Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WFDRPPY62625CZ51BMAFQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.069275
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck. It always stuck. Rory had to lean her shoulder into the door and twist the key at an angle that would have made a locksmith weep, and by the time the mechanism finally gave with its rusted clunk, whatever composure she'd arranged on the walk from the peephole had dissolved into the simple irritation of living in a flat that fought back. She pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit and his ivory-handled cane hooked over one forearm like he'd come to appraise the building rather than stand in the narrow corridor above a curry house at half eleven on a Tuesday. The smell of cardamom and frying onions rose from the shop below. A bead of water tracked down his temple, past the amber eye, and he didn't wipe it away. "No." She moved to close the door. His cane caught the frame — not shoved, just placed, the handle resting against the wood with a kind of surgical precision that made her teeth ache. "Thirty seconds." "You burned through your thirty seconds about six weeks ago, Lucien." "I'm aware of the timeline." "Then you're also aware that I don't want to talk to you." His black eye — the one that unsettled people who didn't know what they were looking at, and terrified people who did — shifted past her into the flat. She watched him catalogue the chaos: Eva's towers of occult research, the scrolls pinned to the kitchen cabinets with magnets shaped like fruit, Ptolemy sprawled across an open copy of the Lesser Key of Solomon like a furry paperweight. "You've been staying here," he said. Not a question. "Eva's in Thessaloniki. Someone has to feed the cat." "You left the flat above Silas's bar." "The boiler broke." "The boiler's been broken since March. You left because of the wards I put on your windows." Rory's grip tightened on the door handle. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the hallway's jaundiced light. "You don't get to ward my windows, Lucien. You don't get to ward anything of mine. We covered this." "We shouted about it. That's different from covering it." She hated the way he said things like that. Calm. Measured. Four languages at his disposal and he wielded English like a scalpel — no wasted syllables, no heat, every word placed exactly where it would land hardest. She'd watched him do it to arms dealers and demon-blood traders in backrooms across the East End, watched their faces go slack when they realized they'd agreed to something they hadn't intended. She recognized the technique. She was not immune to it. "You're soaking wet," she said. "It's raining." "There are cabs." "I walked from Shoreditch." "That's a stupid thing to do in a suit that costs more than my rent." The corner of his mouth moved. Not a smile. The suggestion of one, offered and then retracted before it could be held against him. "Are you going to let me in, or shall I negotiate with the door?" Ptolemy chose that moment to abandon the grimoire and thread between Rory's ankles, purring at a volume that bordered on mechanical failure. The cat had always liked Lucien. Rory suspected demonic pheromones but had never been able to prove it. She stepped back. He entered the way he entered every room — an inventory first, threats second, exits third. She'd asked him about it once, early on, when they were still in that stage where personal questions felt like gifts exchanged. Born habit, he'd told her. My father's people don't sit with their backs to doors. She'd filed it away alongside every other fragment he'd offered, small and deliberate as mosaic tiles, and only later understood that the picture they assembled was not one he'd chosen to show her. "Tea?" The word came out before she could stop it. Hospitality as reflex. Her mother's daughter. "If you're offering." "I'm filling a kettle. You can draw your own conclusions." She moved into the kitchen, which was less a room than a theory — a strip of counter, a two-burner hob, and a kettle whose cord she had to drape over a stack of Eva's Sumerian translation notes. Behind her, she heard the creak of the one chair that could take weight and the soft click of his cane being leaned against the table. The rain hammered the window above the sink. She watched it run in sheets down glass that hadn't been cleaned since Eva left, turning the streetlights below into smears of sodium orange. Her reflection stared back — black hair flat against her neck, blue eyes bruised underneath from the kind of sleep that technically counted but offered nothing. "I found the Harker manuscript." Her hand stopped on the kettle's switch. "Don't do that," she said. "Do what?" "Lead with business. You didn't walk from Shoreditch in the rain to tell me about a manuscript." Silence. She heard Ptolemy jump onto the table, heard Lucien's hand move across fur. When she turned around, he was watching her with both eyes and for once they carried the same expression, which was worse than when they didn't. "No," he said. "I didn't." The kettle began to hiss. She folded her arms and leaned against the counter's edge, ignoring the scroll that crinkled beneath her elbow. "Then say what you came to say." He was quiet for a long moment. Ptolemy purred. Rain drilled the glass. From below, someone in the curry house laughed — a big, rolling belly laugh that felt obscene in the taut air of the flat. "I handled it wrong," Lucien said. "The wards. The information I kept from you about the Avaros contacts. The way I made decisions about your safety without consulting you." "You made decisions about my life." "Yes." "Because you decided I couldn't handle knowing what was coming." "Because I decided I couldn't handle what would happen to you if you did." He said it without flinching, without breaking eye contact, and she felt something shift in her chest like a bone resetting. "That's not the same thing, and it's not better. But it's the truth." Rory pressed her thumbnail into the scar on her wrist. An old habit. A reset button for moments when her pulse outran her thinking. "I've had someone make my choices for me before, Lucien. I moved four hundred miles to get away from it." Something changed in his face. Subtle. The jaw tightened a fraction. She'd told him about Evan — not everything, but enough — during a late night in the back office of the Golden Empress while Yu-Fei pretended not to listen from behind the bead curtain. She saw him absorb the comparison, saw it land somewhere deep and do damage. "I know," he said. "Do you? Because from where I stood, it looked exactly the same. Someone who thought they knew better. Someone who locked the windows." He closed his eyes. When he opened them, the amber one caught the overhead bulb and flared for a half-second, molten, before settling. "It is not the same. But I understand why it felt that way. And I should have understood it then." The kettle screamed. She turned and poured, grateful for the excuse to look away, to focus on the mechanical acts of mug and bag and water. Her hands were steady. She was proud of that. "You disappeared for six weeks," she said to the steam. "No messages. No word through Silas. You just — vanished." "You told me to leave." "I told you to stop. There's a difference." She heard the chair creak as he shifted. "You're right. There is." Rory brought two mugs to the table. She set his down on a treatise about ley line convergence and sat across from him, displacing Ptolemy, who dropped to the floor with the theatrical thud of a creature deeply wronged. Their knees almost touched beneath the table. The flat was that small. Everything in it conspired toward closeness. He wrapped his fingers around the mug. Long fingers, pale at the knuckle, a thin white scar across the back of his right hand from something he'd never explained. She watched the steam curl between his mismatched eyes and hated how familiar the geometry of his face still was — the sharp line of his nose, the way his platinum hair was already drying in pieces that fell across his forehead, abandoning the careful slick-back. "I found the Harker manuscript," he said again, quieter. "Lucien." "It pertains to you. To what's been following you since October. I could have sent it through channels, left it with Silas, kept the distance you asked for." He paused. "I didn't want to." The honesty of it sat between them like a living thing. She stared at the surface of her tea. "What do you want?" she asked. "To do it differently. With you informed. With you choosing." "And if I choose to handle it alone?" "Then I'll leave the manuscript and go." She looked up. He met her gaze without performance, without the smooth broker's mask she'd watched him wear in every other room with every other person. Just the raw, strange face of a man who was half of something he'd never asked to be, asking for something he knew he hadn't earned. Rory turned her mug in her hands. The rain slowed. Ptolemy wound around the table legs in a figure eight, indifferent to the weight of anything that wasn't his next meal. "Show me the manuscript," she said. Lucien reached into the interior pocket of his wet jacket and placed a folded sheaf of pages on the table beside the ley line treatise. His fingers lingered on it for a moment, then withdrew. "Stay," she said. The word surprised her. She didn't take it back. "Stay and walk me through it. And then — we'll see." The suggestion of a smile returned. This time he let it stay a beat longer before his expression settled into something more careful, more honest than a smile. "I can do that." She pulled the manuscript toward her and opened it. Their hands didn't touch. They didn't need to. The space between them had changed — still charged, still fraught, but the walls she'd built had a door in them now and she'd left it unlocked. Three deadbolts on the front door, and she'd opened every one.
created_at"2026-02-24T22:31:50.816Z" 2/24/2026, 10:31:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.036
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1740
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"mechanical"
count2
3
word"mosaic"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"measured"
2"mechanical"
3"mosaic"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"pulse"
7"familiar"
8"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences106
matches
0"was proud"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1754
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1308
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Tuesday1
Eva3
Ptolemy6
Lesser1
Key1
Solomon1
English1
East1
End1
Rory7
Lucien5
Hospitality1
Sumerian1
Silence1
Evan1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Solomon"
4"English"
5"Rory"
6"Lucien"
7"Evan"
8"Yu-Fei"
places
0"East"
1"End"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like gifts exchanged"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.57
wordCount1754
matches
0"not everything, but enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences148
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"understood that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean22.2
std21.85
cv0.984
sampleLengths
066
15
277
31
433
52
611
75
812
968
109
119
127
133
1417
1519
1619
179
1880
195
202
213
224
2315
2438
2540
263
2786
2816
293
3010
3164
3258
335
347
355
362
3717
3840
395
4023
417
4237
4329
446
451
4610
4748
4824
4920
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"being leaned"
1"been cleaned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs224
matches
0"were looking"
1"was watching"
2"was already drying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences148
ratio0.068
matches
0"His cane caught the frame — not shoved, just placed, the handle resting against the wood with a kind of surgical precision that made her teeth ache."
