Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8WG59STTCQXME9TT9R8QBR

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Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.041985
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The call had come in at quarter past two in the morning — a body in the tunnels beneath Camden High Street, reported by a pair of urban explorers who'd since been separated into two squad cars and were presumably still hyperventilating. Quinn had driven herself, which she always did when the address felt wrong. This address felt very wrong. She ducked under the police tape at the top of the maintenance stairwell and started down, her torch cutting a white column through the dark ahead of her. The tiles on the walls were Victorian, cream gone the colour of old teeth, and the air carried that particular underground smell — stone and rust and the ancient breath of the city. Not the Northern line. Not any line she could name on a map. She'd checked before leaving the car. DS Callum Bright was waiting at the bottom, a younger man with the kind of face that photographed well and thought even better of itself for it. He had his own torch and a tablet under his arm and he looked too awake for three in the morning, which Quinn had always found suspicious in a person. "Quinn." He fell into step beside her. "Nice of you to join us." "What have we got?" "Male, mid-forties, no ID. SOCO's already been through. One blunt force wound to the right temple, consistent with a fall — there's a pillar about two metres from the body. Looks like he lost his footing, went down hard." Quinn said nothing. She kept walking. The platform opened up around them and she stopped. Whatever this place had been, it wasn't derelict in any ordinary sense. Derelict stations had pigeons and sodden newspapers and the long quiet of abandonment. This one had tables. Or rather, it had the ghost of tables — crude wooden structures collapsed against the far wall like tired soldiers, several overturned, one with a leg snapped clean. Tarps had been strung between the support pillars. Most had been torn down, but the fixing points remained: hooks driven into the Victorian ironwork with some precision. There were crates stacked near the old ticket booths, some broken open, their contents removed or scattered. Glass glittered across the platform tiles. "Busy place," Quinn said. "Yeah." Bright consulted his tablet. "Urban explorer community apparently knew about it. Theory is our victim was part of a group using it for — parties, maybe? Raves? We found candles. Someone had been living rough near the far end." Quinn crouched beside a collapsed table. She pressed two fingers to the wood, feeling the grain, then lifted them and rubbed the residue between her fingertips. Not damp rot. Something powdery, with a faint alkaline bite. She didn't say anything about that. "Where's the body?" Bright led her to the far end of the platform, past the remains of a tarp partition. A SOCO tech was still working the periphery. The victim lay on his back beside a concrete support pillar, one arm thrown out, one folded beneath him at the kind of angle that made Quinn's shoulder ache in sympathy. Mid-forties was generous — the man looked sixty, with a weathered face and hands that had done hard work for a long time. He wore a coat that had once been expensive. There was blood at his right temple, dried to a dark crust against grey stubble. Quinn stood over him for a long moment, then turned to look at the pillar. The blood smear was there — a single horizontal streak at roughly head height. She angled her torch. Then she crouched and looked at the floor beside the pillar. No scuff marks. No drag from a stumbling foot, no palm print where a man would instinctively reach out as he fell. The concrete dust was undisturbed except for her own approach and the earlier SOCO work. "He fell," she said. "That's what it looks like," Bright agreed, coming to stand beside her with his arms folded. "Show me where they found him. His exact position." Bright gestured: the body had been approximately two feet from the pillar's base, left side, slightly angled away. "A man falls and strikes his head on a pillar, Callum, he goes down beside it. Toward it, or directly beneath the point of impact. He doesn't land two feet away on the opposite side. That's not a fall. That's someone positioned after." Bright's expression shifted — not agreement, not yet, but the beginning of recalculation. "Okay. But the wound—" "Could have been inflicted elsewhere and the body moved. SOCO will need to check the site more carefully." She stood. "What else did they recover?" "Candles, like I said. Broken glass — looks like bottles. Couple of rucksacks, personal effects, nothing remarkable. And this." He held out an evidence bag. Quinn took it and turned it in the torchlight. Inside was a small brass compass, no bigger than a pocket watch. Old, from the look of it — the casing had a greenish patina, verdigris crawling into the engraved lines on the face. Not compass points engraved there, she noted. Not N and S and E and W. Something else. Symbols. Careful and precise and not any alphabet she recognised. "That was near the body?" "In his coat pocket. Outer breast pocket. Still fastened." She looked at it for another moment, then handed it back. "Check whether it works." Bright blinked. "Whether it—" "Compasses work, Callum. That's their function. Check whether this one does." She left him holding the evidence bag and walked back toward the platform's centre. The overturned tables were clustered in a pattern she hadn't registered from the entrance. Not random — not the chaos of a fight or a flight. Tables positioned