| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 87.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1966 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "precisely" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.62% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1966 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "lilt" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "resolved" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "churned" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "scanned" | | 16 | "almost alive" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "perfect" | | 19 | "synchronized" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 186 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1992 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.02% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1717 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 23 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Light | 1 | | Flat | 1 | | One | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Isolde | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Light" | | 4 | "Dymas" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 0.83 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 99.60% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.004 | | wordCount | 1992 | | matches | | 0 | "not white, not gold, but the color of honey held up to a flame" | | 1 | "not gold, but the color of honey held up to a flame" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 28.87 | | std | 25.16 | | cv | 0.872 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 85 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 105 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 50 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 56 | | 46 | 85 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 273 | | matches | | 0 | "was marking" | | 1 | "wasn't eating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 186 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "More like a heartbeat that wasn't hers — a deep, rhythmic pulse that throbbed through the silver chain and settled somewhere behind her sternum." | | 1 | "Her lavender eyes reflected the light bleeding through the tear in the Veil — not white, not gold, but the color of honey held up to a flame." | | 2 | "The rift hung in the air before them like a wound — a vertical seam of shimmering distortion roughly seven feet tall, pulsing at its edges with that amber glow." | | 3 | "Rory watched the shadow-figure warp, flatten, then vanish entirely — pulled through like ink through a drain." | | 4 | "The world folded around her like wet cloth, pressure on every inch of skin, a sound like the ocean heard through a wall, and then —" | | 5 | "The entire vault of the heavens burned with a warm, steady, honeyed gold that had no visible source — no sun, no horizon glow, just an omnipresent radiance that cast soft-edged shadows in every direction." | | 6 | "Beyond the vineyards, orchards climbed a gentle slope — trees Rory couldn't name bearing fruit she couldn't identify, their branches so laden they bent in wide arcs toward the golden-veined earth." | | 7 | "Not a polite rumble — a sharp, sudden, hollowing ache, as though she hadn't eaten in days." | | 8 | "Sleeping or screaming — she couldn't tell which." | | 9 | "Between the trees, long tables stretched in rows — hundreds of them, thousands maybe — laden with food." | | 10 | "Just the wet, rhythmic sounds of consumption — chewing and tearing and swallowing — rising like the drone of insects." | | 11 | "The golden filaments pulsed beneath her fingers — a quickening, like a startled heartbeat — then went dim again." | | 12 | "It pointed, as much as a stone could point — the warmth concentrated on one side, tugging faintly to the left, toward the far edge of the orchard where the trees grew denser and darker." | | 13 | "The shadow of their face — featureless except for those burning violet points — hovered inches from the stone." | | 14 | "Isolde flanked her left, drifting above the ground in that unsettling way — present but untouched, her bare feet half an inch above the soil." | | 15 | "They moved in silence, but Rory caught flickers of their form stretching back toward the rift — glancing behind, checking the exit, measuring the distance." | | 16 | "The trees here bore fruit she could almost name — apples, maybe, but too large, too symmetric, their skins a polished red so deep it bordered on black." | | 17 | "Faint, drifting from the palace at the valley's center — strings, low and modal, not quite a melody." | | 18 | "He wore stained whites — kitchen attire, recognizable, almost absurdly mundane in this place." | | 19 | "His lips moved — counting, maybe, or reciting a recipe — and his fingers never stopped." | | 20 | "The bone knife hovered over the cutting board — a flat stone balanced between two roots." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1712 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "Tiny, thumb-sized faces" | | 1 | "wide, bowl-shaped valley." | | 2 | "long, amber-lit shadows" |
| | adverbCount | 62 | | adverbRatio | 0.036214953271028034 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008177570093457943 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 186 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 186 | | mean | 10.71 | | std | 8.47 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 62.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.41397849462365593 | | totalSentences | 186 | | uniqueOpeners | 77 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "More like a heartbeat that" | | 1 | "Then her mouth curved." | | 2 | "Mechanically, ceaselessly, hand to mouth," | | 3 | "Just the wet, rhythmic sounds" | | 4 | "More like a pulse." |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 1 | "Her lavender eyes reflected the" | | 2 | "Their shadow-form thinned at the" | | 3 | "She'd carried it for three" | | 4 | "She gripped the Fae blade" | | 5 | "She looked down." | | 6 | "She looked up and forgot" | | 7 | "They had reconstituted beside her," | | 8 | "They shifted between rust and" | | 9 | "She left no footprints in" | | 10 | "She'd had a sandwich an" | | 11 | "She pressed her fist against" | | 12 | "she said through her teeth" | | 13 | "They moved downhill through the" | | 14 | "She paused beside one and" | | 15 | "She stepped back." | | 16 | "She spat and wiped her" | | 17 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 18 | "They emerged from the vineyard" | | 19 | "She gripped the Fae blade" |
| | ratio | 0.255 | |
| 84.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 106 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory's" | | 1 | "She pressed her palm flat" | | 2 | "Isolde said from behind her" | | 3 | "The half-Fae stood at the" | | 4 | "Her lavender eyes reflected the" | | 5 | "Nyx drifted past them both." | | 6 | "Their shadow-form thinned at the" | | 7 | "The violet glow of Nyx's" | | 8 | "The rift hung in the" | | 9 | "Rory reached for the dagger" | | 10 | "The moonsilver handle bit cold" | | 11 | "She'd carried it for three" | | 12 | "Isolde's voice held the absolute" | | 13 | "Nyx had already half-dissolved into" | | 14 | "Rory watched the shadow-figure warp," | | 15 | "She gripped the Fae blade" | | 16 | "The crossing lasted one second" | | 17 | "The world folded around her" | | 18 | "The smell of ripe fruit" | | 19 | "Rory stumbled onto ground that" |
| | ratio | 0.752 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the ground itself" | | 1 | "As if summoned by the" | | 2 | "If Dymas sensed the half-Fae," |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 29.48% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "More like a heartbeat that wasn't hers — a deep, rhythmic pulse that throbbed through the silver chain and settled somewhere behind her sternum." | | 1 | "The half-Fae stood at the edge of the rift, silver hair caught in a wind that came from nowhere on the mortal side." | | 2 | "Dark earth, almost black, rich and loamy, threaded through with filaments of gold that glowed faintly beneath the surface." | | 3 | "The entire vault of the heavens burned with a warm, steady, honeyed gold that had no visible source — no sun, no horizon glow, just an omnipresent radiance that…" | | 4 | "They had reconstituted beside her, their shadow-form sharper here, more defined, as if the ambient warmth gave their edges something to push against." | | 5 | "Vineyards covered the nearest hillside, row after row of thick-trunked vines heavy with fruit that ranged from deep purple to a luminous, almost radioactive gre…" | | 6 | "Not a polite rumble — a sharp, sudden, hollowing ache, as though she hadn't eaten in days." | | 7 | "The vines were thick as Rory's forearm, gnarled and ancient-looking, their bark scored with patterns that might have been natural growth and might have been som…" | | 8 | "Tree-trunks the width of houses rose in spiraling columns, their branches interlocking overhead to form vaulted canopies draped with flowering vines." | | 9 | "But his hands moved with extraordinary speed, separating the flesh of a fruit Rory couldn't identify, slicing it into translucent sheets with a knife that appea…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.211 | | leniency | 0.421 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |