Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WD73QP8F87RNF3G5GEA3W

Run Details

Model:
Aion 2.0
Duration:
1m 28s
Cost:
$0.006361
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed a faint electric hymn into the damp Soho evening. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air was thick with the scent of old wood, polish, and the faint, ever-present ghost of cigarette smoke from decades past. Rory wiped down the mahogany bar with a practiced, circular motion. Silas was in the back, inventorying spirits; the soft clink of bottles was the only sound besides the low hum of the refrigeration unit. She wasn't on the clock, not really. The delivery shift for Yu-Fei had ended hours ago. But the flat above the bar felt too quiet, and the rhythmic work of cleaning was a comfort. It let her mind go blank, a state she cultivated. Her left wrist, where the small crescent scar whitened against her skin, brushed against the damp rag. The door opened, slicing a wedge of sodium-lit street into the dimness. A man stepped in, letting the door sigh shut behind him. He was tall, shoulders broad in a well-cut wool coat, his hair shorter than she remembered, the dark blond now threaded with early grey at the temples. He scanned the room, his gaze sliding over the framed maps and the empty booths before landing on her. Rory’s hand stilled on the bar. The cloth dripped a single, dark spot onto the wood. “Laila?” The name hit the quiet room like a stone dropped in a still pond. It had been years since anyone had called her that. It belonged to Cardiff, to university libraries and too-sweet cider and a girl who wore her heart like a badge. The man took a step closer, his face shifting from polite curiosity to stunned recognition. “Christ. It is you.” Rory set the rag down slowly. She could feel the cool, steady weight of Silas’s signet ring against a shelf below the bar, a signal he was listening from the doorway to the back. She didn’t look. “Leo,” she said. Her voice was steady, a flat surface. “Leo Brennan.” A laugh escaped him, short and disbelieving. He closed the distance, stopping a few feet from the bar. He didn’t try to hug her. “I don’t believe it. What are you doing in London? And here?” His eyes took in the bar, her simple jeans and t-shirt, the rag on the counter. The unasked question hung between them: *What are you doing* here *like this?* “I live here,” she said. “Well, above here. I work deliveries. For a restaurant.” She offered no more. “You?” “Law,” he said, as if it were obvious. And it was. Leo Brennan, first in their class, the one with the five-year plan etched in stone. “I’m with a firm in the City. Over for a client dinner.” He gestured vaguely toward the door. “Saw the sign. Thought I’d pop in for a whiskey before the train back to… well. My place is in Kensington now.” He said it without boast, a simple statement of fact, but it delineated the space between them as clearly as the bar top. Kensington. Deliveries. “Can I get you that whiskey?” she asked, turning to the shelves. Her movements were automatic, her back to him. “Please. A single malt. Whatever you recommend.” She chose a mid-range Speyside, poured two fingers into a clean glass. When she turned back, he had shrugged off his coat and was sitting on a stool. He looked older. Not just the grey. His face had lost the soft, eager openness she remembered. It was leaner, sharper, the lines around his eyes etched by stress or late nights or both. But his eyes, a warm hazel, were the same, and they were fixed on her with an intensity that felt like a physical touch. “You disappeared,” he said, quietly, as she set the glass before him. “After… after everything with Evan. No one knew where you went. Your parents were frantic. Well, your dad was. Your mum was just… quiet.” Rory leaned against the back counter, crossing her arms. The crescent scar on her wrist faced upward, a pale moon. “I needed to go.” “I know. I know you did.” He took a sip of the whiskey, his eyes closing briefly in appreciation. “This is good.” He opened them again. “I looked for you. For a while.” “Why?” The question, blunt and stripped bare, seemed to surprise him. He swirled the amber liquid in his glass. “Because you were my friend. Because what he did… what was happening… I should have seen it sooner. I should have done something.” There it was. The unspoken thing, the rot at the root of their severed past. Leo had been there, in the same social orbit. He’d seen Evan’s charm, his possessiveness disguised as devotion. He’d been one of the people Rory had slowly, systematically been isolated from. “You couldn’t have known,” she said, and it was true, but the words were empty, a ritual absolution she offered because it was expected. “I should have.” He set the glass down with a sharp click. “I was so wrapped up in internships, in moot court, in climbing the ladder. I saw the changes in you. You stopped arguing in seminars. You stopped coming to the pub. You became… smaller. I told myself you were just focused, that Evan was supportive. I was a coward.” The confession hung in the air, raw and uncomfortable. Rory said nothing. She remembered the Leo of before: ambitious, yes, but with a ready laugh, the one who’d quiz her on tort law in the common room, who’d shared her disdain for their more pompous professors. The man before her carried a different weight. “You’ve changed,” he said, echoing her thoughts. “Haven’t we all.” “Not like this.” He gestured at her, a swift, encompassing motion. “You’re… you’re calm. You were always clever, but it was a nervous energy, like a bird trapped in a room. Now you’re still. It’s unnerving.” “Life outside a gilded cage is less frantic,” she said, and immediately regretted the bitterness that seeped into her tone. He flinched. “Is that what we were? A cage?” “My life was.” She uncrossed her arms, picked up the rag again, needing to do something with her hands. “Pre-Law, the right friends, the right boyfriend. It was a script. I was just reading lines.” “And now? Delivering noodles is better?” It wasn’t malice in his voice, but a genuine, baffled curiosity. The question laid bare the canyon between their understandings of the world. For him, success was a trajectory, a destination like Kensington. For her, success was a locked door at night, silence, and the absence of fear. “It’s honest,” she said finally. “And it’s mine. No one owns it. No one owns me.” Leo absorbed this, his gaze dropping to his hands. He still had the long, elegant fingers she remembered, but now a platinum band encircled the fourth finger of his left hand. She hadn’t noticed it before. “You’re married,” she said. He looked at the ring as if surprised to see it there. “Yes. Two years. Her name is Clara. She’s a pediatrician.” “Congratulations.” “It’s… it’s good. It’s stable.” He said the word like a mantra. “She doesn’t know about… about all that. About Cardiff. I’ve parceled that life off. A different Leo.” “We all do that, don’t we?” Rory’s voice was soft. “Create compartments. The person we were, the person we are. The trick is not letting the old ones leak.” “Do they? Leak?” She thought of Evan’s face sometimes, flashing in a crowd. The way a raised voice could still make her heart stutter. The careful way she mapped exits in every room. “Sometimes,” she admitted. They lapsed into silence. The clock above the bar ticked, measuring the seconds they had lost. Leo finished his whiskey. “I think about that last time I saw you,” he said, not looking at her. “It was at the graduation party. Evan had his arm around you, so tight it looked like he was holding you up. You smiled, but it didn’t reach your eyes. I raised a glass to you from across the room. You didn’t see me. I got very drunk that night. I told myself I was celebrating.” Rory remembered that night. The pressure of Evan’s grip on her arm, a warning disguised as affection. The blur of faces. The feeling of being a ghost at her own feast. She had seen Leo. She had seen his raised glass, his smile. She had looked away. “I saw you,” she whispered. He looked up, his eyes bright with a pain that was years old but undimmed. “Why didn’t you say anything? To me? To anyone?” “What would I have said? ‘My boyfriend is a monster. Please save me.’? You were all so impressed by him. He had that way. He made my paranoia seem like… fragility.” She shook her head. “It wasn’t your job to save me, Leo. It was my job to leave. And I did.” “But you left everything. Your degree, your friends… me.” There it was, the core of the regret, not just for what happened, but for what was lost between them. A friendship that might have been a lifeline, severed by circumstance and fear. “I had to,” she repeated, the only truth she had. He nodded, accepting the finality of it. He pulled out his wallet, placed a twenty-pound note on the bar. “For the drink.” “It’s on the house.” “Please. Let me.” She didn’t argue. He stood, shrugging his coat back on. He looked like a stranger again, a successful man in a fine coat, out of place in the shadowy nest of her world. “It was good to see you, Laila,” he said, the old name a soft farewell. “Rory,” she corrected gently. “It’s Rory now.” “Rory.” He tested the name. It seemed to fit her better, he thought. “Take care of yourself.” “You too, Leo. Give my best to Clara.” He offered a small, sad smile that was more a memory of his old grin, then turned and walked to the door. The green neon light washed over him for an instant as he stepped out into the night, and then he was gone, absorbed by the city. Rory stood behind the bar, the silence settling back around her. She picked up the twenty-pound note, smoothed it flat, and tucked it into the till. From the doorway to the back room, Silas’s slight limp was audible as he approached. “Old friend?” he asked, his voice a low rumble. “Something like that,” she said. She picked up the damp rag again, the familiar texture rough against her palm, and went back to wiping down the bar, erasing the faint water rings and the ghost of a conversation that had opened doors to rooms she’d tried to seal shut forever.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"she corrected gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.46
leniency0.921
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.095
86.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1807
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1807
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"etched"
count2
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"affection"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"rhythmic"
2"scanned"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"etched"
6"intensity"
7"unspoken"
8"charm"
9"echoing"
10"silence"
11"affection"
12"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1807
ratio0.003
matches
0"What are you doing"
1"like this?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1274
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Yu-Fei1
Cardiff1
Silas3
Brennan1
Speyside1
Rory9
Evan3
Leo6
Kensington2
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Silas"
2"Brennan"
3"Speyside"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Leo"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"Kensington"
globalScore1
windowScore1
93.82% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a physical touch"
1"looked like a stranger again, a successfu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.553
wordCount1807
matches
0"not just for what happened, but for what was lost between them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean28.68
std21.89
cv0.763
sampleLengths
075
161
269
316
41
559
64
737
812
965
1019
1166
1225
1320
147
1586
1636
1724
1833
191
2041
2146
2224
2361
2454
257
263
2736
2820
299
3035
316
3248
3316
3436
354
3622
371
3829
3929
403
4133
4220
4371
4447
455
4624
4752
489
4933
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences120
matches
0"were fixed"
1"been isolated"
2"was lost"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was listening"
1"was sitting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences153
ratio0.007
matches
0"Silas was in the back, inventorying spirits; the soft clink of bottles was the only sound besides the low hum of the refrigeration unit."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1283
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.030397505845674203
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010911925175370226
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean11.81
std8.99
cv0.761
sampleLengths
014
126
211
324
47
59
618
710
817
912
1011
1127
1219
136
1410
151
1614
1710
1820
1915
204
216
2228
233
243
257
262
277
2811
296
3028
3113
325
3313
341
358
363
3715
3818
3922
4023
411
421
4312
448
457
4612
4716
483
494
43.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3202614379084967
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences111
matches
0"She wasn't on the clock,"
1"It let her mind go"
2"Her left wrist, where the"
3"He was tall, shoulders broad"
4"He scanned the room, his"
5"It had been years since"
6"It belonged to Cardiff, to"
7"She could feel the cool,"
8"She didn’t look."
9"Her voice was steady, a"
10"He closed the distance, stopping"
11"He didn’t try to hug"
12"His eyes took in the"
13"She offered no more"
14"he said, as if it"
15"He gestured vaguely toward the"
16"He said it without boast,"
17"she asked, turning to the"
18"Her movements were automatic, her"
19"She chose a mid-range Speyside,"
ratio0.577
9.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences111
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory wiped down the mahogany"
2"Silas was in the back,"
3"She wasn't on the clock,"
4"The delivery shift for Yu-Fei"
5"It let her mind go"
6"Her left wrist, where the"
7"The door opened, slicing a"
8"A man stepped in, letting"
9"He was tall, shoulders broad"
10"He scanned the room, his"
11"Rory’s hand stilled on the"
12"The cloth dripped a single,"
13"The name hit the quiet"
14"It had been years since"
15"It belonged to Cardiff, to"
16"The man took a step"
17"Rory set the rag down"
18"She could feel the cool,"
19"She didn’t look."
ratio0.901
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He scanned the room, his gaze sliding over the framed maps and the empty booths before landing on her."
1"It belonged to Cardiff, to university libraries and too-sweet cider and a girl who wore her heart like a badge."
2"But his eyes, a warm hazel, were the same, and they were fixed on her with an intensity that felt like a physical touch."
3"She remembered the Leo of before: ambitious, yes, but with a ready laugh, the one who’d quiz her on tort law in the common room, who’d shared her disdain for th…"
4"She picked up the damp rag again, the familiar texture rough against her palm, and went back to wiping down the bar, erasing the faint water rings and the ghost…"
56.03% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, as if it were obvious"
1"He took, his eyes closing briefly in appreciation"
2"he said, not looking at her"
3"he asked, his voice a low rumble"
86.51% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
3"she corrected gently (correct)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.302
leniency0.603
rawRatio0.211
effectiveRatio0.127
79.8045%