| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1528 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1528 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "profound" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "unravel" | | 16 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 59 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1522 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Leaves no footprints when she walks." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1093 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 10 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Varga" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Fae-forged" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.539 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift if she looked at them directly" | | 1 | "felt like velvet" | | 2 | "seemed woven from the twilight itself" | | 3 | "looked like captured moonlight" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.285 | | wordCount | 1522 | | matches | | 0 | "not hewn rock, but living wood, petrified into smooth, grey pillars twice Rory’" | | 1 | "Not a heat haze, but a distortion like looking through old glass" | | 2 | "not oaks, not beeches, but something else entirely" | | 3 | "not beeches, but something else entirely" | | 4 | "not like the touch of mortal hands, but it will tolerate yours" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 36.24 | | std | 23.3 | | cv | 0.643 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 66 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 108 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 58 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 82 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | |
| 21.79% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "Between them stood stones—not hewn rock, but living wood, petrified into smooth, grey pillars twice Rory’s height." | | 1 | "The sounds of the park—the distant traffic, the caw of crows—muffled, replaced by a profound, waiting silence." | | 2 | "The air was warm and carried the perfume of a thousand flowers—honeysuckle, night-blooming jasmine, something spicy and unfamiliar." | | 3 | "The light in the grove came from everywhere and nowhere—from the flowers, from the crystal leaves, from the very air." | | 4 | "It was cold—a deep, penetrating cold that Rory felt from a foot away." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1105 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.02986425339366516 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006334841628959276 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 12.9 | | std | 10.26 | | cv | 0.796 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 46.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3305084745762712 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 1 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "It lay cool and inert" | | 3 | "They pushed through a thicket" | | 4 | "Their trunks were vast, gnarled" | | 5 | "They were covered in spiraling" | | 6 | "Their shadowy form seemed to" | | 7 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 8 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 9 | "They reached out a hand" | | 10 | "It danced away." | | 11 | "She shook her wrist, held" | | 12 | "Their bark was smooth and" | | 13 | "They followed the path." | | 14 | "It was full of subtle" | | 15 | "She looked down and saw" | | 16 | "She remembered the codex entry." | | 17 | "They passed a pool of" | | 18 | "She reached a hand towards" | | 19 | "She seemed woven from the" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 1.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her collar tighter," | | 2 | "The black branches of winter" | | 3 | "Nyx moved beside her, a" | | 4 | "Their form, a humanoid silhouette" | | 5 | "The faint violet glow of" | | 6 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper," | | 7 | "Rory’s left wrist itched, the" | | 8 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 9 | "It lay cool and inert" | | 10 | "This wasn’t a door to" | | 11 | "They pushed through a thicket" | | 12 | "Their trunks were vast, gnarled" | | 13 | "They were covered in spiraling" | | 14 | "The air within the triangle" | | 15 | "The sounds of the park—the" | | 16 | "Their shadowy form seemed to" | | 17 | "Rory took a step forward." | | 18 | "The grass under her boots" | | 19 | "The other sank into deep," |
| | ratio | 0.917 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.37% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion: sapphire-blue blossoms that glowed with their own inner light, silver trumpet flowers that chimed softly in a non-e…" | | 1 | "A path of pale, luminous mushrooms led away from the clearing, winding between trees that were not oaks, not beeches, but something else entirely." | | 2 | "Her hair was a waterfall of silver that reached her waist, moving as if in a slow current." | | 3 | "Rory took one last look at the impossible flowers, the singing trees, the seer who was now little more than a silver shimmer in the air." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice hushed" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her lips curving in a smile that held no warmth" |
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| 56.25% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.281 | | leniency | 0.563 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |