| 12.50% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" | | 2 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.64 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 77.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1575 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1575 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "unsettled" | | 4 | "complex" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "resolve" | | 12 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1594 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1464 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Dymas | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Hel | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.817 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite night and not quite dusk but some third thing that existed only here" | | 1 | "not quite dusk but some third thing that existed only here" | | 2 | "quite recognition and wasn't quite peace" | | 3 | "quite peace" | | 4 | "quite a path — a seam in the land where the reddish earth was packed and pale, worn by passage" | | 5 | "something like a city" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.137 | | wordCount | 1594 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite night and not quite dusk but some third thing" | | 1 | "not quite dusk but some third thing" | | 2 | "not look like architecture designed for shelter but for display" | | 3 | "not music exactly, but something rhythmic, drums perhaps" | | 4 | "not toward the city but veering along the valley's rim, stepping through the tall gr" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 38.88 | | std | 30.72 | | cv | 0.79 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 90 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 111 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 86 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 127 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 76 | | 27 | 72 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 66 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 61 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 58 | | 40 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 253 | | matches | | 0 | "was selecting" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "were adjusting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.152 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been pulsing for the last ten minutes — a slow, rhythmic warmth like something alive and breathing — but now it went perfectly still, as though it had gotten what it wanted." | | 1 | "There were no clouds, or nothing that Rory could identify as clouds — only slow drifts of golden haze that moved against whatever passed for wind in this place." | | 2 | "Instead the air was thick and almost fragrant, heavy with something she couldn't name at first — sweetness, yes, but layered, complex, the way a market smelled when every stall was open at once." | | 3 | "Vineyards stretched away to the left in precise dark rows, the vines heavy with fat clusters of deep purple — no, red — no, they seemed to shift, the colour changing as the amber light moved across them." | | 4 | "Nyx drifted at the edge of Rory's peripheral vision, their form loosening slightly at the edges — the shadow that composed them bleeding out a little into the ambient light, tasting the air." | | 5 | "They followed a path that wasn't quite a path — a seam in the land where the reddish earth was packed and pale, worn by passage." | | 6 | "Below them, built into a natural hollow in the land, was a city — or something like a city." | | 7 | "They were too far away to make out clearly, but something in their movement was off — too slow in places, too frenetic in others, like a crowd playing at dinner in a dream." | | 8 | "A faint sound reached them on the amber-thick air — not music exactly, but something rhythmic, drums perhaps, or the beat of many forks against many plates, or both." | | 9 | "Isolde had already begun descending the far side of the rise, not toward the city but veering along the valley's rim, stepping through the tall grass that grew there — gold-tipped grass that bent in her direction as she passed without touching her." | | 10 | "It didn't whisper when she moved through it; it sighed — an exhale, almost contented, from the land itself." | | 11 | "The stone was not the same pale rock as the buildings below; it was something darker, almost black at the core, threaded through with veins of deep red that pulsed — faintly, slowly, like the Heartstone had before the portal closed." | | 12 | "The space beyond was a passage — low-ceilinged, stone-walled, lit by those same red veins that traced patterns through the rock she could almost resolve into something ordered." | | 13 | "Rory's shoulders came near to grazing both sides at once, and the stone radiated a faint warmth that contradicted the cool air — the warmth of something containing something else, sealed away and patient." | | 14 | "Now that her eyes were adjusting, she could see it — the pulsing channels of red didn't run at random." | | 15 | "The passage turned and the red light grew fractionally brighter and somewhere deep below — or perhaps far ahead, distance was hard to trust here — something that might have been music and might have been the sound of eating echoed up through the stone." |
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| 84.44% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1453 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "pale against pale skin." |
| | adverbCount | 74 | | adverbRatio | 0.05092911218169305 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015829318651066758 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 15.18 | | std | 11.47 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 37 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 64.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 41.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead the air was thick" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been pulsing for" | | 1 | "She wasn't sure which unsettled" | | 2 | "They rarely did when words" | | 3 | "She had expected heat." | | 4 | "Her voice was always exactly" | | 5 | "they said softly" | | 6 | "She focused on it." | | 7 | "They followed a path that" | | 8 | "It wound between the vineyard" | | 9 | "She had the strange impulse" | | 10 | "They were too far away" | | 11 | "She paused in the way" | | 12 | "She watched the distant figures" | | 13 | "Their gaze had moved from" | | 14 | "She pulled her hand away" | | 15 | "She moved as though she" | | 16 | "It didn't whisper when she" | | 17 | "It pressed lightly against her" | | 18 | "She stepped under the arch." | | 19 | "Their violet eyes glowed a" |
| | ratio | 0.263 | |
| 41.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The portal closed behind them" | | 1 | "Rory pressed her hand flat" | | 2 | "It had been pulsing for" | | 3 | "She wasn't sure which unsettled" | | 4 | "Nyx said nothing." | | 5 | "They rarely did when words" | | 6 | "The sky above Dymas was" | | 7 | "The light it produced was" | | 8 | "She had expected heat." | | 9 | "The realm of Hel, she'd" | | 10 | "Stone fruit and something floral." | | 11 | "The ghost of woodsmoke threaded" | | 12 | "Vineyards stretched away to the" | | 13 | "Every branch bowed with fruit," | | 14 | "Isolde said, beside her" | | 15 | "Her voice was always exactly" | | 16 | "Rory looked at her." | | 17 | "The half-Fae's silver hair caught" | | 18 | "Isolde left no footprints in" | | 19 | "Rory's boots sank half an" |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them, the land rolled" | | 1 | "To the right, an orchard" | | 2 | "Even in the strange warmth" | | 3 | "Now that her eyes were" |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been pulsing for the last ten minutes — a slow, rhythmic warmth like something alive and breathing — but now it went perfectly still, as though it had go…" | | 1 | "The sky above Dymas was the color of cooling embers, a deep amber that ran to orange at the horizon and bruised to something darker overhead, not quite night an…" | | 2 | "Every branch bowed with fruit, none of it fallen, none of it rotting, as though the trees existed in a permanent state of perfect harvest." | | 3 | "The half-Fae's silver hair caught the amber light and held it, and her pale lavender eyes moved slowly over the landscape with something that wasn't quite recog…" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted at the edge of Rory's peripheral vision, their form loosening slightly at the edges — the shadow that composed them bleeding out a little into the a…" | | 5 | "The structures were low and sprawling, built from a warm pale stone that glowed faintly in the amber light, arched and open-sided in a way that did not look lik…" | | 6 | "Isolde had already begun descending the far side of the rise, not toward the city but veering along the valley's rim, stepping through the tall grass that grew …" | | 7 | "The archways were older than the city by some order of magnitude that felt impossible to estimate." | | 8 | "The temperature shifted immediately, dropping to something closer to cold, and the amber light thinned behind her as though the archway reflected it away." | | 9 | "The space beyond was a passage — low-ceilinged, stone-walled, lit by those same red veins that traced patterns through the rock she could almost resolve into so…" | | 10 | "Rory's shoulders came near to grazing both sides at once, and the stone radiated a faint warmth that contradicted the cool air — the warmth of something contain…" | | 11 | "The passage turned and the red light grew fractionally brighter and somewhere deep below — or perhaps far ahead, distance was hard to trust here — something tha…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, not unkindly" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.52 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |