"
12"This was a boundary."
13"She could feel it, the"
14"She pressed her fingers to"
15"Nyx said, without looking at"
16"She moved toward the stones."
17"Her boots crunched over frost-stiffened"
18"She noticed that and didn't"
19"The air changed two metres"
ratio0.837
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Now it was doing something"
ratio0.012
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"Aurora had been through Richmond Park twice before — once on a delivery run that had taken her badly off-course, and once on a hollow Sunday when she'd needed o…"
1"They were just ahead of her, or rather their shadow was — that long, lean darkness stretching across the leaf-litter at an angle that had nothing to do with the…"
2"Each trunk was perhaps three times the width of a man's shoulders, their bark not brown but deep silver-black, as though they had been there long enough to abso…"
3"Not warmer — that came later — but different in pressure, as though she'd stepped into a room where several people had just stopped speaking."
4"The path that had not been visible from outside made itself apparent now: a gentle narrowing in the undergrowth, flower-lined, that curved away from the oaks an…"
5"They had stopped a few feet ahead of her on the path, and where they stood their form was more solid than usual, more defined — as though the magic here was thi…"
6"The wildflowers thickened and diversified in a way that made Rory's school biology feel like a polite fiction — foxglove and snowdrop and something tall and whi…"
7"These were older, if older was a word that stretched far enough."
8"She'd been expecting something — a hut, a cottage, a mossy altar, the set-dressing of someone who had lived for three hundred years and developed strong aesthet…"
9"Around it, the wildflowers gave way to green, and the green was the specific, saturated shade of a colour that shouldn't occur in nature on this side of anythin…"
10"Her pale lavender eyes found Aurora's from across the clearing with the unhurried accuracy of someone who had spent three centuries watching things arrive that …"
11"It was what a smile becomes in a face that has witnessed enough to make the ordinary gesture feel too small."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx said, without looking at her"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx agreed (agree)"
1"Isolde continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
76.5418%