around a central area, then overturned away from it, as though whatever force had knocked them had originated centrally and moved outward. She stood at the notional centre and looked at the floor. The tiles were old, and some were cracked. But three of them, arranged in an uneven triangle beneath her feet, were scorched. Not sooty — not the residue of a candle or a brazier. Scorched through, the glaze cratered, the way ceramic looked when something very hot had happened very fast. She was still staring at it when she heard the voice. "You shouldn't be standing there." Quinn turned. A young woman was being guided toward the platform by a uniformed officer — mid-twenties, short, curly red hair that was half-escaped from whatever had been holding it, round glasses slightly askew on a freckled face. She wore a satchel across her body, the leather worn pale at the strap, and she was looking at Quinn's feet with an expression that mingled urgency with the desperate social embarrassment of someone who very much didn't want to be causing a scene. "Ma'am, this witness was found in the eastern tunnel—" the officer began. "It's all right." Quinn stepped off the triangle of scorched tiles. "Who are you?" The young woman tucked a curl behind her left ear. "Eva Kowalski. I was — I heard the police radios. I was in the area." "At three in the morning." "I work odd hours." She met Quinn's gaze and her chin lifted slightly. "The man who died — I didn't know him. I want to be clear about that. But I know what this place was. And I don't think he fell." "We agree on that much." Quinn tilted her head. "What do you think this place was?" Kowalski glanced at the uniformed officer, then back at Quinn, making some internal calculation. "A market," she said carefully. "A very particular kind of market. For very particular kinds of goods." Quinn looked at her steadily. At the satchel full, by its apparent weight, of books. At the careful way she'd watched where Quinn was standing. "And the markings on that floor?" The young woman pushed her glasses up with one finger. She hesitated again — that same weighing, that same private arithmetic. "Residue," she said at last. "From something opening. Or closing." Bright was calling from the far end of the platform. Quinn didn't move. "Ms. Kowalski." She kept her voice level, the same tone she used when she had all the time in the world, which she didn't. "The compass we found on the victim. Do you know what those symbols on the face are?" The silence lasted four seconds. Quinn counted them. "Protective sigils," Eva said quietly. "And if you've found one here, Detective, the question isn't what happened to that man." She looked at the scorched tiles, then back up, her green eyes steady behind the smudged glass of her lenses. "The question is what got out." From across the platform, Bright called again. "Quinn — you need to see this. The compass needle — it's not pointing north." Quinn held Eva Kowalski's gaze for a moment longer. Three years ago, in a warehouse in Bermondsey, DS Morris had looked at her with that same expression — not fear exactly, but the specific face of someone standing at the edge of something enormous. She hadn't understood it then. She was beginning to understand it now. "Stay here," she told Eva. And then she walked across the platform toward her colleague, toward the evidence bag, toward a needle pointing at something the maps didn't show.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said carefully [carefully]"
1"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.372
leniency0.744
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.093
64.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1546
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"very"
count6
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1546
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"remarkable"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"remarkable"
1"weight"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences98
matches
0"e in sympathy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1565
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"From across the platform, Bright called again."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1168
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Victorian2
Northern1
Callum1
Bright9
Quinn19
Kowalski2
Eva3
Bermondsey1
Morris1
persons
0"Bright"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Victorian"
4"Bermondsey"
globalScore0.687
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
8.31% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.917
wordCount1565
matches
0"not agreement, not yet, but the beginning of recalculation"
1"not yet, but the beginning of recalculation"
2"not fear exactly, but the specific face of someone standing at the edge of somethi"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean28.45
std25.9
cv0.91
sampleLengths
060
180
257
313
44
539
66
79
8107
94
1040
1142
123
13103
1444
1537
164
1716
189
1918
2043
2117
2225
2319
246
2570
265
279
2811
294
304
3111
3275
3351
3411
355
3682
3712
3814
3925
405
4142
4216
4331
4425
456
4631
4713
4841
498
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"been separated"
1"been torn"
2"were clustered"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was still working"
2"was still staring"
3"was being"
4"was looking"
5"was standing"
6"was calling"
7"was beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences125
ratio0.096
matches
0"The call had come in at quarter past two in the morning — a body in the tunnels beneath Camden High Street, reported by a pair of urban explorers who'd since been separated into two squad cars and were presumably still hyperventilating."
1"The tiles on the walls were Victorian, cream gone the colour of old teeth, and the air carried that particular underground smell — stone and rust and the ancient breath of the city."
2"Or rather, it had the ghost of tables — crude wooden structures collapsed against the far wall like tired soldiers, several overturned, one with a leg snapped clean."
3"Mid-forties was generous — the man looked sixty, with a weathered face and hands that had done hard work for a long time."
4"The blood smear was there — a single horizontal streak at roughly head height."
5"Bright's expression shifted — not agreement, not yet, but the beginning of recalculation."
6"Old, from the look of it — the casing had a greenish patina, verdigris crawling into the engraved lines on the face."
7"Not random — not the chaos of a fight or a flight."
8"Not sooty — not the residue of a candle or a brazier."
9"A young woman was being guided toward the platform by a uniformed officer — mid-twenties, short, curly red hair that was half-escaped from whatever had been holding it, round glasses slightly askew on a freckled face."
10"She hesitated again — that same weighing, that same private arithmetic."
11"Three years ago, in a warehouse in Bermondsey, DS Morris had looked at her with that same expression — not fear exactly, but the specific face of someone standing at the edge of something enormous."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1159
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03710094909404659
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011216566005176877
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean12.52
std9.81
cv0.783
sampleLengths
042
113
25
328
433
54
69
76
827
930
107
116
124
1339
143
153
169
1712
1813
194
2028
218
2219
2317
246
254
265
2735
286
2920
303
317
326
333
3417
358
3631
3723
389
3915
4015
4114
424
4311
443
4519
4615
474
4816
499
72.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.472
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners59
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then she crouched and looked"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences91
matches
0"She ducked under the police"
1"She'd checked before leaving the"
2"He had his own torch"
3"He fell into step beside"
4"She kept walking."
5"She pressed two fingers to"
6"She didn't say anything about"
7"He wore a coat that"
8"She angled her torch."
9"He held out an evidence"
10"She looked at it for"
11"She left him holding the"
12"She stood at the notional"
13"She was still staring at"
14"She wore a satchel across"
15"She met Quinn's gaze and"
16"she said carefully"
17"She hesitated again — that"
18"she said at last"
19"She kept her voice level,"
ratio0.264
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences91
matches
0"The call had come in"
1"Quinn had driven herself, which"
2"This address felt very wrong."
3"She ducked under the police"
4"The tiles on the walls"
5"She'd checked before leaving the"
6"DS Callum Bright was waiting"
7"He had his own torch"
8"He fell into step beside"
9"Quinn said nothing."
10"She kept walking."
11"The platform opened up around"
12"Whatever this place had been,"
13"This one had tables."
14"Tarps had been strung between"
15"Glass glittered across the platform"
16"Quinn crouched beside a collapsed"
17"She pressed two fingers to"
18"Something powdery, with a faint"
19"She didn't say anything about"
ratio0.659
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The call had come in at quarter past two in the morning — a body in the tunnels beneath Camden High Street, reported by a pair of urban explorers who'd since be…"
1"DS Callum Bright was waiting at the bottom, a younger man with the kind of face that photographed well and thought even better of itself for it."
2"The victim lay on his back beside a concrete support pillar, one arm thrown out, one folded beneath him at the kind of angle that made Quinn's shoulder ache in …"
3"Tables positioned around a central area, then overturned away from it, as though whatever force had knocked them had originated centrally and moved outward."
4"A young woman was being guided toward the platform by a uniformed officer — mid-twenties, short, curly red hair that was half-escaped from whatever had been hol…"
5"She wore a satchel across her body, the leather worn pale at the strap, and she was looking at Quinn's feet with an expression that mingled urgency with the des…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Bright agreed, coming to stand beside her with his arms folded"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Bright agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.326
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.047
76.9962%