Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WBQXQ9432A759X1BV6W7C

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.006342
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell of old paper and cumin from the curry house below hung in the air. Rory shifted a stack of Eva’s research notes on Celtic wardings from the armchair and sank into the worn velvet. Ptolemy, a ginger tabby with a disapproving squint, leaped onto her lap and began kneading her jeans with relentless paws. Three sharp, precise raps sounded on the door. Not Eva’s chaotic bang. This was controlled, intentional. Rory’s heart did a slow, heavy roll against her ribs. Eva was at the British Library until ten. No one else knew she was here. The raps came again, a little louder. Ptolemy flattened his ears. Rory eased him off and stood, her palms suddenly damp. She moved to the door, the floorboards protesting under her weight. Through the peephole’s distorted fisheye, the hallway was a tunnel of faded floral wallpaper. And at the end of it, standing with the patience of a statue, was Lucien Moreau. Her breath caught. He looked exactly the same. Impeccable charcoal suit, tailored to his lean frame. Platinum blond hair slicked back from a high forehead. One hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane, the other held a flat, dark object—a file, perhaps. Even through the glass, she could see the odd mismatch of his eyes: one amber, one black as pitch. He hadn’t changed a bit in the six months since she’d last seen him. Since she’d told him to get the hell out of her life. Her fingers hovered over the three deadbolts. She could pretend she wasn’t here. Ptolemy meowed loudly from the sofa. Lucien’s head tilted a fraction, a faint, knowing smile touching his lips. He’d heard. Swearing under her breath, Rory threw the bolts. The last one stuck, and she had to wrench it. The door swung inward. He filled the doorway, a slice of cool, expensive cologne cutting through the flat’s dusty warmth. His gaze swept over her, from her straight black hair tied in a messy knot to her worn trainers. It lingered on the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, visible where she’d pushed her sleeves up. “Hello, Rory.” His voice was exactly as she remembered—low, smooth, with that faint Marseille accent that softened the edges of his consonants. “You’ve got the wrong flat.” Her own voice came out flat, colder than she intended. “Eva’s not here.” “I’m not here for Eva.” “Then you’ve definitely got the wrong flat.” He didn’t move. “May I come in?” “No.” “It’s about a mutual problem. Silas.” The name of the bar owner, her landlord, gave her pause. Silas was tangled up in the same shadowy London underworld Lucien navigated. A world she’d tried to step back from after… everything. She stepped aside, a silent, grudging invitation. Lucien moved past her, the subtle swish of his wool coat brushing her arm. He took in the cramped space with a single glance—the towers of books, the scrolls spilling from the dining table, the herb bundles drying above the radiator. His expression didn’t change, but she saw the slight tightening around his eyes. He’d never liked chaos. “Charming,” he said, his tone dry. “What do you want, Lucien?” He turned to face her, leaning lightly on his cane. “Straight to business. You haven’t changed.” “You have. You’re standing in my friend’s flat uninvited. That’s new.” A flicker of something—amusement, or irritation—crossed his face. “I called your mobile. Several times.” “I changed my number.” “So I discovered.” He placed the dark file on a precarious stack of journals. “Silas is in trouble. The kind that spills over. Onto his tenants. Onto the people who deliver for his… associates.” Rory crossed her arms. “I deliver dumplings, Lucien. Not contraband.” “You deliver for Yu-Fei Cheung. Who owes a considerable favour to a man named Kael. Silas guaranteed that favour. The guarantee has come due, and Silas cannot pay. Kael is not a forgiving soul.” “And you’re here out of the goodness of your heart to warn me?” She let out a short, humourless laugh. “You don’t have a heart.” His heterochromatic eyes held hers. The amber one seemed to glow in the flat’s dim light. “I have many flaws, *chérie*. A lack of memory is not one of them. I remember every detail of the last time we spoke. The things you said. The things I did not say.” The air in the room thickened. Ptolemy jumped onto the table, his tail twitching as he sniffed at Lucien’s file. “You didn’t say anything,” Rory said, the old hurt rising like bile. “You just left. After… after everything. One night, and then you vanished into your demonic business deals. No call. No note. Nothing.” “I left to handle a situation that would have put you in a crossfire. My father’s associates were in the city. They have certain… appetites. For humans with particular talents. For humans who catch the eye of their half-breed sons.” His voice was quiet, matter-of-fact. “Staying away was the only protection I could offer.” “I didn’t ask for your protection. I asked for honesty.” “Honesty would have gotten you killed.” He took a step closer. The scent of him—sandalwood and something metallic, like ozone after a storm—wrapped around her. “Do you think I wanted to go? Do you think I enjoyed walking away from the only person in this godforsaken city who looked at me and didn’t see a monster or a tool?” Her breath hitched. She looked away, focusing on a crack in the plaster. “You could have explained.” “And if you had insisted on staying? On helping? You are brilliant, Rory, and stubborn. You would have tried. And you would have died. Forgive me if I preferred you alive and hating me.” The raw truth in his words stripped her defences. She remembered that night six months ago. The heat of his skin under her hands. The way his mismatched eyes had watched her with a reverence that terrified her. The empty bed in the morning. “I don’t hate you,” she whispered. He was right in front of her now. He didn’t touch her, but his presence was a physical weight. “What do you feel, then?” “Angry. Confused.” She met his gaze again. “Relieved that you’re not dead.” A slow smile touched his lips, not quite reaching his eyes. “Not yet.” He reached out, his movements deliberate. His fingers, cool and elegant, brushed the inside of her left wrist. His thumb traced the curve of her crescent scar. A shiver raced up her arm, spreading through her chest. “I remember this,” he said, his voice barely audible. “You told me you fell out of an apple tree trying to rescue a kitten.” “The kitten was fine. I needed seven stitches.” “You never could leave a lost cause alone.” His thumb stilled, pressing gently against her pulse point. She could feel the rapid thrum of her heartbeat under his touch. “I am a lost cause, Rory Carter. More than you know.” “I know what you are.” “Do you?” His amber eye seemed to burn. “Do you know what it does to me, standing here? Knowing I should walk away again for your own good? Knowing that if Kael’s people come for Silas, they will find you. And I will burn this city to the ground before I let that happen.” The confession hung between them, stark and undeniable. The careful control he always wore was gone, stripped away to reveal something desperate and fierce beneath. She didn’t think. She lifted her free hand and placed it against his cheek. His skin was smooth, cool. He went utterly still, his breath catching. “You don’t get to make that choice for me,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “Not again. If there’s danger, you tell me. We face it together, or you leave now and don’t come back. But you don’t get to disappear to protect me. Not anymore.” His black eye seemed to swallow the light. He leaned into her touch, his own hand coming up to cover hers, pressing it harder against his face. “You have no idea what you’re asking.” “I’m asking for the truth. All of it.” He was silent for a long moment, his gaze searching hers. Then, he bent his head until his forehead rested against hers. The contact was electric, a current that snapped through her entire body. “The truth is,” he murmured, his lips a hair’s breadth from hers, “I have missed you every single day. The truth is, I am selfish. I want you safe, but I also want you. And those two things cannot coexist in my world.” Her heart hammered against her ribs. “Then we’ll find a way.” He laughed, a soft, broken sound. “Your optimism will be the death of me.” “Or your salvation.” His mouth found hers. It wasn’t a gentle kiss. It was a collision, six months of longing and anger and fear exploding between them. His cane clattered to the floor. His arms wrapped around her, pulling her tight against the hard lines of his body. Her fingers tangled in his platinum hair, ruining its perfect sweep. He tasted of black coffee and something dark, sweet—like pomegranate. The world narrowed to the heat of his mouth, the press of his hands on her back, the low sound he made in his throat. Ptolemy yowled in protest, knocked off the table by the falling cane. They broke apart, breathing ragged. Lucien’s eyes were wide, his pupils dilated. A lock of blond hair had fallen across his forehead. He looked undone. Rory’s lips tingled. She could still feel the imprint of his body against hers. He stooped, retrieving his cane with a fluid motion. When he straightened, some of the mask was back in place, but his knuckles were white where he gripped the ivory handle. “Kael,” he said, his voice rough. “We need to talk about Kael.”
created_at"2026-02-24T22:29:50.143Z" 2/24/2026, 10:29:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.264
leniency0.528
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1662
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"lightly"
2"gently"
3"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1662
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"chaotic"
2"weight"
3"warmth"
4"navigated"
5"flicker"
6"traced"
7"raced"
8"pulse"
9"could feel"
10"stark"
11"electric"
12"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
92.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1655
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1083
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Celtic1
British1
Library1
Lucien6
Moreau1
Rory7
Marseille1
London1
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"British"
1"Library"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite reaching his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1655
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean25.08
std20.13
cv0.803
sampleLengths
056
18
233
37
455
589
619
714
822
953
102
1120
1218
135
147
157
161
176
1833
1965
206
215
2216
2311
2414
254
2634
2710
2834
2925
3050
3120
3234
3354
3410
3559
3617
3734
3844
396
4024
4112
4213
4337
4424
458
4640
475
4854
4925
99.05% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"was tangled"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
29.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences151
ratio0.04
matches
0"One hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane, the other held a flat, dark object—a file, perhaps."
1"His voice was exactly as she remembered—low, smooth, with that faint Marseille accent that softened the edges of his consonants."
2"He took in the cramped space with a single glance—the towers of books, the scrolls spilling from the dining table, the herb bundles drying above the radiator."
3"A flicker of something—amusement, or irritation—crossed his face."
4"The scent of him—sandalwood and something metallic, like ozone after a storm—wrapped around her."
5"He tasted of black coffee and something dark, sweet—like pomegranate."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1093
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.028362305580969808
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007319304666056725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean10.96
std8.23
cv0.751
sampleLengths
016
120
220
38
44
54
610
78
87
97
104
1110
1211
1314
1416
153
165
178
189
1919
2019
2114
2212
237
246
256
2612
272
288
2910
304
3116
3219
3318
342
3520
3615
373
385
397
403
414
421
436
4411
4512
469
471
487
4914
40.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2980132450331126
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners45
30.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then, he bent his head"
ratio0.009
5.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences110
matches
0"She moved to the door,"
1"Her breath caught."
2"He looked exactly the same."
3"He hadn’t changed a bit"
4"Her fingers hovered over the"
5"She could pretend she wasn’t"
6"He filled the doorway, a"
7"His gaze swept over her,"
8"It lingered on the small,"
9"His voice was exactly as"
10"Her own voice came out"
11"He didn’t move."
12"She stepped aside, a silent,"
13"He took in the cramped"
14"His expression didn’t change, but"
15"He’d never liked chaos."
16"he said, his tone dry"
17"He turned to face her,"
18"He placed the dark file"
19"She let out a short,"
ratio0.536
14.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences110
matches
0"The smell of old paper"
1"Rory shifted a stack of"
2"Ptolemy, a ginger tabby with"
3"This was controlled, intentional."
4"Rory’s heart did a slow,"
5"Eva was at the British"
6"The raps came again, a"
7"Ptolemy flattened his ears."
8"Rory eased him off and"
9"She moved to the door,"
10"Her breath caught."
11"He looked exactly the same."
12"Platinum blond hair slicked back"
13"He hadn’t changed a bit"
14"Her fingers hovered over the"
15"She could pretend she wasn’t"
16"Ptolemy meowed loudly from the"
17"Lucien’s head tilted a fraction,"
18"The last one stuck, and"
19"The door swung inward."
ratio0.891
45.45% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"Even through the glass, she"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His voice was exactly as she remembered—low, smooth, with that faint Marseille accent that softened the edges of his consonants."
1"The way his mismatched eyes had watched her with a reverence that terrified her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he said, his tone dry"
1"Rory said, the old hurt rising like bile"
2"he said, his voice barely audible"
3"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
4"he murmured, his lips a hair’s breadth from hers,"
5"he said, his voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.264
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.075
79.9001%