1"His black eye — the one that unsettled people who didn't know what they were looking at, and terrified people who did — shifted past her into the flat."
2"Four languages at his disposal and he wielded English like a scalpel — no wasted syllables, no heat, every word placed exactly where it would land hardest."
3"He entered the way he entered every room — an inventory first, threats second, exits third."
4"She moved into the kitchen, which was less a room than a theory — a strip of counter, a two-burner hob, and a kettle whose cord she had to drape over a stack of Eva's Sumerian translation notes."
5"Her reflection stared back — black hair flat against her neck, blue eyes bruised underneath from the kind of sleep that technically counted but offered nothing."
6"From below, someone in the curry house laughed — a big, rolling belly laugh that felt obscene in the taut air of the flat."
7"She'd told him about Evan — not everything, but enough — during a late night in the back office of the Golden Empress while Yu-Fei pretended not to listen from behind the bead curtain."
8"She watched the steam curl between his mismatched eyes and hated how familiar the geometry of his face still was — the sharp line of his nose, the way his platinum hair was already drying in pieces that fell across his forehead, abandoning the careful slick-back."
9"The space between them had changed — still charged, still fraught, but the walls she'd built had a door in them now and she'd left it unlocked."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1302
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02534562211981567
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005376344086021506
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean11.85
std10.71
cv0.904
sampleLengths
04
13
259
35
447
512
618
71
86
927
102
1111
125
1312
1429
1539
166
173
189
197
203
2117
227
2312
2419
259
269
271
281
2927
3032
314
326
335
342
353
364
3715
386
393
4015
4114
4222
436
4412
453
4616
4722
485
4910
57.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36486486486486486
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners54
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Just the raw, strange face"
ratio0.011
22.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences91
matches
0"It always stuck."
1"She pulled the door open."
2"She moved to close the"
3"His cane caught the frame"
4"His black eye — the"
5"She watched him catalogue the"
6"She hated the way he"
7"She'd watched him do it"
8"She recognized the technique."
9"She was not immune to"
10"She stepped back."
11"He entered the way he"
12"She'd asked him about it"
13"My father's people don't sit"
14"She'd filed it away alongside"
15"Her mother's daughter."
16"She moved into the kitchen,"
17"She watched it run in"
18"Her reflection stared back —"
19"Her hand stopped on the"
ratio0.495
20.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences91
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck."
1"It always stuck."
2"Rory had to lean her"
3"She pulled the door open."
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"The smell of cardamom and"
6"A bead of water tracked"
7"She moved to close the"
8"His cane caught the frame"
9"His black eye — the"
10"She watched him catalogue the"
11"Rory's grip tightened on the"
12"The crescent scar on her"
13"She hated the way he"
14"She'd watched him do it"
15"She recognized the technique."
16"She was not immune to"
17"The corner of his mouth"
18"The suggestion of one, offered"
19"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"Rory had to lean her shoulder into the door and twist the key at an angle that would have made a locksmith weep, and by the time the mechanism finally gave with…"
1"His cane caught the frame — not shoved, just placed, the handle resting against the wood with a kind of surgical precision that made her teeth ache."
2"His black eye — the one that unsettled people who didn't know what they were looking at, and terrified people who did — shifted past her into the flat."
3"She moved into the kitchen, which was less a room than a theory — a strip of counter, a two-burner hob, and a kettle whose cord she had to drape over a stack of…"
4"She watched it run in sheets down glass that hadn't been cleaned since Eva left, turning the streetlights below into smears of sodium orange."
5"When she turned around, he was watching her with both eyes and for once they carried the same expression, which was worse than when they didn't."
6"She folded her arms and leaned against the counter's edge, ignoring the scroll that crinkled beneath her elbow."
7"From below, someone in the curry house laughed — a big, rolling belly laugh that felt obscene in the taut air of the flat."
8"She set his down on a treatise about ley line convergence and sat across from him, displacing Ptolemy, who dropped to the floor with the theatrical thud of a cr…"
9"She watched the steam curl between his mismatched eyes and hated how familiar the geometry of his face still was — the sharp line of his nose, the way his plati…"
10"Just the raw, strange face of a man who was half of something he'd never asked to be, asking for something he knew he hadn't earned."
11"Ptolemy wound around the table legs in a figure eight, indifferent to the weight of anything that wasn't his next meal."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said again, quieter"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.7673%