Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WAVD5A648J6Z86QHX53WK

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.005115
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station was cold enough to fog the breath, and thick with the smell of damp brick, ozone, and something else—incense, maybe, or old magic. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the edge of the platform, her sharp jaw set, taking in the crime scene. The Veil Market was supposed to be a myth, a whisper among the city’s fringe-dwellers. But the call had come from a CI with a bone token in his pocket, and the address led here, to a service door behind a boarded-up kiosk, and down a rusting ladder into the forgotten dark. Now, under the flickering glow of emergency lanterns set up by the first responders, the market lay revealed. Stalls fashioned from old train doors and moth-eaten velvet drapes lined the curved walls. The detritus of the trade was everywhere: shattered vials leaking iridescent fluid, scattered feathers that looked too sharp to be from any bird, pages of cryptic script torn from ledgers. At the centre of the platform, a larger stall was cordoned off with police tape. It looked like it had been hit by a small, focused explosion. “Quinn.” She turned. A woman was picking her way carefully across the debris-strewn tracks, avoiding a puddle that shimmered with a mother-of-pearl sheen. Eva Kowalski. Harlow had seen her file. Research assistant at the British Museum, known associate of Aurora Finch and her circle. The red curls, the round glasses, the freckles—all matched the surveillance photos. She wore a thick wool coat over a sweater, and the strap of a worn leather satcut was slung across her chest. Harlow’s eyes narrowed. What was she doing here? “Miss Kowalski. This is a restricted scene.” “They called me in,” Eva said, tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear. A nervous habit, the file had noted. “From the Museum. When your constables found… well, some of the items here are technically cultural artifacts. Or they would be, if anyone admitted this place existed.” She stopped a few feet away, her green eyes wide behind the lenses, taking in Harlow’s stance, the worn leather watch on her wrist, the unspoken military precision in the way she held herself. “Detective Quinn, right? I’ve heard about you.” “I’m sure you have,” Harlow said, her voice flat. She gestured toward the destroyed stall. “What can you tell me about this?” Eva followed her gaze. “That was Alaric’s stall. He was a Shade artisan. One of the best. He crafted attunement devices, focusing lenses… tools for navigating the less stable parts of reality.” “Navigating.” Harlow let the word hang. She walked toward the stall, her boots crunching on broken glass. The scene was wrong. The stall was obliterated, yes, but the destruction was contained. Stalls on either side were untouched. It wasn’t an explosion; it was a dissection. Someone had taken it apart with terrifying efficiency. Shelves were splintered, drawers pulled out and emptied, their contents—whatever they had been—gone. But there were no scorch marks consistent with explosives, no smell of cordite. The air smelled of cedar and cold iron. “Your people think it was a robbery,” Eva said, coming up beside her, keeping a respectful distance from the tape. “They’re not wrong. But they’re looking for a thief. I think you’re looking for a harvester.” “A what?” “Some entities… feed on refined supernatural energy. A Shade artisan’s workshop would be a feast. The violence of the act would be a byproduct of consumption, not the goal.” Eva pointed a finger toward a particular section of the wreckage. “See how the wood is not just broken, but desiccated? Like it’s been aged a hundred years in a second? That’s a signature.” Harlow looked. The girl had a point. A support beam was indeed grey and crumbly, while the rest of the wood was freshly splintered. But her detective’s mind immediately offered a dozen natural explanations: chemical reaction, accelerated dry rot from a spilled agent. She filed it away. “What was taken?” “That’s the question.” Eva knelt, unbothered by the damp floor, and opened her satchel. She pulled out a notebook. “Alaric was working on a new batch of Veil Compasses. Highly sought after. They’re like… supernatural GPS. Without one, navigating certain markets or finding hidden doors is nearly impossible.” Harlow’s memory flashed—a small brass compass, verdigris patina, sigils etched into the face. She’d seen a sketch in an evidence file from Morris’s last case. The connection sent a cold wire down her spine. She kept her face impassive. “Any of these compasses here now?” “I doubt it. If this was a harvest, they’d be the prime target. The energy concentrated in them is…” Eva trailed off, then looked up at Harlow. “You don’t believe a word of this, do you?” “I believe someone tore this place apart looking for something valuable,” Harlow said, moving past her to examine the stall’s interior. “I believe they used tools, not teeth. And I believe they were in a hurry, but not a panic.” She crouched, ignoring the protest of her knees. Eighteen years on the job. She shone her torch along the floor. Scuff marks, multiple footprints—most now contaminated by her own colleagues. But one pattern caught her eye: a series of deep, clean impressions in a fine layer of brick dust near the back wall. Someone had stood there, weight evenly distributed, for some time. Watching? Waiting? “Your harvester would have just… eaten the place,” Harlow said, thinking aloud. “This looks like someone did a thorough, violent search. They pulled every drawer, ripped every shelf down. They were looking for something specific, something they thought was hidden.” She stood up and scanned the back wall. It was bare brick, stained with damp. But her eye, trained for discrepancies, caught it: a single brick, slightly less weathered than its neighbours, at eye level. She pressed the edges with her gloved fingers. It gave, just a fraction. “What is it?” Eva asked, coming closer. Harlow didn’t answer. She took a small evidence tool from her coat and worked at the mortar. It was fresh, soft. With a little pressure, the brick came loose. Behind it was a shallow niche. And in the niche, resting on a fold of black velvet, was a small brass compass. Its casing was green with patina, the face intricately etched with swirling symbols that seemed to move in the torchlight if you stared too long. The needle, instead of pointing north, spun in a slow, lazy circle. Eva sucked in a breath. “A Veil Compass. He hid it. But… that doesn’t make sense. If this was a harvest, the compass would be the first thing sensed. It couldn’t be hidden by a brick.” “Exactly,” Harlow said, but her triumph was short-lived. She carefully lifted the compass. It was cold, heavier than it looked. As she held it flat on her palm, the spinning needle slowed, then stopped. It didn’t point to the tunnel mouth, or to Eva. It pointed directly at a seemingly solid section of the platform wall ten yards to the left. “What’s it pointing at?” Harlow asked. Eva’s face paled. “The needle points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. But there’s nothing there. The Market’s stable here. Unless…” “Unless what?” “Unless the act of violence itself—the robbery, or the harvest—tore a temporary hole. A wound.” Eva turned to Harlow, her earlier academic certainty replaced by dread. “Detective, if that needle is right, then whatever did this might not have come from outside the Market. It might have come from *through* that wall.” Harlow stared at the compass, then at the unremarkable patch of dirty brick and faded posters. The evidence shifted in her mind, two contradictory pictures trying to fuse. The methodical, human violence of the search. The unnatural desiccation of the wood. A hidden compass, deliberately spared. A needle pointing to a blank wall. Her colleague, DS Morris, had been found in a locked room with no visible wounds, a look of utter terror on his face, and a strange, metallic dust on his clothes that the lab could never identify. Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins. She looked from the compass in her hand to Eva’s frightened face, then back to the ravaged stall. The evidence didn’t add up because she’d been trying to force it into one column: human crime *or* supernatural event. What if it was both? What if someone had used a supernatural means to commit a very human robbery? Or worse, what if something had used a human crime to cover its feeding? “Get your things, Miss Kowalski,” Harlow said, her voice low and precise. She slipped the Veil Compass into an evidence bag, but didn’t seal it. The needle, visible through the plastic, still pointed rigidly at the wall. “You’re going to explain to me, in very clear terms, exactly how one finds a door that isn’t there. And then we’re going to see what’s on the other side.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"deliberately"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"navigating"
count3
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"methodical"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"velvet"
2"shattered"
3"shimmered"
4"unspoken"
5"navigating"
6"etched"
7"down her spine"
8"weight"
9"scanned"
10"methodical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1494
ratio0.001
matches
0"through"
1"or"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1060
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow17
Quinn1
Veil2
Market1
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Aurora1
Finch1
Eva13
Morris2
Eighteen1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Museum"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places
0"British"
1"Compass"
globalScore0.698
windowScore0.833
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like it had been hit by a small, f"
1"symbols that seemed to move in the torchlight if you stared too long"
2"directly at a seemingly solid section of th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.669
wordCount1494
matches
0"not just broken, but desiccated"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean48.19
std30.7
cv0.637
sampleLengths
0102
189
21
385
47
590
622
732
887
936
102
1163
1250
1348
1445
1536
16105
1788
187
1951
2037
2136
2261
236
2422
252
2652
2753
2841
2971
3067
87.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences99
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was cordoned"
2"was obliterated"
3"was contained"
4"were splintered"
5"been—gone"
6"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was picking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences116
ratio0.052
matches
0"The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station was cold enough to fog the breath, and thick with the smell of damp brick, ozone, and something else—incense, maybe, or old magic."
1"The red curls, the round glasses, the freckles—all matched the surveillance photos."
2"It wasn’t an explosion; it was a dissection."
3"Shelves were splintered, drawers pulled out and emptied, their contents—whatever they had been—gone."
4"Harlow’s memory flashed—a small brass compass, verdigris patina, sigils etched into the face."
5"Scuff marks, multiple footprints—most now contaminated by her own colleagues."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1073
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.028890959925442685
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011183597390493943
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean12.88
std10.05
cv0.781
sampleLengths
031
119
215
337
418
514
630
715
812
91
102
1120
122
135
1414
1512
1622
173
185
197
2015
217
2261
237
249
256
267
274
2828
296
3011
314
3210
336
348
358
3613
3713
388
3920
4016
412
4240
4323
442
455
4617
4719
484
493
57.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3879310344827586
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences91
matches
0"It looked like it had"
1"She wore a thick wool"
2"She stopped a few feet"
3"She gestured toward the destroyed"
4"She walked toward the stall,"
5"It wasn’t an explosion; it"
6"She filed it away."
7"She pulled out a notebook."
8"She’d seen a sketch in"
9"She kept her face impassive."
10"She crouched, ignoring the protest"
11"She shone her torch along"
12"She stood up and scanned"
13"It was bare brick, stained"
14"She pressed the edges with"
15"It gave, just a fraction."
16"She took a small evidence"
17"It was fresh, soft."
18"Its casing was green with"
19"She carefully lifted the compass."
ratio0.286
53.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences91
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"The Veil Market was supposed"
3"Stalls fashioned from old train"
4"The detritus of the trade"
5"It looked like it had"
6"A woman was picking her"
7"Harlow had seen her file."
8"The red curls, the round"
9"She wore a thick wool"
10"Harlow’s eyes narrowed."
11"Eva said, tucking a strand"
12"A nervous habit, the file"
13"She stopped a few feet"
14"Harlow said, her voice flat"
15"She gestured toward the destroyed"
16"Eva followed her gaze."
17"Harlow let the word hang"
18"She walked toward the stall,"
19"The scene was wrong."
ratio0.813
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Now, under the flickering glow"
ratio0.011
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The detritus of the trade was everywhere: shattered vials leaking iridescent fluid, scattered feathers that looked too sharp to be from any bird, pages of crypt…"
1"A woman was picking her way carefully across the debris-strewn tracks, avoiding a puddle that shimmered with a mother-of-pearl sheen."
2"Its casing was green with patina, the face intricately etched with swirling symbols that seemed to move in the torchlight if you stared too long."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Harlow said, her voice flat"
1"Harlow said, but her triumph was short-lived"
2"Harlow said, her voice low and precise"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.265
leniency0.529
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.7406%